Essay Breakdown by Alexander Richard

Nadya, Brooklyn, Chloe, and Alyssa

2024-10-17 15:55:10 UTC

The author starts the paragraph with a strong claim. They then directly quoted Taylor Swift's song while including the line numbers.

I think the writing will continue to talk about how everyone doesn't last forever so you should cherish them and love them.

2024-10-17 15:56:05 UTC

Emma, Galilea, Sofia, Eric

2024-10-17 15:56:08 UTC

The writing starts with a saying that is common in this generation. It means the longer you are without somebody, the more you miss and care for them. It starts with explaining the meaning behind the saying and what contributes to their saying.
It ends by saying that kindness can even go through the toughest of people. The paragraph also is completely different then from when we started but also the same. The ending is about trying to get through someone and in the beginning it says how you miss someone you love. They are both about love in a different kind of way.

2024-10-17 15:56:16 UTC

They started paragraph A by comparing a song to the story. In paragraph A, they use the song lyrics as evidence to show the singer's emotion. In paragraph B they started the paragraph by stating a character's purpose and the goal this character has. They use text evidence to explain how another character feels.

Alexa R. Junior, Alexa Q

2024-10-17 15:56:40 UTC

The paragraph is very detailed, has a good claim, it says that absents makes the heart grown stronger

lee

2024-10-17 15:58:25 UTC

I noticed that the paragraph is giving me a summary of what happens in this text.

2024-10-17 15:58:35 UTC

The paragraphs are organized with a basic summary/catching up to speed, and then using quotes from the story and page numbers to provide evidence to the first sentence. The third sentence provides evidence and supporting topics, and the fourth and on wrap up the story.

2024-10-17 15:58:42 UTC

The sentence starts off with giving us a summary of her story.

2024-10-17 15:59:19 UTC

It starts by giving a summary

2024-10-17 15:59:37 UTC

The text ends and begins by identifying the theme and impact of the story. The point of the paragraph was to determine the theme.

Corvus

2024-10-17 16:00:26 UTC

Starts with a sentence relating to the topic, something relatable.

Emerson Soriano

2024-10-17 16:58:27 UTC

The paragraph is very detailed, and it has good claims.

Eshal, Sofia, Karely, and Ashayla

2024-10-17 17:04:27 UTC

The point of this paragraph is that both paragraph provide evidence for both of the story to support the claim thought the quote. They begin by summarizing the story and they end it by analyzing their evidence. They made sure to state the quote directly from the story.

Paragraph 3 body 2

2024-10-17 17:05:21 UTC

Both paragraphs compare the quotes and words to emotions that were verbally explained in their writing

Julian

2024-10-17 17:06:52 UTC

The author starts the paragraph by comparing the song to the story and ends with an explanation of the comparison.

Paragraph A

2024-10-17 17:08:22 UTC

Paragraph A starts with a comparison of a song and how it expresses a certain emotion through those words

Benny, Allyn, Anthony, and Audrey

2024-10-17 17:08:58 UTC

The writing starts with a proacitive statement, which can cause quesitioning. The ending also supports, and somewhat answers the statement question.
The overall purpose of the introduction is to provide a supporting text and a beginning to complete the evidence.

Matias, Thanh, Alexis

2024-10-17 17:09:13 UTC

The paragraph was written with a restate of the claim and reiterates the writers main point.

Katherine, Han, Mia, Chris

2024-10-17 17:09:17 UTC

The writing starts with the theme and ends with a conclusion of the theme. They provide evidence with an analyzation of the evidence.

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Amaliya , James, Stephani

2024-10-17 17:58:48 UTC

It starts by giving a little background on the story and it ends by describing the techniques author used in the story.

Katlyn, Nitaliah, Samreen, Daniella

2024-10-17 17:58:49 UTC

We think the rest of the writing was restating the theme and overall conclusion of the story.

dilasha aaralyn Todd konstance

2024-10-17 17:59:48 UTC

We noticed that they have a strong thesis and where the evidence is found in the story. It also explains what the characters feel and what they are doing.

Laila C

2024-10-17 18:01:20 UTC

Starts with comparing a song to the story and then moves on to describe how the song expresses specific emotions.

Jordan and Evan

2024-10-17 18:02:28 UTC

The writing starts by transitioning from the previous topic onto a Taylor Swift song, making connections. It ends by strengthening the comparison by pointing out what the song really means.
The text before the quote adds context for the reader to consider before reading the quote and the text after justifies the context by breaking the quote down.
The author started with a transition word meant to connect the last paragraph to this one. The quotation is cited by giving the exact line number in the song.
The rest of the song was likely about connections between Taylor Swift and Po's poem that the author mentioned in this paragraph.

Franco, Jeffery, Zayan Mirza

2024-10-17 18:05:26 UTC

It starts with a statement, and it ends with talking about someone who made the topic like the person talking about the topic.

The text before the quote talks about how love grows stronger through distance.

Sylvia pedraza

2024-10-18 03:37:13 UTC

it starts with a little background with a strong thesis and it also shows how the characters feel throught the story and ends with techniques thought the story