https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8 Made with whimsy en-us 2016-06-13 01:23:17 UTC 2016-06-13 01:35:16 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436670 Good idea, well thought out, great PowerPoint, could have rehearsed the speecha  little]]> 2016-06-13 01:26:36 UTC https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436670 https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436680 2016-06-13 01:26:45 UTC https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436680 1012185 https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436681 Good idea but a bit mumbly you needed to practice the speech a bit more. 
Also it would have helped if you took the paper out of the plastic sleeve it was a bit crink]]> 2016-06-13 01:26:46 UTC https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436681 1015251 https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436689 Super idea but you may have needed to spend more time on the presentation and you needed to rehearse the speech a lllooottt more]]> 2016-06-13 01:26:51 UTC https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436689 BruceWayne33 https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436695 Good idea, spoken ]]> 2016-06-13 01:26:55 UTC https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436695 BruceWayne33 https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436697 Good idea, spoken a little bit slow and mumbled a bit, good powerpoint]]> 2016-06-13 01:26:55 UTC https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436697 1015701 https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436702 Short and emotional in the future work on clarity of speech, the emotional pull was well done]]> 2016-06-13 01:27:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436702 Spaghetti https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436709 Smart idea, need to speak clearer]]> 2016-06-13 01:27:06 UTC https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436709 1014384 https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436718 Good idea but was quite lacking in alot  of areas such as method of payment and plans for the future ]]> 2016-06-13 01:27:11 UTC https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436718 https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436722 Need a bit more character but good idea and need smaller palm cards 

]]> 2016-06-13 01:27:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436722 140331 https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436731 Need to practise your speech more and bring in Palm cards. I reckon the amount of money you asked for was a lot more reasonable than other people's.]]> 2016-06-13 01:27:25 UTC https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436731 https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436747 Good idea, could work on presentation skills, and drones aren't allowed legally with in a certain distance of land.]]> 2016-06-13 01:27:39 UTC https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436747 1018890 https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436753 Interesting idea but there wasn't really a business plan and you pretty much said there was a decent chance that your business wouldn't succeed so I'd have wasted 50,000 dollars

]]> 2016-06-13 01:27:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436753 1014648 https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436774 Good idea I could see it been successful 
Improve on fluency and eye contact and ]]> 2016-06-13 01:28:09 UTC https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436774 https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436781 Didn't have Palm cards and swayed all the way through your speech, it was a bit off putting]]> 2016-06-13 01:28:16 UTC https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436781 https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436786 Idea was good at start but wasn't explained enough and didn't really know what I was investing in. Should have talked more about the product rather than bushfires.]]> 2016-06-13 01:28:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436786 1015580 https://padlet.com/dowen4/vnoumtedhhr8/wish/114436816 Good idea, could have explained how the product worked more thoroughly and earlier in the presentation

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