Review and Comment Paragraph by https://padlet.com/esozen/vn7jygj0rat0 Write a review on either one of the following topics or a topic of your interest. - favorite cars - sports - favorite movies - favorite books - your job or any jobs - friendship - social media and technology - aviation en-us 2018-10-26 06:00:18 UTC 2025-12-04 15:22:42 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Planets.png İmprove (Improve) The World fkd415 https://padlet.com/esozen/vn7jygj0rat0/wish/297291700   Social Media make easier to communication in our lifes. (It makes communication easier in our lives) It is very important to (for) education, technology, communication and a lot of things . And the technology is very helpfull. (helpful) But they have but things like do people lazy. (But, they have some disadvantages like making people lazy) People thinks (think) technology is able to doing every think (is able to do everything) and I don't need to do anything. This think (thing) is wrong. If people think about that way (think that way) the world and technology don't improve  yourself. We need techonology and technology need ours (us) to improve. Also social media same as that. (So does social media) If we want to learn something on  social media, we (have to) clean dirt (dirty) ideas and information.  Of course we must learn to (use) useing social media and internet. My suggestion is (that) every children is on to school  learn to how to use internet with practical training. (every child at school learn how to use internet...) If we do that technology and social media is good for ours (us). Also the world (will be) be a very beatiful place and the technology is improve (improves) very quickly.

5128-F.Kadir DERELİ]]> 2018-10-26 08:23:52 UTC https://padlet.com/esozen/vn7jygj0rat0/wish/297291700 One day I want (to) read a book and then I (went near) was going to my buddy and I said "Heyy, My buddy! Do you have a book?" He said "Yes Özçelik, I have a book. It's (Its) name (is) 1984. " I got his book. I started reading this book. The book is wonderful. I finished at a time. The book is (an) Utopian novel. The book’s topic (is) from the past future. It’s amazing. This book don’t (doesn't )change my life because I don’t like policy but I like book’s story. It’s impressive than (after) I finished read (I finished the book) book, I left it at the top. Thank you sir.5109-5118 https://padlet.com/esozen/vn7jygj0rat0/wish/297292159

]]> 2018-10-26 08:25:34 UTC https://padlet.com/esozen/vn7jygj0rat0/wish/297292159 BOOKS-5126 edemir617 https://padlet.com/esozen/vn7jygj0rat0/wish/297292541 There are books (that/ which) need to be read in (all over the world, not in) all over the world. Some of (some of them are lost or some are lost) are losted, some of are still exist. (some still exist) These books have stored knowledge of humanity.

Personally I think a human life isn't enough for acquire true. (enough to acquire the truth) But books can help us about it because books transfer knowledge to the future. Anyone who read(s) the book he (don't use he) get(s) writer's life. It is like reincarnation.

To sum up, if humanity want(s) to develop, they need (to) read. If humanity want to know truth, they need read.]]> 2018-10-26 08:27:39 UTC https://padlet.com/esozen/vn7jygj0rat0/wish/297292541 Streamer https://padlet.com/esozen/vn7jygj0rat0/wish/297293560 Twitch is (the) leading live streaming platform. Streames  play games and people watchs (watch) stream. I thinks it is (a) craft. Streamers day to day live attracts over two million broadcasters every month. This number grows every year. People thinks (think) I can be streamer but it’s (I) can’t (OR it isn't that easy). You must have steming pc it is to (too) expensive.It’s not all  you have to be chatterer (It is not because all you have to do is to be chatter, but also your ...) your watchers should not be bored when you're playing games you should speak all times. Watchers (are) more important than games. if there are no viewers you can't be a streamer. A job that is not as easy as thought. If u work hard you can be (a) streamer .

5123]]> 2018-10-26 08:32:20 UTC https://padlet.com/esozen/vn7jygj0rat0/wish/297293560 George S. Patton aydin_m_ali_28_mali https://padlet.com/esozen/vn7jygj0rat0/wish/297293673  George Smith Patton was one of the most successful commander(s) in World War II. He was an American General. He always defended the importance of Armoured Unit. He changed the war destinition (destination) with his Tanks. He was a Three-Star General (w)hen the World War II started. He promoted to Four-Star General during the war. He was the Commander of North Africa Tank Corps. He won the batlle (battle) what  called Husky. (He won the battle called Husky). He was the Commander of Third Army’s Armoured Division in Normandy. Dwight Eisenhower, he was a head commander of war (not necessary to write ''he was''), wanted him to command in Normandy. He effected (affected, not effected) a lot of people with his speechs (speeches). He has a lot of quotes. One of his most famous quotes is “The objest of war is not to die for your country, but to make other bastard die for his.”  -5112]]> 2018-10-26 08:32:52 UTC https://padlet.com/esozen/vn7jygj0rat0/wish/297293673