https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3 Ideas & Concepts en-us 2017-09-11 13:14:20 UTC 2023-02-15 20:34:52 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Terminator.png https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/186706390 Tia,john,cameron,cameron,sophie,sullivian.
Very calm logo,based around music]]> 2017-09-12 10:40:20 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/186706390 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/186707335 2017-09-12 10:44:41 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/186707335 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/186707337 2017-09-12 10:44:41 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/186707337 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/186708476 The legendary tail of Harmon and ian]]> 2017-09-12 10:50:03 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/186708476 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/186709140 2017-09-12 10:52:49 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/186709140 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/186709617 Ion]]> 2017-09-12 10:55:01 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/186709617 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/186805854 I like the idea of the product and the use of lines, but I think it could use colour ]]> 2017-09-12 14:41:01 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/186805854 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187095862 I like the simplicity of the design, however i would personally say that the coloured writing does not fit in with the poster. This colour could be transfered to the music notes ]]> 2017-09-13 10:06:40 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187095862 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187095863 Team 1 - Good communication, eye contact. They were confident, and had good presentation skills. Good use of colour. The formal elements they used are line, colour, shape, form. The mood of the artwork is calm and relaxed, the blue colour used on the treble clef. The logo has been most successful because of the way it stands out.

Team 2 - Great communication and eye contact, good presentation skills. Good ideas, and use of colour. The formal elements they used are form, tone, line, shape and colour. The mood of the artwork is 
energetic. The sketches were successful, because it shows that they had many ideas.

Team 3 - We didn't say much, but we had great ideas that we wrote down. We had good eye contact and our communication skills could've been better. The formal elements we used were line, shape and colour. The mood of the artwork is a little energetic with some knowledge in it.
The sketches were successful because it showed what we knew about it in general.

]]> 2017-09-13 10:06:40 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187095863 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187095867 Team 1: the idea was clear but more colour could have been used.
Team 2: the idea was really simple and clear but the back story and reason could have been clearer.
Team 3:
The idea was simple and the design was good but it could have used more detail and colour. ]]> 2017-09-13 10:06:42 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187095867 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187095946 Team one - You gave a confident presentation your design work also stood out.  
Team Two - I like the music sheet layout for the logo and the heart stood out the most for me, also you were very confident in your presentation 
Team Three - you explained your work very well and and you had lots of ideas with in you work, the logo was the best because you incorporated the logo and science together. 
Team Four - I like the fact they have used a story to tell the back story of their product/ company and it shows us they perspective on how they came to be where they are today.

- Emily & Aiden ]]> 2017-09-13 10:07:06 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187095946 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187095997 2017-09-13 10:07:25 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187095997 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096041 i like the idea of the product and the use of line , but to improve i would think of adding some colour to make it better ]]> 2017-09-13 10:07:39 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096041 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096046 the design i very simple and could use more colour
team TCJS
this is a bit simple but clear to make out, could use a better story
Courtney & Darren]]> 2017-09-13 10:07:41 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096046 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096069 More ion group ideas]]> 2017-09-13 10:07:52 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096069 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096119 good use of colour, simple and not to many design, and the colours contrast together and are simple.]]> 2017-09-13 10:08:03 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096119 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096161 It has some good aspects such as line, tone and illustrations.
However they could of used more colour to make their product stand out.
Jacob and Luke

]]> 2017-09-13 10:08:14 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096161 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096236 Very good use of colour, makes the important part stand out]]> 2017-09-13 10:08:31 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096236 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096282 I like the simplicity and the symbols to create the words in "Ion" they were confident and presented their ideas well]]> 2017-09-13 10:08:49 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096282 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096329 Had a very confident presentaiton]]> 2017-09-13 10:09:05 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096329 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096368 Gave a good presentation and were confident whilst, doing so.
Their logo used a good amount of colour and was not too complicated.
- John, Cameron]]> 2017-09-13 10:09:16 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096368 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096435 good back story very creative and imaginative. i would of redone the logo but add colour to show before and after . ]]> 2017-09-13 10:09:37 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096435 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096536 I like the simplicity of the design however the coloured words don't seem to fit with the poster in my opinion. Personally i think transferring this colour to the music notes else where would make it stand out . more for example the music notes. The mood comes across as very chilled out with the music notes and the lack of colour 

]]> 2017-09-13 10:10:10 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096536 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096698 i like the logo that they used, i think it is very appealing to the eye]]> 2017-09-13 10:10:54 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096698 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096751 nice presentation from team 4 with the creative story.

]]> 2017-09-13 10:11:11 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096751 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096911 I like the creative logo and the font/shapes used when you were presenting you were confident and explained your ideas well]]> 2017-09-13 10:12:06 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096911 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096947 you had a very confident presentation and you have used a simple design, you used a lot of line and tone, you could've used more colour though.]]> 2017-09-13 10:12:19 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096947 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096961 It was a simple design but affective. :)
Jacob and Luke ]]> 2017-09-13 10:12:25 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096961 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096967 i like the logo of team 4 and i like team 4 because warren is associated with it ]]> 2017-09-13 10:12:28 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187096967 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097040 2017-09-13 10:12:57 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097040 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097056 team 1 -  (ion energy drink ?) uses the idea of an ion to make the product seem smarter. However, could have used more colours to make it stand out
team 2 -  (harmonian hipster shop or something) used colours to make things stand out in the logo, this brought a clear focus to the subject 
team 3 - (other ion one) cant even remember 
team 4 - (harmonian music shop) Could've used more colour]]> 2017-09-13 10:13:03 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097056 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097212 Team 1- The presentation did seem to be unprepared however, they did et across their ideas despite that.
Team 2- The presentation was clear and easily understood. The logo stands out and, though complex, works to illustrate the calm tone of the brand.
Team 3- Simple design, could use a brighter colour for the logo, but overall good concept
Team 4- The parody nature of this presentation really made the backstory to the shop stand out.

~Jas]]> 2017-09-13 10:13:59 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097212 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097218 Like the colour , wish ya didn't post it upside down like howay boys]]> 2017-09-13 10:14:02 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097218 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097231 gud]]> 2017-09-13 10:14:05 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097231 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097252 Gave a confident presentation, their back story was believable whilst their logo was appealing.
- John, Cameron]]> 2017-09-13 10:14:13 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097252 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097305 Good use of the instrument ]]> 2017-09-13 10:14:30 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097305 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097336 Very interesting story about rusty saxophones it showed a variety of skills including English, tone and design.
Luke and Jacob]]> 2017-09-13 10:14:37 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097336 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097445 2017-09-13 10:15:03 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097445 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097553 Like the colour n that, decent drawing, sull did a class job holding it up well done buddy xoxo]]> 2017-09-13 10:15:37 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097553 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097573 2017-09-13 10:15:42 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097573 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097812 good use of colour in the logos. to improve try writing some ideas down about the product.]]> 2017-09-13 10:17:12 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097812 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097813 Some good designs and i like the way you included tape into your presentation.
Luke, Jacob and Cameron]]> 2017-09-13 10:17:12 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097813 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097982 2017-09-13 10:18:03 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187097982 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098014 2017-09-13 10:18:14 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098014 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098128 I liked the contrast of the red heart. This made the heart then become the main focal point against the black and white. personally i would say that this is the most successful point in the logo and instantly draws the attention to it. They have used line to create a very complex design however if this was to be printed to a small scale this could then become quite hard to understand/ read.]]> 2017-09-13 10:18:45 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098128 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098209 Good use of colour and the designs are simple ]]> 2017-09-13 10:19:12 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098209 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098220 so shut it]]> 2017-09-13 10:19:18 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098220 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098296 2017-09-13 10:19:43 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098296 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098402 2017-09-13 10:20:25 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098402 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098464 Lovely idea to build it ]]> 2017-09-13 10:20:45 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098464 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098471 Good variety of designs ]]> 2017-09-13 10:20:47 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098471 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098494 its too damn windy]]> 2017-09-13 10:20:54 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098494 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098507 Team 1]]> 2017-09-13 10:20:58 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098507 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098626 I like the elements used in the logo to create a comparison between science and the title, the shapes you used also made the design more simplistic, the yellow colour added to the lightning bolt is eye-catching ]]> 2017-09-13 10:21:37 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098626 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098629 like the colour]]> 2017-09-13 10:21:38 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098629 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098727 2017-09-13 10:22:12 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098727 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098844 2017-09-13 10:22:53 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098844 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098846 adams colin i guess]]> 2017-09-13 10:22:53 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098846 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098850 Creative back story and the logo looks appealing ]]> 2017-09-13 10:22:54 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187098850 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187099213 Its lush outside what you on about]]> 2017-09-13 10:24:54 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187099213 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187099570 2017-09-13 10:26:27 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187099570 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187099787 2017-09-13 10:27:27 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187099787 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187100574 2017-09-13 10:31:35 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187100574 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187100764 2017-09-13 10:32:44 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187100764 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187100804 good use of colour to make the symbols stand out but its a bit to complicated for a logo ]]> 2017-09-13 10:33:00 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187100804 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187100839 2017-09-13 10:33:09 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187100839 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187100983 2017-09-13 10:34:10 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187100983 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187101070 add my snapchat - wazz3r]]> 2017-09-13 10:34:40 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187101070 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102353 2017-09-13 10:40:12 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102353 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102368 ~Jas]]> 2017-09-13 10:40:17 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102368 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102436 2017-09-13 10:40:38 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102436 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102471 Travis mcdermott ]]> 2017-09-13 10:40:48 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102471 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102606 2017-09-13 10:41:25 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102606 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102718 2017-09-13 10:41:55 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102718 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102726 2017-09-13 10:41:57 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102726 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102746 2017-09-13 10:42:04 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102746 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102767 2017-09-13 10:42:11 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102767 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102836 2017-09-13 10:42:34 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102836 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102868 2017-09-13 10:42:45 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102868 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102889 2017-09-13 10:42:52 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102889 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102904 2017-09-13 10:42:59 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187102904 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187103065 2017-09-13 10:43:42 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187103065 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187103129 2017-09-13 10:44:02 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187103129 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187103165 2017-09-13 10:44:14 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187103165 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187103556 2017-09-13 10:46:00 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187103556 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187103562 2017-09-13 10:46:01 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187103562 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187103721 2017-09-13 10:46:43 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187103721 https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187172213 2017-09-13 13:56:25 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_gabriele/U3/wish/187172213