https://padlet.com/23achouinard/vl4evwfeufg7 Hello pleas in joy my writing en-us 2018-03-01 13:29:09 UTC 2018-03-02 15:24:27 UTC hello@padlet.com 23sberkman https://padlet.com/23achouinard/vl4evwfeufg7/wish/236891948 One wish I have for your essay is that you check your grammar and punctuation. A lot of times there were commas in the wrong spot where it wouldn't make sense. Also, a lot of words were spelled wrong, so in the future using spell check or maybe just re reading your piece multiple times can be helpful. For example, "But we can see it in, undeniable events. Climate change is the heating up of the Earth. As the tempich rises on earth many animals and habitats are affected." In this piece I think tempich is suppose to be temperature and there isn't suppose to be a comma after see it in. It's suppose to just be "but we can see it in undeniable events." One star about your piece is  the data you used. Another star is the bridge and how you gave a lot of background information about climate change. Overall, I think your piece was great! -sofia b]]> 2018-03-01 13:48:22 UTC https://padlet.com/23achouinard/vl4evwfeufg7/wish/236891948 23egonzalez https://padlet.com/23achouinard/vl4evwfeufg7/wish/237405092 Hey Lexi,
I enjoyed reading your vignette about the brownie mix and how you added to detail to what you and your family members were doing though out the story. Maybe next time you should add a bit more information of what is going to occur or happen to help the reader understand more of the situation. Overall I would say you did a great job! -Esmeralda]]> 2018-03-02 14:29:22 UTC https://padlet.com/23achouinard/vl4evwfeufg7/wish/237405092 https://padlet.com/23achouinard/vl4evwfeufg7/wish/237434251 One wish I have for you is that you should really read through your piece because I saw a lot of spelling errors and also puncuation marks. A star I have are I like how you provided a lot of examples and evidence. Another star is I like the desription you put into your piece. ]]> 2018-03-02 15:17:03 UTC https://padlet.com/23achouinard/vl4evwfeufg7/wish/237434251