P1 ENG9H S2 U3 poetry feed - Sarah Kay & Shane Koyczan by Guy Gagnier https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc As you watch these TEDTalks, jot down your observations and/or questions about Sarah Kay and/or Shane Koyczan's poetry--the delivery and the written text. en-us 2022-04-01 14:56:33 UTC 2022-04-08 13:30:24 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4e2.png https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132612060 Andrea - I noticed she makes a lot of comparisons to real life things


]]> 2022-04-06 13:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132612060 Poetry notes on TedTalk https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132612625 Isabella 
Sarah Kay 
(poem) 
1. I like the way that she uses figurative speaking and personification in her words,

2. I like her tone, her pauses and the words that she puts emphasis on certain words. 

3. I enjoy her body language, the way she moves with her words and walks around, this gives the poem a very natural aspect, making it seem like these words are just pouring out of her heart without it being forced in any way. 

4. I like the way that she combines very sophisticated language with natural and conversational language, for me, it makes it easier to understand her words and her delivery. 

(TedTalk) 

1. "don't think too hard" she is able to keep it simple, she wants people to think about something that comes to mind rapidly so that it is an idea they understand and are able to elaborate on. 

2. I like her term for spoken word poetry, how she defines it as poetry that demands to be shared and to connect with others. 

3. I enjoy how she was able to connect with her passion of spoken word poetry, she started from a young age and took in any opportunity she had to learn and practice. 

4. I love the way she took her passion and shared it with others, she took it upon herself to teach younger kids and teenagers about poetry and writing. 

5. I like how she tries to be open to opportunity and possibility, I like the way she said she walks through like with open arms. 

6. "I like spoken word poetry because it is accessable to anyone" 

7.

]]> 2022-04-06 13:22:08 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132612625 Sarah Kay, Raul Diego 25diego7169 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132612739 -She expresses her thoughts in unique ways, she does not say things the obvious way. (Figurative Language) "She is Point B because she will always find a way back to me."
-Moves her hands constantly
-Makes her poem more like a conversation
-She uses humor in her poem/talk

How can you connect with the reader?



]]> 2022-04-06 13:22:12 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132612739 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132612871 Sarah Kay- Natalia
- I liked how she used her hands as metaphors  a lot
- I liked how she was realistic without it becoming too pessimistic
- she makes eye contact with the crowd
- she interacts with the crowd
- i like how she tells the story of her poetry
- I can, I will, I am
- Lists (10 things I know to be true)
- Says that it's important to find a type of art that works for the story, not just one traditional type
- Take risks
- Tell stories only you can tell

]]> 2022-04-06 13:22:17 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132612871 Sarah Kay - Fer de Lascurain 25delascurain6649 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132613083 - Uses hand gestures
- Changes voice tone
- Figurative language
- The poem doesn't seem to have a definite structure.]]> 2022-04-06 13:22:22 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132613083 Sarah Kay- Matilde Garza https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132613141 - She makes pauses while talking.
- She uses her hands while talking.
- She uses metaphors to express her ideas.
- She sang a little part of a song.
- She uses different voice tones.]]> 2022-04-06 13:22:24 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132613141 Sarah Kay- Ana Garza 25garza66761 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132613268 She strategically uses pauses and volumes to emphasize certain things.

She speaks in a casual and inspired tone rather than a flat and formal one. Also, she doesn't use "fancy" and "hard" words but still sounds intelligent. ]]> 2022-04-06 13:22:27 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132613268 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132613337 Andrea - I liked how she changed her tone of voice when she was saying the poem, and how she also used a lot of imagery.]]> 2022-04-06 13:22:29 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132613337 observations on TedTalk https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132613378 Regina
- body language.
- different tones.
- use of figurative language.
- pauses during her poem.
- engages the audience.
- walks around the stage.
- there is rhythm in her poem, but it is a more of a liberal text.]]> 2022-04-06 13:22:30 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132613378 Sarah Key Patricio Putz https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132613392 Sarah speaks with a lot of facial and hand gestures. 

She engages the audience with breaks, and with a lot of good rythm.


]]> 2022-04-06 13:22:31 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132613392 Mauricio Salinas Observations and Questions Sarah Kay 25salinas6793 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132613799 Sarah Kay speaks with rhythm and speaks in metaphors and similes to express her point.

She uses symbolism as the solar system and the rain boots.

Uses pauses to emphasis points and to keep the rhythm

Her speech has themes and it ties in together at the end.


]]> 2022-04-06 13:22:43 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132613799 Andres Guerra Pico: observations https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132613837 She uses strange metaphors to instill interest in the poem and uses fundamentally modern metaphors to make her poetry more approachable; For a modern target audience, she does not want to produce a world-altering philosophical poem that is ripe with symbolism but generally keeps things reasonably simple to facilitate understanding in her audience. 
         Her poem is also rather comedic a lot of the time to make the nature of the poem less grim; her delivery carries the poem that would otherwise be fairly mediocre.  This is less a poem and more of an audible performance. She really just uses the poem as a setup for her more elaborate message later on. She is trying to market her style of poetry and transfer it to a larger audience.  Emphasizes her art form is capable of more than bast indignity. She will often position her body in certain ways to mimic what she talking about. Uses cliche thematic messages to make things familiar to the audience.  
Makes performance poetry a feasible mode of action.  She is remarkably good at modulating the tone of her voice, many of the things she says are not really even poetic she makes them so by speaking in such a way that they are transmuted into something of an entirely different nature and shape. She does seem to have managed to hold the classroom's attention for 18 minutes, with a very small number of my peers speaking or doing something separate from class. This is indicative of the nature of the poem. The entire video was a poem.]]> 2022-04-06 13:22:44 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132613837 observations 25benavides6761 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132614241 Sarah Kay:
- body expressions:
- different tone 
- she had an intention to what she said
- she sang in her poem
- talked to the audience
- used many imageries  

]]> 2022-04-06 13:22:57 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132614241 Sarah Kay (Jimena Alarcon) https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132615801 - I noticed how she uses a lot of figurative languages which adds a lot more to the poem. 
- I noticed she uses a lot of body expressions and uses a lot of hand gestures.

]]> 2022-04-06 13:23:37 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132615801 Andres Elizondo, Sarah Kay https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132615806 Observations: She is using poetic language when she is explaining how the life works. 
She also uses figurative language when she is speaking. She sometimes starts speaking to the person she is talking about.
Furthermore, she also used hand gestures and shows her confidence when she is speaking to the audience. She also uses many life experiences in her poems.]]> 2022-04-06 13:23:37 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132615806 Sarah Kay - Susy 25bichara66301 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132617603 Poem 1:
1. She is very good at expressing what she feels and uses very good language.
2. She knows how to express her thoughts through figurative language.
She makes comparisons to real life.
3. She uses different tones throughout the poem.
4. She used a lot of hand gestures
5. She finds ways to interact with the audience and make them think about something or laugh about something. 
6. She uses examples to hook the crowd.

Poem 2: 
1. She used examples from her life to connect with the public.
2. She used hand gestures
3. She used poetic language to engage the audience]]> 2022-04-06 13:24:30 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132617603 Sarah Kay - Diego Vares https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132617720 Poem 1:
She utilizes a lot of hand gestures and facial expressions along with great self-confidence.
She changes her tone and speech rate.
Furthermore, she uses metaphors and imagery in order to give references to the audience.

Poem 2:
She integrates humorous characteristics.
She doesn't follow a particular structure, rather she is talking freely and is expressing in a way that she feels comfortable. Most importantly, she can convey her ideas the way she wants.
Her poems are very detailed with personal experiences of spoken word poetry, nevertheless she transmits it in a form that the audience can relate with her and feel what she feels.


]]> 2022-04-06 13:24:33 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132617720 Obseravtions - Alexa Bredee https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132620005 Sarah Kay

I see how Sarah Kay uses her hands a lot   and makes expressions and even acts out. This made it be engaging and professional, which is something I will take from her. 

I also saw how she used lots of imagery in her poem about her daughter because I was imagining all the way the scenes in my head, which made me understand and enjoy the poem on a deeper level. ]]> 2022-04-06 13:25:46 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132620005 Sarah Kay- Ana Garza 25garza66761 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132623350 She created a flow using idioms and common expressions, replying to them and  turning them into a story of lessons she would teach to her daughter. ]]> 2022-04-06 13:27:30 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132623350 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132627185 Andrea
- She uses repetition 
- She presented humor to engage the audience
- Her facial expressions and movements with her hands support what she is saying in her poem.]]> 2022-04-06 13:29:33 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132627185 Sarah Key (Jimena Alarcon) https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132629984 - I noticed how she interacts with the audience, asks questions, references, etc.
- I notice how her poetry is expressing something meaning to her and she talks about things she is interested in.
- I notice how she says her poems as if she were talking with us, very natural, not reading and very smooth.]]> 2022-04-06 13:30:59 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132629984 Sarah Kay- Ana Garza 25garza66761 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132630511 She speaks in a “relatable” way rather than an intellectually obnoxious one, which makes the audience like her.

The way she speaks, her facial expressions, and body language all match and look confident- making her talk engaging. 


]]> 2022-04-06 13:31:13 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132630511 Observations (2) - Regina https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132631986 - Engaged the audience by making them participate and asking them questions.
- When delivering her speech, she looks and speaks confident.
- Uses lots of hand gestures, expressions, and acts to deliver her message efficiently.  
- Connected with her passion of spoken poetry. 
- She shared her journey of finding her own style in poetry. She talks about how poetry has made her much wiser by understanding  poems from different angles.
- Guides the audience with steps through her procedure on her passion.]]> 2022-04-06 13:32:00 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132631986 Observations (2)-Alexa Bredee https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132634510 Sarah Kay

I really like how she engages with the audience and how it feels like she is talking with us. She does this by telling jokes, using gestures for it to look relaxed as she is talking to us, she looks thought all the audience which makes it look like she is talking with everyone.]]> 2022-04-06 13:33:14 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132634510 observations 25benavides6761 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132636399 Sarah Kay:
- I liked how she connects with the audience, asks questions, and even laughs with them. 
- Spoken poetry is accessible to everybody
- if you add things only you know into poems, you can achieve everything you want.
]]> 2022-04-06 13:34:12 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132636399 Sarah Key (Jimena) https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132639699 - Something that stuck out to me was when she said something like, "I write stories the way I write them." Which to me is saying that everyone has different ways of writing their poems and each one will be different. I also noticed how she explains writing poetry is creative writing in which you decide how to do so, there is no wrong or right way.]]> 2022-04-06 13:35:52 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132639699 Observations (3)- Alexa Bredee https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132640362 Sarah Kay

I really like how we are learning so much about her by her poem about her. I have never seen this, and it is an idea I really liked. Not only that, but I will use this as inspiration to maybe use this idea about myself in a poem.]]> 2022-04-06 13:36:13 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132640362 Sarah Kay (2)- Fer de Lascurain 25delascurain6649 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132641489 - Interacted with the audience.
- Showed emotion.
- Hand gestures and change in tone.
- Spoken word poetry.
- You don't have to write poems that are indignant.
- Entertain, educate and inspire.
- She speaks with a strong voice tone and her nervousness is not visible.
- Try to tell stories only you can tell.]]> 2022-04-06 13:36:46 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132641489 Sarah Kay - Héctor https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132642403 She changes tones multiple times to keep the audiences attention.

She makes hand gestures and her body language matches the tone of what she is saying.

She includes dialogue in her poem of what she told her daughter.

There are many metaphors of the world. I liked one that compared the world with sugar since it is sweet but can crumble anytime.

She talks to the audience to create an effect on them.

Tone speaking is very conversational and does not seem forced.

The author expresses herself really good by many factors.

She talks about how her poetry can change different people and how she started writing her poems.

Poetry can have many different genres other than indignant topics.

Figurative language is well used but it is not forced at all.

I like the metaphor of walking through life with her hands down to catch the good things even if bad things come.

I like that she connects to a quote she said in her "things to be true".

Her poetry is complemented by her body language and her tone of voice changes depending on what she is saying.


]]> 2022-04-06 13:37:15 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132642403 Sarah Kay- Matilde Garza https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132642413 - Engages and talks to the audience instead of at the audience.
- She talks about herself in her poems.
- You can write poems about who you are, not what you feel like you are expected to write about.
- Quotes others.
- Uses props
- She talks like she is telling a story.
 ]]> 2022-04-06 13:37:16 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132642413 observations 25benavides6761 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132642516  Sarah Kay
her poems are stories and she adds her rhetorical figures in a natural way.


]]> 2022-04-06 13:37:19 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132642516 Sarah Kay -Sharon Park https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132642612 Poem 1:
She uses creative language and is very descriptive with her expression (personification and imagery). She uses songs, melodies, body language, and jokes to give more taste to her poem. She mixes sophisticated and natural tones in her poem and creates an easier way to understand the deep meaning of her poem. 

Poem 2:
She uses body language and odd comparisons to make her point clear. She makes emphasis on certain words and phrases to deliver greater importance to that specific part of the poem.

]]> 2022-04-06 13:37:21 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132642612 Sarah Kay - Ani https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132642672 - Engages audience (asks questions, laughs algo with them)
- She uses a lot of hand gestures
- Spoken word poetry doesn't always have to be serious
- Entertain, Educate, and Inspire
- When speaking she changes her tone of voice several times to help engage the audience and add a deeper meaning to the poem.
- She speaks in a very relaxed measure]]> 2022-04-06 13:37:23 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132642672 Sarah Kay and Shane Koyczan 25lobo6700 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132899422 SARAH KAY

Delivery 
- She uses inflection when expressing distinct emotions, this also serves as a tool to hook the audience and grab their attention. 

- Her facial expressions change from time to time. Depending on what she is going to communicate, her face helps her to emphasize the emotion she is trying to exhibit. 

- Her non-verbal language reflects the theme and mood of a poem, this additional factor facilitates the breaking of the barrier between the abstract meaning of the poem, and the poet's true intention/meaning for it. 

Content
1. The general content of the poem is rich  with various poetic literary devices  (similes, metaphors, and hyperbole). 

2. Her delivery and content are well synergized, due to the fact that they both compensate one another. If the mood is to inspire, then the delivery will use expressions, gestures, and a voice volume that align with the intended purpose to instill. 

3. Her Ted Talk is versatile by both presenting poetry and elaborating on why poetry is for everyone, it is both to inspire and inform others about writing poetry. 

Speech (The 4 steps to writing a poem) 

1. Everyone can write poetry. 

2. Every person has something to say and to communicate. 

3. People can relate with others' message and topic. 

4. Others can inspire and motivate people to write poetry. 


SHANE KOYZCAN

In contrast to Sarah Kay, Shane's poetic performance is less quick in execution and methodical. He begins much more slowly in the first half and later begins to pick up speed all whilst bringing a buffet of poetic literary devices that all connect to the topic and main ideas. 

Delivery 

-In the beginning, Shane's hand gestures are there to emphasize emotions/thoughts, they are not exaggerated but simple and done calmly. 

- In the first half His voice is soft, it is not loud. His tone of voice is deep, and he speaks slowly. In the latter half, he begins to rise his tone of voice and his words are articulated faster. 

- During the entire presentation, Does not move as much as Sarah Kay, he rather does slight movements. 

Content

1. He is witty in how he expresses his ideas and feelings, but also by linking personal events to broader and more general topics that people can identify with, some that are themes that observable are (identity, meaning, purpose in life, abandonment, and bullying.)  

2. Shane is communicating the topic of bullying as well as personal identity by using examples that can connect to others and resonate with all spectators. 

3. Shane reinforces his conference by implementing a violinist and a cartoon movie to facilitate the viewer to imagine what he is meaning to say or show.   

Speech's main idea/s
1. Trauma and its effects on a kid.

2. Standing up for yourself. 

3. Utilizing poetry as a tool to express issues, worries, or struggles.
 
4. To this day, people are still bullied. ]]> 2022-04-06 15:44:02 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2132899422 Shane Koyczan- Matilde https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133240027 - Is casual when talking.
- Gives personal experiences.
- Makes pauses.
- He tells a story to tell a message. 
- Uses hand gestures.
- Changes speed of speech when he wants to make a point.
- Changes volume of voice when making a point. 

Content:
He tells the story of his life.

Talks about people who are bullied.]]> 2022-04-06 18:47:27 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133240027 Mauricio Salinas- Shane Koyczan observations. 25salinas6793 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133241238 Shane Koyczan demonstrates more restraint in his dictation. As he does not move as much as Sarah and his town does not change that much, it is a lot more soft. As well as controlling his facial expressions. He also speaks slower.]]> 2022-04-06 18:48:13 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133241238 Shane Koyczan - Fer de Lascurain 25delascurain6649 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133498730 - Uses hand gestures.
- Talks about common situations, and says his personal experience.
- Takes pauses.
- Raises his voice when necessary.
- Uses figurative language without making it very obvious.
- Talks about his life situations and experiences.
- When talking about more serious issues, he raises his voice and has an angry tone.]]> 2022-04-06 22:28:28 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133498730 Shane Koyzcan - Regina de la Fuente https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133621033 - Talks directly to the audience. 
- Connects with the general audience by using common examples.
- Shares his personal journey on discovering himself and his passions. 
- Uses hand gestures. 
- Makes pauses during his speech.
- Implements figurative language to engage the audience. 
- Guides the audience in a way that is understandable but not obvious. 
- He uses different tones to make his message stronger.
- Speaks slow. 
- He does not walk around the stage. 
He talks about the effects on kids that are bullied and how they battle through life.

]]> 2022-04-07 00:30:20 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133621033 Sarah Kay - Mara Santos 25santos6744 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133757862 -She used her poem to tell a story in a passionate way.
-She keeps you entertained with her tone and body language.
-She uses metaphors that engages the audience and gives them something to think about.
-She created her own rhythm, which makes the poem much more special.
-She uses a very casual language which makes you feel as if she is talking to you.
-She makes it really personal, which is the best way to make the audience feel something.

]]> 2022-04-07 02:05:26 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133757862 Sarah Kay- Raquel Meouchi 25meouchi6716 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133768407 1. You can hear her emotions through her words.
2. Her body language and hand gestures represents what she is saying.
3. She uses very natural, and casual language. Yet, still sounding powerful. 
4. You can tell she is very passionate about the topic.
5. She changes her tone (even sings) throughout the poem, which makes it more entertaining.
6. She uses a lot of figurative language, specifically metaphors, which makes the poem more powerful. 
7. Interactive with audience and even uses real-life examples.
8. Tells a story though her poem.

]]> 2022-04-07 02:12:54 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133768407 Shane Koyzcan - Raquel Meouchi 25meouchi6716 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133789858 1. Uses personal examples which helps him connect with the audience.
2. Uses hand gestures.
3. Creates his own rhythm with his words and songs.
4. Changes his tone near the end to deliver his point in a more powerful way.
5. Uses casual language, yet, still deliver his opinion. 
6. Adds comedy to make his poem more entertaining,
7. Strategically pauses, speaks louder, and/or faster.
8. As the poem continues, you can tell he become more passionate and aggressive and deliver the emotions to the audience. ]]> 2022-04-07 02:27:52 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133789858 Shane Koyczan - Isa https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133822428 1. I like the way that he uses figurative speech when speaking of hiding his heart and getting shot down, this gives it a very personal aspect to the speech. 

2. I truly enjoy his delivery of the speech, how he is standing very naturally with a hand in his pocket, how he is giggling as he says some personal or funny parts of the speech, how he does not hesitate or stutter when speaking, and how he uses pauses and speeding up in his tone. I feel he had a personal connection with the speech through his delivery, like he is telling us something not as spectators, but as his friends. He is able to incorporate jokes to lighten the mood in a funny and natural way. 

3. "I will love myself despite the ease with which I lean upon the opposite"  I enjoy that he does not spell out each part of the quote, he doesn't explain every part of it, but as a reader one is able to understand what he says. 

4. I like the way that he tells stories, he includes other perspective and dialogue, he explains his thinking as well as the situation, finally he uses imagery to describe things such as the story, the school, the teachers and the tree. 

5. I like the slide presentation of he used as he says his poem, it gives readers a visual connection to the words he is saying. 

6. great change in speed, volume and emphasis on his words. 

7. really like the passing of time and the change of time within the poem he says.  

8. really enjoy how he tells the girl's story and then shifts to the boy's story to show both perspectives equally, this lets one know hoe depression and bullying affected two different people similarly and differently in many ways. 

9. like the message in his poem about bullying. 

10. impressed by how he was able to memorize such a long poem, and truly connect with each of the words and the audience in his delivery. 

11. I really like the incorporation of the violin, it gives the poem not only a musicality, but it puts emphasis on the words he says when the violin stops, like saying, "this is important, listen up!" ]]> 2022-04-07 02:52:46 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133822428 Shane Koyzcan - Diego Vares https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133852453 Uses "we," "he," and "they" as personal pronoun's in order to talk about the past, still he is not defining a specific person. However, it comes to show of the multitude of people that are bullied every day and the struggles that they have as a result of it.
Talks about his own personal life, using different tones and speech rates in order to express the ideas conveniently.
His speech delivery is outstanding, even though at first he mentioned that there were many people, it shows that he is very well-prepared and that he feels comfortable talking. Not to mention how he interacts with the audience, in some cases through humor. Furthermore, his hand gestures along with his face expressions correlates very well with what he is saying.
He seems very familiar with the use of figurative language, one that really intrigued was, "as if broken bones hurt more than the names we got called."
The rhythm is really spaced out in the poem, nevertheless he is able to control it and changes it whenever he feels that the emotion has shifted.

]]> 2022-04-07 03:16:52 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2133852453 Shane Koyzcan - Susy Bichara 25bichara66301 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2134608942 1. Uses a lot of hand gestures
2. Uses personal examples to help connect with the audience
3. changes the tone through out it
4. Shows a slide presentation to help the audience get a visual of what he is saying
5. Talks about an important topic that should be more talked about
6. He tells stories through out the speech which helps with hooking the audience]]> 2022-04-07 13:40:22 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2134608942 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2134846005 Natalia- Shane Koyczan
- Uses humor in a serious message to get the point across
- Compares himself as a kid to him now to show what he learned
- He started casual and then it got more emotional
- I really enjoyed the illustrations
- I like how it started with just dreams and how other people decide what you do and then it turned into how life is hard with all of the judgement
- I liked the violin in the bathroom
- The increase in the volume of his voice put emphasis on the emotions

]]> 2022-04-07 15:40:33 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2134846005 Shane Koyczan 25benavides6761 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2134910601 - uses different speeds which makes the poetry have more intention and even does pauses. 
- tells a story about personal experience. 
- he does very natural hand gestures and body expressions. For example, he has his hand in his pocket most of the time, and when he talks about something important he takes it out. 
- Shane uses different voices to refer that different people are talking in the story.
- I liked how he explained year per year a personal experience talking about bullying. ]]> 2022-04-07 16:17:37 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2134910601 Shane Koyczan 25benavides6761 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2134920492 I liked how Shane uses humor to interact with the audience. He constantly shares funny experiences about his topic which makes the audience laughs.  Also, I liked how Shane presented a video to demonstrate what bullying feels like. Further, I believe that the violin in the background makes Shane's voice stand out and makes it very intense. 

]]> 2022-04-07 16:23:25 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2134920492 Shane Koyczan- Ana Garza 25garza66761 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2135700019 He began telling the story of his own childhood with a funny and relaxed tone. However, as he began relating his experiences to others in his poem, it took a dark twist to send out a serious message. This showed me how even though he is laughing about it years later, bullying is not something funny and something that can scar someone for life. Also, I feel that by telling us how he experienced it himself built trust and relatability with the audience. ]]> 2022-04-08 02:59:19 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2135700019 Shane Koyczan- Ana Garza 25garza66761 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2135701450 His tone matched his facial expressions and message. He changed it throughout the video to emphasize certain things. Also, by adding the violin it created a more dramatic effect in the poem. ]]> 2022-04-08 03:00:34 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2135701450 Shane Koyczan - Andres Elizondo https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2135731370 He is telling a story about his life and his childhood, where many emotions were mixed. When he is telling something sad you can see it with his tone and his facial expression and that makes the poem look more intense. He also added rhythm to his words and even had a violin playing in the background. Furthermore, he uses change of speed to show his emotions, as well as using humor to interact with the audience. Finally, he uses hand expressions and uses his life examples to make it easier for him to tell the poem and the audience to understand the poem.]]> 2022-04-08 03:28:20 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2135731370 Shane Koyczan (Jimena Alarcon) https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2135745823 - I noticed how he uses different tones, voices, speeds, and volumes when saying her poetry and she also uses pauses.

- I noticed how she tells personal stories and experiences through his poetry, he uses it to kind of express himself.

-He uses hand gestures

-I liked how he added images to help the audience have a visual view.

-I really enjoyed listening to his poetry, he delivered them in a different and engaging way which helped me stay very interested.


]]> 2022-04-08 03:43:36 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2135745823 Shane Koyczan - Alexa Bredee https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2135859279 - I loved how she used her poem to tell a story with a lot of passion.
-She went to her rhythm, which was the spark she out of herself in the poem.
-She uses words that make it seem like she is talking with us, which made it more engaging to feel like she was telling me.
- I learned something from her which is that when you tell something that means a lot to you or that it is really personal it makes the audience connect or feel attached to your poem on a deeper level.
-I like when he raised his voice because it made the poem have a bigger impact on me and I felt it stronger.]]> 2022-04-08 05:53:10 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2135859279 Shane Koyczan - Héctor https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2136270389 -Uses body language on speech
-I like the message of him and how we should dream.
-Figurative language is used but is not forced at all
-I like how he transitions into talking about his poetry from talking about his dreams into adversity.
-He changes his tone speaking to captivate his audience
-Good use of humor to connect with his audience.
-I like how he uses a slideshow in order to complement his poetry
-He uses music to further complement the emotions in his poetry.
-I like how he uses dynamics in the volume of his voice as well as tone to get his message across.]]> 2022-04-08 12:45:16 UTC https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2136270389 Shane Koyczan, Raul Diego 25diego7169 https://padlet.com/guy_gagnier/vl09wgd9wxtit1xc/wish/2136273302 - Makes a lot of hand gestures
- Goes at a pace where the poem goes fast and at the same time understandable
-Uses figurative language and avoid saying things in the obvious way.
- Says personal experience about his life to connect with him
-Changes tone of voice
- He makes a power presentation to give a visual presentation.
-There is music in the background to make it more intense when the author changes his tone
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