Maddie's Personal Narrative by Kevin Van Dyke https://padlet.com/vandyke/MaddieC2 What was your favorite part of the story? en-us 2014-04-16 01:55:33 UTC 2025-11-20 19:14:17 UTC hello@padlet.com http://d262le4z25sx36.cloudfront.net/portraits/pocketwatch.jpg  Hadley https://padlet.com/vandyke/MaddieC2/wish/26118501 Wow that sounds like a ride I would not enjoy! My favorite part in your story is when you said you heard ear piercing screams!

]]> 2014-04-16 13:57:30 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/MaddieC2/wish/26118501 Brooke Baarda https://padlet.com/vandyke/MaddieC2/wish/26393276 Maddie my favorite part of your story is when your eyes were spinning like crazy and you tried to look at Elizabeth and you couldn't see her because you were spinning so fast!

]]> 2014-04-22 13:55:48 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/MaddieC2/wish/26393276 Dylann Huyser https://padlet.com/vandyke/MaddieC2/wish/26397637 Maddie-

I loved your story! You did a great job capturing your feelings! My favorite part was when you said that there were screams coming from all directions! It made me feel like I was there! Loved your story!

- Dylann

]]> 2014-04-22 14:30:05 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/MaddieC2/wish/26397637 Trinity Sommar https://padlet.com/vandyke/MaddieC2/wish/26486829 my favorite part of the story was at the end when you guys said you were never doing that again and at the begining when you were exited to start the ride and at the end its like you changed i loved your story i can't wait to read your next story

]]> 2014-04-23 13:53:39 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/MaddieC2/wish/26486829 Rebecca https://padlet.com/vandyke/MaddieC2/wish/26578759 Maddie,

I loved your story. I like how you used inner thoughts one of my favorite parts of your story is when you said you felt like you were going to fall out of the seat and when you heard an ear piercing scream from all directions. I also liked how you were wanting to start all over ( in the day) so you wouldn't have to go on the ride

]]> 2014-04-24 13:51:20 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/MaddieC2/wish/26578759 Elizabeth Squires https://padlet.com/vandyke/MaddieC2/wish/26668950 I remember that time Maddie you had to drag me on the ride. My favorite part of the story was when you said when you got off the ride you stood up and tried to keep your eyes straight but you couldn't! It made me feel like I was ridding it all over again. Loved your story!

]]> 2014-04-25 13:45:03 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/MaddieC2/wish/26668950 Jaden Brand  https://padlet.com/vandyke/MaddieC2/wish/26669291 I think my favorite part is when you tried to get off the ride and you felt so dizzy you almost fell over and I read Elizabeth's comment and I thought it was funny because Elizabeth said you pretty much had to drag her onto the ride. I loved your story and I hope that you keep writing good stories like that, I look forward to more of your writing.

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