Writing Lab by Kumu Maggie

Use sensory details, actions, and dialogue to reveal emotions and settings rather than just stating them.

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Hook readers with an engaging opening: start with an action, dialogue, or intriguing question to draw the reader in.

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Mix short and long sentences to improve flow and keep the reader engaged.

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"Boring to brilliant" - Replace dull verbs and adjectives with an even more vivid, vivacious vocabulary.

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Add figurative language to your story to add deeper connection and more captivating imagery.

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Add character details like backstories, quirks, and motivations.

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Example:

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"She was scared."

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"Her hands trembled as she gripped the doorknob, heart pounding in her chest."

Example (Dialogue):

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"KAYNEN! We're leaving without you!"

I hear my dad slam the door of his Tacoma shut as the engine turns over from the garage, but I stay glued to my seat. I HAVE to finish this game.

"KAYNEN!" An even louder, angrier voice calls. Mom.

They'll have to wait.

Example (Action):

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Boom! Crash! Thud! If you didn't know any better, you might think I wake up to the sound of a big, hairy pua'a tumbling out of bed every morning — and, if you've ever seen my little brother, you wouldn't be too far off.

Example (Intriguing Question):

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Have you ever had a secret too big, too terrible to reveal — but too great to keep all to yourself?

They say life is full of difficult choices, but from where I'm standing, they all pale in comparison to this single moral dilemma. To tell, or not to tell?

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Use these questions to develop your character. You can record your answers in the character section of your outline. Then, integrate 3-5 of these details into your story however makes sense.

What is your character’s full name and age?
What is one thing they always carry with them? Why?
What are they most afraid of?
What is their biggest dream or goal?
Who is their best friend or worst enemy?
What is one secret they’ve never told anyone?
What makes them laugh or feel happy?
What kind of relationship do they have with their family?
How do they react when they’re nervous or angry?
What is one unusual or surprising fact about them?

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Rewrite a paragraph using different sentence lengths for better rhythm.

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Rewrite a sentence or paragraph using a type of figurative language. For an extra challenge, see if you can add a NEW type of figurative language you've never used before.

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Use a thesaurus, Magic School, or your good old-fashioned big brain to convey your ideas using bold, descriptive language!

Example:

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"He walked slowly through the rain."

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"He trudged through the downpour."