[S203 Editorials] T2W4 Language Arts Lesson by Rachel Oh

[S203 Editorials] T2W4 Language Arts Lesson by Rachel Oh https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed 1. Editorial Texts A & B: Schematic Structure & Language Features 2. Opening Statement 3. Conclusion 4. Rhetorical Appeals en-us 2020-04-07 17:39:10 UTC 2020-04-22 03:56:37 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/270c.png Group G ng_xi_en_rachel1 https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/505808760 Is the general structure well-organised, and are the ideas clearly presented?

The writer needs to understand both parties point of view

Point

Example

Benefits

Challenges

Explanation

Link

Debates

From one point to the another point

Does the last paragraph provide an appropriate, meaningful conclusion to the work?

Yes

Due to the fact that tries to change the other person perspective

]]> 2020-04-14 07:48:58 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/505808760 Group G ng_xi_en_rachel1 https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/505810361 Modal Verbs

Connectors

Linking Words

Present Tense

Simple Vocab

]]> 2020-04-14 07:50:03 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/505810361 Group G ng_xi_en_rachel1 https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/505811712 Is the general structure well-organised, and are the ideas clearly presented?

The writer needs to understand both parties point of view

Point

Example

Benefits

Challenges

Explanation

Link

Debates

From one point to the another point

Does the last paragraph provide an appropriate, meaningful conclusion to the work?

Maybe and maybe not

Due to the fact that the writer did not give a clear conclusion on the Parents and Teachers part but gave a clear conclusion for the Employers and Education Authorities

]]> 2020-04-14 07:51:02 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/505811712 Group G ng_xi_en_rachel1 https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/505811971 Modal Verbs

Connectors

Linking Words

Present Tense

Simple Vocab

]]> 2020-04-14 07:51:12 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/505811971 Alfred Kang https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509926678 The different opening sentence types]]> 2020-04-16 05:51:01 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509926678 Jay https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509930440 The different opening statements can be used in different senarios]]> 2020-04-16 05:54:55 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509930440 Yong Jian C https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509930957 creditability
Be likeable and trustworthy
Make readers/viewers respect you
Be knowledgeable in the topic ]]> 2020-04-16 05:55:28 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509930957 Ming Jiet https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509931414 The different editorial lead that could be used.]]> 2020-04-16 05:55:58 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509931414 Yong Jian C https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509931644 Word choice
Enhance persuasion
Make it interesting ]]> 2020-04-16 05:56:11 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509931644 Yong Jian C https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509931986 reasoning
Complie speech in was that it is reasonable and logical
Consistency and clarity
Claim and back up (peel) ]]> 2020-04-16 05:56:34 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509931986 Celine Tan https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509987748 Convincing through your character
Increase Ethos by appearing respectful, thoughtful of the other view etc.]]> 2020-04-16 06:46:44 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509987748 Celine Tan https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509987928 Appealing to the emotions, values and beliefs of an audience
Word choice affects the audiences emotional response
Can be used to enhanced persuasion
Tie together your research to make the audience interested]]> 2020-04-16 06:46:54 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509987928 Celine Tan https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509988586 Reasoning
Internal consistency and clarity of your speech
Making a claim and backing it up
The speech haveing a logical flow to appeal to the audience
Giving reason is the heart of the reason]]> 2020-04-16 06:47:26 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509988586 Celine Tan https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509989581 2020-04-16 06:48:13 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/509989581 Rachel ng_xi_en_rachel1 https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510060745 Many Different types opening sentences for editorial]]> 2020-04-16 07:37:40 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510060745 Kai Xu https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510181951 used in advertising just as often as it is used in public speaking and literature.]]> 2020-04-16 08:46:24 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510181951 Kai Xu https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510189414 used in an argument to draw the audience in and to help it connect with the argument.]]> 2020-04-16 08:50:19 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510189414 Kai Xu https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510190340 logos is used to refer to the use of logic and reasoning in crafting a piece of persuasive writing or rhetoric.]]> 2020-04-16 08:50:49 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510190340 alfred ang alfred_ang_bo_ming https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510240005 ethical appeal, means to persuade an audiences with credibility, trust worthiness]]> 2020-04-16 09:16:02 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510240005 alfred ang alfred_ang_bo_ming https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510269402 emotional appeal, means to persuade an audience by emotional response like bias]]> 2020-04-16 09:31:30 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510269402 alfred ang alfred_ang_bo_ming https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510277117 logical appeal, means to convince an audience by use of logic or reason to back up their point ]]> 2020-04-16 09:35:37 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510277117 Arryan arryandaniyal https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510669349 The way we can attract readers to read the editorials.]]> 2020-04-16 13:27:41 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510669349 Arryan arryandaniyal https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510671628 Ethos means to convince an audience of the author's credibility or character.]]> 2020-04-16 13:28:41 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510671628 Arryan arryandaniyal https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510676371 Pathos means to persuade an audience by appealing to their emotions]]> 2020-04-16 13:30:45 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510676371 Arryan arryandaniyal https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510677219 Logos means to convince an audience by use of logic or reason]]> 2020-04-16 13:31:09 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510677219 Rachel ng_xi_en_rachel1 https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510685037 Convincing through your character.
Ethos means creadibility]]> 2020-04-16 13:34:39 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510685037 Rachel ng_xi_en_rachel1 https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510709804 Logos is logic. Basically the PEEL Format.It always have a explanation to a point]]> 2020-04-16 13:45:12 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510709804 Rachel ng_xi_en_rachel1 https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510712446 Pathos is the writers word choice to interest and persuade public ]]> 2020-04-16 13:46:24 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/510712446 Ethan https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511074347 Hedging is used in editorials to brainwash readers.]]> 2020-04-16 16:04:51 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511074347 Ethos angel_koo_ern_qi https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511794543 Convincing someone/ audience through your character
We should be more knowledgeable on our topic = ethical]]> 2020-04-16 23:27:05 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511794543 Pathos angel_koo_ern_qi https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511798735 Word choice

(vivid examples and details) in a persuasive manner

Appealing to the emotions, values and beliefs on an audience.

]]> 2020-04-16 23:32:05 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511798735 Logos angel_koo_ern_qi https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511799508 Reasoning or logic

Consist of internal consistency and clarity of speech
Most important thing in persuasive speech

]]> 2020-04-16 23:32:56 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511799508 angel_koo_ern_qi https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511827989 We can have a lot of sentence starters for editorial writing]]> 2020-04-17 00:05:05 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511827989 Alfred Ang alfred_ang_bo_ming https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511828071 Editorials use Peel format and with opinions and we can apply the ethos, pathos and logos to better persuade the audience.]]> 2020-04-17 00:05:11 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511828071 Jia Yu JappyJY https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511828910 The opening statement will help to sell the idea to the readers ]]> 2020-04-17 00:05:51 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511828910 Kai Xu https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511829003 There are many ways to start the sentence of our editorials

]]> 2020-04-17 00:05:59 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511829003 Ethos https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511829137 Ethos refers to the credibility and trustworthiness. it convinces the audience through the speaker's character upon the issue they are facing. That character must be thoughtful and fair.]]> 2020-04-17 00:06:06 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511829137 Zi Yin https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511829671 Using Logic and reasoning to convince an audience.
A way of persuasive speech.]]> 2020-04-17 00:06:42 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511829671 Jia Yu JappyJY https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511829891 Credibility: convincing through your character by becoming an expert, being liable and worth of respect]]> 2020-04-17 00:06:56 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511829891 Dennis naing_phone_htut https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511829937 There are many ways to start the sentence of our editorial.]]> 2020-04-17 00:07:00 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511829937 Pathos https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511830225 Pathos refers to appealing emotions, values and beliefs of audience. This is the part where word choice play a major role as different word sets the accent of how one persuades.]]> 2020-04-17 00:07:18 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511830225 Wardina wardinaa https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511830354 There are many different ways to start and editorial ]]> 2020-04-17 00:07:27 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511830354 Ruth https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511830552 There are many ways you can start a sentence using different statements]]> 2020-04-17 00:07:40 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511830552 Jia Yu JappyJY https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511830661 Appeal to the emotions, values and the beliefs of the audience by having good word choice, examples and details]]> 2020-04-17 00:07:47 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511830661 Dennis naing_phone_htut https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511830689 -Connectors
-Present Tense
-Easy to understand vocabulary
-Modal verbs

]]> 2020-04-17 00:07:48 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511830689 Jia Yu JappyJY https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511830782 Reasoning by making a claim, strong information and a flow ]]> 2020-04-17 00:07:54 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511830782 Boaz https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511830956 From the lesson, I can understand that we can begin our writing using an opening statement.]]> 2020-04-17 00:08:05 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511830956 Hyok Zing png_hyok_zing https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511831161 We can use many sentence in the introduction unlike a news report. There are many way to write a opening statement. ]]> 2020-04-17 00:08:19 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511831161 Logos https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511831455 Logos refers to how the speaker reasons on the issue with his logic. The speaker makes a claim and back it up. It involves strong information. Must use reasons to persuade and give audience another point of view.]]> 2020-04-17 00:08:36 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511831455 Jaden https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511831461 Ethos is an argument that appeals to the audience by emphasising the speaker's credibility and authority.We should be sure about our work with correct and plenty research.]]> 2020-04-17 00:08:36 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511831461 Zi yin https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511831843 The word choice and emotions of the writer to interest the audience]]> 2020-04-17 00:09:00 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511831843 Ruth https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511832079 Ethos is when an argument is based on the ethics or credibility of one of the person that is making the argument. ]]> 2020-04-17 00:09:13 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511832079 Ziyin https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511833312 Ethos is when an argument is constructed based on the ethics or credibility of writer.]]> 2020-04-17 00:10:36 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511833312 Dennis naing_phone_htut https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511833406 -Connectors
-Present Tense
-Easy to understand vocabulary
-Modal verbs]]> 2020-04-17 00:10:42 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511833406 Hyok Zing png_hyok_zing https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511833444 Ethos is being trustworthy and your evidence are all credible .]]> 2020-04-17 00:10:45 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511833444 Hyok Zing png_hyok_zing https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511834111 Pathos refers to appealing to emotions, values and the belief of others. This is written by using good word choice.]]> 2020-04-17 00:11:29 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511834111 Group H https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511834247 The 1st paragraph compares the measures from other countries
It also states measures which does not include school’s closure

The second paragraph states the pros and cons of school closure in Singapore.

The third paragraph displays Singapore’s strategy while schooling

The last paragraph concludes that there is no need for school closure.

]]> 2020-04-17 00:11:38 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511834247 Dennis naing_phone_htut https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511834432 Ethos is an argument that appeals to the audience by emphasising the speaker's credibility]]> 2020-04-17 00:11:52 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511834432 Dennis naing_phone_htut https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511835294 Using Logic and reasoning to convince an audience. A way of persuasion.]]> 2020-04-17 00:12:34 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511835294 Dennis naing_phone_htut https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511835665 Appealing to the emotions, values and the beliefs of the audience by having good word choice, examples and details.]]> 2020-04-17 00:13:00 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511835665 Hyok Zing png_hyok_zing https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511835825 Logos is using logic and reasoning to convince the audience. It is a way of persuasion.]]> 2020-04-17 00:13:09 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511835825 Ziyin https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511838690 From the lesson, I learnt to write with the PEEL format better with the different types of opening statement. ]]> 2020-04-17 00:15:49 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511838690 Ruth https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511840383 Pathos refers to the emotions and quality that evokes pity or sadness]]> 2020-04-17 00:17:38 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511840383 Ruth https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511842598 Logos refers to the principle of reason and judgement.]]> 2020-04-17 00:19:55 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511842598 Group H https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511842844 1st paragraph prepares the citizens of some outcomes from the measures although citizens must still abide the measures.

2nd paragraph points out one of the major problems from hong kong citizens.

3rd paragraph elaborates on the impact of the measure.

4th paragraph adds on the severity of worries from the parents

The last paragraph persuades the authorities to help ease this problem up.

]]> 2020-04-17 00:20:07 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511842844 Jia Yu JappyJY https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511872055 We need to have a clear understanding of when we are writing our Opening Statement]]> 2020-04-17 00:50:15 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511872055 Kai Xu https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511872056 I learnt about how to use different ways to start editorials. ]]> 2020-04-17 00:50:15 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511872056 Arryan arryandaniyal https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511872065 When writing a reflection statement, we should attract the readers and it should not be too lengthy so that people will be interested in reading the editorial.]]> 2020-04-17 00:50:16 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511872065 Hyok ZIng png_hyok_zing https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511872105 when we write a opening statement we should attract the reader attention.]]> 2020-04-17 00:50:19 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511872105 Rachel ng_xi_en_rachel1 https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511872279 The Opening Statement must interest the readers and must be be too lengthy]]> 2020-04-17 00:50:31 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511872279 Shakirin https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511872532 We need to include facts and opinions into our opening statement.

]]> 2020-04-17 00:50:48 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511872532 Arryan arryandaniyal https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511873474 My favourite method is quotation.]]> 2020-04-17 00:51:46 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511873474 Yong Jian https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511873538 I learnt that we need to write in a way that attracts the readers attention ]]> 2020-04-17 00:51:50 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511873538 Celine Tan CELINE_TAN_SU_YING https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511874276 My favourite meothod is narrative.]]> 2020-04-17 00:52:32 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511874276 Shakirin https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511874641 My favourite method is question.]]> 2020-04-17 00:52:57 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511874641 Celine Tan CELINE_TAN_SU_YING https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511874833 Add connectors to ensure that the sentence dos not become a run-on sentence.]]> 2020-04-17 00:53:08 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511874833 Rachel ng_xi_en_rachel1 https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511875563 My favourite method for the opening statement is question or narrative]]> 2020-04-17 00:53:56 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/511875563 Jia Yu https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/512906950 My favourite method is question or an order]]> 2020-04-17 13:56:36 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/512906950 Dennis naing_phone_htut https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/521889008 A thesis statement appears at the end of the introductory paragraph.]]> 2020-04-22 03:55:20 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_oh1/S203T2W4Ed/wish/521889008