Odyssey Presentations by Cassandra Whitefield

Logan, Sam, Madison, Jayden

2018-03-07 14:02:52 UTC

Hi, I just want to say that y'all did amazing on your presentation. I like how you added some comedy into your presentation, making it fun and exciting to watch. I wished that the video can be divided equal among everyone. I mainly payed attention to Logan.
Vinh Dinh

Logan's Group

61624 — 2018-03-07 14:03:24 UTC

The presentation was really energetic. You could have better execution of the project in general.

Logan's Group

39548 — 2018-03-07 14:03:48 UTC

I really liked your presentation, it was really good. It was funny, and I liked how Jayden wore the dress. It was a little hard to hear though, so you could improve on speaking louder, but other than that, it was really good.

Logan, Sam, Madison, And Jayden

2018-03-07 14:03:50 UTC

I thought your presentation was funny and creative but you should've added way more props.

James And Grace

2018-03-07 14:03:57 UTC

like how yall did your brochure maybe next time add a little more information

Sam's group

2018-03-07 14:04:00 UTC

Good video but I wish that there was more energy shared between everyone instead of just 1 or 2 people

Jaime and ryan

364921 — 2018-03-07 14:04:20 UTC

I really liked the lots of detail you had in your presentation. And your brochure was very creative

Logan, Sam, Madison, and Jayden

391833 — 2018-03-07 14:04:23 UTC

I liked how you added comedy to the trailer and played music.

Sam, Logan, Madison, and Jayden

563952 — 2018-03-07 14:04:45 UTC

Your video was good and entertaining, but it was confusing about what was going on.

Logan, Sam, Madison, Jaydon

2018-03-07 14:04:46 UTC

I thin your video was really good but the lighting was poor.

Jaime, Ryan

377754 — 2018-03-07 14:05:12 UTC

you could include more information, but overall it was a good brochure.

Madison, Sam, Jayaden, and Logan

2018-03-07 14:05:17 UTC

Awesome video like how creative it was, maybe next time make the video clearer

Jaime & Ryan

2018-03-07 14:05:25 UTC

I like the brochure and the pictures in the brochure but i feel like you could have added more information.

Jaime and Ryan

2018-03-07 14:06:57 UTC

I like the pictures and information about the trip. Y'all included the info to each island and event. Detail to the discount and number of the company is great. I just wish you guys can be a little louder.
Vinh DInh

Ryan and Jaime

43333 — 2018-03-07 14:07:00 UTC

I liked how you presented it but maybe yall could speak clearer next time

Jaime & Ryan

2018-03-07 14:07:01 UTC

I think your brochure was really organized but the presentation was short.

Ryan Jaime

379721 — 2018-03-07 14:07:09 UTC

Too many people did brochures. You and everyone else should have done something else. Anything else besides a brochure!
P.S. IT was better than everyone elses.

2018-03-07 14:07:23 UTC

Jaime and Ryan
I liked it. I think that it could a bit more descriptive but overall it was good.

Ryan and Jaime

2018-03-07 14:07:52 UTC

Have Jaime talk clearer and not act sleep, like the pictures and the info

Logan,Sam,Madison,Jayden

2018-03-07 14:08:48 UTC

Your video was great but the lighting was poor and unclear of what was going on

Ryan's Group including Jaime

2018-03-07 14:08:52 UTC

I liked how you did a travel brochure but you didn't have very good camera skills

James and Grace

2018-03-07 14:08:52 UTC

I love love loved your flyer, it was not funny so i give negative 47 points, so you already failed in my book, but you guys are my favorite so far.
From your loving companion, Logan,
-Anonymous

Logan's group

2018-03-07 14:09:15 UTC

I really liked your project, but your video could have been clearer.

Jaime's group

2018-03-07 14:10:03 UTC

I liked your presentation, but you could have spoke louder.

Melany's group

61624 — 2018-03-07 14:10:26 UTC

I really like the diversity of you using a website. However the information seems kind of repetitive from the brochure.

Logan's group

391833 — 2018-03-07 14:10:56 UTC

I liked how you added comedy and music to your trailer.
However I believe you could have fixed the audio and the lighting
I thought it was really good overall though

Clia's Group

2018-03-07 14:11:18 UTC

Beautiful website. Love the colors and picture choices you girls chose. Next time you might explain more on what you will be doing in each location instead of just posting a picture of it

Liz, Clia, Melany, Melissa

379721 — 2018-03-07 14:11:32 UTC

Your website was cool. The contact information was weird. It didn't work.

Melany, Liz, Melissa, Clia

563952 — 2018-03-07 14:12:10 UTC

I really like how your project was different and creative compared to the others by making a website, but maybe you can speak louder.

Melany, Liz, Melissa, Clia

2018-03-07 14:12:57 UTC

cool website

Liz's Group

2018-03-07 14:16:57 UTC

Very unique, i never would have even thought of making a website. Good on you for being different

Liz's group

364921 — 2018-03-07 14:17:48 UTC

very creative and i liked it alot. Creating a website was very creative and unique

Liz's group

2018-03-07 14:18:16 UTC

Clever with the website making, it was very creative and got my juices flowing

James's group

391833 — 2018-03-07 14:18:20 UTC

I think the overall brochure was amazing. The pictures were interesting and I was actually interested and going to theses lands however, it could have used more information about these areas

Mel, Liz , Clia , Melany

2018-03-07 14:18:37 UTC

very unique, and also very interesting in many ways

Ashten's group

61624 — 2018-03-07 14:18:52 UTC

I like how the story progresses independently, but it was hard to follow how it matched with the odyssey's plot.

James, grace

377754 — 2018-03-07 14:19:06 UTC

many other groups had similar essential questions and did brochures, but the brochure was great overall.

Sam's group

2018-03-07 14:19:18 UTC

I really loved Jayden Sam and Madi. Logan was OK and her acting was a bit off but that's OK because the other 3 made up for it

Melissa, Liz, Clia, And Melany

2018-03-07 14:19:40 UTC

Really liked the website, Maybe next time play the video maybe.?

Michaeil, Justin and Ashto/en's Group

61073 — 2018-03-07 14:20:34 UTC

I liked the creativity and ideas put in , but its hard for me to pay attention for that much time :)

Justin's Group

39548 — 2018-03-07 14:21:13 UTC

This was good, just a little confusing, and I think it would have been more entertaining if you re-enacted it, instead of just reading it.

justin's group

2018-03-07 14:21:31 UTC

why world war ll?

Justin´s group

2018-03-07 14:21:48 UTC

very clear,

Justin's Group

2018-03-07 14:22:12 UTC

I liked the idea but it got a bit confusing. But I did like that you guys tried to make it into a new story. It did get boring after a while though.

Justins Group

2018-03-07 14:22:25 UTC

Liked the story maybe next time reenact it or make the story a little more exciting.?

Justin's group

508375 — 2018-03-07 14:22:25 UTC

It had a lot of valuable information, but I didn't really know what was going on.

Justin's group

43333 — 2018-03-07 14:22:39 UTC

I like how yall set it in world war 2 it was a very interesting time period

Micheil, Ashton, Justin

563952 — 2018-03-07 14:22:46 UTC

I like the idea of making a story, but I feel that it was hard to follow along because you were just reading off the paper.

Jaime and Ryan

508375 — 2018-03-07 14:23:19 UTC

The brochure was very convincing and made me want to go on that vacation.

Andie, Malik, and Drew's Group

61073 — 2018-03-07 14:24:39 UTC

The brochure was convincing and creative but next time try and speak louder :) I liked it!

2018-03-07 15:00:18 UTC

Dylan's group: I liked your concept but the brochure and "waivers" were distracting.
Riley's group: your essential question was unclear.

2018-03-07 15:12:15 UTC

Riley's Group: Liked the presentation, few grammar issues
Lilo's Group: Book was drawn very well, maybe make the book more detailed

Dylan's Group and Riley's Group

393861 — 2018-03-07 15:13:06 UTC

Riley's Group: You had all the information, but it would be nice to have more enthusiasm when speaking to keep everyone interested.
Dylan's Group: I loved the creativity with the wavers and there isn't much I would improve on. Everything was neat organized, good job! I was just confused on the essential question, it was unclear.

Jamies group:

39197 — 2018-03-07 15:13:10 UTC

Was colorful and intresting but was short

Lilo's Group

2018-03-07 15:13:17 UTC

I thought what your presentation was organized, but you lacked a little bit when it came to speaking in front of the class.

dylan's group

2018-03-07 15:13:35 UTC

overall it was a good project, but the essential question wasn't clear

Miles group:

2018-03-07 15:13:45 UTC

Interesting and funny.

T.J's group

2018-03-07 15:13:47 UTC

I thought y'all gave a lot of good information but I believe that if you mentioned fewer places it would be more effective and concise. - Dylan Abbott

Hi my good friend Dylan!!

393761 — 2018-03-07 15:13:53 UTC

Your project was amazing, love the work ethic but you hyped the project up way to much by using those waivers. Riley's group, loved the attractions work on grammar in prezi (Riley´s job)

Lilo's group

2018-03-07 15:15:35 UTC

Cute drawings.

Lilo's Group

2018-03-07 15:15:37 UTC

A very interesting presentation and it is beautifully made. One point of improvement would be the flow of the speaking.

Jaime's Group

2018-03-07 15:16:40 UTC

Hi guys. I loved the drawings! Your project was presented well, but you could have included the class more. You could have included jokes or asked us questions to keep us interested. Keep up the good work!

Lilo's group

2018-03-07 15:17:29 UTC

I believe that the drawings were done very well, and the only thing that y'all could have done better is the flow of the presentation.- Dylan Abbott

lilos group

2018-03-07 15:18:28 UTC

good drawings

Nathan-

2018-03-07 15:20:13 UTC

Clear speaker and vocabulary, comparisons were good and rela

Nathan

45378 — 2018-03-07 15:20:14 UTC

Great project!

Nathan

2018-03-07 15:20:15 UTC

Hi Nathan, your project was laid out very well! Your comparisons were very strong and they all played well together! One section that you could become stronger in would be making more eye contact with the class and involving the class a little more. Other than that you did awesome.

Nathan

2018-03-07 15:20:33 UTC

Good comparisons, but could have been more interesting like pictures and interact with the class more other than just reading off you power point.

Nathan

2018-03-07 15:21:06 UTC

Hi Nathan! I loved the energy! You have a firm tone that everyone can hear. This loud tone will help you later on in life. However, I feel that you could have included the class more by asking them questions or standing and talking directly to us. Keep up the good work!

Nathan

2018-03-07 15:21:16 UTC

very good at public speaking

Nathan

39197 — 2018-03-07 15:22:19 UTC

There is Loud clear talking that everyone could hear. good job

Nathan-

2018-03-07 15:24:44 UTC

Super clear speaking and well used vocabulary. Comparisons are understandable. Well done!

nathan

2018-03-07 15:25:16 UTC

hi nathan, good vocabulary and diction. I feel like you coul've involved the class more.

Nathan

622941 — 2018-03-07 15:27:04 UTC

I loved your presentation! It was really great, you're really good with public speaking and you were loud and clear! Good job!

Aaliyah's group

45378 — 2018-03-07 15:27:30 UTC

Love the creativity of your project. Great work!

nathan

2018-03-07 15:27:45 UTC

good job you made some good points bur got a little off topic along the way

Zoeys Group

2018-03-07 15:28:37 UTC

It was a great presentation funny and understandable, but i think it would have been better if you had it more organized and if we did not see you just the puppets. It was overall a great presentation. Well done!

aliyahs group

2018-03-07 15:28:50 UTC

the creativity is awesome

Zoie's group

2018-03-07 15:29:46 UTC

Hi guys! Your set-up took a little long, and you did not stay on topic the whole time. You guys should have also practiced your lines a slight bit more. Since you did not know your lines well and you accidentally used the wrong puppets sometimes, it made things a bit confusing. You should have made the presentation a bit simpler by not having so many characters. However, your puppets looked great, and you kept me laughing. Keep up the good work

Zoie's group

622941 — 2018-03-07 15:35:12 UTC

I liked y'alls presentation, it was really funny. We laughed a lot with y'alls presentation, it was good! Good job!

Aaliyah

2018-03-07 15:35:45 UTC

Cute idea, BUT it would have helped the presentation if lines were memorized and the laughing was cut to a minimum. It was adorable and funny, no doubt.

Dwayne's Group

484141 — 2018-03-07 16:00:18 UTC

They said page turn every time they turned pages and I appreciated them keeping me in the loop. They could have made Dwayne stop moving the book so much because it messed up people's reading.

Olivia,Ashleigh, Dwayne,Daniel

2018-03-07 16:00:42 UTC

I like how dwayne had memorized a few of his lines when reading. I love how they added Friends characters in their work. They probably could have stayed on task more while presenting.

olivias group

2018-03-07 16:01:11 UTC

i think that yall had a really creative idea, but yall were kind of all over the place and it was distracting

SMEK

2018-03-07 16:02:02 UTC

Hi I think your video was very good and well filmed but I think you should of made it more specific because I was lost at the beginning but at end I got it clearly

Olivia, Dwayne, Ashleigh, Daniel

45010 — 2018-03-07 16:02:20 UTC

I loved the "page turn." Y"all had good information but needed to be more focused on what you were saying and make it more entertaining.Had a lot of unnecessary breaks and pauses. Daniel and Dwayne needed to speak more and i loved the picture of Polyphemus

Dwayne, Olivia, Daniel, Ashleigh

2018-03-07 16:04:41 UTC

The presentation was good but there could have been less goofing off.

Daniel group

2018-03-07 16:07:29 UTC

Presentation is confusing but the pictures are ok,I was confused at their dialogue but some of the time they werent presenting as a group

Ashely, Olive, Dywan, Nathanial

2018-03-07 16:09:28 UTC

I liked everyones part. they did so good! so amzning and lovly

smek

2018-03-07 16:10:24 UTC

it was really funny, that made me like it.

Julie

2018-03-07 16:12:02 UTC

I really liked how you related all your poems to real life, it was very interesting to listen too

Daniel group

2018-03-07 16:12:40 UTC

Smek

39565 — 2018-03-07 16:16:28 UTC

I really enjoyed this presentation because it get the audiences attention. It was funny and interesting, but i think they could've referred back to the essential a little more.

Caden's Group

484141 — 2018-03-07 16:17:56 UTC

I liked how they gave everyone an equal chance to speak. I think they should have planned more. Also, I liked that they put my wife in their group.

Jordan, Troy, Caden, Joseph

45010 — 2018-03-07 16:18:04 UTC

Have a lot of great pictures. Need to get more involved with the class, and more enthusiastic. I liked how Caden explained who he was talking about before he read the info.

Ashleighs Group

39565 — 2018-03-07 16:19:54 UTC

I like the pictures and description that went into the scrap book, but i think the stories could've been more in detail.

alysssa

2018-03-07 16:21:03 UTC

i feel like she could have studied the names a little more

Alyssa

2018-03-07 16:23:05 UTC

really great effort. looked really good.

Everyone

2018-03-07 16:24:41 UTC

Honestly I think everyone did a fantastic job because this was a confusing book to read and the fact that we can all present some type of presentation about the book shows that we understand the concept of it all

Alyssa

2018-03-07 16:24:50 UTC

you can tell she worked very hard and it looks good and creative.

Ailse

2018-03-07 16:25:30 UTC

Great job! fantastic! worked hard

alyssa !

2018-03-07 16:26:03 UTC

i think you did really good

Alyssa

2018-03-07 16:26:21 UTC

Great job but can you speak up

Aidaly

2018-03-07 17:54:36 UTC

Hey good job out there kiddo, you really made me proud! Just be sure to enunciate and pronounce your lines better so your voice is clearly heard. The brochure was very well formatted and it really captured my attention. Really great job and that was a great presentation!

Aidaly

2018-03-07 17:56:02 UTC

Great slide show i really enjoyed it. I love love LOVED the creativity behind it all. i do think that you could've researched to be more confident on the pronunciations of the names of people and places.

Aidaly

2018-03-07 17:56:10 UTC

I liked her presentation but i think the slides could have been more colorful and eye catching but i thought it was really interesting

Helen, Gabi, Matthew

2018-03-07 17:57:30 UTC

I loved the illustration/map and all the color. You might have been able to look over your information in advance to make sure you could read it to the best of your ability though.

Aidaly

2018-03-07 17:58:15 UTC

I liked how you described everything in detail! I think you could work more on talking louder.

To ~ Everyone

2018-03-07 17:58:22 UTC

You all did absolutely amazing with everything you´ve done. All the illustrations that you all made, and I like the idea of brochures that you all committed to. Much praise for all of you <3 <3 <3 <3

Helen, Gabi, Matthew

2018-03-07 17:58:25 UTC

I think your presentation went very well. You guys did have a very smooth way of transitioning between people. But I absolutely loved your map.

Helen, Gabi, and purtell

2018-03-07 17:58:40 UTC

I enjoyed your presentation. The map was really good and helped me visualize what y'all were talking about. Y'all could improve by talking louder and making it more interesting.

Aidaly

2018-03-07 17:59:04 UTC

I found your presentation to be interesting, but you needed to show emotion. All in all
your presentation was good

Helen, Gabby, Purtell Turtle

2018-03-07 17:59:07 UTC

I really like the illustration in the back ground, it was very well drawn. I just wish that the map was more involved in the presentation but other than that it was fantastic. I hope to see more from this group, their presentation was truly phenomenal!

Aidaly

2018-03-07 18:00:59 UTC

Your presentation was nicely put together. I liked the way it looked and how it flowed. One thing you could work on is speaking louder.

Drew, Emily Alessandra, Jordyn

2018-03-07 18:02:19 UTC

Your presentation was very good and the way you guys added some good emotions to your presentation with Cardi B and your very funny voices for the presentation. A thing that you could work on is not standing too close together as to like your hiding behind one another.

Johnathon,Madilynn,Wyatt

2018-03-07 18:02:57 UTC

Your play was very funny and I like the way you adapted to the scene

Drew, Emily, Alessandra, Jordyn

2018-03-07 18:03:10 UTC

I really liked all of the hand drawn pictures but i wish ya'll would have spoken up more. Good job!

Johnathan, Madilynn, Wyatt

2018-03-07 18:03:16 UTC

Your play was funny and put together well.

Johnathan, Madilynn, and Wyatt

2018-03-07 18:04:54 UTC

I liked your take on the scene. Some of the lines that were read were kind of hard to understand at times

Jonathan, Madilynn , and Wyatt

2018-03-07 18:06:22 UTC

I liked your presentation of the cyclops seen in the cave. Especially when Jonathan was drinking the water. One thing y'all could work on is just not to speak too soft or too loud. But overall I really liked your presentation.

Johnathan, Madilynn, Wyatt

2018-03-07 18:06:40 UTC

I liked the play and the acting. I wish some of the lines were a little more clear. But over all it was really funny and I like how you represented the scene about polyphemus in a different, new way.

Kieryn

2018-03-07 18:06:40 UTC

I liked how loud and clear you were,but I think you should try and look up every once in a while.

Madi, Wyatt, Johnathan

2018-03-07 18:07:15 UTC

I think your play was stunning, and really amusing. I really wish ther was more content.

Aidaly

2018-03-07 18:19:43 UTC

Great presentation! i loved your wording and how you present it. Just make sure you present a little louder

Kieryn

2018-03-07 18:21:03 UTC

Very articulate, but needs to make contact with audience. Very detailed and good inclusion of all points of view.

Kieryn

2018-03-07 18:22:07 UTC

Beautiful wording, it was very interesting. Just speak up a little and show attitude so we know the attitude your speaking in. Oh yeah your story is DEEP

Kieryn

2018-03-07 18:22:13 UTC

I like how you really go into some detail of how Odysseus is feeling and all the days. But also how you put some good emotion in your own voice as acting as the voice inside of Odysseus head. A thing you can work on is to use some eye contact with the audience.

Kieryn

2018-03-07 18:24:42 UTC

I love your writing, the wording was so expressive and perfectly portrays how the caracter feels.

Kieryn

2018-03-07 18:24:46 UTC

The journal entries were very well written and I can see the effort put into it.

Hailey, Madi, Makayla, and Aly

2018-03-07 18:26:33 UTC

Interesting very funny. Could've included Madi though at least once. Other than that very abstract and creative

Hailey, Madi, Makayla, and Aly

2018-03-07 18:28:58 UTC

I really LOVED your presentation because of the well thought details and hilarious ways to show your essential question. One thing to work on is to not move the camera too much so we can see everything.

Hailey, Madi, Aly, Makayla

2018-03-07 18:31:00 UTC

I´m speechless, and so proud-
Iḿ just astounded by how amazing the editing the acting and everything was. It was overall just splendid. Amazing work you four <3

Hailey, Madi, Aly, Makayla

2018-03-07 18:33:34 UTC

great acting, maybe turn the music down a little bit or speak up so we can here what you are saying. BUT overall it was hilarious and great

Courtney And Zaira

2018-03-07 19:02:48 UTC

Y'all were very creative and projected y'all voices very well. Something y'all could have gone through was the practice of the official presentation. Overall I liked how y'all switched roles and how y'all made it like an actual tour. Great Job! It was very well directed.

Kobe

2018-03-07 19:07:32 UTC

You did a really good job on your poster, your drawings looked amazing! When you did your presentation you said it with confidence and made sure you stated the information clearly. something I feel like you can improve on speaking at the class. When you are reading you may want to read ahead and turn towards the class and say the line.

Kobe

2018-03-07 19:08:19 UTC

Your poster was colored and presented very well. I feel that you could have put more pictures to show some deeper thought, but besides that, great job!

Kobe

2018-03-07 19:08:51 UTC

I liked your poster but it would help if you spoke louder

2018-03-08 14:02:43 UTC

Nice poster! Who drew the drawings? They are really nice.Maybe it would have been nice if you had practiced more.

Bri's Group

2018-03-08 14:03:21 UTC

Woah, Love the poster!!!

Mackenize Bri and Vinh

39968 — 2018-03-08 14:05:08 UTC

Gloria and ailey

2018-03-08 15:16:41 UTC

Edith and Max

2018-03-08 15:21:53 UTC

The brochure is very interesting and intriguing. Good information yall stayed on topic

Edith and Max

2018-03-08 15:23:33 UTC

Very good presentation, but maybe try and speak a little louder. Also liked your brochure a lot.

Gloria, Amy, and Hailey

2018-03-08 15:25:00 UTC

I really like how you made only 6 characters using mustaches and eyebrows. I also liked the bloopers that you showed at the end.

Gloria, Hailey, and Amy

2018-03-08 15:25:35 UTC

Your intro is very good and in-depth. I like how comical and interesting it was. Very good job.

Will

2018-03-08 15:33:38 UTC

Your story of the temptations was good and on point. Your drawing was good and the information you gave was good and the pictures were really nice

Kieryn

39987 — 2018-03-08 18:05:49 UTC

Your presentation was sooo good. You had a a lot of details and examples in your paper.

Nicole's group

513611 — 2018-03-08 18:09:49 UTC

I really liked the way you set this up like a cruise, but when you started playing the song I couldn't really hear what Izzy was saying.

Nicole, Izzy, Jina, and Andrea

39987 — 2018-03-08 18:11:22 UTC

I really loved yall's presentation. It was really creative.

Nicole, Izzy, Jina, Andrea

39979 — 2018-03-08 18:12:24 UTC

great presentation, just needs more practice.

Nicole, Izzy, Jina

2018-03-08 18:13:29 UTC

Great job guys I really like your presentation of the travel brochure and especially the Siren Song. Very good ways of showing the whole trip, maybe try to not rush through presentation when speaking. But overall Great Job!!

Nc-ole, Izz, G-NA

2018-03-08 18:17:36 UTC

h to the rubber chicken with SQUEKEKS

Will, Emma, Jacob, Miles

2018-03-08 18:19:59 UTC

owo much interest, much beauty owo
I love the acting very esquisite uwu Very beatiful

Ahem, anyways, I really liked the trailers editing and the witty lines. It all was really nice <3 I would love to see more of your work

Will,Emma,Jacob,Miles

412521 — 2018-03-08 18:21:18 UTC

Good job, i liked your presentation it was funny and creative.

Will, Emma, Jacob, Miles

2018-03-08 18:24:46 UTC

I loved your movie trailer! Especially when you could tell that y'all were having fun and enjoying yourself. One thing y'all could fix or work on is speaking louder. But absolutely loved it!!

Will's group

2018-03-08 18:25:38 UTC

the bloopers were amazing even myles's pert

Lexter's group

401561 — 2018-03-08 19:00:19 UTC

This was hilarious. I loved how they expressed their side of the story.

Lexter

2018-03-08 19:03:15 UTC

lex's group

2018-03-08 19:03:49 UTC

this was funny and pretty coolio great job

Lexters group

2018-03-08 19:03:52 UTC

glorious. hilarious. i loved it

lexter, savannah, natasha, and hailey

2018-03-08 19:03:54 UTC

The continuous/constant comedy and obvious hard work put into practicing and thought.

lexter

2018-03-08 19:04:04 UTC

I thought that this presentation was very amusing. I found nothing that they could improve on because I am very satisfied with their work.

Lexter's group

394581 — 2018-03-08 19:04:23 UTC

it was a really good! i enjoyed the scenes that you all came up with. The only thing i have to say is maybe not be so loud when shaking the chair so that we can hear the song.

Lexter's group

2018-03-08 19:04:30 UTC

The acting was top notch but it could've answer the essential question more clearly.

Lexter

2018-03-08 19:06:02 UTC

Morgan Freeman was just put to shame by that acting.

Natasha

2018-03-08 19:07:07 UTC

She did a great job of lip singing the song.

LEX

2018-03-08 19:07:38 UTC

lexter is a funny actor lol

2018-03-08 19:08:57 UTC

Bella, Em, Haley Smith

2018-03-08 19:10:41 UTC

They did a great job of portraying their thoughts.

Savanah

2018-03-08 19:11:23 UTC

She could have lip singed better.

Lexter's group

2018-03-08 19:11:44 UTC

There was some really great acting going on. Maybe Lexter could have a little less of a seizure

Bella, Em, and Haley Smith

2018-03-08 19:12:12 UTC

I do not see how they could have improved.

emiliano

2018-03-08 19:12:31 UTC

I really liked that this group was very dramatic and touching with explaining the odyssey.

Video group

2018-03-08 19:12:53 UTC

Good way of presenting your point

Francis, Austin, Alex

2018-03-08 19:13:41 UTC

I really enjoyed the video, the editing was great. It was very entertaining, funny, and explained the essential question. There is not really any improvements I can think of. I just wish there was more!

Francis' group

2018-03-08 19:14:43 UTC

The message was great and easily understood.

ashlynne

2018-03-08 19:20:50 UTC

good question, even better answer

Ian and Logan

2018-03-08 19:28:14 UTC

The puns were real.

Ian and Logan

2018-03-08 19:28:41 UTC

Wonderful presentation!

Jacob Brody

392162 — 2018-03-08 19:48:31 UTC

The pictures did a good job representing the journey.

Matthew from bby

2018-03-08 19:49:14 UTC

owo
good job, beautiful pamphlet. space out info on pamphlet. interesting.

Matthew

2018-03-08 19:49:16 UTC

I thought the pamphlet was amazing and well done.

Jacooob Brodie

2018-03-08 19:49:53 UTC

I like how you got into your presentation. Poseidon was cute.

Mattew

45001 — 2018-03-08 19:49:56 UTC

You're Drawings are 10/10 and i love how you described the Sirens.

Ella, Keriel, and Nathaly

2018-03-08 19:50:19 UTC

I really enjoyed your poem! It was beautiful. The presentation may have been better if you change the color of the background?

Matthew

2018-03-08 19:51:06 UTC

I Like the pictures you drew and how you worded the descriptions of each place.

noah

2018-03-08 19:51:19 UTC

i liked how you did the pamphlets writing and drawings

matthew

401361 — 2018-03-08 19:51:33 UTC

The places are described really well, and there are a lot of entertainment options.

2018-03-08 20:09:38 UTC

I liked how you guys had great photos in the background, they were great but the presentation was a little too long.

Giggles, Jocelynn, Dale, Alexia

2018-03-08 20:09:50 UTC

I like the layout of the presentation. Awesome job!

2018-03-08 20:10:03 UTC

that was a good

Addie & Sarah

401732 — 2018-03-08 20:10:33 UTC

Beautiful presentation I enjoyed how both of you decided to make a brochure. The presentation was different and really interesting.

Sarah and Addie

394271 — 2018-03-08 20:11:55 UTC

I like the pictures that are included, but i think that Sarah needs to speak up, and have more enthusiasm. <3

Addie & Sarah

2018-03-08 20:11:59 UTC

Nice brochure, dudette. I liked the fact that you typed it and it looks very organized. Be more ENTHUSIASTIC. You both could project your voice a little more.

Addy and Sarah

2018-03-08 20:12:22 UTC

I think Sarah needs to be louder and that there could have been a little more enthusiasm but otherwise i think the information given was really good.

Addie and Sarah

2018-03-08 20:13:03 UTC

I liked the brochure overall but I think that Sarah could've been a little louder.

Abby Noah and Sammi

2018-03-08 20:15:00 UTC

I think the head things are really cute. I like the little bit of comedy that yall added was great but i think that more info would have been good. Otherwise, Grrrrrrreat!!

Abby&therest

45001 — 2018-03-08 20:16:26 UTC

10/10 costumes

abs and crew

377741 — 2018-03-08 20:17:08 UTC

true dat

Abby, Noah, Sammi

394271 — 2018-03-08 20:17:15 UTC

Love the headbands, but needs more enthusiasm, Abby had more speaking parts. Everyone was a little off task. I'd like to point out that Noah wasn't focused at all, and didn't know what to say.

Abby, Noah, and Sammi

2018-03-08 20:17:49 UTC

I think that the presentation was really creative and entertaining

Abby&therest

45001 — 2018-03-08 20:18:36 UTC

they win.

abby and noah and sammi

377741 — 2018-03-08 20:18:41 UTC

what was that guy's name?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Abby, Noah and Sammi

2018-03-08 20:19:14 UTC

Noah, you are hilarious, I can see that you are nervous. I like the pictures in the book. I think you guys are the best group so far and you guys should keep up the good work.
P.S: Whoever drew the pictures. Good job!

Noah, Sammi, and Abby

392162 — 2018-03-08 20:20:51 UTC

Love the humor, good costumes, also, very good scrapbook.

Abby Noah Sami

2018-03-08 20:21:07 UTC

I think that Noah was really funny, but you were so nervous LOL

this one

377741 — 2018-03-08 20:21:29 UTC

AWWWWWWW