https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks Hi en-us 2021-08-11 13:12:14 UTC 2022-05-19 13:13:12 UTC hello@padlet.com s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1685935693 I struggled with the conclusion because I didn't know how to end it smoothly. My introduction already gave a small summary. The body paragraphs already explained my points and used evidence. So, I didn't know what to add to make it a full paragraph. I knew I was going to restate my thesis but I didn't know what else to add. I ended up adding a summary for each paragraph. Then I added a question at the end that was not too good.]]> 2021-08-19 12:37:12 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1685935693 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1686059597 I need to tone back the amount of direct evidence and make the connections better]]> 2021-08-19 13:58:28 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1686059597 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1693510640 The most important thing to consider in a rhetorical analysis is your evidence. Without your evidence all of your points mean nothing. If you don't have any direct quotes from the text then there is no way for the author to know if your statement is correct. Your intro and conclusion does add to your analysis but they lack the information your body paragraphs have. Your evidence can make connections between literary elements and the text. With either paraphrasing or direct quotes they add so much and support your essay. They are essential to your essay. ]]> 2021-08-24 12:42:04 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1693510640 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1693655331 I have changed to using the rhetorical triangle in the essays. Especially in the body paragraphs. ]]> 2021-08-24 13:56:32 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1693655331 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1698360257 It matters because it can add context to the text. It could provide a reason for the text to be written. It could also be referenced in the text. For example the MLK i have a dream speech would be totally different in another time period. It would not be as impactfull to the audiance. Also if it was later in time it wouldn't even need to be written. ]]> 2021-08-26 12:41:45 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1698360257 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1698509797 It is better because it goes deeper into the elements of the text. It has 6 elements instead of the triangles 3.]]> 2021-08-26 13:59:10 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1698509797 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1700774392 Why of all days do fridays have the worst work. I have had no quizes all week but I have 2 today. I had very little homework through the week then boom homework in each class on Thursday. Why on a Friday, it is supposed to be a relaxed day. How do all of the teachers cordinate together. Also, when we have free time I never have homework. Then when I have homework I never have free time.]]> 2021-08-27 13:28:35 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1700774392 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1706975580 The author is the person who writes the book while the narrator is the person who tells the story. They can have different ideas and opinions because as far as the story is concerened they are two different people. The author can talk about what they really want. The narrator can push the story toward the way they want. If the narrator is a character in a story they can have a much greater influence than the author can. Overall they both are used for different purposes. ]]> 2021-08-31 12:39:31 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1706975580 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1707371090 The purpose and speaker are harder on fiction.]]> 2021-08-31 15:17:43 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1707371090 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1712603821 I would use logic because it is the easiest to do. With logos you can use textual evidence to support your claim. You can't do that with the other ones as easily. It also has more of an impact since it is less subjective. Morality changes between people along with emotions. Logic is the same between everyone. It is just a better way to support your claim.]]> 2021-09-02 12:37:48 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1712603821 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1715204802 Logos since it makes alot of sense to me.]]> 2021-09-03 13:16:47 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1715204802 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1715211586 I"m really not ready for this quiz. I studied a lot and made a quizlet. I just don't fell very confident. Also, why did all the teachers give quizes today? I didn't have one all week but then I had 3 on a Friday. It just doesn't make sense. Do you guys cordinate or what. It seems like this happens all the time.]]> 2021-09-03 13:19:59 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1715211586 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1721830064 I had a pretty good weekend. It was a nice weekend since the last weekend I went camping so I never went home until 12 on Sunday. So this weekend was even better. That extra day allowed be to not do any work until Monday. It was just overall a really good weekend with a lot of free time. I did get bored by Sunday night though. It was good though.]]> 2021-09-07 13:23:12 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1721830064 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1727869938 Tone is the feeling the author has toward the topic in the novel or article. It is less of what the paper conveys but more of what the author feels like. That would be the mood of the text. This can be used to further persuade readers to their point of view. Some examples of tone are Cheerful, Assertive, and Humorous. This all conveys how the author would feel toward a topic. Overall it is a very important tool in writing.]]> 2021-09-09 12:39:12 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1727869938 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1730905703 The word why was used multiple times to describe tone.]]> 2021-09-10 13:35:10 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1730905703 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1730932773   Today should be a good day. We had little work in 1st which was nice. We will have a sub in second and have a work day which will help me not have too much work in the weekend. In 3rd we are doing a lab. We were supposed to be done yesterday but we must finish today. Then in 4th I have Avid which is a chill class each day. It is a nice break from a long week. Overall today should be a good day.]]> 2021-09-10 13:43:43 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1730932773 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1739266791 Yes you can. I am not good at it but you can see a persons felling through their artwork. What they physically draw can be a way to show what is important to them. Also how they draw certain things can be another indicator. For example if something is drawn to look dumb or stupid in artwork you could conclude that the artist feels that way about that paticular thing. Some people hide their true feeling in artwork while others express themselves through it. Overall it is very possible. ]]> 2021-09-14 12:38:09 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1739266791 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1739554207 The third one because it had an obvious tone and a cause.]]> 2021-09-14 14:00:31 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1739554207 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1748548243 An argument is when a speaker tries to convince the audience to their side. They usually have evidence to support their claims. They can use pathos, logos and ethos to support their claims. Arguments aren't in all types of texts. In some it is a direct argument, the paper is all about that one argument. Some have an underlying argument for the text. Overall argument are really used in the text.]]> 2021-09-17 12:38:17 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1748548243 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1748744001 It has given me a system for arguments.]]> 2021-09-17 13:52:20 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1748744001 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1753956531 I'm really mad today. I thought that our APUSH test was today so I did all the vocab and reading which took about 6 hours just for it to be wednesday. I also thought that the vocab test was tomorow so i didn't study. I think ill still do good but i'm just really mad. I just hope nothing else crazy happens today. I have math work I haven't done because I did homework all day. Ill have to finish it before class.]]> 2021-09-20 13:22:35 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1753956531 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1757113257 I really don't care. I'm not big into homecoming and all the dressing up. I don't know any of the themes either so it is a surprise every day. Is there even a prize for each class or something? They keep tally of pratiapation so I assume so. I'm not praticipating because I don't have any of those cloths either. I wear the same looking cloths every day. ]]> 2021-09-21 13:22:05 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1757113257 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1762827710 Metonomy, I think it will be easy to find examples but it will be difficult to find pictures. ]]> 2021-09-23 12:35:49 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1762827710 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1762840336 The purpose of the text is usually shown by the argument. The purpose is what the text is based around. The argument is what the text is made of. They are linked heavily throughout a text. The purpose can be different from the argument if the author is writing about something he doesn't agree with. Overall argument and purpose is linked heavily. ]]> 2021-09-23 12:40:39 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1762840336 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1763093726 The toulmin model since it can be applied to any text.]]> 2021-09-23 14:01:12 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1763093726 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1765631117   I have nothing to do today. All of my classes are just free time. I really didn't want to go today but I have a practice quiz in Chemistry. I get to leave at 2:20 though. Lets be honest that pep rally is going to be lame. It just will be. I really don't have any work to turn in though. Today should be easy. ]]> 2021-09-24 13:18:32 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1765631117 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1774558440 I really don't have a style. I have worn the same style since middle school. I don't care about my appearance that much so I don't care about what wear. I try to be as invisible as possible so I don't wear flashy cloths. I don't even have a shirt with words or designs on it. The only thing I can think of is I always wear my jacket. Even when is hot I will wear it.]]> 2021-09-28 13:17:56 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1774558440 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1774563946 It might be the most disgusting drink I have ever drunk. Also it probably has a higher net value than some countrys.]]> 2021-09-28 13:19:21 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1774563946 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1781184032 My writing style is informative. I don't really build up a point or make it smooth sentences. All I work on is the information. I focus on if the info is correct and that the evidence is strong. I think the exactness of my writing style would draw the readers attention. My style does like smoothness which could make it look bad. Overall I think I have a good writing style.]]> 2021-09-30 12:39:55 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1781184032 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1781429304 I am more comfortable with imagery because it's purpose is to effect the reader directly so it is easy to spot.]]> 2021-09-30 13:48:46 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1781429304 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1784146328   I'm split on how I should feel about this weekend. On the one hand I am going camping and its only one hour away. We got fishing licenses so we can fish. My family is also supposed to come up tomorrow. On the other hand I just want to relax. I don't want to get up there and set up the camper. Also there's no wifi which isn't horrible but I just want to chill. ]]> 2021-10-01 13:17:56 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1784146328 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1799738607 I thought the ones the were just puns were funny. I don't remember any examples but I know a lot of them were in the cleaning section. Some of them weren't creative though. It just sounded generic. I thought mine were ok. The restaurants were probably my favorite catagory. ]]> 2021-10-07 13:19:47 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1799738607 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1827133236 We have a lot of time off soon. Next week we get to leave early for the psat. Then we have election day. We also have thanksgiving's 3 days off which will be nice. Then winter break wouldn't be far off. Right before winter break we have state testing which should give us some easy classes if we aren't taking any. So, we have a lot of time off to look forward too.]]> 2021-10-19 13:23:42 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1827133236 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1830184398 Yesterday was a good day. I didn't have to to do anything after I went home. The school day did have work to do though. 

Yesterday was like the felling yo get when you wake up on a Saturday, good. I didn't have to move a muscle after I greeted my front door. The school day was plagued with work though.]]> 2021-10-20 12:39:28 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1830184398 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1830421254 Yes it was. In my opinion the use of imagrey had the biggest effect on his purpose. ]]> 2021-10-20 13:50:32 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1830421254 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1833339472 My favorite food is quesidillas. The smell is of slightly burnt cheese because I'm not good at cooking. The taste is of cheese because thats what I put on quesidillas. In every bite you can hear the chrunchy shell. It tortilla looks white with a few spots of brown. It feels warm too. ]]> 2021-10-21 12:48:43 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1833339472 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1836246980 It is. It really helps to support his thinking.]]> 2021-10-22 13:16:12 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1836246980 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1836256805 I got a lot of work to do this weekend. I have the english project. I also have math to do. It usually isn't that hard but I can't do any Saturday. I am going up toward Virginia all day. So, all the work must be done Sunday or Friday. Overall I have a difficult weekend. ]]> 2021-10-22 13:19:55 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1836256805 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1848025962 I tend to write short sentences for normal writing. On essays I wright longer sentences with all of the needed info. On normal writing I don't feel the need to pack in info. I don't know why this has happened. Its always been this way. Its just a part of my writing. ]]> 2021-10-27 12:35:45 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1848025962 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1853807933 Tone, I can make so many things just by changing the tone.]]> 2021-10-29 12:35:06 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1853807933 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1853819209 First person because it gives us insight into the person. It can make a story better if you can know what a main character is thinking. Third person just doesn't give a lot of info. You can't know what people are thinking or what their reactions are. Third person is just too limiting. Overall it is just bettter.]]> 2021-10-29 12:41:07 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1853819209 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1864460710 It does. It shows her decent into madness.]]> 2021-11-03 12:35:35 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1864460710 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1864470991 Finding the evidence. I don't know all of the different elements of a paper. Also naming them will be a challenge. I just need to get better at justifying the choices I make in a paper. I can maybe find a piece of rhetoric but the evidence to back it up is difficult. Overall I just need to get better at identifying. ]]> 2021-11-03 12:39:31 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1864470991 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1864713475 I don't anymore. I found out I don't have to identify a specific piece of rhetoric.]]> 2021-11-03 13:55:33 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1864713475 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1894120634 I would be comfortable if I was ok with the piece of text. With the ted talk I just did I would be confiedent that I could pull it off. If you gave me a really hard text or something old I probally wouldn't do as well. I just have trouble finding the actual literary terms. I just cant see them in a text, I have to really look for them. Overall I would be confiedent in most texts. ]]> 2021-11-16 13:38:32 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1894120634 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1899505336 Smackdowns because they seem to be alot funner than the others.]]> 2021-11-18 13:34:29 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1899505336 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1899530925 In my family there is a tradition that a kid from every other generation must be named William. So my Grandpa's name is William. So take a guess who got chosen. Me. I don't know of any other traditions like this. I have to work with my cousins to get one of out grandkids to have that name. ]]> 2021-11-18 13:43:59 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1899530925 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1899537635 NO, I thought this was one of my hardest assignments in english. Its hard to get a theme or purpose from a story someone tells. ]]> 2021-11-18 13:46:20 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1899537635 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1918005870 Why is our vocab quiz today? You said that we are supposed to do it on the first day we see you again. That would be Tuesday normally. This week though we have 3 skinnys. WHY. It doesn't make any sense. We didn't even get warning that we would have a skinny today. I found out when I got into class. Just why.]]> 2021-11-29 14:19:30 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1918005870 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1927339794 My mom will randomly do housework. All times of the day it will randomly be done. One night I was woken up by the dishwasher being unloaded, at 4 am. She just said she couldn't sleep. I still don't why she decided to do that. It is very annoying. She just does it all the time.]]> 2021-12-03 13:42:53 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1927339794 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1933518670 The second one because it helps support the purpose better. The purpose for the articles are to connect the vauge problem of homelessness to a actual person. I belive they do this to allow the audiance to relate to the homeless. The second article goes into more detail. It also helps make the homeless more relatable.]]> 2021-12-07 13:40:28 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1933518670 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1946981265 Finding the exact rhetorical element is hard for me. I can sometimes find a obvious thing but those small ones are a pain to find. I just need get a list of all of them so I can look for them more often. Ethos and all of those are easy. You just have to look at what the author is doing. A lot of the ones we learnt on vocab quizes are about the type of words used. It is just very difficult.]]> 2021-12-14 13:43:16 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1946981265 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1946989943 My bedroom looks pretty normal. I have a nice bed and dresser. I have a desk in the corner with my laptop on it. I have a few star wars puzzles up on my wall. (They took awhile to do) I also have a small plant on a shelf I've had since 6th grade. It's carpeted with a basketball rug in the middle. ]]> 2021-12-14 13:46:11 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1946989943 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1946993877 I feel that I am neat since I keep stuff nice and tidy. I always have something in use, in a drawer that's reserved for storage or in the trash. ]]> 2021-12-14 13:47:32 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1946993877 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1986029726 Try to work. People complain that the classes are hard or teachers are bad but if you try and do all of your work you will be fine. I've never met a class that was really hard. I've had difficult ones but I tried and did ok. If you do that then you can do fine. Teachers will like you too.]]> 2022-01-11 13:40:26 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/1986029726 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2008876576 It helped break down the complicated topic]]> 2022-01-24 14:22:32 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2008876576 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2008883589 I am confused why we got out of school. I know it was for sickness but why. It didn't seem that bad at Karns but maybe some of the teachers are out. I really liked having those days of. I hope we get out again. It was nice not having to worry about doing school stuff for a week. I really hope we get out again.]]> 2022-01-24 14:25:09 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2008883589 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2015833134 I dunno probally yesterday. I make little lies to make people fell better. I don't do it on purpose I just don't want to tell them the truth. I think it is ok to do that as long as they don't spiral into bigger problems. I usually just try to avoid questions where the only options are lie or make someone feel bad. Sometimes you do have to choose one. I almost always choose to lie.]]> 2022-01-27 13:31:26 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2015833134 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2015846351 When it can protect someones feelings.]]> 2022-01-27 13:37:33 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2015846351 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2023719954 People use it as an insult just like most curse words. It seems that in most negative situations it isn't used in a specific way. In positive ways it is uses as a community word. It's meaning would be changed into a word that a race would use to describe themselves. I feel like a lot of words are being used in community rather than a negative way. That is a positive change. In conclusion they can be used in multiple ways.]]> 2022-02-01 16:26:14 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2023719954 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2023735315 No.]]> 2022-02-01 16:32:56 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2023735315 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2023745087 Yes I do. I think that it is a good way to stop it but the side effects need to be addressed. I think that ways for familys to be supported in other countries need to be present. In those other countries safe well paying work for older children, ~12, could help the situation. It wouldn't be perfect but it could be a start. Also poverty must be fought for in other counties. So, I do agree with it if other systems are used too. ]]> 2022-02-01 16:36:54 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2023745087 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2023749675 I did as a quality check. If something i from China it probally isn't as good as something form France.]]> 2022-02-01 16:38:45 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2023749675 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2042402668 I thought it was a genius idea of satire. I think that it was a good way to provoke an response from the audiance. He did this to try to get people to work on finding solutions to the food problem. I think that he did this to show a extreme example so people can find more moderate examples. Obviously this is a joke but it is a good use to motivate people. I still don't understand why it was so long. It seemed unnecessary. ]]> 2022-02-11 13:47:11 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2042402668 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2066361755 The most important thing is to try to find connections. It can make a story more enjoyable. It can make connections from eairlier chapters. Or it can be across books. It can be very awarding to watch out for certain things. Eventually you can spot connections before they even happen. Spotting connections is the most important.]]> 2022-02-25 13:38:02 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2066361755 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2066367040 I want to go to a decent college. I want to go away to school but close enough to go home on the weekends. I dunno what I want to major in but I'll figure it out. I am looking forward to the college experiance and getting on my own. It can be a learning curb but I will do alot. The whole experiance is going to be cool. It will be very fun.]]> 2022-02-25 13:41:22 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2066367040 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2066368368 The reputation of the school is very important to me. ]]> 2022-02-25 13:42:12 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2066368368 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2066370092 I think it would be about lack of reasources, oil...etc.]]> 2022-02-25 13:43:16 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2066370092 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2066377118 Finding my view early will be important. I want to know how I feel about a topic a few paragraphs in. I do this so I can find evidence while reading it. Also, finding my 3 main topics is a priority. I do it for the same reason. With both of these I should be able to find my majority of the evidence after my first read through. It would be a big time saver.]]> 2022-02-25 13:47:58 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2066377118 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2066377753 The same as last time.]]> 2022-02-25 13:48:23 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2066377753 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2069542680 Leader it seems to be easy.]]> 2022-02-28 14:16:12 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2069542680 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2113894257 I had a ok weekend. I had to go through the APUSH book and look at what needs to be read. It is alot more than last time. It has few pages per chapter at least. I don't know when to start. I want to get it done early but it feels like we just did the last test. I should start in a few weeks. ]]> 2022-03-25 14:19:06 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2113894257 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2113901127 His use of setting helps us see the contrast between everything in the book. For example, he describe Gatsby's house as super big and fancy. He uses many descriptive words to paint a picture of what it looks like. Then they talk about Nicks house and the talk about how small it is. It shows the diffrence between them. Nick is poor. Gatsby is Wealthy.]]> 2022-03-25 14:22:48 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2113901127 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2113903194 No, although he is pretty neutral in the conflicts he is still a charecter so by definetion he doesn't know everything. ]]> 2022-03-25 14:23:50 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2113903194 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2134490624 I think they are really working through all the characters. The backgrounds are being laid. It will be important later in the story. It sets up Gatsby to being weird. Nick is nick. Tom is just a bad person.]]> 2022-04-07 12:35:58 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2134490624 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2134496299 Gatsy. He is very mysterious.]]> 2022-04-07 12:39:32 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2134496299 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2140754027 It was surprising. Tom is very open about his relationship with myrtle. I feel like you would be a little secritive about it. But he is throwing a party. Also him hitting her is crazy. It just shows his character. He is not a good person.]]> 2022-04-12 12:44:31 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2140754027 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2140755628 Tom, it is shown he is just a bad person. ]]> 2022-04-12 12:45:38 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2140755628 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2150342421 They could learn my habits. The little things that I do. They could learn what I enjoy. And what I don't. They could learn the types of people I hang around and the simularies. It would be cool to see what things I do that I don't notice. It would be very helpful. ]]> 2022-04-20 13:28:09 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2150342421 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2150343886 He is not reliable. He says he is neutral but he has emotions for all the people in the book. ]]> 2022-04-20 13:29:01 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2150343886 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2151992325 Internal. External are easy to deal. Most of the time you can't really avoid them. Internal conflicts can sit without a solution for a long time. They also can appear out of nowhere. You can make a internal conflict by yourself. You can't do that with external conflicts. ]]> 2022-04-21 12:56:40 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2151992325 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2151993038 Internal, it can be hard to solve it. ]]> 2022-04-21 12:57:07 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2151993038 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2152000934 It was very awkward. Gatsby didn't know what to do. His plan wasn't working. He wanted to leave but the rain stopped him. When they sat in the same room it was silent. They just didn't know what to do. It was funny seeing the perfect Gatsby being nervous.]]> 2022-04-21 13:02:39 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2152000934 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2152002089 Daisy did, she went pass his expectation.]]> 2022-04-21 13:03:29 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2152002089 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2158436391 These AP tests are coming up fast. I am nervous about the chemistry one. It is just a lot of math. I don't know i I know it all. The APUSH one should be easier. The DBQ might be bad. AP Lang should be ok. I think i got the essays down.]]> 2022-04-26 12:45:56 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2158436391 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2158447788 Having Gatsby tell the story could be good. He could actually tell us his backstory. He changes his background every chapter. Plus their are many rumors about him. He also hangs out with suspicious characters. It would be nice to see an unbiased background about him. Also having him could give insight onto his final goal. ]]> 2022-04-26 12:52:00 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2158447788 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2158448976 She would be more independent.]]> 2022-04-26 12:52:46 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2158448976 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2158459514 I think Daisy is my favorite. She seems to be kinda like a main character. Everyone has an opinion or relationship about her. The whole story with Gatsby is about her. Tom's story is also about her. Nick also seems to be very involved with it. She just seems to be a big part of everything]]> 2022-04-26 12:58:53 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2158459514 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2158461622 Myrtle, she just seems immoral. ]]> 2022-04-26 12:59:56 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2158461622 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2158473307 The conclusion is difficult. I can make a basic one but it doesn't seem to be as good as the other paragraphs. They also seem shorter. I just don't know what to talk about. I restate my thesis but after I just don't know. I usually just talk about the thesis. Then I make up a few sentences. ]]> 2022-04-26 13:06:46 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2158473307 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2160276013 It was surprising. I thought that Gatsby would have been fine. He was not. Maybe Daisy would have been killed and Gatsby would be sad. I am also surprised that tom didn't kill him. I thought it was going to be about daisy and gatsby so tom kills him. I just want to know what happens next. This whole thing is kinda done.]]> 2022-04-27 12:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2160276013 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2162668685 We go to other characters like jordan and tom.]]> 2022-04-28 13:51:51 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2162668685 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2162673825 It is a frame of mind. Gatsby looked like he worked hard to get rich. He looked like a classic American Dream story from the outside. He is not. He was a criminal who did all of this for a girl. Tom also was born into it. It is not real it is just a mindset.]]> 2022-04-28 13:54:50 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2162673825 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2162674372 I think it isn't as true.]]> 2022-04-28 13:55:11 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2162674372 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2175605912 It was good. I really liked the ending. It helped show everyones true colors. It shows Gatsbys friends aren't actually his friends. It shows tom and daisy don't care. It was just good. It was cool seeing his dad. It gave us insight. ]]> 2022-05-09 12:34:43 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2175605912 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2175607119 Gatsby, he is just mysterious. ]]> 2022-05-09 12:35:31 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2175607119 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2182868567 The big party at the begining. I think it will be cool to see what happens. Its not very important to me in the sense of the book. It is just interesting in movie making sense. They talk about how big it is and all of the people. They would have to make it in a movie sense. It will be cool to see. ]]> 2022-05-13 13:20:54 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2182868567 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2182871604 Nick, Toby Maguire just doesn't fit it. He just seems akward. ]]> 2022-05-13 13:22:53 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2182871604 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2182883292 I think Decaprio is a good actor for Gatsby. He just fits the rich guy look. Also it helps he is just a really good actor so he can fit most roles. He also does a good job to switch to being nervous when he meets daisy. He also does a good job when he gets mad at Tom. Overall he does a very good job. ]]> 2022-05-13 13:30:12 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2182883292 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2182886338 More of the background of Gatsby. In the book they talk about it alot but in the movie they don't.]]> 2022-05-13 13:32:13 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2182886338 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2187535450 I would like to travel to alot of important spots in the U.S. I would like to go to Jamestown and stuff. It would be cool. Also going to pearl harbor would be cool. I just want to see alot of important areas. I like history so it could be fun. It would just take a long time. ]]> 2022-05-17 12:41:49 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2187535450 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2187537124 It makes be think that it will be about how people take vacations to graves where people are assassinated. ]]> 2022-05-17 12:42:55 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2187537124 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2187543777 I need to remember to take my time. It will be very difficult to keep track while writing. I like to stay in the zone but I can't do that when I have to keep track of time. I think we have to do all 3 essays in the same time. It will just be hard. I don't think it will be hard. I just have to keep track of time.]]> 2022-05-17 12:47:04 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2187543777 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2187559961 It is similar in because it shows how to different parties can have things in commen. For example, she talks about the ego that a president and president killer have. She talks about it and how they have the same ego. In shooting dad it is two political partys. It was her and her dad. By the end they see they both enjoy it. They are very similar.]]> 2022-05-17 12:57:12 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2187559961 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2187561050 It is a little weird. I think it will be fun.]]> 2022-05-17 12:57:43 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2187561050 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2187571546 I would probaly warn people against doing what I did to end up there. I would just try to not let anyone else end up when I did. I could just try to warn people about what I regret. I would use my experience to make peoples lives better. It would be bad knowing people will go down the road that lead me to that point. I would do what I can to prevent it. Or I would say a Star wars quote. ]]> 2022-05-17 13:04:18 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2187571546 s908425 https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2191318068 I don't know a whole lot. I know FSF made The Great Gatsby. I know the book is just old. They also made a movie. With some famous actors. I know that in the 20s prohibition was a big thing. Even though alot of people still drank. Also alot of new money people.]]> 2022-05-19 13:12:25 UTC https://padlet.com/s908425/Rylan_Hooks/wish/2191318068