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      <title>Beta Wed Lesson 5  by Lau Ling</title>
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      <pubDate>2025-02-12 12:48:58 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Zhen Hong corrected</title>
         <author>nickylim22</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was Mickey. One ordinary morning. Mickey was looking for food. Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, he wasn't carrying because too heavy for him.</p><p><br/></p><p>  All of a sudden, a hazardous snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was hungry. He wanted the mango. The little mouse was frightened and trembling like a jelly.</p><p><br/></p><p>  Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by the scene. He lends him a helping hand and picked up the snake far away. From then on, Mickey and lion became bosom friends.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was Mickey. One ordinary morning, Mickey was looking for food. Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, he <strong>couldn't carry it because it was</strong> too heavy for him.</p><p>      All of a sudden, a <strong>hazardous </strong> snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was hungry. He wanted the mango. The little mouse was frightened and trembling like jelly.</p><p>    Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by the scene. He <strong>lent</strong> him a helping hand and picked up the snake <strong>and threw him</strong> far away. From then on, Mickey and <strong>the</strong> lion became bosom friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-12 13:32:12 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Loh kah Him corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Once upon a time,therelived a mouse. His name was <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://mikey.One">Mikey. One</a> odinary morning,he looking is loking for food in the forest.Just then,he found a juicy mango.However,the mango is too heavy for him.</p><p><br/></p><p>    All of a sudden,a hazardous snake appeared from <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://nowhere.Th">nowhere.Th</a>e snake was very hungry.He wanted to eat Mikey . Mikey was frightened and trembling like a jelly.</p><p><br/></p><p>     Fortunately,a kind-hearted lion pass by a scene.He lend Mikey a helpful hand.he picked up the snake,threw it with all his might.From then on, lion,Leo and Mikey become bosom friends. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     Once upon a time, <strong>there lived</strong> a mouse. His name was <strong>Mikey</strong>. One <strong>ordinary</strong> morning, <strong>he was looking</strong> for food in the forest. Just then, he found a juicy mango. <strong>However, the mango was</strong> too heavy for him.</p><p>      All of a sudden, a <strong>dangerous</strong> snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was very hungry. He wanted to eat Mikey. Mikey was frightened and trembling like <strong>jelly.</strong></p><p>      Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion <strong>passed</strong> by <strong>the</strong> scene. He <strong>lent</strong> Mikey a helpful hand. <strong>He picked up the snake and threw it</strong> with all his might. From then on, <strong>the lion, Leo,</strong> and Mikey <strong>became</strong> bosom friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-12 13:37:44 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tze xuan’s homework  corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong> Corrected</strong></p><p>    Once upon a time, there lived a little mouse. His name was Mickey. <strong>He was looking for food in the forest as he was hungry. </strong>Just then, he found a juicy mango<strong>.However, the mango was too heavy for him.</strong></p><p><strong>    All of a sudden, </strong>a hazardous snake appeared out of nowhere. The snake was hungry and he wanted to eat the little mouse. Mickey was scared and trembling like a<strong> jelly.</strong></p><p><strong>      Fortunately, </strong>a kind-hearted lion<strong> passed by the scene. He</strong></p><p><strong>decided to lend Mickey a helping hand by picking up the snake. T</strong>hen, he threw it far away  <strong>with all his might. Since then, Mickey and the snake became bosom friends. </strong></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-12 13:39:21 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lam Hoi Ling corrected</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><br/></p><p>         Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was Mickey. One ordinary morning. Mickey was looking for food. Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, he wasn't carrying because too heavy for him.</p><p><br/></p><p>        All of a sudden, a hazardous snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was hungry. He wanted the mango. The little mouse was frightened and trembling like a jelly.</p><p><br/></p><p>         Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by the scene. He lends him a helping hand and picked up the snake far away. From then on, Mickey and lion became bosom friends.</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was Mickey. One ordinary morning, Mickey was looking for food. Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, he <strong>wasn't able to carry it because it was</strong> too heavy for him.</p><p>      All of a sudden, a <strong>dangerous</strong> snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was hungry. He wanted the mango. The little mouse was frightened and trembling like <strong>jelly.</strong></p><p>      Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by <strong>the</strong> scene. He <strong>lent</strong> him a helping hand and picked up the snake <strong>and threw it</strong> far away. From then on, Mickey and <strong>the</strong> lion became bosom friends.</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Esther corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was Jerry. One dinary morning, he looking for food. Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, the mango too heavy for him.</p><p>    </p><p>     All of a sudden, a hazardous snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was hungry. He wanted to eat the little mouse. The little mouse was scared and trembling like a jelly.</p><p>   </p><p>      Fortunately, the lion passed by the scene. From then on, the little mouse and the lion became bossom friend.</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was Jerry. One <strong>ordinary</strong> morning, <strong>he was looking</strong> for food. Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, the mango <strong>was</strong> too heavy for him.</p><p>      All of a sudden, a <strong>dangerous</strong> snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was hungry. He wanted to eat the little mouse. The little mouse was scared and trembling like <strong>jelly.</strong></p><p>     Fortunately, the lion passed by <strong>the</strong> scene. From then on, the little mouse and the lion became <strong>bosom</strong> <strong>friends.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-12 13:40:16 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Joe Mun corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Joe Mun</p><p>  Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was Leo. One ordinary morning, he was looking for food in the forest. Just than he found a juicy mango. However, the mango was too heavy for him. </p><p>  All of a sudden, a hazardous snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was staving. He  wanted to eat Leo. The little mouse was petrifited and trembling like a jelly.</p><p>  Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by the scene. He lend him a helping hand to Leo. He picked up the snake through it with all his might. From that on lion and Leo became bosom friend. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was Leo. One ordinary morning, he was looking for food in the forest. Just <strong>then</strong>, he found a juicy mango. However, the mango was too heavy for him.</p><p>     All of a sudden, a <strong>hazardous</strong> snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was <strong>starving</strong>. He wanted to eat Leo. The little mouse was <strong>petrified</strong> and trembling like <strong>jelly.</strong></p><p>    Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by the scene. He <strong>lent</strong> him a helping hand. He picked up the snake <strong>and threw</strong> it with all his might. From that <strong>day</strong> on, <strong>the</strong> lion and Leo became <strong>bosom</strong> friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-12 13:42:39 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Rou Xuan corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Once upon a time, there lived a little mouse. His name was Mickey. One ordinary morning,</p><p>Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, the mango was too heavy for him. </p><p><br/></p><p>  All of sudden, a hazardous snake appeared from nowhere. the snake was starving and want to eat Mickey. Mickey was petrified and trembling like a jelly.</p><p><br/></p><p>  Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by. He lent a helping hand to Mickey. He picked up the snake and threw it with all his might. Fromm that day onwards, the lion and Mickey became bosom friends.  </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       Once upon a time, there lived a little mouse. His name was Mickey. One ordinary morning, <strong>he was looking for food.</strong></p><p>Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, the mango was too heavy for him.</p><p>      All of <strong>a</strong> sudden, a <strong>dangerous</strong> snake appeared from nowhere. <strong>The</strong> snake was starving and <strong>wanted</strong> to eat Mickey. Mickey was petrified and trembling like <strong>jelly.</strong></p><p>       Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by. He lent a helping hand to Mickey. He picked up the snake and threw it with all his might. <strong>From that day onwards</strong>, the lion and Mickey became <strong>bosom</strong> friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-12 13:49:06 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tai Yoong Bing corrected</title>
         <author>suszegoh</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Once upon a time.</p><p>    There was a mouse named Steward. One day, he was scavenging the jungle for food. Suddenly he came across a juicy mango. However, the mango was huge to the tiny mouse. Steward pulled and tugged with all his might, but the mango wouldn't budge.</p><p>    When Steward was thinking of calling ants to help him move the mango, all of a sudden, a distorted snake (as shown in the picture above) jump scared Steward. The snake was hungry, he wanted a meal of minced mice and mango. Steward was trembling like jelly.</p><p>    Fortunately, a clawless lion (as shown in the picture above) lunged at the distorted snake and threw off a cliff into a lake, it did not notice Steward or the mango. "Th-th-than-ks" stuttered Steward. The lion loomed over the mouse and said, "You're welcome." Since then, they have been Bossom friends.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     Once upon a time, there was a mouse named <strong>Stewart</strong>. One day, he was scavenging the jungle for food. Suddenly, he came across a juicy mango. However, the mango was <strong>too huge</strong> for the tiny mouse. Stewart pulled and tugged with all his might, but the mango wouldn't budge.</p><p>       When Stewart was thinking of calling <strong>the</strong> ants to help him move the mango, all of a sudden, a <strong>distorted</strong> snake (as shown in the picture above) <strong>jumped</strong> out and startled Stewart. The snake was hungry; he wanted a meal of minced mice and mango. Stewart was trembling like <strong>jelly</strong>.</p><p>   Fortunately, a clawless lion lunged at the distorted snake and threw <strong>it</strong> off a cliff into a lake; it did not notice Stewart or the mango. "Th-th-than-ks," stuttered Stewart. The lion loomed over the mouse and said, "You're welcome." Since then, they have been <strong>bosom</strong> friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-12 13:58:54 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lucious corrected</title>
         <author>onglucious</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>   Once upon a time, a mouse live in the forest. His name is Mickey. One ordinary morning Mickey was looking for food. Just then he found a juicy mango. However, the mango is too heavy for him.</p><p><br/></p><p>    All of a sudden, a hazardous snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was very hungry. He wanted to eat Mickey. Mickey was frightened and trembling like a jelly.</p><p><br/></p><p>    Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion has pass by a scene. He lend Mickey a helpful hand. He picked up the snake, threw it with all his might. From then on, lion, Leo and Mickey become bosom friends.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      Once upon a time, a mouse <strong>lived</strong> in the forest. His name <strong>was</strong> Mickey. One ordinary morning, Mickey was looking for food. Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, the mango <strong>was</strong> too heavy for him.</p><p>      All of a sudden, a <strong>dangerous</strong> snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was very hungry. He wanted to eat Mickey. Mickey was frightened and trembling like <strong>jelly.</strong></p><p>      Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion <strong>passed</strong> by <strong>the</strong> scene. He <strong>lent</strong> Mickey a helpful hand. He picked up the snake and threw it with all his might. From then on, <strong>the lion, Leo,</strong> and Mickey <strong>became</strong> bosom friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-12 14:01:40 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Yan Ann corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was Ben. One ordinary morning, he was looking for food in the forest. Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, the mango was too heavy for him. </p><p>  All of sudden, a hazardous snake appeared from nowhere. the snake was hungry. The snake wanted to eat the little mouse. The little mouse was scared and trembling like a jelly. </p><p>  Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by the scene. The lion lend him a helping hand. He picked up the snake threw it with all his might. From then on, the lion and the little mouse became bosom friends. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was Ben. One ordinary morning, he was looking for food in the forest. Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, the mango was too heavy for him.</p><p>     All of <strong>a</strong> sudden, a <strong>hazardous</strong> snake appeared from nowhere. <strong>The</strong> snake was <strong>as hungry as a wolf.</strong> The snake wanted to eat the little mouse. The little mouse was scared and trembling like <strong>jelly.</strong></p><p>    Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by <strong>the</strong> scene. The lion <strong>lent</strong> him a helping hand. He picked up the snake <strong>and</strong> threw it with all his might. From then on, the lion and the little mouse became <strong>bosom</strong> friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-12 14:28:49 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Chloe chin  corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>                                              </p><p>                                    </p><p>     Once upoon a time,there lived a mouse.he name was <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://Mickey.One">Mickey.One</a> ordinary morning, Mickey looking for food. Just than, he found a juicy mango. However,he wasn't carrying because too heavy for him.</p><p>         All of a sudden, a hazardous snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was hungry. He wanted the mango. The little mouse was frightened and trembling like a jelly.</p><p><br/></p><p>         Fortunately , a kind -hearted lion passed by the scene. He lends him a helping hand and picked up the snake far away. From than on, Mickey and lion became bosom friend</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      Once <strong>upon</strong> a time, <strong>there</strong> lived a mouse. <strong>His</strong> name was Mickey. One ordinary morning, Mickey <strong>was</strong> looking for food. Just <strong>then</strong>, he found a juicy mango. However, he <strong>wasn't able to carry it because it was</strong> too heavy for him.</p><p>     All of a sudden, a <strong>dangerous</strong> snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was hungry. He wanted the mango. The little mouse was frightened and trembling like <strong>jelly.</strong></p><p>     Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by <strong>the</strong> scene. He <strong>lent</strong> him a helping hand and picked up the snake <strong>and threw it</strong> far away. From <strong>then</strong> on, Mickey and <strong>the</strong> lion became <strong>bosom</strong> friends.</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-13 04:54:01 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Law Qin Er corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was John. One ordinary morning. John was in the forest looking for food. Just then, he found some juicy mangoes.  All of a sudden, a hazardous snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was hungry. He wanted to eat John. John was scared and trembling like a jelly.  Fortunately, a lion passed by the scene. The kind-hearted lion decided to lend John a helping hand. The lion picked up the snake and threw it with all his might. From then on, they became bosom friends. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>   Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was John. One ordinary morning, John waslooking for food in the forest.  Just then, he found some juicy mangoes. </p><p>     All of a sudden, a <strong>dangerous</strong> snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was hungry. He wanted to eat John. John was scared and trembling like <strong>jelly.</strong></p><p>Fortunately, a lion passed by the scene. The kind-hearted lion decided to lend John a helping hand. The lion picked up the snake and threw it with all his might. From then on, they became <strong>bosom</strong> friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-13 06:03:19 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>KhorJia Xian corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>      Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name is <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://Miqi.One">Miqi.One</a> ordinary just then, he found a juicy mango. However, the mango too heavy for him.                                                                 All of a sudden,a hazaldous snake appeard from how her.The snake are hungry. He wanted to eat Miqi. Miqi was scared and trembling like a jelly.                                                             Fortunately, a kind lion passed by the scene.He lend a helping hand for Miqi. He picked up the snake threw for away.From then on, the lion and Miqi became bosom friends. </p><p><strong>corrected</strong></p><p>         Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name is <strong>Miqi. One ordinary morning, he was looking for food when</strong> he found a juicy mango. However, the mango <strong>was</strong> too heavy for him.</p><p>     All of a sudden, a <strong>hazardous</strong> snake <strong>appeared</strong> from <strong>nowhere.</strong> The snake <strong>was</strong> hungry. He wanted to eat Miqi. Miqi was scared and trembling like <strong>jelly.</strong></p><p>      Fortunately, a kind lion passed by the scene. He <strong>lent</strong> a helping hand <strong>to</strong> Miqi. He picked up the snake and threw <strong>it</strong> far away. From then on, the lion and Miqi became <strong>bosom</strong> friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-13 09:00:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Giselle corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  Once upon a time,a mouse was looking for food.The mouse found a mango but it was to heavy for the mouse to carry.</p><p><br/></p><p>     All of a sudden, a snake appeared the mouse was horrified.The mouse was trembling like a jelly.</p><p> </p><p>A kind-hearted lion found the mouse trembling like a jelly so,the lion lend the mouse a helping hand.The lion helped the mouse pick up the mango.From then on the lion and mouse became bosom friends.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     Once upon a time, a mouse was looking for food. The mouse found a mango, but it was <strong>too</strong> heavy for the mouse to carry.</p><p>All of a sudden, a snake appeared, and the mouse was horrified and  trembling like <strong>jelly.</strong></p><p>    A kind-hearted lion found the mouse trembling like <strong>jelly,</strong> so the lion <strong>lent</strong> the mouse a helping hand. <strong>The lion picked up the snake and threw it with all his might. Then, he even plucked the mango for thhe mouse</strong>.  From then on, the lion and <strong>the</strong> mouse became <strong>bosom</strong> friends.</p><p><br/></p><p>   </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-13 11:54:34 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Aden Lai Jun Di corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was Mickey. One ordinary morning, he was looking for food in the woods. Just then, he found a giant mango. However, it was too heavy for him.                                                                                 All of a sudden, a phyton appeared from nowhere. It was starving and wanted to swallow Mickey. He was terrified and trembling like a jelly.                                                                             Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by the scene and lend him a helping hand. It easily picked up the snake and threw it with all his might. From then on, Leo and Mickey became bosom friends.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was Mickey. One ordinary morning, he was looking for food in the woods. Just then, he found a giant mango. However, it was too heavy for him.</p><p>      All of a sudden, a <strong>python</strong> appeared from nowhere. It was starving and wanted to swallow Mickey. He was terrified and trembling like <strong>jelly</strong>.</p><p>      Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by the scene and <strong>lent</strong> him a helping hand. <strong>He</strong> easily picked up the snake and threw it with all his might. From then on, Leo and Mickey became <strong>bosom</strong> friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-14 02:25:06 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Melissa corrected</title>
         <author>mmelissachenlr</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was Mickey. One ordinary morning, he was looking for food in the forest. Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, the mango was too heavy for him.</p><p><br/></p><p>    All of a sudden, a hazardous snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was hungry and wanted to eat Mickey. Mickey was frightened and trembling like a jelly.</p><p><br/></p><p>    Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by the scene. He lend Mickey a helpful hand. He picked up the snake threw far away. From then on, tthe lion and Mickey became bosom friends.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was Mickey. One ordinary morning, he was looking for food in the forest. Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, the mango was too heavy for him.</p><p>     All of a sudden, a <strong>hazardous</strong> snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was hungry and wanted to eat Mickey. Mickey was frightened and trembling like <strong>jelly</strong>.</p><p>      Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by the scene. He <strong>lent</strong> Mickey a helpful hand. He picked up the snake <strong>and threw it</strong> far away. From then on, <strong>the</strong> lion and Mickey became <strong>bosom</strong> friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-14 04:06:37 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Malcolm corrected</title>
         <author>malcolmchenz</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     Once upon a time, there live a mouse. His name is Romi. One ordinary morning, Romi was looking for food. Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, the mango is too heavy for him.</p><p><br/></p><p>      All of a sudden, a hazardous snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was starving. He wanted to eat Romi. Romi was frightened and trembling like a jelly. </p><p><br/></p><p>       Fortunately, a kind-heart lion passed by the scene. He lends him a helping hand and picked up the snake and threw far away. From than on, Romi and lion became boson friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>    Once upon a time, there <strong>lived</strong> a mouse. His name is Romi. One ordinary morning, Romi was looking for food. Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, the mango <strong>was</strong> too heavy for him.</p><p>    All of a sudden, a <strong>hazardous</strong> snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was starving. He wanted to eat Romi. Romi was frightened and trembling like <strong>jelly.</strong></p><p>    Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by the scene. He <strong>lent</strong> him a helping hand and picked up the snake and threw <strong>it</strong> far away. From <strong>then</strong> on, Romi and <strong>the</strong> lion became <strong>bosom</strong> friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-14 04:06:45 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Kayson Lau Rui Xuan corrected</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/vga45hej3idavskh/wish/3328585607</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Once upon a time there lived a mouse, his name was Mickey. One ordiary morning, he is looking for food in the jungle. Just then. he found a juicy mango. However , its is too heavy for him.                                                               All of sudden, a hazardous snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was hungry . He wanted too eat the Mickey. The little mouse was scared and trembling like a jelly.                                                            Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion just passed by the scene The lion lend him a helping hand, He picked up the snaked and threw it with all his might. From them on. the lion - Leo and Mickey became bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     Once upon a time, there lived a mouse; his name was Mickey. One <strong>ordinary</strong> morning, he <strong>was</strong> looking for food in the jungle. Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, <strong>it was</strong> too heavy for him.</p><p>     All of a sudden, a <strong>hazardous</strong> snake appeared from nowhere. The snake was hungry. He wanted <strong>to eat</strong> Mickey. The little mouse was scared and trembling like <strong>jelly.</strong></p><p>       Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion just passed by the scene. The lion <strong>lent</strong> him a helping hand. He picked up the <strong>snake</strong> and threw it wit all his might. From <strong>then</strong> on, the lion,Leo and Mickey became <strong>bosom</strong> friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-14 07:59:35 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tan Yun Xuan corrected</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/vga45hej3idavskh/wish/3328840774</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>            Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was Mickey. One ordinary morning, he was looking for food at the jungle. Just then he found a juicy mango. However, the mango was too heavy for him.</p><p><br/></p><p>              All of a sudden, a hazardous snake appeared from no where. The snake was very hungry. He wanted to eat Mickey. Mickey was frightened and trembling like a jelly.</p><p><br/></p><p>                  Fortunately, a kind lion pass by the scene. He lends him a helping, he picked up the snake and threw it far away. From then on, Mickey and the lion Leo became bosom friends. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      Once upon a time, there lived a mouse. His name was Mickey. One ordinary morning, he was looking for food <strong>in</strong> the jungle. Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, the mango was too heavy for him.</p><p>      All of a sudden, a <strong>hazardous</strong> snake appeared from <strong>nowhere</strong>. The snake was very hungry. He wanted to eat Mickey. Mickey was frightened and trembling like <strong>jelly.</strong></p><p>     Fortunately, a kind lion <strong>passed</strong> by the scene. He <strong>lent</strong> him a helping <strong>hand</strong>; he picked up the snake and threw it far away. From then on, Mickey and the lion Leo became <strong>bosom</strong> friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-14 12:23:32 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jessmin corrected</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/vga45hej3idavskh/wish/3329028929</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>       Once upon a time, the forest lived a tiny mouse. His name was Mickey. One ordinary morning, Mickey was looking for food. Just then, he found a juicy mango. But, the mango was too heavy for him.</p><p>     </p><p>       All of a sudden, a dangerous snake appeared from nowahere. The snake was hungry. He wanted to ate Mickey. Mickey trembling like a jelly and frightened.</p><p><br/></p><p>      Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by the scene. The lion lent Mickey a helping hand. He picked up the snake with all of his might and throwed far away. Since then, Mickey and the lion became a bosom friends.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>    Once upon a time, <strong>in</strong> the forest lived a tiny mouse. His name was Mickey. One ordinary morning, Mickey was looking for food. Just then, he found a juicy mango. But <strong>the</strong> mango was too heavy for him.</p><p>     All of a sudden, a <strong>dangerous</strong> snake appeared from <strong>nowhere</strong>. The snake was hungry. He wanted <strong>to eat</strong> Mickey. Mickey <strong>was trembling</strong> like <strong>jelly</strong> and <strong>was</strong> frightened.</p><p>     Fortunately, a kind-hearted lion passed by the scene. The lion lent Mickey a helping hand. He picked up the snake with all of his might and <strong>threw</strong> it far away. Since then, Mickey and the lion became <strong>bosom</strong> friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-14 15:09:19 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hong Ze corrected</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/vga45hej3idavskh/wish/3329476848</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p><br/></p><p>   Once upon a time, there lived a mouse name Mickey. One ordinary morning, Mickey was looking for food at the jungle. Just then ,he found a juicy mango. However, the mango was too heavy for him.</p><p><br/></p><p>    All of a sudden, a hazardous snake appeared from no where. The snake was very hungry. He wanted to eat Mickey. Mickey was frightened and trembling like a jelly.</p><p><br/></p><p>    Fortunately, a kind lion pass by the scene. He lends Mickey a helping hand , he picked up the snake and threw it far away. From then on, Mickey and the lion Leo became bosom friends.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>    Once upon a time, there lived a mouse <strong>named</strong> Mickey. One ordinary morning, Mickey was looking for food <strong>in</strong> the jungle. Just then, he found a juicy mango. However, the mango was too heavy for him.</p><p>    All of a sudden, a <strong>hazardous</strong> snake appeared from <strong>nowhere</strong>. The snake was very hungry. He wanted to eat Mickey. Mickey was frightened and trembling like <strong>jelly</strong>.</p><p>     Fortunately, a kind lion <strong>passed</strong> by the scene. He <strong>lent</strong> Mickey a helping hand. He picked up the snake and threw it far away. From then on, Mickey and the lion Leo became <strong>bosom</strong> friends.</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-15 03:24:17 UTC</pubDate>
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