Tabloid Articles by Tatum Ignatowicz

To Jessie!

2025-05-22 12:38:54 UTC

Hi Jessie! I really enjoyed reading your writing piece! It was so good! I thought your choices of figurative language was really good and the way you included the tabloid tricks was effortless.

~Kelynne :)

Isaiah

30avalenciano — 2025-05-22 12:42:35 UTC

Very nice story, the writing and the suspenful feeling was great

-Alexito

To Sophia

30kleibowitz — 2025-05-22 12:43:32 UTC

Heyyy! I thought your story was super food and funny. I liked the way you incorporated dialogue it helped to move the story along. Also, i liked your hook and the way you started it off!

~Kelynne

Alexa

30mgruber — 2025-05-22 12:43:48 UTC

Hi Alexa. I thought that your piece was very well done! I thought that it was enjoyable from beginning to end. The part that i enjoyed most was when you were writing about interviewing the man who say Helen Keller. I also thought that you did a good job with all of the figurative language. It really added to the piece and brought to life. Great Job!

-Miriam

To Miriam

30cpicard — 2025-05-22 12:44:06 UTC

Hi Miriam! Your writing piece was amazing, and it had a lot of elements that made it surprising and fun to read. The grinch and Ronald’s wedding was an interesting concept to read about, and your formatting in the style of tell-all confessional made the story seem like real celebrity gossip. Great job!

-Chloe Picard

Kelynne!!!!

30jruccio — 2025-05-22 12:44:41 UTC

I really LOVED your tabloid!!!!! I like all the diologe, it kept the story intresting and added more to the conflict!! Great Job!!

🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆

Mika

30rfox — 2025-05-22 12:46:19 UTC

You did a great job on your tabliod! I loved how you wrote your tabliod it had a lot of details too. Great job!

Abe

30eguallpagonzalez — 2025-05-22 12:46:32 UTC

Abe, I really enjoyed reading your writing piece! It was so good, I thought your figurative language was also really good!

Chloe

30mgruber — 2025-05-22 12:46:37 UTC

Hi! I really enjoyed your piece! I thought that the ides was very entertaining and it was very well done! I also thought that your figurative language and tabloid tricks were also done very well! Overall, I really enjoyed it. Well done!

-Miriam

To Alexa

30cpicard — 2025-05-22 12:47:16 UTC

Hi Alexa! Your one pager was great! I liked how you backed the theory that Helen Keller was alive with scientific “evidence,” as well as a plausible explanation. I enjoyed the details you added about how Helen may acclimate to modern-day life, since it would be drastically different from what she was used to. You used the tabloid trick, “Absurd or Improbable” really well! Great job!!

-Chloe Picard

will L

30asvetlanovzelener — 2025-05-22 12:48:06 UTC

Hi will! Your story was great! I love your use of compositional risks and tabloid tricks, it really hooked me into the story! I also think your word choice was very advanced and sophisticated. Overall very good story! From, Alex S.

Abe

30wlomonte — 2025-05-22 12:48:16 UTC

Hi Abe. I really liked your story and i liked how you plotted out the story because you made it exciting to read with a lot of ploy twists. This made the story more interesting to read and you did a good job on creating conflict throughout the story that the main character had to overcome

Abe

30alaterza — 2025-05-22 12:48:20 UTC

I really liked the topic of your very creative. I also liked your title.

To Isaiah!

2025-05-22 12:48:24 UTC

I like how your story was suspenseful. And i liked the overall storyline of people turning into ghosts. And you got to the point of the article very quickly without making it sound like a story.

MIKA!!!!

30jruccio — 2025-05-22 12:48:40 UTC

I really liked your tabloid!!!! Your hook and introduction were really entertaining and set up suspense for the rest of the story!!! I also loved how you used alliteration in you title 🏆🏆

Brandon

30avalenciano — 2025-05-22 12:48:41 UTC

Very great report, and kinda sad for the guy but after all it show how much discipline he has to maintain a great physic at that age.

-ALexito

To Alexa

30sread — 2025-05-22 12:48:46 UTC

I really liked the story idea,it was very interesting but it didn’t leave me on a cliffhanger. I also really like how you ended it on a happy ending and hows she is socializing and healthy.Great job!

Rachel

2025-05-22 12:49:06 UTC

I loved your story! It was really interesting and I loved the story idea about The Statue of Liberty

-Mika

Aj

30acastro — 2025-05-22 12:49:17 UTC

I like how you used ESPN and other stuff and I liked your title.

Alexa

30rfox — 2025-05-22 12:49:19 UTC

I really like your tabliod! I loved how you added your sources into your peice! Great job!

Rachel

30agabriel — 2025-05-22 12:49:31 UTC

Hi Rachel, I really liked your conclusion it really summed up everything, and I really enjoyed reading your figurative language. Nice job👏

Brandon

30eguallpagonzalez — 2025-05-22 12:50:57 UTC

I really enjoyed reading your writing piece! It was very good!

I also enjoyed reading your figurative language.

From- Estevan

Will

30doneill — 2025-05-22 12:51:15 UTC

HI will, I really like how you built the suspense in your story. Your wording was really good in your story. I also like how you made your story entertaining.

-Cheese

Jessie

30rfox — 2025-05-22 12:51:17 UTC

I loved your peice it was really entertaning! You did really good on adding details into your tabliod. Great job!

Abe

2025-05-22 12:51:59 UTC

Your story was pretty good and not bad pretty creative and a good amount of effort good job Abe

-Liam

To Kaitlyn

30cpicard — 2025-05-22 12:52:17 UTC

Hi Kaitlyn!! Your one pager was fantastic. I liked how you tied in real celebrities that have theories around their disappearances, such as Elvis Presley, into a green, gooey alien! I also like how you left the story a mystery, where the alien, as well as Elvis, disappear. You used lots of witness testimonies as well, which made the story seem real and plausible. Great job!!!

-Chloe Picard

Rachel!!!!! 🏆 🏆 🏆

30jruccio — 2025-05-22 12:52:18 UTC

I loved your title and hook, it is really creative!! I also like all the figurative language, especially the simile at the end! 🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆

Rachel

2025-05-22 12:52:19 UTC

I really liked your story. It was interesting how the statue just left. Good job.

-Kaitlyn

Alexa

2025-05-22 12:52:21 UTC

Your story was really funny and your idea was really fun to read about. Your hook was really interesting and good!

-Mika

Rachel

30mgruber — 2025-05-22 12:52:46 UTC

Hi. I thought that your piece was very well done. I enjoyed the suspense about why the statue had gotten so angry. I also really enjoyed your figurative language and tabloid tricks that were in your piece. In my opinion, they helped your piece come to live for the reader. Overall, i believe that you did very well.

-Miriam

Kelynne

30rfox — 2025-05-22 12:52:53 UTC

I loved your tabliod! I really like the figurative language that you put in your tabliod. Great job!

Will

30acastro — 2025-05-22 12:52:54 UTC

I really liked your title and I liked your figurative language.

Mika

30sread — 2025-05-22 12:53:26 UTC

I really enjoyed your story,I loved the part where James Charles wears fur like Kim.Your story was really funny and I really liked that you used real people as your character names. You did a great job!

Rachel!!!

30kleibowitz — 2025-05-22 12:53:34 UTC

Hi Rachel! Your story was really good and funny. I enjoyed the way you wrote the dialogue when the people were reporting what happened. It made me feel like i was in the moment. In addition, to that i thought the way your incorporated the figurative language and tabloid blended in to your story seamlessly. Overall i thought your story was great, and it was so creative!!!

~Kelynne ⭐️

Alex V

30asvetlanovzelener — 2025-05-22 12:53:49 UTC

Hi Alex, I really enjoyed your story! The concept was very creative and funny! I also loved your compositional risks and tabloid tricks, they really enhanced the story! Overall amazing story, great job!

From ALex S

Estevan

30avalenciano — 2025-05-22 12:53:50 UTC

Nice story, the dialogue was amazing and I think it was your stronger part

-ALexito

Jessie

2025-05-22 12:53:53 UTC

I love your idea and how you used reality and made it more interesting! Your report was really fun to read about and i loved it!

Addy

30agabriel — 2025-05-22 12:54:18 UTC

Hello Nicole, I really liked your story idea it was very interesting and nice, but also your sources quotes and info was pretty cool too. Nice👏

Alexito

2025-05-22 12:55:08 UTC

Alex, i did not like your story at all. I think the fiction of 100 men vs gorillas was bad. But i did like the overall storyline.

Alex

2025-05-22 12:55:41 UTC

Hi Alex! I really liked your story and it was a really entertaining one to read. One part of your story i really like was your figurative language as it helped describe the story very well.

Sophia

30rfox — 2025-05-22 12:55:52 UTC

I loved your tabliod! I loved your hook and it really caught my attention. Great job!

Alex V

30alaterza — 2025-05-22 12:55:56 UTC

I really liked the fugitive language in your tabloid. Also I liked your topic

Alex V

30acastro — 2025-05-22 12:56:00 UTC

I really liked your title and your texts.

To abe

30asvetlanovzelener — 2025-05-22 12:56:15 UTC

Hi abe! I really enjoyed your story! The word choice was very creative. I also liked the element of sports involved. OVerall great h=job writing your story.

from, Alex S

Estvan

30bquiroz — 2025-05-22 12:56:15 UTC

I liked your story, and it had good dialogue. And i thought itd was pretty sigma.

Rachel

30sread — 2025-05-22 12:56:22 UTC

Your story was really good and I loved your hook.Your story was super funny and it was interesting.The idea of the Statue of Liberty coming alive was great.You did an amazing job!

Alex

30eguallpagonzalez — 2025-05-22 12:56:25 UTC

I really enjoyed reading your writing piece about 100 men vs 1 gorilla! I also enjoyed reading your figurative language.

Lily M 🌸

30kleibowitz — 2025-05-22 12:56:29 UTC

Hi Lily! I really liked reading your story! It was so creative and i thought your idea was really well thought through! I also liked the way you wrote the dialogue. It came off as reporters and not narrative writing which is great!!!!!

~Kelynne 🪩

Valentina

30prhodes — 2025-05-22 13:58:10 UTC

YO! I loved your onomatopoeias! They made your story so much better and interesting. I also love the story line in general it was a very creative story and made want to keep reading. I also loved when you added “Don’t forget to always come back for the inside scoop at Behind the Scenes News!” it really made it seem like television great job val

RC

2025-05-22 13:58:53 UTC

Your story was really informational as to how torpedo bats work and how the Yankees are good because of that! I liked the story and I wish that I could play baseball with a torpedo bat.

Josh

Melanie!

30vaplicano — 2025-05-22 13:59:22 UTC

Ur tabloid was very engaging and interesting. It was very well organized and had many different types of figurative language! Great job!!

To Alexa M

30afasano — 2025-05-22 14:00:00 UTC

this story is so funny. I think it’s a great and creative idea that you came up with. The Tell-All element is right there and it’s great. I think you did really well on this piece. Great job!

Preslie R.

2025-05-22 14:01:04 UTC

I really like your story it’s very creative and funny. The sources were good and so was the figurative language. The tell-all element was resells good . You did a good job with this overall.

Addy

30amayorenko — 2025-05-22 14:01:18 UTC

I loved your tabloid! The idea was very unique and it was well written! I loved your hook, great job!

Josh P

30kwallis — 2025-05-22 14:01:26 UTC

I really liked your article Josh. I liked your description and the mentioning of the players along with their positions. It was a joy to read, and it really was well written.

Great, job!

Nate

2025-05-22 14:01:28 UTC

Dear Nate I read your story and really liked the attention to detail you put in it with interesting choice of words overall a good piece.

Preslie

30nlhommedieu — 2025-05-22 14:01:32 UTC

Your story was great and I thought it was true and you had very good grammar and it was entertaining

Lily M

30prhodes — 2025-05-22 14:01:47 UTC

I loved your tabloid!!!! The story was amazing and so creative. I love how descriptive you were and how much you really payed attention to details. Your story really kept me wanting to keep reading and learn more about that homeless man. Overall your story was amazing Lily!

-Pres

Romie

2025-05-22 14:02:20 UTC

I really like your composition risks in your story!

Preslie!

30vaplicano — 2025-05-22 14:02:21 UTC

Yo! I loved your tabloid it was very engaging and made me want to keep reading! It was a very creative and interesting writing. Good job!!!!

Preslie

30lmarcovecchio — 2025-05-22 14:02:28 UTC

I loved your tabloid! It was so creative and well thought out! I really liked the plot and it really hooked me in to continue reading it. Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lily

To Leonids

30jyalcin — 2025-05-22 14:02:37 UTC

Your story was so random, and that’s why I loved it. Things just kind of happened, and it followed no real narrative. It was absolutely hilarious, and everything else kept the story interesting. Great job Leo! Stamp of approval 💮

To Lily

30afasano — 2025-05-22 14:03:01 UTC

I think your idea is so good. It is a great story that would definitely hook people into reading it. It’s so well written and descriptive. Great work!

Josh P

30lstellakis — 2025-05-22 14:03:15 UTC

Hello Josh, your story was very suspenseful and the personification was great! I also thought your vocabulary was really good. Nice job!

-Leonidas

Leonidas

30mkrug — 2025-05-22 14:03:30 UTC

I really Enjoyed your story. I liked the way that it was written, It had me hooked from the start. It’s very creative and also fun to read.

-Maison K

Shannon

30arauniyar — 2025-05-22 14:03:33 UTC

Hi Shannon, I really liked your tabloid piece and I like the figurative language you used such as magic 3, and multiple hyperboles! Overall, I think you did a great job!

-Anika

Preslie

30amayorenko — 2025-05-22 14:04:05 UTC

Hi preslie! I loved your tabloid ! It was very interesting to read and I thought your tell all confessional was creative! Nice job :)

Lily!

30vaplicano — 2025-05-22 14:04:17 UTC

Your tabloid was amazing! It was very entertaining and creative. The figurative language you added made the story even more interesting! Excellent job!!

Kyle

30jpornan — 2025-05-22 14:05:56 UTC

Hey Kyle! Your MLB story was really nice to read because I could envision what happened on the field when the Ranger won the World Series. I liked the interviews after the game because they added lots of new details to the story.

Josh

Josh p

30nlhommedieu — 2025-05-22 14:06:30 UTC

Your tabloid was great it was very descriptive and it was eye catching and the everything was great

Mel!

30prhodes — 2025-05-22 14:06:47 UTC

Your story was so funny! I loved the creative story about Kylie and loved how it really made me enjoy reading your tabloid! I loved all the different perspectives like from Kim when she said “I think Kylie is out of her mind for keeping the alien.” Really made me see how her family feels about this situation and overall just makes it so much better! Great job Mel!

To Maddie

30afasano — 2025-05-22 14:06:53 UTC

your story was so funny and intriguing. It was so nicely written and i had a great time reading it. Your figurative language really made it awesome. Great work!

Romie

30mkrug — 2025-05-22 14:06:55 UTC

I really Liked your Story. It was well written because Jokic’s story is so good. You perfectly portrayed Jokic’s rise in the NBA going from a Bench Player to the best Basketball player in the world.

-Maison K

Lauren

30amayorenko — 2025-05-22 14:06:59 UTC

I loved your tabloid! I thought your figurative language was SO creative ! I also liked how you described Elon in the beginning, nice job!

Addy

30arauniyar — 2025-05-22 14:07:03 UTC

I like your piece and I think the 2 pieces of evidence was good! I also like that you used many different types of comp. risks and tabloid tricks.

-Anika

Valentina

30lmarcovecchio — 2025-05-22 14:07:08 UTC

I loved your tabloid!!! It was so creative!! I loved the way it was written like a reporter and how all of the details were in it without it being to long! Great job!!!

lily

Josh P

30rcolford — 2025-05-22 14:07:15 UTC

I really like your tabloid story, especially since it's about sports! I really liked the soccer comeback vs Barcelona vs PSG. The comeback was crazy! Keep up the great work

Lauren!

30vaplicano — 2025-05-22 14:07:27 UTC

Your tabloid was very organized and exciting! It was a very creative and captivating story! You did an amazing job!!!

Leonidas

30kwallis — 2025-05-22 14:08:02 UTC

I really liked reading your story. It was really funny, and the plot was very creative and interesting. I also liked how you made your writing feel like a genuine TV news broadcast. I also liked the real elements that you put into it, and the twists that were put in to the tabloid.

Good job!

Josh P

30dnikolaev — 2025-05-22 14:08:11 UTC

Dear Josh P Your story was really intense as both teams were under pressure and you made me feel like I was in the stadium watching that game I did also like your commentary really felt like a reporter.

Nate

30jpornan — 2025-05-22 14:08:40 UTC

Your story was very scary, but it still provided lots of details. I liked the suspense in the story too

Josh

Maddy!

30vaplicano — 2025-05-22 14:09:09 UTC

Your tabloid was very good and interesting to read! I love all the figurative language you added in it! You did such a great job!!

Maddy

30lmarcovecchio — 2025-05-22 14:09:47 UTC

I loved your tabloid!!! It was amazing and I really like the title! I also loved the figarative language that you used to enhance your piece! Great Job!!!

lily

Valentina 💃

2025-05-22 14:09:55 UTC

your story about Frank oceans return was very interesting. It was well organized and you had good grammar. The way u wrote it kept me engaged in it. Good job

Alexa

30afasano — 2025-05-22 14:09:59 UTC

What a great story. It’s so intriguing and interesting. The news report lauguage was amazing. I think you do a really good job on this piece. GREAT JOB ALEXA ROSE!!!

Romie

30nlhommedieu — 2025-05-22 14:10:17 UTC

Hi Romie your story about jokic was great and I loved how you included how much he averaged and overall it was entertaining

Leo P

30amayorenko — 2025-05-22 14:10:19 UTC

HI GOAT I loved your tabloid it was so tuff, and I loved your “outro” paragraph, great job 🥹✌️

Lauren

30arauniyar — 2025-05-22 14:10:29 UTC

I think your tabloid is unique and I like the detail you put in it, and the word choice. Overall, I think it’s a good piece and it kept me engaged in it.

-Anika

To Kyle

30jyalcin — 2025-05-22 14:10:42 UTC

Your writing and grammar was amazing. I was completely lost throughout the entire thing, but that’s because I don’t follow baseball 😅. The writing was great though, and even to me, it was very interesting! Keep up to good work. You get a Stamp of Approval 💮

RC

30kwallis — 2025-05-22 14:10:54 UTC

I liked your writing piece a lot. It gave a lot of information and it felt like I was a reading a newspaper of sometime. I also liked your article how you included the sources, and voiced your opinions as well.

Nice job.

Romie

30lstellakis — 2025-05-22 14:10:56 UTC

Hello Romie, your tabloid was very interesting and your metaphors were great. The personification wads really good too. Nice job!

-Leonidas

Josh p

30nlhommedieu — 2025-05-22 14:11:21 UTC

Hi Josh your tabloid was very descriptive and it was eye catching and you had very good grammar and spelling overall great job

Addy

30lmarcovecchio — 2025-05-22 14:11:30 UTC

Your tabloid was amazing great job!! The plot was so creative, I don’t know how you came up with it! I really liked the way the rhyming in it and the way you explained the house! Great job!!!!

lily

Maison

30brobinson — 2025-05-22 14:11:38 UTC

I really liked how you always included reports or critics after every game. I also really like how you included LeBron and Curry’s stats

Emily A

30prhodes — 2025-05-22 14:12:02 UTC

I love story em!! It was so intersting and loved how creative the story was! I loved how you added in other people like Mrs swift it really put together the tabloid and made it 100% more intersting great job em!

Lucas

30amayorenko — 2025-05-22 14:12:41 UTC

Hi Lucas I liked your tabloid a lot, and I really liked how you put what the paparazzi yelled, great job 😛😛😛

Maddy A.

2025-05-22 14:12:59 UTC

Maddy, I really like your story about the mermaid. It was really good no very organized. You had good figurative language and tabloid tricks that made it much better. I really liked reading it, good job.

Shannon

30lmarcovecchio — 2025-05-22 14:13:16 UTC

I loved your tabloid! I loved the title and the “Breaking News” in the beginning! I really liked how you used Wicked as a storyline! Great job!!!

Lily

Kyle

30rcolford — 2025-05-22 14:13:25 UTC

I really like how your story tells us how a team Like the rangers can win the World Series. I really like how your story tell tell us how the rangers have been so bad and then the accomplished the best thing to do in baseball.

Rachel

30afasano — 2025-05-22 14:13:56 UTC

wow this was so fun to read. The topic was a great one and something that I’m sure a bunch of people would stop to read. Everything from the title to the last word was so well written. GOOD JOB RACHEL!!

Dylan

30jpornan — 2025-05-22 14:13:58 UTC

Hi Dylan! Your story was really nice, because it shows how well the worldie by Kompany helped Manchester City and I wish I could score as a defender like that. Dean Henderson would’ve saved it though.

Josh

Sky L

30prhodes — 2025-05-22 14:15:25 UTC

I loved your tabloid Love, Lies, and Football Skylar! The title was so eye catching and i knew i wanted to read this, your tabloid was so interesting. I loved how much people you added in to show there perspectives on tom Bradys love in cheating. Overall this tabloid was so interesting great job sky!

Melanie

30lmarcovecchio — 2025-05-22 14:15:43 UTC

I loved your tabloid!! I really liked the figurative language that you implemented into your piece! It was the perfect an=mount and in the perfect places! Great job!!!

lily

Dylan

30lstellakis — 2025-05-22 14:15:59 UTC

Hello Dylan, Your tabloid was very interesting. Your metaphor was really good and your hyperboles were great too. Nice Job!

-Leonidas

Preslie

30dnikolaev — 2025-05-22 14:16:36 UTC

Dear Preslie your story really intrigued me I thought that frame would not recover but now this has me confused and intrigued in a good way I did also see lots of comp. Risks and tabloid tricks. Nice job!

Dylan

30kwallis — 2025-05-22 14:16:39 UTC

Your writing was good. I liked how many tabloid tricks and compositional risks you added. You were also very descriptive, and mentioned lots of sources. A wish that I have is that you could have just mentioned that Dean Henderson would’ve saved the shot with ease.

To Nate

30jyalcin — 2025-05-22 14:16:50 UTC

Your story was fascinating. I liked how you elevated your word choice to really evoke emotions in the readers, and the conspiracy theories about the Jersey Devil. Great work Nate. You get a Stamp of Approval 💮

Mika

30afasano — 2025-05-22 14:16:51 UTC

such a good story! A great topic to pick if you want people to read your story. The alliteration in the title and at the end was very creative. GREAT JOB!!!!

Preslie

30mkrug — 2025-05-22 14:17:51 UTC

I really liked your story, It had a great hook and it had me invested from the start. It really has me thinking it well written with really good vocabulary use. It’s a great story

-Maison K

Olivia

30amayorenko — 2025-05-22 14:17:54 UTC

HI OLIVIA I loved your story, I liked your figurative language, it was super good! Nice job !

Anika

30prhodes — 2025-05-22 14:18:12 UTC

I loved your tabloid! I love the very interesting backstory and all the figurative language. I love how creative this story was and it really shows your amazing hard work! Great job Anika!

Jessie

30lmarcovecchio — 2025-05-22 14:19:10 UTC

I loved your tabloid!!!! It was so creative and well written! I really liked the plot and events in your piece! It was very I really liked the way you explained Tom Holland’s change to becoming a spider! Great job!!!!!!!

Lily

Dylan

30prhodes — 2025-05-22 14:21:01 UTC

Your story was very interesting! I can really see the hard work you put into this and I’m interested to read more about your story great job!

Josh P

30lstellakis — 2025-05-22 14:21:32 UTC

Hello Josh, your story was very suspenseful and I really liked the personification. Also your hyperboles are really good too. Nice job!

-Leonidas

Lauren

30lmarcovecchio — 2025-05-22 14:21:44 UTC

I over your tabloid! It was so creative and such a cool idea! I really liked the way you slowly progressed the story! I also liked the way that you showed how fans started to realized something was off! Great job!!!!

Lily

Nate

30prhodes — 2025-05-22 14:23:22 UTC

Great job on your tabloid! It was very interesting to read and a very creative story I really loved how scary you made it and this is the types of story’s I love and you just made me love horror even more! Great job Nate!

Anika

30lmarcovecchio — 2025-05-22 14:23:28 UTC

I loved your tabloid! Great job!!!! I really liked the story and the way you came across as a reporter! I wanted to keep reading it!!!! Great job!!!!

Lily

Josh Y

30kwallis — 2025-05-22 14:23:38 UTC

I enjoyed your article. I liked your figurative language and your sources. I also really liked the lesson, it made lot of sense, and it was very literal.

Good writing.

To Vincent

30jyalcin — 2025-05-22 14:24:03 UTC

I really liked your story, and how you used metaphors to describe how the players left, even if I was full-blown lost 😅. Your grammar and compositional risks were of point, and every scentence was clearly crafted with care and consideration. It really got the point across in such a short piece.

To Sam

30jfrazier — 2025-05-22 14:50:37 UTC

very organized and i like the story you were reporting on

To Vincent

30lgao — 2025-05-22 14:51:53 UTC

I really liked your story especially the figurtive language you added and how you got straight to the point. I really like on how you described your story.

Anthony

30mguerrasio — 2025-05-22 14:52:04 UTC

I liked your title and your tabloid. It made it very interesting and cool.

Anthony T

30esalazar — 2025-05-22 14:52:48 UTC

I really liked you resolved the conflict at the end of your story.

To Vincent

30jfrazier — 2025-05-22 14:52:50 UTC

everything was spaced correctly. There is no grammatical errors, and i loved your topic.

MOLLY!!!

30sliguori — 2025-05-22 14:53:41 UTC

This was a super fun and creative story! You did a great job making it sound like a real scandal, and it was exciting to read. I liked how you added drama and mystery. The way you described everything made it easy to imagine, like it was really happening! I also love that you cooperated two great things, WAWA and Hannah Montan!!!

Vinny

30mguerrasio — 2025-05-22 14:53:54 UTC

i liked your I title and your tabloid all around good job.

KNICKS IN 5

Lucas

30lpastore — 2025-05-22 14:54:18 UTC

I love how unique your vocabulary is, and the way you described things in such good detail without storytelling

Good job 🙃🙃

Vincent

30sdegobbi — 2025-05-22 14:54:26 UTC

You did really good on it. I like the creativity of the title, very original. Although it didn’t feel like you were in 2d person.

Anna

2025-05-22 14:54:41 UTC

I like how your story was good.Also that your story was very entertaining but it was very reporter type.I also like how you added your figurative language into your writing piece.Also by adding your figurative language it made the story sound a lot better.

To Anna

2025-05-22 14:54:53 UTC

I really liked your word choice in your article, it was sophisticated and helped me image this situation. Good work!

From- Lucas&Angie

Jaylen

30mguerrasio — 2025-05-22 14:55:01 UTC

tuff tabloid. I like your title and your story it was funny to.

Molly C

2025-05-22 14:55:09 UTC

I really like your story, the plot is soooo intresting! It makes you think what will happen next and keep you excited!

Overall great job

Sincerely,

Emily Accardi

~To Lillian~

30akyforuk — 2025-05-22 14:55:09 UTC

I enjoyed reading your tabloid! Your figurative language was great and you included all the tabloid tricks you needed! I loved the overall topic of your tabloid and it was really interesting while still getting the point across. Great work!!

~From Anna K~

By the way- Happy Birthday Again! 🥳

To Nick

30lgao — 2025-05-22 14:55:11 UTC

I really liked your story and how your hook is very strong. After when I read your hook I knew that I wanted to heep on reading on what happens next. You added lots of figurtive language.

Sam

30esalazar — 2025-05-22 14:55:38 UTC

I like how you made your story very interesting by making the news reporter perspective more evident in your story.

ethan

30nlomonte — 2025-05-22 14:55:43 UTC

I liked your story because it was fun to red and very entertaining. your figurative language made the peice good.

To Riley

30sstodolak — 2025-05-22 14:55:47 UTC

Hii, I loved this story about me. The details were so so so good and I really liked your title it was so creative🥰-Sofia

to Violet!!!

30ldinegar — 2025-05-22 14:56:19 UTC

hi violet!!!! I LOVED your story!!! You did such a good job at moving the story along, while also keeping me engaged. It was a unique idea that kept me hooked!! Overall you did a wonderful job and I loved your piece!!!!!

-lillian

OLIVIA

30mchern — 2025-05-22 14:56:40 UTC

Hi liv! I really liked your topic of the show Friends! You incorporated the tabloid trick so well, it all blended together. You kept the sources relevant and part of you characters real life making it more realistic.

-molly

Miles

30jfrazier — 2025-05-22 14:56:49 UTC

LEBROOOONNNNNNNNNNNNN, I like the topic, and i like the story that went with the topic, I liked how it was centered around LeBron James.

Miles

2025-05-22 14:57:05 UTC

I like how you wrote your story.I like how you wrote and added your figurative language in your writing piece.(Knicks in 5)

Lillian

30jlanka — 2025-05-22 14:57:14 UTC

I really like your story. It was very entertaining and fun to read. I also liked your hook! Great job!!!!

From,

Jane

To Samuel D.

30vgrande — 2025-05-22 14:57:19 UTC

Your piece was fire🔥🔥. i loved how included Alliteration in your title, which made your story hook me in. Overall great job.

EMILY!!!

30sliguori — 2025-05-22 14:57:36 UTC

This story was really fun and exciting to read! You added lots of cool details that made it feel like a real celebrity drama. I love how the ending gave hope for Selena and Justins relationship!!! #Jelena

~To Angie~

30akyforuk — 2025-05-22 14:58:11 UTC

I loved your tabloid Angie! It was really funny and interesting! I liked how you included the details that were needed to make this story great! Your figurative language really enhanced the tabloid and made it sound really professional. Great Job!!

~From Anna~

TO RILEY

2025-05-22 14:58:34 UTC

OMGGG i love your story. i like how funny it is and i like how you made it about sofia and her phone. i like how creative you got with your people and i like how you got creative.

Hi Molly!

2025-05-22 14:58:58 UTC

I loved your story! I loved the way you used sources throughout your writing it really made it more interesting and reporter like. It was so entertaining and made me wanted to read more! The setting at Wawa made it AMAZING!

Lillian

30lpastore — 2025-05-22 14:59:03 UTC

your tabloid is so entertaining and it really makes it fun how many references to different singers and celebrities you put in there ❤️ happy birthday

Sam

30nlomonte — 2025-05-22 14:59:04 UTC

i liked your story a lot. You did a really good job with the plot of your story. good job!

To Molly

2025-05-22 14:59:09 UTC

Hey! Your story was so good, the figurative language was AMAZING!! I could really tell how much effort and talent you put into your peice, keep up the good work!!

-Angie & Lucas <3

Ethan

30sdegobbi — 2025-05-22 14:59:34 UTC

GoodI liked the child and the format of you peice. I wonder what Jake will think when he reads this.

Vinny

2025-05-22 14:59:34 UTC

I like how your title is good.Also really good figurative language in your piece good job bubba

To Molly

30sstodolak — 2025-05-22 15:00:23 UTC

Hii Molly, I really liked your figurative language it helped make the story entertaining and the idea of your story was so good and creative. Good jobb

-Sofia

sofia

2025-05-22 15:00:23 UTC

hey sofia i love how interestiong your story is. i like how you explaied. and i love the title. i also think the story is kinda creative and i would read it.amazing job

~To Lucas~

30akyforuk — 2025-05-22 15:00:29 UTC

Your story was amazing! It was really intriguing and I loved all your tabloid tricks you added in. I liked how you made it sound like you were an actually reporter and not just writing a story. Great Job!

~From Anna~

miles

30nlomonte — 2025-05-22 15:00:47 UTC

i liked reading your story because it was entertaining. your compositional risks were really good!

Juliaaaa

30sliguori — 2025-05-22 15:01:00 UTC

Your story was really fun and exciting to read! You added lots of cool and funny details, like how Izzy used platform shoes to drive. It felt like a real news story and kept me interested the whole time! I also loved how much tabloid tricks you were able to use. Great Job!

Jaylen

30sdegobbi — 2025-05-22 15:01:36 UTC

I enjoyed it however it is oddly similar to Vinny’s piece. I still think you did a good job though

To Anthony

30lgao — 2025-05-22 15:02:30 UTC

I really liked your story especially the hook because your hook is really strong. Something that I liked about your story is your figurtive language because of how much details you added towards them.

Emily

30mchern — 2025-05-22 15:02:35 UTC

Your story was super fun and kept me hooked and intrigued throughout. I liked how said that photographers went undercover! Awesome job!

-molly

Dear Leo

2025-05-22 15:02:53 UTC

Your story was very intresting, and the intro made me very hooked to read the rest of your story. I think you also did a really good job with your figurative language and word choice, making your tabloid sound mature, sophisticated, and news-like. Good job !

Sincerely- Lucas&Angie🪼

Vinny

30esalazar — 2025-05-22 15:02:56 UTC

I love how you made your event very very realistic and interesting to read.

Skylar

2025-05-22 15:03:08 UTC

Your writing was really good and eye catching! I really like how showed both sides of the story and showed what bill said and what he will tpdo to tom.

Sincerely,

Emily accardi

to Jane!!!!!

30ldinegar — 2025-05-22 15:03:25 UTC

hi Jane!!!! I LOVED your story!!! It was such a unique idea, and I loved the way you “reported” it. Your figurative language flowed into your story very well!! Great job!!!!!!

-lillian

To Miles

30vgrande — 2025-05-22 15:03:43 UTC

I love your piece, especially the reporting/2nd person of it. You used great figurative language as well as sensory details, and your compositional risks were on point.

~To Violet~

30akyforuk — 2025-05-22 15:03:47 UTC

I enjoyed reading your tabloid! It was so funny and entertaining, but it still got the main point across. I liked all your figurative language and tabloid tricks you added in as well. You made the figurative language blend in with your tabloid so that it sounded like a real reporter was reporting this. Good job!!

~From Anna~

Riley B

30lpastore — 2025-05-22 15:04:02 UTC

Your creativity is on some other level, and you really made yours entertaining with the very unrealistic features, so good job. I also like how you made it interesting even based on a topic with such little information about it

Violet

30jlanka — 2025-05-22 15:04:18 UTC

I really liked you story! I liked all of the figurative language you added. And I liked the ending. Great Job!

-Jane

angie

2025-05-22 15:04:45 UTC

heyyy i love your title and good use of idiom. your story was interesting and fun. i love your creativity and how you made it funny. i like the way you made comments and it really made me enjoy reading!

Violet!

2025-05-22 15:04:56 UTC

Your absurd event was very absurd! I loved the title and that it had alliteration it was very eye catching. The figurative language throughout your piece really elevated it. And my favorite part was the description of the genie coming out of the lamp it was very descriptive. Overall great job!!

Preslie!!!!

30sliguori — 2025-05-22 15:04:57 UTC

This story was really exciting and full of craziness, which is great! I loveee how you added funny and exciting details, like the scarf falling off and fans crying😢. When reading i really thought it was a news reporter working for New York Times writing this tabloid. You did a great job making it fun and creative!

To Jade

30sstodolak — 2025-05-22 15:04:57 UTC

Heyy Jade, I loved your story it was good and enjoyed to read. I also liked how you reported the story.

-sofiaa

Jade

2025-05-22 15:06:12 UTC

Good job! Your story was really cool and had lots of excitement, it was really fun to read!

Sincerely,

Emily Accardi

Sophia

30jbarton — 2025-05-22 15:06:15 UTC

I loved your story. It was very captivating and kept me interested the whole was through and had no grammar errors. Great job!

Dear Alex

2025-05-22 15:06:37 UTC

Hi Alex. After reading your story i felt amused yet informed, your story was very entertaining, yet still informative. An your word choice was delectable. Good job Alex!

Sincerely-Lucas&Angie 🌝

Alex M

30lpastore — 2025-05-22 15:07:20 UTC

It’s crazy how you can come up with that topic on the spot. I appreciate your creativity with the topic you wrote about. Such a good tabloid my goat A++ ✌️🌹

~To Anika~

30akyforuk — 2025-05-22 15:07:30 UTC

I loved your tabloid! It was a really interesting topic and made me want to read more! I liked how you used a variety of tabloid tricks and compositional risks instead of using the same ones! Great job!

~From Anna~

rache fox

2025-05-22 15:08:08 UTC

i like your story and i like how the statue put everything in flames and how un seriou your soty is. i think its really funny and creative. you had a great title and an amazing story GOOD JOB

Sofia S.

30mchern — 2025-05-22 15:08:26 UTC

I liked how your story started out as a plot twist. You had lots of drama which is perfect for a celebrity scandal! You used your figurative language so well and all in the best spots!

-molly

to Leo!!!!

30ldinegar — 2025-05-22 15:08:54 UTC

I LOVED your story!!!!! The idea was so great and the way you moved the story along was wonderful. It kept me hooked the whole time!! Overall I loved your story so much!!!

-lillian

Lillian

30jbarton — 2025-05-22 15:08:55 UTC

I live your story your title was so great and the story was so interesting that i wanted to keep reading great job 👏

To Ethan

30vgrande — 2025-05-22 15:09:07 UTC

I really like the topic of your story, and the title really got me interested on what it was about. I also liked how you paired your tabloid tricks with your compositional risks. Overall really tuff.

EMILY ACCARDI

2025-05-22 15:09:33 UTC

Heyyy i loved your story and i love how you made it funny and i like how it was about what alot of peole talk about. i really like the concept and i like the sotry in general. it feels creative and interesting i love everything you added to it. i love ittt good job!

To Emily

30sstodolak — 2025-05-22 15:10:15 UTC

I loved your story! It was so entertaining and the tabloid tricks were so good. Also I really liked how you explained how they got back together.

-sofia

Valentina!

30sliguori — 2025-05-22 15:10:24 UTC

Amazing Job! I really like your story line with Frank Ocean and SZA. Your tabloid had me laughing and gasping for air! You did coolness and don't forget that. Great Job!

😎🤓🤩🥸🥳🥰🤪😝☺️🥹😀🦦🐐

Jade

30jbarton — 2025-05-22 15:11:08 UTC

I loved your story it made me laugh and I love how you included stuff that is important and popular in real life amazing job

Preslie

2025-05-22 15:11:19 UTC

Your writing was soooo good! Your writing was so interesting and fun to read!

Sincerely,

Emily Accardi

Julia!

2025-05-22 15:11:25 UTC

Your tabloid was AMAZING! The sources were my favorite part, they were so detailed and elevated. I also loved the use of figurative language because it made your tabloid so detailed and made it like I was really there! Great job!

Angie

30jlanka — 2025-05-22 15:11:28 UTC

I really liked you story! It was very interesting to read. And funny. Great Job!

-Jane

Lauren

30agabriel — 2025-05-23 01:46:18 UTC

Hello Lauren, I really like your compositional risks they were amazing, and your introduction was great too. Nice job👏