Jack M. Google Sites Peer Feedback 2020 - 2021 by https://padlet.com/27jmurray1/vcynjxtndoragblr Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 16:52:45 UTC 2021-06-22 17:19:11 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f98d.png Jack!!!!! :) 27jsachkowsky https://padlet.com/27jmurray1/vcynjxtndoragblr/wish/1067526660 I loved your story Jack as soon as I read the first sentence I was already hooked on. There was so much detail about how your dog was as light as your backpack and how fluffy he was. But I have one wish for you it is I wish that it was a little bit longer.]]> 2021-01-08 15:55:33 UTC https://padlet.com/27jmurray1/vcynjxtndoragblr/wish/1067526660 from Dillon 27dlassman https://padlet.com/27jmurray1/vcynjxtndoragblr/wish/1075033351 one of the things that i like about your writing peace is how you described how much your dog waighs and how you compared it to your back pack i also like how you described your dogs fur. i can tell how much you love your dog and family one wish i have is that your writing was a bit longer]]> 2021-01-11 16:59:18 UTC https://padlet.com/27jmurray1/vcynjxtndoragblr/wish/1075033351 To Jack 27jsachkowsky https://padlet.com/27jmurray1/vcynjxtndoragblr/wish/1513575643 I really liked how much detail you put into the persuasive essay it really stood out. You did a really great job on telling the readers why playing video games is good and not bad. I think there were no wishes I think you did flawless.]]> 2021-05-11 14:33:04 UTC https://padlet.com/27jmurray1/vcynjxtndoragblr/wish/1513575643 I like how you did not say you i me or somthing else but yeah it was good deatail. Wish i have no wish liked it i agree with you. https://padlet.com/27jmurray1/vcynjxtndoragblr/wish/1517661167

]]> 2021-05-12 14:29:48 UTC https://padlet.com/27jmurray1/vcynjxtndoragblr/wish/1517661167 Creative Writing Piece 27callen1 https://padlet.com/27jmurray1/vcynjxtndoragblr/wish/1612543816 I like how you were very creative with and decided to make a gum-monster out of this and I found pretty funny. I also liked how described what happens. I have no wish for you because this is pretty good. ]]> 2021-06-17 15:46:44 UTC https://padlet.com/27jmurray1/vcynjxtndoragblr/wish/1612543816 Jack 27jheiberg https://padlet.com/27jmurray1/vcynjxtndoragblr/wish/1617691917 hi jack! Loved the gum monster and I loved the agent.
I also loved the story and how talked about how the monster
                  could’ve got the kid. And how you get rid/avoid it. I don't 
Have a wish because you are good at this.








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