Dialogue Writing: Comment Board (6KV) by Wong Andy https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2 en-us 2025-06-06 03:42:52 UTC 2025-06-06 04:35:41 UTC hello@padlet.com 1. Comment on others' work based on: kdvandervyver2 https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481057498 Clarity of message


Is the product interesting?


Is the product interactive?


Is the produce concise?


Is the product completed?

]]> 2025-06-06 03:53:34 UTC https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481057498 2. Radar Chart kdvandervyver2 https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481057758 Other than commenting, please also use a radar chart to comment on the performance of other groups, and upload it to the Padlet as well.




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The max point of each criteria is 5.

]]> 2025-06-06 03:53:55 UTC https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481057758 Josh, Zonda, Tavis https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481076727 Their scratch is going good so far but they can try to finish it. I like how they coded it and the visuals.

]]> 2025-06-06 04:25:55 UTC https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481076727 Mark 6kv 7 https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481076822 5 star also very scary


]]> 2025-06-06 04:26:13 UTC https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481076822 Group one https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481078209 they should add the ending .

But I like how they explained the story



]]> 2025-06-06 04:28:54 UTC https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481078209 Zonda https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481080781 They should add more dialogue and more colourful :)


]]> 2025-06-06 04:32:45 UTC https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481080781 Summer s20020005_2 https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481080785 The content is correct but when they say that they have no water, there is a big river in the background.


The product is pretty funny so it's interesting


Don't think it is interactive


Concise to the point


I think it's completed


Nice product overall

]]> 2025-06-06 04:32:46 UTC https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481080785 Sharona s190105411 https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481080836 They're comic is very interesting, but I think it lacks of plot or anything really interesting and is too straightforward.


But overall, I believe it's good but has room for improvement.

]]> 2025-06-06 04:32:52 UTC https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481080836 Josh https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481081120 My opinion on their comic on explaining Zero Hunger is very good their dialogue is clear and interesting. I like how it also showed how when you are malnourished you might get sick or pass out.

]]> 2025-06-06 04:33:15 UTC https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481081120 Hayden https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481081222 Very scary, 100 score for the story

]]> 2025-06-06 04:33:28 UTC https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481081222 Mio, Jerry, Brad, Pudens s19010220_2 https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481081813 Their Canva idea is very creative and they have voice recordings of themselves, it also relates to Zero Hunger because the person gave the food to the hungry man.

]]> 2025-06-06 04:34:28 UTC https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481081813 Jayda 6kv s190100881 https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481081825 5 stars

]]> 2025-06-06 04:34:29 UTC https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481081825 Matthew s190102661 https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481081958 The content displayed in their act was very age-appropiate, and very entertaining! I would give this five stars!

]]> 2025-06-06 04:34:47 UTC https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481081958 Jayda 6kv s190100881 https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481081967 5 stars

]]> 2025-06-06 04:34:47 UTC https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481081967 Marco https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481082017 It was very age-appropriate and it’s very clear to listen to their story πŸ‘πŸ‘

]]> 2025-06-06 04:34:52 UTC https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481082017 bernice https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481082120 it was a nice video, they have great dialogues and age appropriate content. The video idea was really creative too!


zonda totally didn't make me say it



]]> 2025-06-06 04:35:05 UTC https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481082120 mark https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481082189 5 star

]]> 2025-06-06 04:35:13 UTC https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481082189 Summer s20020005_2 https://padlet.com/andyma6831/vcmv5p45c9logqi2/wish/3481082459 Canva characters ugly

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