https://padlet.com/evancheng121/vca7rlnau08wk1ar Made with charm en-us 2021-05-24 01:21:31 UTC 2021-05-24 13:27:13 UTC hello@padlet.com evancheng121 https://padlet.com/evancheng121/vca7rlnau08wk1ar/wish/1552158352 1. Chatty style
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eg. "You're ruining my social life"
2.personal pronouns
eg. "I sometimes find this craze a little baffling"
3.chatty style
eg."I didn't have my phone for a week, I felt a slight sense of fomo"
4.quote a reliable source
eg. "A new study has found that teenagers who engage with social media during the night could be damaging their sleep and increasing their risk of anxiety and depression. Research has shown that teenagers need 9.5 hours of sleep each nightbut on average only get 7.5 hours."
5. Imagery 
eg. The first picture in the article 
6. Contrast 
eg. "I’d quite enjoyed the break from social media. But there was still a lingering sense of sadness at the back of my mind. 
7. shock tactics 
eg." Teens are so emotionally invested in social media that a fifth of secondary school pupils will wake up at night and log on, just to make sure they don’t miss out."

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E.g. "You're ruining my social life"
2. Emotive words
E.g. "Anxiety and depression"
3. Statistics
E.g. Teenagers need 9.5 hours of sleep each night but on average only get 7.5 hours
4. Repetition of words/phrases
E.g. To look perfect, act perfect, have the perfect body, have the perfect group of friends, the perfect amount of likes on Instagram. Perfect, perfect, perfect.
5. Rhetorical question
E.g. What has to happen before we do something?
6. Personal pronouns
E.g. we, our, us, you
7. Exaggeration
E.g. " it felt like a disaster "

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Eg. the picture of the women staring at her laptop
2. Anecdotes
Eg: Author shares a story of her witnessing her sister being affected by social.
3. Statistics
Eg. "Research has shown that teenagers need 9.5 hours of sleep each night but on average only get 7.5 hours."
4. Make negative points impersonal
Eg: night-time social media use could be detrimental to their health.
5. repetition of words:
Perfect, perfect, perfect.
6. rhetorical questions
Eg:  So I ask: what are we waiting for?
7. reliability of source
Eg: A separate study by the National Citizen Service found that, rather than talking to their parents, girls seek comfort on social media when they are worried. 


]]> 2021-05-24 08:17:35 UTC https://padlet.com/evancheng121/vca7rlnau08wk1ar/wish/1553046755 averylxh https://padlet.com/evancheng121/vca7rlnau08wk1ar/wish/1553050159 1. Emotive Words
Eg. Fear, sadness
2. Statistics
Eg. Research has shown that teenagers need 9.5 hours of sleep each night but on average only get 7.5 hours.
A new study has found that teenagers who engage with social media during the night could be damaging their sleep and increasing
3. Personal Pronouns
Eg. The pressure I saw them...
I refused...
4. Quote a reliable source
Eg.A new study has found that teenagers who engage with social media during the night could be damaging their sleep and increasing their risk of anxiety and depression.
5. Repetition of words/phrases
Eg. Pressure to be perfect. To look perfect, act perfect, have the perfect body, have the perfect group of friends, the perfect amount of likes on Instagram. Perfect, perfect, perfect.
6. Play on the reader's guilt
Eg.Inaction on these issues is harming the physical and emotional wellbeing of young people in this country. What has to happen before we do something?
7. Short Sentences
Eg. I love my phone.]]> 2021-05-24 08:19:48 UTC https://padlet.com/evancheng121/vca7rlnau08wk1ar/wish/1553050159 diannasyrah0421 https://padlet.com/evancheng121/vca7rlnau08wk1ar/wish/1553050220 1. Rhetorical Questions
E.g What are we waiting for?
2. Emotive pictures
e.g  A guy staring at his screen.
3. Statistics
e.g Research has shown that....
4. Anecdotes
e.g During the summer,.....
5. Repetition
e.g To look perfect ,act perfect....
6.Reliable source
e.g A separate study by the National Citizen Service found that,....
7. Imagery
e.g Sadness at the back of my mind


]]> 2021-05-24 08:19:51 UTC https://padlet.com/evancheng121/vca7rlnau08wk1ar/wish/1553050220 https://padlet.com/evancheng121/vca7rlnau08wk1ar/wish/1553050560 1.  Statistics
E.g. Research has shown that teenagers need 9.5 hours of sleep each night but on average only get 7.5 hours.
2. Rhetorical Question
E.g. what are we waiting for?
3. reliable source
E.g. A separate study by the National Citizen Service found that...
4. Emotive pictures
E.g. The women was staring at her laptop
5.Short sentences/paragraphs
E.g. I love my phone
6. Repetition of words/phrases
E.g. To look perfect, act perfect, have the perfect body, have the perfect group of friends, the perfect amount of likes on Instagram. Perfect, perfect, perfect.
7. Anecdotes
E.g. During the summer holidays, I lost my phone. And for the week that I was phoneless, it felt like a disaster. I love my phone. It gives me quick access to information and allows me to be constantly looped in with my friends, to know exactly what is going on in their lives. So when I didn’t have my phone for a week, I felt a slight sense of Fomo, or if you’re not up to speed with the lingo, fear of missing out. By the end of the week, I’d got used to not having a phone and I’d quite enjoyed the break from social media. But there was still a lingering sense of sadness at the back of my mind that there would be conversations I had missed, messages that had been sent, funny videos shared and night-time chats that I would probably never get to see.]]> 2021-05-24 08:20:02 UTC https://padlet.com/evancheng121/vca7rlnau08wk1ar/wish/1553050560 xjiale974545 https://padlet.com/evancheng121/vca7rlnau08wk1ar/wish/1553051627 1. Rhetorical questions
E.g. " What are we waiting for?"
2. Statistics
E.g.  Research has shown that teenagers need 9.5 hours of sleep each night but on average only get 7.5 hours. A lack of sleep can make teenagers tired, irritable, depressed and more likely to catch colds, flu and gastroenteritis.
3. Repetition of words/ phrases
E.g Pressure, social media , perfect, " to look perfect".
4. Imagery
E.g The picture shows a women using her laptop.
5. Anecdotes
E.g During the summer holidays, I lost my phone. And for the week that I was phoneless, it felt like a disaster. I love my phone. It gives me quick access to information and allows me to be constantly looped in with my friends, to know exactly what is going on in their lives
6. Shock tactics
E.g   We know this. We know the perils of the internet, we’ve heard about online bullying and the dangers of Ask.fm, we know the slut-shaming that goes on in our schools
7.Personal Pronouns
E.g You, We, Us, Our]]> 2021-05-24 08:20:46 UTC https://padlet.com/evancheng121/vca7rlnau08wk1ar/wish/1553051627 https://padlet.com/evancheng121/vca7rlnau08wk1ar/wish/1553052980 1. Repetition
e.g.  "Pressure to be perfect. To look perfect, act perfect, have the perfect body, have the perfect group of friends, the perfect amount of likes on Instagram. Perfect, perfect, perfect."
"We know this. We know the perils of the internet, we’ve heard about online bullying and the dangers of Ask.fm, we know the slut-shaming that goes on in our schools. We know these things."
2. Statistics
e.g. Research has shown that teenagers need 9.5 hours of sleep each night but on average only get 7.5 hours.
3. Rhetorical Questions
E.g What are we waiting for?
e.g. What has to happen before before we do something?
4.Emotive Pictures
E.g A teenager using her laptop likely at night, to browse through her social media.
5. anecdote
eg. During the summer holidays, I lost my phone. And for the week that I was phoneless, it felt like a disaster. I love my phone.
6. Personal Pronouns
E.g We, You, Our, Us
7. Emotive Words
E.g. "Anxiety and Depression"

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