We think its good but not funny enough 6/10

Its fun to read it rhymes which makes it even more better to read its quite random but amusing. We would definitely read it again!

It was using nice vocabulary

Its also talking about poppies

7/10

Leeroy -i like it because there are good sentences. My favourite sentence was 'even if there is nothing go and open the door'

10/10

Kheshmika- i liked it because there was good description and it was short but got to the point

10/10

What sienna liked- "I like the fact that it doen't rhyme like most poems."

What Millie liked- "I wasn't a big fan of the repetitiveness but I liked how i could see it because it was so descriptive."

Author, Ted Hughes

Good and strange

7/10

9.5/10

We thought it was very funny,

It was rhyming every two lines

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I like about this poem because it makes us laugh and it rhyme's.

8\10

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Its funny but the ending is WEIRD! VERY WEIRD! 7/10

Very funny! And we loved the rhyming !!

we found it funny because you can put everything inside it

9/10

It is talking about it is telling to remember

Also talking to the reader

6/10

We don't really like it, but it has a nice message behind it.

Chloe-5/10

Sasha-5/10

Flanders field

I like it, it has rhyming words and a strong meaning behind it.

Chloe-7/10

Sasha-9/10

Thought machine

I like it, and all that it says really boosts our confidence.

Chloe-8/10

Sasha-8/10

it is really funny and we like it very much,

There is a lot of repetition

We think gran should on bgt.

It is odd and goofy 5/10

Author Roald Dahl

Its a funny story

7/10

It was quite supernatural how it said go open the door you will see some random objects it was quite suspenseful when when it said the darkness ticking even if there's only wind even if nothing is there.

We think its a good rhyming poem

And peaceful (ignore the fact that it says the rivers a monster)

We both came to a conclusion and we gave it a 7.5/10

Recipe to make a wolf:

We don't really like the second verse we think its a bit creepy

Unlike the other one we thought that it was definitely not peaceful.

4.5/10

It is talking about you got this at the start

Also talking about your doing great

Giving you information about your daily mental health or showing you what it would be like for am example/ talking about your day 10/10

Author is James Carter

9/10

Deeptha: 9/10

There is a lot of rhyming,

A little but of suspense at the end

We liked how it did not make sense

Leeroy- 4/10

Kheshmika- 7/10

Author Kenn Nesbitt

Rone said it was kind of weird

Maybe needs better vocabulary

6/10

we like it because they're no wasting food and they say "just enjoy your mothers cooking and refrain from playing with your food except when no one's looking.

10/10

We spotted the numbers of food gone down in a order of 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, and 1

It was fun to read a bit random for are liking.

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Very funny, repetitive and informal! 🍗🦃

.for exampale it is using question marks and .

7/10

Recipe to make a wolf

its telling you how to make a wolf

giving you information about how to make it like a / speed of a squirrel's dash

It is a potion

10/10

We have seen better war poems 3/10

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We didn't really understand it, it seemed a little bit pointless 🙁

By Miroslav Holub

There's quite a bit of repetition

10/10

We thought it was very funny and random

9/10

We like about this poem because it makes us laugh, of course it rhymes and all the pets are in weird places, especially The last one🤗🤗.

9.9\10

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Anshdeep: 3/10 (boring)

There is NO rhyming,

A LOT of capital letters

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Funny! 🤣 and we like the rhyming !!

I don't like it, it reminds me of William Shakespeare because of thy.

Chloe-4/10

Sasha-3/10

The moon speaks

We think its sad, because they say their lonely.

Chloe-3/10

Sasha-4/10

The river

I don't like it, because its repeating a lot but i like the metaphors.

Chloe-2/10

Sasha-5/10

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It was good description aswell with each sentence it was also fun to read.

It has a lot of description and a lot of sentences and i would read it again! - Connie

Devon- The smile on the baby is creepy and i mean extremely creepy

George-it was very boring (not in a rude way)

We rate it a 0.09/10 its from the baby no joke it creepy

Deeptha: 2/10

We don't really understand it

Be nice to your turkeys

9/10

By Kenn Nesbitt

Lots of repetition

4.8/10

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Fuuuunnnyyy! Lots of tongue twisters!

Its good 8/10

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Funny, lots of rhyming

It was very fun and funny and a bit questionable at the end!

Decent 9.9/10

We like it because he's making the teacher do everything he says and it makes us laugh our favourite verse was 3 and 5

10/10

I don't like it, because its too confusing and has a lot of random words.

Chloe-2/10

Sasha-5/10

Our magic toliet

I like it, because its funny.

Chloe-7/10

Sasha-6/10

The door

I don't like it, because its boring.

Chloe-3/10

Sasha-4/10

No bad

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We like this poem because it rhymes and everything is in the correct place.

9.5\10

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5/10

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By Benjamin Zephaniah

Very informal but quite good

Very long aswell and very repetive

10/10

5/10

Anshdeep: 0/10

rhyming

It is talking about how things vanish away and they do not now were there go

It is a magic toilet and get things and pout things in to see what happens

8/10

The magic box

It is talking about a magic box and Ryming things to go with it

Also pichets to give us more infomashon

Its talking about things like memories and then saying there putting it in the magic box

So its very important to them

6/10

The door

Talking to the reader/

And saying things are going to be bahind the door

And being mysterious

9/10

We thought that it made us starve to death NO JOKE!!!

10/10 George rating

Devon rating 0.1/10

It was a bit long but funny, it was funny because the grandma rapped everywhere and said that she the best rapping gran the worlds ever seen!

Fake story we had high hopes for this story but it didnt fail to dissapoint :( 2/10

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in our opinion it is boring!

10/10 no words its just good

By Alan Ahlberg

Very good and quite funny

8/10

Good i guess 8.7/10

We ate not really that much of fan the poem but it was quite good we liked it when its repeated the last sentence 'there may be rain at the front if the house but sunshine round the back.'

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We liked it because it showed good examples

10/10

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Nice but a little confusing

Anshdeep: 10/10

We think it is very funny and kind of a rhetorical question

I like it, because its just funny and i like how it says just enjoy your mothers cooking.

Chloe-8/10

Sasha-9/10

By Jack Ousby

I like the bit near the end of the verse

Repetetive

5/10

10/10

The words are to blurry to read but we managed it

We gave it a 5/10

there are treating it as there pet

Its funny and has a sense of humour

10/10

We lime this one its fun

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Decent 4/10

It's really bad it is boring it doesn't rhyme and is bad.

1\10

Lunas fav was the food one because it is realy funny the** turkey**