https://padlet.com/23blouro/vc2sqjwb7ysi hello, welcome to my padllet please leave got positive feedback. Hope you enjoy my padllet. en-us 2018-02-01 14:15:40 UTC 2018-03-02 15:16:23 UTC hello@padlet.com 23khaggerty https://padlet.com/23blouro/vc2sqjwb7ysi/wish/236923519 Star: I thought it was great of how in your hook you used a fact and elaborated about it 

Star: You did very well with adding strong data 

Wish: Next time you should try to keep the elaboration throughout the whole piece but overall it was really good! - Katelyn]]> 2018-03-01 14:37:59 UTC https://padlet.com/23blouro/vc2sqjwb7ysi/wish/236923519 23zredling https://padlet.com/23blouro/vc2sqjwb7ysi/wish/237378859 The one thing I liked about this piece was how dramatic it was, like in the beggining when the main character got shot. The other thing I like is your word choice, like when you said scrambled. In the future I suggest you read over your piece and see if it makes sense because I came across 4 sentences that didn't make sense.]]> 2018-03-02 13:34:09 UTC https://padlet.com/23blouro/vc2sqjwb7ysi/wish/237378859 23gsandy https://padlet.com/23blouro/vc2sqjwb7ysi/wish/237432429 I really liked the way that you wrote the piece.

- Gabe Sandy]]> 2018-03-02 15:14:41 UTC https://padlet.com/23blouro/vc2sqjwb7ysi/wish/237432429