https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i Let's talk about making an "ADVANCED" score. en-us 2018-03-18 21:34:27 UTC 2018-03-19 15:43:28 UTC hello@padlet.com 0141701 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243566814 2018-03-19 15:25:34 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243566814 0141701 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243568841 2018-03-19 15:28:21 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243568841 juliesmith4 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243570669 demonstrates some organization with somewhat coherent writing.  
The student does an ok job of writing clearly, but it's not the best. ]]> 2018-03-19 15:31:05 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243570669 0142253 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243571811 . uses clear reasoning Supported by relevant text- based evidence in the development of the claim or topic; 

. is effectlvely organized with clear and coherent writting ;  

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Has an effect on the reader. to have the same style throughout the essay]]> 2018-03-19 15:32:58 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243571872 0146857 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243571943 uses mostly clear reasoning supported by relevant text based evidence in the development of the claim or topic.
uses facts that are supported and relevant to the writing task.]]> 2018-03-19 15:33:03 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243571943 0140044 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243571955 The student response does not demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English at the appropriate level of complexity. Frequent and varied errors in mechanics, grammar, and usage impede understanding
The student ]]> 2018-03-19 15:33:04 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243571955 0140860 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243571978 Demonstrates limited command of the conventions of standard English.There may be be grammar errors.
The students doesn't demonstrate organization

]]> 2018-03-19 15:33:05 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243571978 0141567 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243572047 Addresses the prompt and provides mostly effective development of the claim or topic that is mostly appropriate to the task, purpose, and audience.
The student tells the readers mostly what the prompt is and correctly discusses it to the audience to where they understand what you are talking about.

]]> 2018-03-19 15:33:11 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243572047 0139896 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243572120 demonstrates limited comprehension of ideas stated explicitly and/or inferentially by providing a minimally accurate analysis; 
Addresses the prompt and provides minimal development of the claim or topic that is limited in its appropriateness to the task, purpose, and audience;
Doesn't provide accurate analysis or evidence ]]> 2018-03-19 15:33:17 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243572120 4149992 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243572277 The student response demonstrates some command of the conventions of standard English at and appropriate level of complexity. There may be errors in mechanism, grammar, and usage that occasionally impede understanding, but the meaning is generally clear.

The student its on the right point, but he still have errors where he need to work and get better at, its explainable and clear but need to be better]]> 2018-03-19 15:33:28 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243572277 0141352 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243572287 Uses some reasoning and text-based evidence in the development of the claim or topic.
Student doesn't use enough reasoning and evidence from the text to to support their claim.]]> 2018-03-19 15:33:29 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243572287 7209975 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243572519 uses bare minimum of reasoning and shows no text based evidence.
Doesn't have correct organization and coherence.
Minimally effective style of writing.]]> 2018-03-19 15:33:48 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243572519 0136130 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243572728 Uses clear reasoning supported by relevant text based evidence in the development of the claim or topic.

Use clear evidence to support your answer.]]> 2018-03-19 15:34:04 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243572728 0130342 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243572882 use some reasoning and text-based evidence in the development of the claim or topic]]> 2018-03-19 15:34:16 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243572882 0141701 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243573089 Uses mostly clear reasoning supported by relevant text-based evidence in the claim or topic; is organized with mostly clear and coherent writing; establishes and maintains a mostly effective style .

Mostly relevant to topic, has some evidence, and is mostly clear.]]> 2018-03-19 15:34:35 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243573089 0136315 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243573174 uses some reasoning and text-base evidence in the development of  the claim or topic ;
demonstrates some organization with somewhat coherent writing;
has a style that is somewhat effective.]]> 2018-03-19 15:34:41 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243573174 0132529 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243573962   make sure that the reader understand the topic]]> 2018-03-19 15:35:48 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243573962 6209985 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243574375 demonstrate full comprehension of ideas stated explicitly and inferentially by providing an accurate analysis. 
The student has complete understanding. ]]> 2018-03-19 15:36:22 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243574375 0141349 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243575095 Uses limited reasoning and text-based evidence;
Demonstrates limited organization and coherence; 
Has a style that is minimally effective]]> 2018-03-19 15:37:27 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243575095 0139959 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243575237 demonstrates comprehension of ideas stated explicitly and/or inferentially by providing a mostly accurate analysis. 
does really well with explaining everything and is accurate]]> 2018-03-19 15:37:38 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/vbbfrziicx3i/wish/243575237