Creative Writing 03 by Sworld Vietnam

Homework

sworldcampvn — 2023-09-13 11:10:00 UTC

Chọn 1 bài viết cũ chủ đề bất kỳ để chia sẻ với lớp trong buổi tới.

Viết 1 bài mới chủ đề “Your favourite book” nói về cuốn sách mình yêu thích và chia sẻ với lớp ở buổi sau (viết tự do không giới hạn độ dài).

write

2023-09-15 07:54:52 UTC

My favorite book is Horrid Henry. It's about pranks, jokes and revenges. The creator of that book won the 1st children's book in 2006 and when 2011 it's had a film like Horrid Henry but is the person acting. In the 2011 to now is had many many episodes many pranks, many jokes and many revenges. It also known as one of the world's best children books.

write

2023-09-15 13:57:01 UTC

My favourite book is Harry Potter it's about a child name Harry Potter and his adventure to save the world of wizard and to get revenge.It has 8 movie and it's very interesting.

Write

2023-09-16 02:31:09 UTC

My favorite book is The Wimpy Kid. It is about a kid's life, friendship, adventure and more. Sometimes, in the story, something hilarious makes me laugh a lot. The author of the book is named Jeff Kinney. This author is an American cartoonist, best known as the creator of the children's book Diary of a Wimpy Kid series.

Write Bin Minh Tue

2023-09-16 11:41:47 UTC

Write Bin Minh Tue

2023-09-16 11:42:10 UTC

TIFF_BAO THU

2023-09-17 09:50:10 UTC

Pham Le Anh Minh

2023-09-18 14:41:25 UTC

I haven't read many book so there isn't many book to compare, but there's a book that make me like it, and it's Harry Potter Harry Potter is a book about a wizard world it's very wonderful and unique we can have magic if we are wizard. But after 8 chapter of Harry Potter I realize that, we think that magic is already there for us to use but no we have to learn it so in Harry Potter we can see a lot of same with our world for example: there's strong, weak,rich,poor,..... people.Harry Potter is like describing our wolrd and add some magic so Harry Potter is also educating us, we can see one of our reflex in Harry Potter about the personality so we can see the result of each person with there own personality.All of that makes me loves Harry Potter

Nam Phuong

2023-09-19 11:43:55 UTC

For me, the book that my teacher gave me is the best book I have ever had. That is Harry Potter by author J. K. Rowling. The story is about the life of a boy named Harry who grew up in a family where his aunt and uncle treated him poorly. They viewed the boy as a maid, forcing him to do everything in the house. One day, he received a letter from Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. After enrolling, Harry, Ron and Hermione became close friends. Thanks to his friends, Harry no longer feels sad. He is cared for by his friends' parents. He considers Ron's parents as his own parents. But things are not so easy, finally the truth behind the most dangerous wizard in the wizarding world has emerged. Through faith and strength Harry killed him and saved the wizarding world from danger. After reading this book series, I immediately wanted to enter the wizarding world. Perhaps, the author's way of describing people is the part that I feel is truly unique, it is not like the ways of describing people in other books, it has a very special color that only when you read just felt it.

Homework:

dauminhhoang412 — 2023-09-24 09:10:14 UTC

Complete the essay at the end of the class session/ Those who have completed it can continue to write an article about another character. (Submit your work to the Padlet link, the teacher will comment on it and comment directly in the next session)

Essay

phong084101 — 2023-09-24 09:42:24 UTC

A long time ago, when human wasn’t born, a gigantic creature ruined the earth. It is enormous, more extensive than a T-rex, and more significant than a blue whale. It has four arms, eight tiny tentacles 100m and as thick as a school bus, and four big one that reaches up to 500k long! It is called The gigantic tentacle monster.

Each day, it goes around to find some animal or other creatures living on earth at that time and kill them with the tentacle to make hunger disappear. Sometimes, it feels that he is the king, the beast who ruins the world, the only living thing that can kill everything! Destroy everything! Commanding everything and everyone!

But one day, something felt right! Everything is gone! He sees nothing instead of air. A few days later, his last breath was gone, and he fell into the ground so hard that it made the earth shake hard. Little did he know that everyone was hiding UNDER the ground! Well, that is the end for the evil monster.

Essay 2

phong084101 — 2023-09-24 10:38:50 UTC

In the world of chicken, there is a chicken named Don Chicken. He is 6 cm in height, 10 cm in width, and 5 cm long. His personality is generous and happy.

One day, when walking around, he saw a giant chicken. He asked: “What are you doing, and how did you get so big?” The massive chicken answers: “I am walking around, and I got this big because I drank a potion that made me this big.” “Where did you get that potion of growing?” Asked Don Chicken. “I got it from the witch,” Replied the massive chicken. “By the way, what is your name, Mr. Giant Chicken?” Don Chicken asks again. “My name is Bob,” Said Bob

After a long conversation, they head to the witch's house. When they arrive there, they see someone who is black from head to toe. It turns out it is Ms. Witch. Unlike other witches, this witch is pretty lovely. She gave Don the grow potion and said goodbye. That is the end.

Bin

tue080180 — 2023-09-24 11:18:50 UTC

Homework

2023-09-24 13:02:56 UTC

In the dragon world there's a dragon name Ruby It's the king of the demon's. His height is about 10 people and he weght a 10000kg. He have sharps teeth and a magical skill is control fire because he is a fire dragon. Today he meet 2 other dragon is the ice dragon and the wind dragon when he fight with them, he always lose and after that fight. He realized that he isn't the strongest and also after that fight he didn't abuse his underling anymore. This story tell us that don't arrogant or no you will make a big mistake and you will lose all you have.

Homework

dauminhhoang412 — 2023-10-01 13:11:00 UTC

Write a short paragraph describing your bedroom based on what you have learned today.

My bedroom

phong084101 — 2023-10-01 13:35:31 UTC

Hello everyone! This is my bedroom. It has three main parts: the bed, piano and wardrobe. Now, let's go to the details. First, let's start with the bed, my bed is pretty big, it has four pillows and two blankets, one is big, one is tiny. My headrest, which is a small one, has some dinosaur pictures on it. Next, let’s move on to the piano. The piano is black, big and long. It used to be in the living room, but it takes up so much space that my family and I must take it into my bedroom. Finally, my favourite part is the wardrobe. It has four drawers; each drawer has four more small drawers. The part that makes me like it is I always hide candy there because my dad won’t let me and my younger sister have it, so I have to hide. And that is all. Thank you for reading this essay.

Nam Phuong

bemeo2012 — 2023-10-01 13:52:48 UTC

My bedroom is truly wonderful in my eyes. My bedroom has been with me for three years since I moved to District 7. My room is designed with the main color being white, which is the color I believe when I'm worried it can make me feel better. The window side is painted yellow because my window is designed in a square shape, I think it resembles sunflowers. I have a white bed, like all other beds it has nothing special, but I find it still has a very unique color that makes me very excited! The most wonderful desk I have ever had in my life was reserved by my parents in honor of my academic achievements. It's made from natural wood - it looks unique, the wood lines on the table surface make me find it very interesting! My bedroom has a large wardrobe full of my clothes. That closet is truly an ideal hiding place for me whenever my family plays hide and seek. My room is just that! But I believe this is the room I dreamed of.

My bedroom

2023-10-02 13:48:32 UTC

There're 2 bedroom in my house. I live with my brother in the room that has a bunkbed. A perfect bed should be clean and warm so my bed is a perfect bed. Bed is a place to refills our energy and also a place to stay when we're angry or sad...Bed is a place to think about someone or something.Although I have sleep in other great bed I didn't feel comfortable like my bed because my bed is my world.

Tiff_ writing about my bedroom

2023-10-03 01:30:06 UTC

MY BEDROOM-BIN

2023-10-03 10:42:43 UTC

Hello, everyone. Today I will tell you guys about my bedroom. So my bedroom is quite big and has one gigantic bed in it. There are some shelves and a cupboard. Lets talk more specific about the bed, on the bed, there is 2 pillows, one soft and one a little harder. there is also 1 blankets sometimes 2 if I am cold and finally I have a long pillow so I can cuddle with it during the night. Time to move to the cupboard. Inside are clothes and clothes. The last thing is the shelves, usually, this is for my mother because on the shelves, there are her things like make up or things that make her skin smooth I don't know. I love my bedroom because it's really comfy and this is the end of my bedroom introduction.

Homework:

dauminhhoang412 — 2023-10-03 16:33:31 UTC

Write a short paragraph describing the worst movie you’ve ever watched and explain why it was so bad.

The worst movie I've ever watched-Nam Phuong

2023-10-07 02:53:46 UTC

Surely all of us have had our parents take us to the movies at least once, right? Me too, since I was little, my parents often took me to the movies every weekend. Every movie for me has its good points, there are many genres of detective, horror, action,... But one of my favorite movies is Doraemon, I think if you think that Doraemon is a series I love the most and I can love all the Doraemon movies. Which one doesn't, you're wrong, just because I like Doremon doesn't mean I'll like every episode, all of them. Of course, there are episodes that I like more or less, but nothing is perfect because it is each person's judgment and preference, so with my style and preferences, I will like series about friendship, about the united. But there was one time Doraemon disappointed me - actually this movie was quite good for everyone but I didn't understand why it was just like a previous episode and before I watched half of it I felt the story was boring. and quite bad compared to previous episodes. That movie is about Nobita and the satyr - but people think the satyr must be a big person, then it's just a small sapling. I found this episode not good because its plot was quite similar to an episode I watched before and it really didn't impress me as much as the previous episodes.

The worst movie I have ever seen-BIN

2023-10-08 14:15:41 UTC

In the world, there are lots of different movies and they make us happy when we watch them. But as we all now, not all things are perfect, so the worst movie I have ever seen is Doraemon. The reason I chose this movie is not because I hate it, it's just because all the other movies I have seen are way better than the Doraemon movie so I chose it. Actually, there is an episode where I don't like it. It is the episode island in the sky, or something else I don't remember the name. First, I thought it was good but after watching it, I felt that it was bad and I was not satisfied at all. I think the episode before was way better than this one. That's the worst movie I have ever seen.

Morbius

2023-10-09 14:39:42 UTC

A movie I didn't like is Morbius. Morbius is about a scientist name Morbius try to fix his illness but accidently turn himself into a vampire. It's seem interesting at first but It's hard to understand and the parts of the movie also doesn't connect to each other. The character line was cringey. There's only a few action scenes and they are unentertaining.So this is an action film that just have a few action scenes the character line is cringey so this film is a bad film.

Tiff_Bao Thu

2023-10-09 23:48:48 UTC

Last week, I saw the movie that played in the restaurant.

That movie was very terrible. It was about neighbor’s lives and they compete for each other's land. They killed each other to get that land. And the children are influenced by their families so they also kill each other to fight for land for the family.

Because the people in the movie always say bad words and that is bloody action movie. My family did not like this movie. And that movie I don’t want to watch it any more.My grandpa say that movie so boring and all the weird lines.

The movie was so meaningless, full of violence. It will make children who watch that movie will think that is normal and they will be a killer, when they aduld.

So, I don’t want to watch any movie like 2 of this movieeeeeeeeeeeee.

I the worst movie I've ever watched-Jimmy

2023-10-10 10:49:25 UTC

It is bad because is the movie that the talking dogs with superpowers and has been stolen the power for only destroy the world and they has crazy superpowers that the normal dogs could have is barking that is why I hate paw patrol the most.

The worst movie

phong084101 — 2023-10-10 10:57:15 UTC

The worst movie I have ever watched is Meg. It is about a megalodon shark. When I watch it, it is pretty good. But in the end, there is a twist. I don’t know for sure, but there is something that made me scared. And it also made me have a nightmare about it for an entire solid month. So that is why I hate this movie and swear I will never watch it again!

Homework:

dauminhhoang412 — 2023-10-11 16:53:19 UTC

Creating a dialouge for your main character and the villian of the story. This can be in any part of the story, the beginning, climax, or ending.

Nam Phuong

2023-10-16 08:27:25 UTC

Princess Lena was walking on the road when suddenly a dragon flew from nowhere, shouting loudly: Princess! Go back to the palace and tell your king that if you don't pay all the gifts I require, you will be arrested! The princess cried and answered: What did my father do wrong? I will accept whatever you want, but please don't hurt my kingdom and my parents! So, beautiful princess, do you agree to marry my master? The dragon replied. The devastated princess ran back to the palace, the dragon called after her: Okay, I give you three days, one is to marry my master and the kingdom and your parents will be happy, two is that if you don't agree, the kingdom will Don't rest in peace, Princess Lena.

Minh

2023-10-16 12:23:32 UTC

One day a very nice and happy prince in a kindom was playing outside he met a adult. The adult say that if the boy want a power to do everything just tell him but he will lost his personality but the price say that he need the power and after that the prince become evil.

Bin

tue080180 — 2023-10-16 13:56:09 UTC

The hero was walking a long a bridge, celebrating his victory against the king of the undead. It was a great honor. Suddenly, out of nowhere, a verocious demon appeared and said that "You think that was the end, it was a bait that will destroy you. Now, the chaos and descruction was only just begun"
Not even thinking, the hero used his sword and tried to sliced monster. The demon dissapered and following it was a very scary laugh. The hero thought: "I must reported this to the kind". But again, the demon appeared in front of him. He said: "Wait, this wasn't fun, we haven't had a fight yet"
"You would regret this" said the fffffff

Tiff_Dialogue

2023-10-17 11:21:49 UTC

A SCARED ABANDONED HOUSE

Today I and my group went to play basketball in the afternoon. My group have 2 friends, and they are my best friends. When we went to the field to play, we saw “ Abandoned House “. We were curious so my group didn’t play basketball and we went inside abandoned house.

“ Eww, Tiff, Jason look there. It has many spider and spiderweb ’’. Lion said

“ Oh, I saw it, it so dirty ’’ I said

“ I think we need to go out side ’’ Lion said

“ Wait, I find some beautiful picture, gold, medal ’’

I and Lion were very surprised, I and Lion A-shaped eyes and o-shaped mouth. Then we go to find more, and we find a lot of things like medals, toys, pictures…

“ LOOK, I found the paper that have address and diary book from the people who go to another place or die.”

In the diary book write, “ Haizzz, I have to go to another place to live because there was a huge landslide. I need to go, who see this want can you bringg this things to me, please.’’

“ Ok, tomorrow we will go to this address and give this things to the people who have go to another place.’’ I said

“ Let go home, guys. ’’ Lion said

Tomorrow, we went to prople house. But we surprised very much because that people is Michael Jordan.

“ OMG THAT MICHEAL JORDAN.’’ We yell

Then we give things to Michael Jordan and take the photo, signature.

This travel is very interesting. I love this trip very much.

Demon VS God

phong084101 — 2023-10-17 11:35:50 UTC

A mysterious object appears overnight in a small town, causing chaos and confusion. Many people have heard that if you stay out at night, something will appear and kill or make you hurt, destroy your house or something else... The people here called it THE OVERLOAD DEMON OF THE NIGHT. It has two super abilities called flying and invisibility. One night, a word spelt in a farmer's yard: I am coming using fire. The next night, it appeared again, but this time, it wiped out most of the people who lived there. There is only one single. Lucky people manage to survive. He tells the military that the demon is coming and they must prepare for the fight. The next night, the monster appears to turn into its final form and says: “The fun just began...” It starts to manipulate the solder base, and it is a matter of time before the ground turns to dust and flies away. Some heroes began trying to kill it with their powers. Some used water to flush it out, but it was useless. The others use fire, wind, rock, and mind control, but it is still meaningless to the monster, one of the heroes, “the hero in bin story,” Aphere and destroys one of the monster's hearts. “Ahh..” said the beast. “How dare you destroy my heart? You will pay for it, bin hero.” “I will kill you, you beastly creature!” replied Bin. “Roar!” The monster shouted. “Shut up,” Bin said while covering his ear” “Yes!” The beast said, “I have finally found your weakness. That is sound!” After a long time, all the heroes are defeated, the skies turn black, the volcano erupts, meteors hit the earth, and the human being life starts to fade. In the dark, a God stands up and says, “You had mess a lot..., now it is your time to return to where you came from...” The battle begins...

Truong Minh

minhquan862015 — 2023-10-17 12:29:12 UTC

Ally: "What do you want from me?"

Villain: "Oh, nothing much. Just your life."

Ally: "Why? What have I ever done to you?"

Villain: "It's not about what you've done. It's about what you represent. You see, you stand for everything that I hate in this world. You symbolize hope and justice, and I can't have that."

Ally: "So you're going to kill me just because you disagree with my beliefs?"

Villain: "No, it's not that simple. You're a threat to my plans. I can't have you interfering with my goals."

Ally: "What are your goals?"

Villain: "To rule this world, of course. To have absolute power and control over everything. And you, my dear, are standing in my way."

Ally: "I'll never let you win. I'll fight you until my last breath."

Villain: "Oh, I know you will. But it won't matter. In the end, I always win. And you, my dear, will be just another victim in my path to greatness."

Homework:

dauminhhoang412 — 2023-10-17 18:35:29 UTC

Pick your favourite image of a group of people. This could be a family photo or a picture from the internet. Write about it in the 1st person perspective using the words -I -Me -Us -We.

Nam Phuong

2023-10-22 04:54:50 UTC

While I was walking on the street, I saw a couple going to the place to adopt children. After that, I didn't pay much attention and went to the opposite park - where my friends and I met to practice badminton. A long time later, two wives. The husband left the foster home with a cute little girl, she was probably only 3 years old, but she was very understanding, knowing that the adoptive parents were just a young couple so they didn't get much money. There were so many toy and candy stores all the way home that the girl didn't bother to mention. Her parents asked if they wanted them to buy them for her, but she refused and went home without looking back. When I returned home after a tiring afternoon of badminton practice, I saw my mother and the neighbors preparing a small party with a banner reading WELCOME THOMAS FAMILY TO CABBAGE TOWN!!! I immediately asked my mother and she told me that a couple with their adopted daughter was moving to live next door. Hearing this, I thought it was familiar, but I thought it was just a coincidence because it was said that many couples adopted children from orphanages. After seeing the Thomas family, I realized they were the couple I accidentally met while going to the park. I immediately told everyone, everyone was surprised by the story I told.

Truong Minh

itsam3thystjack — 2023-10-23 12:43:10 UTC

One time, me and my mom went to a restaurant called Tokyo Sushi. My mom wanted some food really bad so she brought us a plate of Herring sushi I liked it but my mom didn’t. It almost closed so we ate as fast as we could. Luckily, we managed to get out on time. After that, I wanted to eat at that restaurant, but I couldn’t because my mom didn’t like it. :)

Minh

2023-10-23 14:49:22 UTC

Look at this picture! What can you see? Absolubly you can see 4 people right? Yeah that's my familyat a cafes after watching fireworks. As you can see I'm the smallest one in the picture and I bet you can guess who's my dad,mom and brother. As you know the north of VietNam is pretty cold so we wear a jacket. I choose this picture because it's a very nature picture, my mom just take her phone and take a picture so my family is on a strait line. In the past it took a long time to a picture but now we can just do it with our device. That picture my mom just see we happily wait so she took a picture so there aren't any organization so that's why it's naturaly and I just saw this picture different from the other pictures so I choose it.

Tiff _A Photo

2023-10-24 06:00:01 UTC

Today my school have a game name Ring the golden bell. The topic is about Columbus. Ro prepare for the competion, I and my friends need to preview about Christopher Columbus. We create game to preview like blooket, quizz…

We try to get a 1 place or 2 place to get present from my teacher. She said if who get 1 place or 2 place will have present.

The discovery of America is a historical event marked by the time the expedition led by Christopher Columbus arrived in America on October 12, 1492. By order of King Fernando and Queen Isabel of Castilla and Aragón, the expedition had departed from the Andalusian port of Palos 2 months and 9 days earlier. After crossing the Atlantic Ocean, the expedition arrived on an island of the American continent, Guanahani Island in the Bahamas archipelago.

And who ever doesn't make it to the next round will sit and cheer for you guys.There were many people there and I was enthusiastically cheered by everyone. They cheer very big and it has president in my school and vice president go to watch we play. And when I hear my friends cheer I really happy and I will get 1 place or 2 place.

I really like this topic because I love Social Study and I want to learn more.My class have 10 student go to the last round. And in 10 student I am the smartest student student. That is my mom say, yeahh. SO, I play Ring the bell very well. And my class cheer to make more vibrant. I very nervous when I see a hard question. So, I just guess that question and wait the teacher to show the answer. When I correct, I really surprise OH MY GOT. I really really happyyyy.

But in grade 7 it has one girl really smart, so she in the 1 place and I with my friend in the 2 place. It don’t have third place.

This game very interesting, it help me have more knowledge about Columbus.I want to play this game one more time, because it vrey fun and have many knowledge. And if I don’t have any model for this game, I will have my mom’s present. Yayyyyy, I with my friends go to eat dinner because I and my friend get 2 place.

Jimmy

jimmynguyenvanthienphu — 2023-10-24 09:56:07 UTC

Last year, me and my family went to Singapore and we had a lot of fun in there. My sisters hated me at there and I played Roblox with my cousin it was very lag. ...

Hannah Nguyen

2023-10-24 11:46:11 UTC

I had a great time at the camp. I made new friends, did many activities, sports, explore the jungle and climbed the mountain. My new friends at the camp were Jayme, Minh Chau, Minh Khue, Anh Minh, etc. Jayme ws special because she was the only camper from America. I had a lot of fun with her. We share stories, talking and playing fun activities. But we fare well at day 14, the last day of camp. I felt very sad and she said to me that just look at the sky, just imagine her eyes that I won't forget her. We said goodbye and go home.

Homework:

dauminhhoang412 — 2023-10-24 19:14:15 UTC

If you are writing a fiction story, write part of it in the non-fiction genre, or choose a well-known Fairy tale and write it in the non-fiction genre.

Horror story - Jimmy

jimmynguyenvanthienphu — 2023-10-25 12:47:20 UTC

One night I was with my cousins going to a graveyard so we are scared at there but when we are there. There is a spooky spirit just dash behind us so my elder cousin said that we should had an sleepover at there and having midnight snacks. Before sleep we told scary story about ghost and it is very hard to sleep because we might has nightmares about ghosts. At least my elder cousin took out his phone to watch a cartoon which makes easier to sleep. When my cousins are sleeping I heard some stepping noise around the graveyard. When I was sleeping and I had nightmares about ghosts haunting a house. At the middle of the night I saw a ghost then is disappeared so in the morning I saw my cousin's father looking at us and smile and he said "That was a prank of last night". It was a horror sleepover that I almost freaking out.

Nam Phuong

2023-10-28 13:31:59 UTC

Today is a day that I believe I will never forget! Let me tell you, today my mother took me to the English communication club. I met many Vietnamese people here, but almost all of them were between student age and married. This club is where people will chat with each other about hot topics or have questions about the culture and customs of other countries. Every 30 minutes there will be a foreigner or maybe a foreigner. More came to share about their travels and experiences. They will answer questions people ask, they are also very funny. This is just a coffee shop that brings together foreigners who come to Vietnam to discover more about the customs here. Everyone will order water and then chat together, all in English. Here, everyone can develop their English ability to the fullest.

Minh

2023-10-30 11:54:26 UTC

Once upon a time, there lived a Tortoise and a Hare in a beautiful and quiet forest. Every day they play together like two close friends. One day the Hare saw the Tortoise is running and he consider it as a race and he start running over the Tortoise and the Tortoise also see that the Hare want to race so he start racing too. The Hare went far and sleep at a big tree. When the Hare woke up he saw the Tortoise had already past him and win. The story teaches the virtues of perseverance, diligence, and patience. Those who are agile but careless in their thinking will eventually be defeated by those who are patient and diligent even though they are much slower.

Tiff_Bao Thu

2023-10-30 23:56:41 UTC

In opporsite day in the Earth. They will have magic, they can fly to go to school, go to work or they can get something if they say a magic word. Also they can make another planet, or something else.

They can do a lot of work in one time. They can fly, can get something, can go everywhere. That like the story Harry Potter. And every children in the Earth like to have magic to play.

One day, Tom go to play with his friends. And he call everyone go to a circle and call a magic word like a magic Earth. We so surprise because just Tom can fly. OH MY GOD, Tom try some word again but it can do it.

So, Tom run home and say with mom. But mom just smile. So, Tom do that for his mom see. His mom say “ How can you do that Tom ”. Haha. I just laught and go to my room.

I think I can do everything so I call a magic word to get an ice cream because it a hot day, when I eat done I go to play with my friends. We saw one baby 28^th floor. So, I lfy like fast to help the baby. So, everyone call me real hero. So, everytime who need me. They will toot so I can know and fly go to help them.

Hannah Nguyen

2023-10-31 08:09:51 UTC

While I was reading a book in the heavy rain, suddenly a bolt of lightning struck my yard. I went outside and saw a strange machine, which transported me into a world 60 years later. In this world, I find it very different from my current world. There are many skyscrapers and many funny shapes. There are many cool green lawns and trees. The road is even bigger than it is now, with many vehicles and traffic laws. When I look back, I see that I am over 70 years old, with gray hair, wrinkled skin, etc. I can't run but only walk slowly. My friends are also old. I felt scared and surprised. After a while in this world, I gradually got used to the life of old people. I return to my current life. I still feel nervous and worried. It was an experience that left me with impressions about everyone's future.

Homework:

dauminhhoang412 — 2023-10-31 18:52:09 UTC

Take a moment to remember your happiest memory. Write a narrative poem (with rhyming rules) telling about the story.

Nam Phuong

2023-11-04 13:07:32 UTC

Let me show you my memories

Friends, and school, a lot of stories

Every day is lucky

My best friends are lovely,

My teacher is funny,

So I love to study.

But when I'm lazy

My teacher will be angry

My new school is pretty

I'm very happy,

I love my memories

Minh

2023-11-06 12:00:04 UTC

I usally go to the park

with alot of spark because of the dog

but now, instead of the park I go to my friend park

actually it's a party but I said it's a park

we have a lot of dog at the party but with no spark

the party is next to a lot of logs

and in those logs there's a frog

I caught the frog and bring him to my park

Where he saw his frog friend.

Tiff

2023-11-07 11:58:29 UTC

A HAPPY MEMORY

The camp that I remember

The beautiful time forever

The air of mountain is cooler

Than the bird is singing longer

I saw lots of nice flowers

We happily play together.

When we play hide and seek

It was so thrilling

This game so excaited

Then we play chasing

It was many friends surprising

We wish the game never ending.

Then we move to campfire

It was so slent

When the music turn on

After that we sing a happy song

We go around make a circle

Then we go to sleepy

It was a lovely memory

Homework:

dauminhhoang412 — 2023-11-14 19:04:31 UTC

Have a look at one of your past writing assignments, use the tips of revision and your new editing checklist to make your work better.

Homework:

dauminhhoang412 — 2023-11-14 19:11:42 UTC

Finish your writing or choose one of these prompts from different genres and write something completely different than what you're used to:

Thriller: a stranger sits down next to you on a train and gets up, leaving a package behind.
Science fiction: technology becomes illegal.
Fantasy: you come into possession of a ring that can change the weather to whatever you decide.
Kids Story: what would happen if you woke up one day and kids ruled the world?

Jimmy

jimmynguyenvanthienphu — 2023-11-16 12:04:31 UTC

It is bad because is the movie that the talking dogs with superpowers and has been stolen for only destroy the world and they has crazy superpowers that the normal dogs could have is barking that is why I hate paw patrol the most and why the dogs have an ability to talk and why the cats are not. Many people said that paw patrol is the most sucks movie ever and it is real paw patrol totally sucks, only make kids excited for the starting of the film, the end, the sense and every episode, films, movies and most of all the movies in cinema.

Nam Phuong

2023-11-17 11:40:09 UTC

Princess Lena was walking on the road when suddenly a dragon flew from nowhere, shouting: Princess! Go back to the palace and tell your king that you will be arrested if you don't pay all the gifts I require! The princess cried and answered: What did my father do wrong? I will accept whatever you want, but please don't hurt my kingdom and parents! So, beautiful princess, do you agree to marry my master? The dragon replied. The devastated princess ran back to the palace, and the dragon called after her: Okay, I give you three days, one is to marry my master, and the kingdom and your parents will be happy, two is that if you disagree, the kingdom will Don't rest in peace, Princess Lena.

Write again

2023-11-19 14:19:39 UTC

There're 2 bedroom in my house.

I live with my brother in the room that has a bunkbed.The bed is a place to sleep to regenerate energy, so it is a place that must feel comfortable, clean and airy.It is a place where we rest and is also a private place it's also a place to hide secret.Apprehend bed, a place to sleep, one's own miniature space, one's own world It's also the place when I'm happy or sad or have secrets I always leaned back on it Lying there thinking about my mother's scoldingIt's a refuge when you're upset with the whole family It is my private space, my own world, the bed is of course a place to sleep, it must be a comfortable place to regenerate energy, so I always keep my bed clean.I also sleep at many great bed but I'll never have a comfortable sleep as my bed because as I say, my bed is my world.

Fantasy

2023-11-19 14:19:48 UTC

One day when you're sitting down and enjoy your breakfast something from the sky fell into you and it fit in your neck. You think it's someone's but when you take it out you can't. You think it's ok it's just a necklace but when you try to use the magic like in your comic book, you can, now you know that you have a superpower but accidentally someone see you using that power and they try to kill you. When you wish you can teleport to the school, you can and again accidentally you dodge the weapon that that guy threw. When you ruled everything you met a person that can fly and when you try to attack her you die, but actually it's a game on your computer you are very angry and you punch at your computer and you broke it. Your mom comes in and hit you nearly die and that's how you end the game.

Tiffany

2023-11-20 13:11:46 UTC

One day I woke up and I know the kids will rule the world. But it just have one kid can rules the world but the presedent choose me to be.

I will ran to my friend house to think what rules should we made. So my friends said for example is Kids can play game when they finish home work and can play anywhere, kids should go outside tho play sports. The kid will have smartphone when they want.

I made a normal world to a magic world. Some magic that I made is Teleport, Fly, Can get anything… Everyone like this magic very much. I felt happy when another people happy. So made a fair rule is any poor people can have a normal live like a normal people. They can go to work, to play, to study..

My rules make everyone happy. And I can go to see my idol is Ronaldo. I watch him when I was in grade 1. Many people is agree with this rules and they thanks me because I is the best children fair in the world.

I was the best children so many people is make a picture with my face on the rock and my world is the appy and lovely world. I wil tried my best to help each people in my world.

When teachnology is illegal

2023-11-21 11:07:20 UTC

Hello guys, today I am will go to a world where technolgy in banned. Lets see how it going to be. When I first walk out of the portal, I saw a lot people walking and running on legs and that is very unusllua because nomarly, people will ride cars, bikes, motobikes or something else and not on legs. I try to take out a camera to took the picture but a lot of police try to catch me but I used a hover board to fly over them. Sudenly, I see a lot of tentacles reaching out for me, its turn out that is in the world every one has magic instead of technology. The black tentacles is the controller of this world. When someone break the rules, the tentacles will rise up and get them. That is when i know the weekness of this world, that is you can't fly everyone who is born with the super power to fly is killed becuase the tentacles cat't reach up that high. After all, i return to my planet and sleep.

Nam Phuonng_fantasy

2023-11-27 12:24:58 UTC

On a beautiful sunset, I was walking on a path full of fragrant flowers and strange fruits. Suddenly I saw a small fox lying in the middle of the road. It seemed injured. I immediately found some leaves and temporarily treated them. The fox spoke loudly: I am just a young fox but I have gone everywhere and collected many valuable objects. Because you help me so I will give you a ring that can change the weather you decide. I was very surprised and I went home. Then, the sky started to rain, I decided to test my magic ring, I was very surprised that the weather was sunny again! I told my bestie about this magic ring and the fox, she didn't trust me the first time, but then, she saw the ring and she believed that was real. When I have that ring, I can change the weather easily and if I want to go out but the weather is bad, I will change it. Sometimes my best friend wanted to change the weather so I needed to change for her too. That all about my magic ring!!!

Homework:

dauminhhoang412 — 2023-11-28 15:48:48 UTC

Complete the horror-themed article with your randomly assigned objects.

KNIFE

2023-12-04 13:53:19 UTC

When you are playing game, your mom's tell you to help her cut the vegetables and when you're cutting the knife you said that just you can hear: I wish that the knife will disappear forever, after that you cut into your hand and your blood keep splitting out and you're very hurt. You get the bandage and bandage your cut. When you go to rest, you see your blood keep splitting out and your house is full of blood when you try to go out and run away. The knife that make you hurt and causes all the things appear and kill you.

Sandwich|Jack

itsam3thystjack — 2023-12-05 11:55:35 UTC

Today, I was eating my sandwich when a sandy figure appeared in front of me she was super tall. She broke my ceiling because of that. I estimated she was 3 meters tall. Ok, I'd like to say that enough about height. So I ran away from her cause I was fast. But I was so dumb I ran to a quicksand pit. And sandwiches can teleport from any place to any sand. I had an idea. It is to call 113. And the police found out that my sandwich was infected.

(PS: 113 is 911 in Vietnam)

Homework:

dauminhhoang412 — 2023-12-05 13:59:40 UTC

- Choose 1-4 pictures randomly on the Internet that make you feel interested and write a short paragraph explaining why they would be good prompts for writing.

- Deadline: 12h00 12/12/2023

Anh Minh

2023-12-11 12:18:00 UTC

This is a very colorful and very peaceful picture.It has a lot of trees of different colors. The lake is so calm and blue that it's like a dream. Behind, there are many high mountains towering over the clouds, looking very majestic. If I could come here and the lake didn't prohibit swimming, I'd just want to stay here forever. There is a vast lake to swim in, forests to explore and mountains to climb. You can leave the city or town to come here because it is so attractive. This is a very good photo to describe because it is so peaceful, majestic and the jungle combined with an indescribable color is probably one of the best photos to describe.

WARDROBE

2023-12-12 11:00:21 UTC

I have a big wardrobe in my new house, it was made from wood, my friends usually kid me like the wardrobe is made from wood but that tree was a ghost house, you know, I would never believed it until last month when I was playing hide and seek with my friends, I hid in that wardrobe and when the game end, I was drained and one of my friends said that I was very hot. I needed to stay at home for a quite long time but my temperature was not low at all, so I needed to go to the doctor.

Nam Phuong

2023-12-12 11:12:43 UTC

As you can see this picture is very beautiful. The color of the flowers blends with the sky, making the picture more balanced and harmonious. The composition of the painting makes the viewer feel very realistic like they are walking in a real flower field, enjoying the beautiful atmosphere of spring. This picture can help me think about lots of incredible things to write. The blue of the sky, the yellow of flowers, the trees, the mountains. All of this can make you write a long paragraph.

Homework

dauminhhoang412 — 2023-12-12 18:38:30 UTC

Write a narration for the most memorable story you've ever read.
Deadline: 12h00 19/12/2023

Nam Phuong

2023-12-16 14:31:29 UTC

Our world has millions of books, and thousands of authors, but one of the most famous authors is J.K. Rowling and her fantastic Harry Potter book series. There are seven books and eight episodes of the Harry Potter series. My favorite part of this story is when Harry is taken to Hogwarts School. I can see the excitement of Harry's friends on the train to Hogwarts. After many miserable days living with his aunt and uncle, little Harry finally went to a school he never knew existed. On that fateful train, Harry met Ron and Hermione, they did not know that the three would later become close friends. At first, Ron and Harry had a bad impression of the little witch, always acting like she was better than everyone. After a while, they became closer and accompanied each other on all their journeys.

MINH

2023-12-17 12:12:29 UTC

There's a very scary moment in my life, I have already see a ghost. It's a scary monster that is around 5 meters height go and scared and eat people, at the day it becomes people but when it's midnight it will go and eat people when it comes around us is just a very dark world and a creepy scary and bloody monster. I thought the world is going to be extinct but it was just a dream when I open my eyes the dark bloody scary world becomes a very colorful beautiful world and when I remembered that creepy scary monster again, I remembered it's one of the most dangerous monster in the horror film that I watch that night and I wish that monster is just always in films.

Tiff

2023-12-19 10:38:16 UTC

In my house, it have many things. My house has 4 rooms. 1 room for my mom, 1 room for me, one beth room and 1 living room. In living room I put Tivi, sofa, my desk and piano. In every morning I play piano to learn more song. My piano is black but in side it white. Sometime I play game with my brother in the living room.

In my room, I put my bed, desk and my wardrobe. I usually stay in the bed to read book. Or play games, my wardrove is white because I like color white, black, and red. I also do homework in my room to. My room have many medals and certificates of merit. I really like my room because it really pretty. I love my room very much.

Sometime I go to my mom room to learn and play too. My mom room but a lots tree look very cool and beautiful. I love my house very much.

Tiff

2023-12-19 10:38:44 UTC

In my room, I put my bed, desk and my wardrobe. I usually stay in the bed to read book. Or play games, my wardrove is white because I like color white, black, and red. I also do homework in my room to. My room have many medals and certificates of merit. I really like my room because it really pretty. I love my room very much.

Sometime I go to my mom room to learn and play too. My mom room but a lots tree look very cool and beautiful. I love my house very much.

dauminhhoang412 — 2023-12-19 18:55:14 UTC

Homework: Describe an item or animal secretly and let the reader guess it.
Deadline: 12h00 26/12

Nam Phuong

naoconydoiten933 — 2023-12-23 03:38:40 UTC

This is a hideous animal. It has pink-white skin, slightly shiny, maybe because it is deep in the ocean, it has the brown color of the earth. The big, protruding nose looks very ugly! Its lips look a lot like a banana but the only difference is that they are dark pink. Its body is short, the tall is looks like another animal but shorter than them. This animal's eyes are round and small, sometimes, you can't see its eyes. Its habitat is deep-sea off the coast of mainland Australia, New South Wales, and Tasmania as well as some deep-water areas in New Zealand.

GUESS THE ANIMAL

2023-12-25 12:02:37 UTC

This animal lives in sub-Saharan Africa, northeast Africa, Central Asia, India, and China and you can find them in the jungles. They are one of the big cats and this type has black dots on it's creamy yellow or buff grey or orange or tawny-brown or dark rufous-brown skin.It's a very dangerous animal who hunt many animal down with their speed and it usually eats meat. This animal habitat include habitats include forests, subtropical and tropical regions, savannas, grasslands, deserts, and rocky and mountainous regions. It can also live from 12 - 15 years. So, what is the animal ????

An object

phong084101 — 2023-12-26 10:39:05 UTC

It is long and big. It have a mouth which shoot flame. You can use it to burn down your friend house quickly. It isn't permanently, you will need to refill it's fuel tank to use again.

Tiff

2023-12-26 11:17:00 UTC

This is a animals everyone when they see will scared. It live in the ocence. It very big and heavy, it can measure up to 32 feet and weigh up to 20.5 tons. This animal have a blue skin. Their teeth really sharp and many teeth is it mouth. When one teeth break, it will have another one grown up. And every small fish very scared. This fish have one food really yummy and good for health. This fish really strong, it can make a ship are a boat break. Who swimming in a ocean see on the water have a triangle. All the people run to the land to escape this fish.

DO YOU KNOW WHT ANIMAL IS THIS?

Homework:

dauminhhoang412 — 2023-12-26 15:30:58 UTC

- Build a dialogue for your chosen story, containing as much detail as possible.

- Dealine: 12h00 02/01/2024

Nam Phuong

naoconydoiten933 — 2023-12-30 04:23:54 UTC

On the Laughing Farm where was the Corn family lived. One beautiful day, the farmer grows some more carrots on that field. The carrots grow very well. When the 10th carrot sprouts, it is also the time the 14th corn is born. They often study together, play happily, and become two fresh vegetables on the field. One Saturday morning, perhaps was an unforgettable day for Corn.

Carrot: Hi Corn, good morning!

Corn: Hello my best friend, how are you today?

Carrot: Good!

Corn: Why did you call me yesterday? My phone rang but I was sleeping so I couldn’t answer you, sorry Carrot!

Carrot: It’s ok, I wanted to tell you that me and my family are going to the other farm, it’s very far from here.

Corn: Are you kidding me?

Carrot: It’s real and tomorrow I and my family are going to the Happyliy Farm!

Corn: I will miss you a lot

Carrot: Don’t cry my friend, I think you will find a better friend than me, Corn

Corn: No one can replace you, you are the only one in my life!

Carrot: I have this ring for you, you keep one half, I keep the other half and when we meet again, it will form a whole ring, I will keep your name, and you keep mine so we will never forget each other's names. Looking back at this ring, you will remember our promise to always be our friend!

Corn and Carrot hugged each other one last time and cried a lot.

Tiff

2024-01-02 11:33:11 UTC

My friend have 4 ticket that go to one country. I and my friend discuss which country that we go.

I said:” Know, we have 4 ticket but this group just 3 people, I think we can invite 1 person to go with us too.”

Lion say:” Yes, ok so I will choose Jack.”

Everyone say OK.

I say:” So I think we go to Japan because it have many think to play and the place is really beautiful>”

Everyone is agree with this place to go. Jason say:” Oh yeah, let prepare some thing for this trippppppppp.”

2 days later we go to Japan, it really cool and bustle. we go to many place to at and plays. It has a lot of fun game like Kendama, Daruma Otoshi and more game too.

I said:” Hey guys, do you want to eat sushi.”

Lion and Jason say:” Yes yes yes I love sushi.”

In sushi it has egg, rice, cucumber and outside is seaweed.

Jason say with the hungry face:” Oh my god, I so hungry, why does the food take so long to come out?”

Lion said:” Hahaaa you need to wait because it a lof of people go first us.”

Jason said with the sad face:” Oh no, I think we need to change shop.”

I and Lion laugh a lot, 5 minutes later staff is bring food to my table. This is my interesting trip that I go with my friends. I wish I have another trip like THIS TRIP.

Homework

dauminhhoang412 — 2024-01-02 15:29:42 UTC

Finish your work of “revisit your past writing”, you can rewrite the middle or ending of this past story using tips from today’s class.

Deadline: 12h00 09/01/2024.

Minh

2024-01-08 12:55:53 UTC

At the future when the AI robots and technology have improve very much. When there's a crazy inventor who made very good invent but to do bad thing. He invent a robot dog who always tell him when the police is coming because he made illegal invent so he is wanted. But he made a lot of crazy thing to safe him from being captured for example: a phone that could do anything or a flying ball which can used to make us a shield and because those invents are too dangerous so the world wanted to capture him because of the illegal invent. But he always impossible to catch because he has the super glove which fire laser that he can fly away or attack people and the super cube which seems small but can captured all people inside. But the world made a mistake hunting him because he just want to invent good thing so that the world can get better and better because. The robot dog can prevent you from being bullying or being in dangerous. The phone can protect yourself the cube is used for the world to always live in peace. Luckily he forgive them and then the world live peacefully forever.

Nam Phuong

naoconydoiten933 — 2024-01-09 11:47:33 UTC

Once upon a time, in a beautiful world, there was always a season of pleasant scents that everyone loved. It is the kingdom of cupcakes. The very beautiful cupcakes residents always dress up in gorgeous outfits every time they go out. That beautiful kingdom was ruled by a wise king. Their king is the most beautiful and largest cake of all. The King wears a red shirt and a blue outer cape with golden spots creating a splendid cake. On a special day, all the residents of the kingdom raised a glass to congratulate their king on having a beautiful cupcake princess. Suddenly, an uninvited guest ruined the originally joyful atmosphere of the party, a black dragon flew in and took the little princess from the king's hand. The whole kingdom was stunned by the dragon and they could do nothing but watch because it happened so fast. The king panicked at the party and ordered his soldiers to recapture the dragon to rescue their princess. But the arrows couldn't penetrate the dragon's thick layer and they couldn't save the princess. That night, the king slept restlessly and he called a meeting with his advisors. Suddenly, he received a letter, the content was about the princess's situation and as he guessed the writer was the black dragon. After knowing that his daughter was safe, he felt a little calmer but still full of anxiety. He promised that whoever could bring the princess back would be rewarded. After many years, he finally met his daughter again thanks to a talented magician who killed that dragon. From then on the kingdom was happy again and they celebrated loudly to welcome their princess back.

Homework:

dauminhhoang412 — 2024-01-09 15:46:43 UTC

Choose your favorite images of a play from the Internet and describe what is happening in these images (Where is the story taking place? How many characters does it have? What is the context? As many details as possible.)

Deadline: 12h00 16/01/2024

Nam Phuong

naoconydoiten933 — 2024-01-11 09:04:23 UTC

The Cinderella play is very famous because every child loves the beautiful princess with a white dress. This play is about an honest girl who lives with her father. On a special day, Cinderella met her stepmother cause her mother passed away when she was very young. Her stepmother has two daughters they are Cinderella's sisters. After her father got married a few years later, he passed away so Cinderella lives with her stepmother. Her mother and the two sisters hate her because she is beautiful and honest so everyone loves her a lot. When her father passed away, she had no one to rely on, so her hard days continued to sink into darkness. You have to get up early and work hard to fetch water, then cook rice and wash all the clothes in the house. And yet, her stepmother only let her eat leftovers, wear old, tattered clothes, and sleep on a shabby bed in a dark attic. One day, the king held a festival to choose a wife for the prince and invited all the girls of marriageable age to attend. Hearing this news, Cinderella was very excited and wanted to attend the festival like many girls in the area. But her mother said that she needed to finish the job that her stepmother wanted her to do. At that time, Cinderella could only feel pity and burst into tears right in the cold house. Suddenly there was a flash of light and a fairy appeared to erase all the sadness in her heart. She began to transform a pumpkin in the garden into a carriage, two mice into two handsome horses, and a sparrow into a driver. Finally, she cast a spell to make Cinderella become a beautiful princess wearing a sparkling dress. While the prince was bored at the party, he began to see Cinderella and was attracted at first sight. The prince walked towards her, asked her questions, and invited her to dance to romantic music. While passionately dancing together, she began to notice the clock was approaching midnight. At that time, Cinderella remembered the fairy's advice to return before midnight, she hurriedly ran away and dropped the glass shoe at the bottom of the stairs. As for the prince, to find the girl of his dreams, he allowed all the young girls to try on shoes. But for nearly a month, I couldn't find anyone. When Cinderella saw the prince holding the shoe, she was happy that he had finally appeared. Even though her stepmother and younger siblings prevented her, Cinderella was still lucky enough to try on shoes, thanks to which the prince found his future wife. After that, the two returned to the palace and lived happily ever after.

2024-01-15 13:31:47 UTC

This is a picture of a play. It's at a cold place, maybe it's in a snow castle because snow is falling everywhere, behind them is a ice stair so I think they can control ice and snow. There are 2 people, one of them is wearing a blue snowy dress the other is wearing a blue dress with a red coat but they don't seem to be cold. It looks like they are having a sad conversation because one of them is turning her back to the other or they could be sad at the other too. How about you, what can you see in this picture.

Tiff

2024-01-16 11:59:56 UTC

I don’t like any drama, so I will about the story name “ The New Year Tree”. In this story it just have 3 main characters. The devils, people and Buddle. The context in this story is in the hot day, it has many people make food for the devils.

Once upon a time, the country was taken over by the devils. People had to surrender their food and share their land with devils. So, when they are grow corn, the devils say:

“ You guys need to give me top and roots.”

So they give top and roots for devils and they get stem.

But the devils say they get all, the people were hungry. Buddle felf sympathy for everyone. He help them to fight off cruel femons and take back their land.

The devils was pushed into the sea, but still ask people on Lunar New year to let them visit ancestors for 2-3 days.

Homework

dauminhhoang412 — 2024-01-16 16:24:08 UTC

Finish your work of “Publishing your own book” (Story/Book title/Book description)

Deadline: 12h00 23/01/2024

The scariest world

2024-01-22 13:32:42 UTC

Anybody who live a bad life will revive in this world. It's the scariest world everything will try to scare you, even the thing such as knife or scissors try to attack you but they won't kill you, they will make you hurt and live a super hurt life, .... How can we escape from this world? Read this book to find out

Tiff

2024-01-23 03:46:55 UTC

Nam Phuong

naoconydoiten933 — 2024-01-23 10:37:14 UTC

Homework:

dauminhhoang412 — 2024-01-23 17:50:06 UTC

Write any paragraph for your book that you like, based on the teacher’s comments at the end of class.

Deadline: 12h00 30/01/2024

Chapter 2 : Realizing

2024-01-28 13:15:46 UTC

Then one day, another soul reaper comes and kill other people just like him too, at first he's just a little suprised but then he started realizing that this is mean less, he must get back his soul and be a normal human then he start killing himself and he had success. After that, he revive in a baby body and started a normal children's life. But, where will he go when he died, will he become a soul reaper again, let's find out in chapter 3.

Nam Phuong_chapter 1

naoconydoiten933 — 2024-01-30 04:28:08 UTC