https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi PRAISE and POLISH en-us 2018-02-12 13:41:27 UTC 2026-01-25 15:11:12 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230579991 Thank you facing towards the audience while speaking clearly, great job
Don’t ever degrade your own work, it’s fantastic and you should surround your work (especially when presenting) with a confident and strong persona.]]> 2018-02-12 13:55:02 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230579991 https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580171 Your story is super cute! It had a great storyline and it definitely would have been good for kids! 
Just go more in depth about why you wrote it maybe. 
Ps. Your drawings are cute. ]]> 2018-02-12 13:55:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580171 https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580212 I really like the emotion you put into reading the story. I also liked the message you were trying to tell kids. I think it's very important that people know about mental illnesses. I thought you told the message in a very good way and I really liked the story. Maybe making more eye contact and speaking a bit louder could help.]]> 2018-02-12 13:55:23 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580212 https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580288 I really liked the topic of the book! Her voice was very clear but she could've spoken just a tad bit louder ]]> 2018-02-12 13:55:32 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580288 https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580332 Praise 
- Love the book idea 
- Nice story line 
- Funny story line 
- Very Creative 
- Very kid friendly
Suggestion
- Speak a little louder and with more energy 

]]> 2018-02-12 13:55:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580332 https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580392 Praise: message is important and well-presented. Characters are reasonable. Issues are real and definitely plausible, and their facets, effects, and resolutions were real and plausible as well.

Polish: perhaps the backgrounds of the pictures could be filled in, rather than being just white. Try not angling the pages towards yourself as much.]]> 2018-02-12 13:55:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580392 https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580411 Praise: Your voice is loud and crisp. 
I liked how you tried to draw as best as possible even if you couldn’t draw very well.
Suggestion: Look more at the audience when you read]]> 2018-02-12 13:55:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580411 https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580424 Praise:  nice voice although it was more quiet than others it was a clear and concise voice.

Polish: you should look at the audience more while reading instead of just looking directly at the paper.

]]> 2018-02-12 13:55:46 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580424 https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580434 + your drawings are actually pretty good, and I really liked the way you drew their faces
+great idea for your book
-more color? idk there really isn’t anything bad about it]]> 2018-02-12 13:55:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580434 https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580497 Praise: it was entertaining 
Suggestion: speak a little louder

]]> 2018-02-12 13:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580497 https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580575 Praise:
- You speak to the audience pretty well
- I like the effort that you put into your children's book
Suggestion: 
- Maybe make a little more interaction with your audience, or have the book on the screen for people to see it a little bit more easily]]> 2018-02-12 13:56:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580575 https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580592 Angela was alot  louder than I expected and she projected her voice well. I don't have a negative she did everything well. ]]> 2018-02-12 13:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580592 johnspra000 https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580656 Great drawings and next time just speak a little louder but great book:)]]> 2018-02-12 13:56:13 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580656 https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580657 Praise: Good speaking voice, even when looking away from the audience

Polish: You could have made the “book” more of a book, you know, with a spine]]> 2018-02-12 13:56:13 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580657 https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580857 The drawings and creativity are different and unique and this project was well thought out]]> 2018-02-12 13:56:29 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580857 https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580880 Praise:Good story telling

Polish: Speak a bit louder but over all great]]> 2018-02-12 13:56:32 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230580880 https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230582269 Man, Jonny is mean af but I like your plot. It’s very detailed but a louder voice would of made your presentation even better]]> 2018-02-12 13:59:06 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/v8oye4zgeehi/wish/230582269