https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka Made with ♥ en-us 2021-10-27 02:15:41 UTC 2021-10-29 05:56:55 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1846871717 I referenced every quote correctly. ]]> 2021-10-27 02:18:23 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1846871717 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1846873276 I believe I will do well in this assessment because I listened in class, sent a draft to my teacher, and went to English Help after school.]]> 2021-10-27 02:19:01 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1846873276 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1846875023 I need to practise identifying and analysing a broader range of conventions. ]]> 2021-10-27 02:19:43 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1846875023 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853258660 I feel I did relatively well in this assesment because I made my essay comprehensive, read Marxist theory beforehand, and checked early forms of my essay with my teacher.]]> 2021-10-29 05:45:39 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853258660 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853258728 I think I did alright, because I prepped a week before, but had other assessments at the time - so I couldn't fully devote all my time to writing it. Jen]]> 2021-10-29 05:45:43 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853258728 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259009 2021-10-29 05:46:00 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259009 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259383 I believe I will do okay in this essay. I was prepaid for the essay, and understood the task ]]> 2021-10-29 05:46:20 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259383 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259443 I think I will do alright in this assessment as I did prepare well and also put quite a bit of effort into it, but it still properly wasn't my best essay]]> 2021-10-29 05:46:25 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259443 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259594 i believe that i wont perform very well because it was rushed, i have done well in the past but there wasnt enough effort put in to it ]]> 2021-10-29 05:46:30 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259594 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259623 I think I did decent in this essay because I spent a lot of time working on it, researching and editing afterwards. jorja]]> 2021-10-29 05:46:31 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259623 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259740 2021-10-29 05:46:38 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259740 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259813 i was good at using examples from the text and finding meaning in dialo and different events that occurred]]> 2021-10-29 05:46:41 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259813 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259910 I believe I did well because I worked very hard on my work and took the time to look over it. ]]> 2021-10-29 05:46:46 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259910 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259932 I think I will get a solid 75% as I put in the effort and it's relatively the same as my past performances and assessments]]> 2021-10-29 05:46:47 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853259932 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853260107 I hope i did well in the essay as i put a reasonable amount of time in, and emailed a copy to mrs den hann to check before handing it in.]]> 2021-10-29 05:46:57 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853260107 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853260173 i think that i did okay in the essay, but I'm not sure that i included enough critical reading quotes. and also i could've prepared earlier.]]> 2021-10-29 05:47:01 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853260173 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853260193 i think i did alright becuase i did it to the best of my ability and prepared enough]]> 2021-10-29 05:47:02 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853260193 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853260637 I think I would have done relatively well, because I spent time on it, and listened to my teachers advice.]]> 2021-10-29 05:47:23 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853260637 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853260901 I think I did fine in this bc I started early and did it in time Stella]]> 2021-10-29 05:47:37 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853260901 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853261043 I was good at explaining my examples and quotes, and I feel like I elaborated my argument well]]> 2021-10-29 05:47:44 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853261043 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853261155 I think I will do alright in this assessment because I prepared a lot for it, however I may lose marks because I exceeded the word limit.]]> 2021-10-29 05:47:50 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853261155 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853261485 I believe that I will perform well as I prepared in class and at home for the assessment and I put effort and time into it.]]> 2021-10-29 05:48:05 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853261485 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853261806 i think i did alright however i have done very well it past assessments, so hopefully i wont be too disappointed. i wish i spent more time on it

]]> 2021-10-29 05:48:23 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853261806 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853261937 I could've used a few more quotes ]]> 2021-10-29 05:48:30 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853261937 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853261965 I used a lot of scholarly references in my work, and a lot of evidence to support my ideas. jorja

]]> 2021-10-29 05:48:31 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853261965 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853262063 I think I’ll do alright, I listened and wrote some plans, thought I expressed my ideas pretty well, somewhere in the 70s]]> 2021-10-29 05:48:36 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853262063 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853262518 I think that I did alright in the assessment because I spent a long time on it and prepared a lot. I usually do well in essays so I hope I did good. Hannah]]> 2021-10-29 05:49:00 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853262518 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853262666 I wrote my paragraphs well and used lots of different terminology. jen

]]> 2021-10-29 05:49:07 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853262666 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853262852 I feel I did ok, nothing outstanding or terrible probably somewhere in the middle. I could have definately put in more time and effort into my essay]]> 2021-10-29 05:49:15 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853262852 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853262887 I demonstrated my understanding of the novel and the reading lens and provided evidence.]]> 2021-10-29 05:49:17 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853262887 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853263041 to maybe manage my time more and procrastinate less. jorja

]]> 2021-10-29 05:49:24 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853263041 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853264182 next time I need to use a range of quotes - meaning critical readings and quotes from the book. jen]]> 2021-10-29 05:50:19 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853264182 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853265569 I went into detail and did lots of research]]> 2021-10-29 05:51:32 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853265569 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853266329 2021-10-29 05:52:06 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853266329 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853266383 I think I used my sources and quotes really well and integrated them into sentences. 
Sarah]]> 2021-10-29 05:52:09 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853266383 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853266601 time management

]]> 2021-10-29 05:52:20 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853266601 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853266663 most of it. make a good point and have good structure ]]> 2021-10-29 05:52:22 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853266663 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853266699 Used effective essay form]]> 2021-10-29 05:52:24 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853266699 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853266961 meanignful quotes]]> 2021-10-29 05:52:38 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853266961 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853267081 I needed to link my ideas about the reading lens back to the text a bit better and put brackets around my references and quote makers. Daniel]]> 2021-10-29 05:52:43 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853267081 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853267445 the paragraphs about disempowerment were good ]]> 2021-10-29 05:52:58 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853267445 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853267635 I had a really good understanding of my lens and was able to integrate old and new ideas into the essay]]> 2021-10-29 05:53:08 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853267635 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853267727 Next time I should make sure I structure my essay better ]]> 2021-10-29 05:53:11 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853267727 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853267801 2021-10-29 05:53:14 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853267801 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853267866 work on my teel structure more and quote more things

]]> 2021-10-29 05:53:17 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853267866 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853267891 I did a different approach to my thesis which was clear and referred back to it throughout my essay]]> 2021-10-29 05:53:18 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853267891 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853268397 Topic sentences]]> 2021-10-29 05:53:40 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853268397 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853268399 I think I should've have focused on utilising the language techniques better and created a more in depth argument 
sarah]]> 2021-10-29 05:53:40 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853268399 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853268466 I did lots of research, and included evidence.]]> 2021-10-29 05:53:44 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853268466 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853268516 I quoted sources well and used good structure.]]> 2021-10-29 05:53:46 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853268516 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853268970 Establishing a better link ]]> 2021-10-29 05:54:08 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853268970 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853268990 I can improve how I engage with the question]]> 2021-10-29 05:54:09 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853268990 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853269874 I feel I was good at communicating my argument to the reader and the form of my essay. ]]> 2021-10-29 05:54:51 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853269874 https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853272281 I could improve making my essays more complex and better grammar and punctuation]]> 2021-10-29 05:56:55 UTC https://padlet.com/briannagray2/v8ipsvkq5u0jw1ka/wish/1853272281