P1 Summative Revisions by Scott Santos https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep Made with swagger en-us 2021-05-10 17:09:18 UTC 2025-10-18 15:55:34 UTC hello@padlet.com scottsantos07 https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510168797 1. How is your approach and or thinking about the problem different than your partners?
2. What did you learn from your revision partner?What revisions did you make to your work today and why?What do you now understand about the problem that you didn’t understand before?What are you still confused about?]]> 2021-05-10 17:09:18 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510168797 scottsantos07 https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510168803 2021-05-10 17:09:18 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510168803 scottsantos07 https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510168805 2021-05-10 17:09:18 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510168805 scottsantos07 https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510168820 2021-05-10 17:09:18 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510168820 scottsantos07 https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510799091 2021-05-10 19:21:28 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510799091 I understand that I have to revise and improve my grade. angela_castillopreciado https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510991277 2021-05-10 20:17:32 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510991277 emiliano_lopez1 https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510991661 We will work to revise and improve our quarter 4 final. We will work together with others in order to get it done]]> 2021-05-10 20:17:40 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510991661 I do not have any questions. I understand that we are going to revise our work that we submitted last module because it is now going to be graded on the content, not just if we tuned it in. allison_suydam https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510991979 2021-05-10 20:17:47 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510991979 yubi_aguayo https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510992661 I understand that we'll compare our previous work with examples to help us revise and turn in our work.]]> 2021-05-10 20:18:00 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510992661 eduardo_najera https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510993818 I understand that this Mini-module will be revisions for the summative we did last module

]]> 2021-05-10 20:18:21 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510993818 dylan_lostaunau https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510993905 will our first draft summative be graded if we dont submit something for the revision]]> 2021-05-10 20:18:23 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510993905 danna_guzman https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510995964 So if after revising and working on our final draft, we STILL don't get the grade we want, can we revise again?]]> 2021-05-10 20:19:04 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510995964 raphael_villalobos https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510997245 I have to raise my grade as much as possible ]]> 2021-05-10 20:19:27 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1510997245 i understand I have to make revisions to get the grade i want or to raise my grade merlem_martinezruiz https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511003294 2021-05-10 20:21:28 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511003294 allison_suydam https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511029609 this example is very specific and explains the answer thoroughly.]]> 2021-05-10 20:30:38 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511029609 yubi_aguayo https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511030710 I think that something that makes this a model solution is the graph, since the waves are well shown, has the two pink lines in the right spot and the number]]> 2021-05-10 20:31:00 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511030710 danna_guzman https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511031960 It has claim, evidence and reasoning.]]> 2021-05-10 20:31:29 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511031960 deonte_jones1 https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511032689 includes mathematical vocabulary to describe what is what.]]> 2021-05-10 20:31:44 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511032689 xiomara_sainzgutierrez https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511036812 It includes good explanation with the numbers and details about the waves and the frequency ]]> 2021-05-10 20:33:12 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511036812 eduardo_najera https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511038203 they explain all of their steps and show all of the numbers they got leading up to the answer.]]> 2021-05-10 20:33:41 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511038203 has a good explanation and it gives a a lot of info. angela_castillopreciado https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511040859 2021-05-10 20:34:31 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511040859 emiliano_lopez1 https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511040969 The solution is well explained and can be clearly understood. Their knowledge is conveyed through their work. ]]> 2021-05-10 20:34:33 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511040969 dylan_lostaunau https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511042747 a lot of writing, not just a math problem, it explains what the math means ]]> 2021-05-10 20:35:08 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511042747 This looks like something I would write.. danna_guzman https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511054620 I guess the student should describe  their thought process and the work they did in order to get the information. They could also include definitions for the terms they're using, and why or how they use an equation to get the answer they provided.]]> 2021-05-10 20:39:18 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511054620 allison_suydam https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511054675 the lines on the graph are really close together and it's hard to tell which part the person is talking about. ]]> 2021-05-10 20:39:19 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511054675 dylan_lostaunau https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511060685 doesn't give fundamental frequency of the sound]]> 2021-05-10 20:41:28 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511060685 shows numbers but doesn't give enough information. angela_castillopreciado https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511062681 2021-05-10 20:42:11 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511062681 emiliano_lopez1 https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511063500 They could give a bit more information about the specific wave function. ]]> 2021-05-10 20:42:27 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1511063500 allison_suydam https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1518716388 I feel like me and my partner have a very similar approach to our thinking. We both are very straightforward with our answers. There are places in my work that need lengthier explanations however I have always understand the work. The only issue I face is making sure my answers are very specific and answer the entire question. ]]> 2021-05-12 18:23:23 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1518716388 yubi_aguayo https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1518719117 I thik my partner and I did like what the questions were asking and didn't necessarily choose to add more to our responses than what was asked for. I learned from my partner to find a way to make my graph better]]> 2021-05-12 18:24:05 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1518719117 mia_przybus https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1520175372 I understand that we need to revise our work and turn it in for an AK grade.]]> 2021-05-13 05:08:27 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1520175372 mia_przybus https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1520176566 It has a really detailed explanation with specific units, a claim, evidence, and reasoning.]]> 2021-05-13 05:09:13 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1520176566 mia_przybus https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1520178081 This answer gives a description of what the graph shows. However, it doesn't explain what the numbers, periods, or frequencies mean in the context of the problem (overall less detailed response).]]> 2021-05-13 05:10:10 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1520178081 Here are two exemplar responses to question #3 on the summative assessment scottsantos07 https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1521652300 Please use the rubric to grade both and explain your thought process while grading. Then compare/contrast the two responses with each other below]]> 2021-05-13 16:12:47 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1521652300 danna_guzman https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1522302744 This is difficult because neither of them show evidence from the original waves, so I can't tell if they're accurate or not. However they both provide an equation so they both got at least a 2.]]> 2021-05-13 18:41:12 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1522302744 allison_suydam https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1522317618 There is no original wave in both of their answers, only the replicated wave in Desmos. However the second one does only show half of the graph so I wouldn't give these very high scores, definitely not a 4. The second one does show the students thought process in a clearer way though. ]]> 2021-05-13 18:45:18 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1522317618 dylan_lostaunau https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1522329909 the second one doesnt have the period ]]> 2021-05-13 18:48:48 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1522329909 Big Ideas Packet (Idea #9) scottsantos07 https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1532730788 2021-05-17 18:47:59 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1532730788 Video Support/Review scottsantos07 https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1532732477 2021-05-17 18:48:25 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1532732477 Grading Rubric scottsantos07 https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1532733054 Try grading yourself!]]> 2021-05-17 18:48:33 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1532733054 scottsantos07 https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1532741755 2021-05-17 18:50:49 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1532741755 My trigonometric formula first draft was not correct, and my partner helped me see this. They were able to help me correct my formula by showing me the correct "cookie cutter" formula alejandro_amayazavala https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1537330313 2021-05-18 19:52:26 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1537330313 They don't show the original wave, only their second Desmos wave. The process is shown, but only one of the Desmos graph can be clearly seen, while the one all the way at the bottom is cut off. I would not give this a high score because of the screenshot being cut off. alejandro_amayazavala https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1537352328 2021-05-18 19:59:30 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1537352328 mia_przybus https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1538007351 Both answers have no mention of reference to the original soundwave. The second option has a more detailed response and would get the higher grade.]]> 2021-05-19 01:41:51 UTC https://padlet.com/scottsantos07/v641nu3hk4p7ocep/wish/1538007351