https://padlet.com/27rricher/v57yp9if3fgicasa I hope you enjoyed my writing piece! Please leave some kind and helpful comments. en-us 2021-01-12 16:58:48 UTC 2021-02-04 19:34:58 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f605.png 27czerilli https://padlet.com/27rricher/v57yp9if3fgicasa/wish/1142208808 Hey Ryder! I just got done reading your story about your broken wrist.  It is a story that I can 110% relate to.  I really appreciated the fact that you used a lot of challenging words.   In fact, there were some words that I had to even look up because I didn't know the meaning of them!  For example, discombobulated and exorcists were some tough ones! I thought that was a really good challenge.  I really admire your final paragraph about your lesson learned. I also tend to agree that it shouldn't matter what anyone thinks of you and I think that it was great that you put that into your writing!  Maybe going forward for your next piece of writing, maybe you could add a little bit more dialogue in between characters. I really enjoyed reading your story about your broken arm because I too broke my nose when I was in second grade and can totally relate!

]]> 2021-01-29 19:29:43 UTC https://padlet.com/27rricher/v57yp9if3fgicasa/wish/1142208808 https://padlet.com/27rricher/v57yp9if3fgicasa/wish/1164768297 Hey Ryder! Your snapshot was full of so many details that pulled me in and made me feel like I was right there. I loved the part where you wrote “my wrist is as discombobulated as an abstract art painting”.  I could see how your rist was twisted in every which way. Another part that caught my eye was your hook. I could clearly imagine the day. I can see the moment that you reached up to the ball and unfortunately not land very pleasantly. Something that could have a little help with is clearing up the order in which things happened . It was a little hard to understand when something was happening. Just a p.s. it would be a little easier to read if you change the font, great job overall!]]> 2021-02-04 16:48:00 UTC https://padlet.com/27rricher/v57yp9if3fgicasa/wish/1164768297