Question Three - Structure by Mr Moore https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree To begin to identify basic structural features. en-us 2016-10-17 07:36:08 UTC 2025-10-02 16:39:31 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Dartstarget.png Mr Moore mmoore_127 https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131054205 Who is telling the story? 

What perspective is it told from?

The story is being told by ___________.

They use a _______person narrative. 

The effect of this is _____________.

]]> 2016-10-17 07:41:50 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131054205 Daniaal https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131062673
the story is being told by first person because someone is writing the story. 
They use a  first person that is narrative because its a story.
the effect of this is the reader telling us to read the story because its your mind gets interested into this. ]]> 2016-10-17 08:41:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131062673 Antonio and Jp https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131062939
It is around 7pm Christmas eve . The time of day is late evening. This grabs the readers interest because it sets the mood toward the intruder and how the atmosphere. "it was lete evening  by the time I returned from the shop tired.]]> 2016-10-17 08:43:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131062939 Aneta and Otilia https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131063031
Q2) the characters that the reader meets are the intruder and the person whose home we are in. 
they are introduced as mysterious because we don't know who they are, we don't know their names, we don't know if they are a girl or a boy. this grabs the readers interest because it is mysterious and it makes you keep reading so you find out more. Could the intruder have a gun? It makes the scene dangerous because we don't know what might happen.




]]> 2016-10-17 08:43:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131063031 dana + Natasha https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131063088
the story is being told by an unknown narrator. we know this because it does not tell the reader the name of the person that wrote
 the story. They use a first person narrative so that the reader feels as if the person in this extract is there. 

]]> 2016-10-17 08:44:17 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131063088 Alex and ameer https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131063167 the story is being told by a unknown narrator ]]> 2016-10-17 08:44:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131063167 Andrei and Isaac https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131063169 the story is being told by an unknown narrator.

They use a first person narrative

the effect of this is that we feel like we are there with the narrator.

The  narrator is the main character and the intruder is another character.

The intruder is introduced when the main character goes home. This make us feel scared for the main character.

This grabs the reader's interest because we want to know more about the intruder.


The time  of  day is late evening on Christmas Eve.

This grabs the reader's interest because the phrases " Christmas eve " he tells us that probably santa claus because is Christmas.



]]> 2016-10-17 08:44:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131063169 https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131063262 The characters that the reader meets are the intruder and the unknown narrator. The narrator is introduced by when it says "I" and the intruder is introduced when it says "someone is upstairs". This grabs the readers interest because it makes the reader want to know what is going to happen next and they want to know who is in the house. It is also interesting because the narrator leaves the story on a cliff hanger.]]> 2016-10-17 08:45:41 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131063262 Daniaal https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131064232 the characters we meet are the women and the intruder.I know this because the extract says my hands began to shake. this shows its a woman because is says my heart began to beat wildly inside my chest.  also there is an intruder in the house upstairs and left the doors opened. the use of the word "intruder" makes me interested into reading this extract because when it is talking about an intruder then it is saying there is a thief inside the woman's house this grabs the interest of the reader because the intruder broke into the house]]> 2016-10-17 08:51:42 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131064232 Mr Moore mmoore_127 https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131064260 Who is here?

What character(s) have I met?

How were they introduced?

The characters that the reader meets are _____________.

They are introduced ____________. 

This grabs the reader’s interest because __________.

]]> 2016-10-17 08:51:49 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131064260 Ameer and Alex https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131064415 the people in this extract are the intruder and narrator. the extract is written in first person, the intruder is introduced at the end ]]> 2016-10-17 08:52:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131064415 dana +natasha https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131064435 the characters that the reader meets are the narrator and the intruder. The narrator is introduced as the first person because it uses "I". The intruder is upstairs and is introduced by the narrator - "Someone was upstairs" this grabs the readers interest because they want to see who it is.

]]> 2016-10-17 08:52:58 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131064435 Mr Moore mmoore_127 https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131066530 What time is it?

The time of day is  ___________ on __________ Eve.

This grabs the reader’s interest because __________.

]]> 2016-10-17 09:05:59 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131066530 aneta and otilia https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131066557 the time of the day is late on Christmas Eve, this grabs the readers interest because it could be Santa Claus because it is the night before Christmas so he could be delivering presents. This would change the scene and make it exciting and interesting. ]]> 2016-10-17 09:06:11 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131066557 wasee https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131066617 the time of day is late evening on Christmas eve. this grabs the readers interest because its late evening and when she comes home she or he gets scared because someone is upstairs and she can't get help because its night time. also it could be Santa clause trying to come down in the chimney because he might be delivering prsents.]]> 2016-10-17 09:06:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131066617 Jess and Conor https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131066683 The time of day is late evening on Christmas eve. This grabs the interest of the reader because as it is late evening it sets a scary atmosphere for the reader as i]]> 2016-10-17 09:07:09 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131066683 Alex n Ameer https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131066755 the time of day is evening on the Christmas eve, this grabs
 the readers interests ]]> 2016-10-17 09:07:38 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131066755 Jean Paul https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131398356 It is  a late evening in Christmas eve. This grabs the readers interest because it sets the mood and the atmosphere in the text. The Narrator does this by using Language features such as. The story is located in two places shops and a house. This is conveying settings to one place to another. This grabs the readers interest because it can be sense of movement and action. This is an unexpected change in the story because some story's usually stay in one location. ]]> 2016-10-18 09:26:58 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131398356 antonio https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131398535 the time of the day is the late evening on the Christmas eve day. it grabs the reader interest because as it is late evening so make a scary atmosphere.]]> 2016-10-18 09:28:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131398535 Andrei https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131398671 it is late Christmas eve this grabs the readers interest because as it late evening it sets a scary atmosphere.
the place is at home and after that comes an intruder in his house and he is scared that the door opens and after it he enters In one dream the dream would be true to change for the good of Christmas

]]> 2016-10-18 09:28:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131398671 Daniaal mohammed https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131398875  its  a late Christmas evening  on Christmas eve.  this grabs the readers interest because this extract has been placed in a scary atmosphere by an intruder that breaks inside.  this makes it interesting because the woman has just come back from shopping and the door was opened like a jar. the woman was frightened because it is night time and she has just come back from shopping with a happy face but all of a sudden the woman's heart began beating wildly which makes her think there might be a killer on the loose and has found her area.]]> 2016-10-18 09:30:19 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131398875 Ameer https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131398963 The time of day is a late evening  on a Christmas  Eve.

This grabs the reader’s interest because its is late at night and it makes the atmosphere scary.
]]> 2016-10-18 09:30:50 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131398963 https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131399124 it was late evening in Christmas day.

it grabs the readers inters because it set a scary atmosphere. 

1. The story is located at home and it says it here "half way  to the path that I noticed the front door was ajar" 
it also located in the streets and ]]> 2016-10-18 09:31:57 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131399124 waseem https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131399207 the time of day is late evening on Christmas eve. 
this grabs the interest of reader because its night time and its cold and when the unknown person comes home the door was already open "ajar" this suggest someone is in side the house it could be a intruder in the house.]]> 2016-10-18 09:32:35 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131399207 Jess https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131399516 The time of day is late evening on Christmas eve. This grabs the interest of the reader because as it is late evening it sets a scary atmosphere for the reader as it would be a dark setting which makes it more tense. Also, the reader doesn't know who is in the house and is curious to find out who it is.]]> 2016-10-18 09:34:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131399516 dana https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131399553  The narrator introduces the unknown character as an intruder in his house. For example "There was a intruder in my house". This creates a scary atmosphere because if the intruder is unknown therefore this could result to a negative happening because the intruder could steal or kill someone as they were not welcome in the house. Also the door was "ajar" this suggests that the intruder broke in to his house un welcome.  
This intrigues the reader because they would be wondering what this person is doing in the house and could this result to bad ending as it is left on a cliff hanger "I made for the stairs..." ]]> 2016-10-18 09:34:41 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131399553 aneta and otilia https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131399644 the time of the day is late on Christmas Eve, this grabs the readers interest because it could be Santa Claus because it is the night before Christmas so he could be delivering presents. This would change the scene and make it exciting and interesting because it would change the mood from a negative setting to a positive setting. If it isn't Fr Christmas it might not be an intruder it could be a friend who is going to surprise him or prank him for fun. ]]> 2016-10-18 09:35:28 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131399644 Natasha https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400221 the time of day is late because it mentions "it was late evening" on Christmas eve this grabs the reader interest by making the atmosphere scary because its late and you wouldn't expect an intruder so late in your home, it is night time to create an atmosphere.]]> 2016-10-18 09:39:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400221 MR MOORE mmoore_127 https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400508 What’s the place, location/setting?

How do I find out? Why is this an unexpected change in the story?

The story is located in ___________.

This grabs the reader’s interest because __________.

]]> 2016-10-18 09:41:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400508 ⓌⒶⓈⒺⒺⓂ https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400526
the story is located in a big house and a shop also this house could be old and scary house. this grabs the readers interest because  the house is scary and he or she live alone I know this because when she or he comes back home the door was "ajar" the door was open.

]]> 2016-10-18 09:41:10 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400526 Daniaal Mohammed https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400539 the story is located in a rich house because its Christmas eve and there are some thieves  that goes inside somebody house and start to steal some Christmas presents/ money.  also this is located at night time because at night time there is always a thieve by a lot of locations. this grabs the readers intension because this is set at night time and also its Christmas time which makes the extract interesting to get the reader to read this.]]> 2016-10-18 09:41:19 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400539 CONNOR NEW https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400605 It starts with the narrator travelling home from the shops, "it was late evening by the time I returned from the shops."  The story then moves to the narrator's house, "it wasn't until I was halfway up the path that I noticed the front door was ajar."  This is surprising because seeing the door already open must have been strange because it should be locked.

As the reader, this made me want to know more about the intruder and what they were doing in the house.  My first thought was that it was a thief.


]]> 2016-10-18 09:41:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400605 Aneta and Otilia https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400608 The story is located in a house where the door has been left open. This changes the atmosphere because it starts off by saying its Christmas Eve so its supposed to be happy, but then it changes to a terrifying scene because you don't know who is in their house. ]]> 2016-10-18 09:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400608 Mr MOORE mmoore_127 https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400611 2016-10-18 09:41:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400611 Mr MOORE mmoore_127 https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400617 What’s the place, location/setting?

How do I find out? Why is this an unexpected change in the story?

The story is located in ___________.

This grabs the reader’s interest because __________.

]]> 2016-10-18 09:41:50 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400617 Ameer https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400620 The story is located from being in the shops then to the house.

]]> 2016-10-18 09:41:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400620 Jess https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400667 The story is located at the shops to begin with to then being inside the house. This grabs the readers interest because it is a shift of emotion and atmosphere. Also, the reader is surprised because it is unexpected. ]]> 2016-10-18 09:42:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131400667 isaac https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131401021
The story is located on the street on the way home from shopping and then in the home.

This grabs the reader's interest because in his house there was an intruder and he want to know who is the person.

We do not expect there to be someone in the house at the start of the story because the narrator is just walking home from Christmas shopping. This creates a scary atmosphere because we are worried about who might be in the narrator's home.]]> 2016-10-18 09:44:10 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131401021 Antonio https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131401734
The writer grab the interest of the reader by

]]> 2016-10-18 09:49:07 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131401734 natasha https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131401779 the story is located in the shop to begin with but then to the persons home this grabs the readers attention because you want to know who the intruder is and what its doing in the persons house.]]> 2016-10-18 09:49:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131401779 MR MOORE mmoore_127 https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131402627 How does the writer grab the interest of the reader in the extract?

Use your other answers as your evidence.  

THE WRITER GRABS THE INTEREST OF THE READER BY INTRODUCING AN ANONYMOUS FIRST PERSON NARRATIVE ...
]]> 2016-10-18 09:54:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131402627 Ameer https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131402794
The writer grabs the interest of the reader by introducing anonymous first person narrative because it attracts people to find out who is the anonymous person]]> 2016-10-18 09:55:42 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131402794 natasha https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131402925 the writer grabs the interest of the reader by introducing an anonymous first person narrative because it makes you want to read more to understand who the anonymous person could be]]> 2016-10-18 09:56:28 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131402925 https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131403560 the writer grabs the interesting of the reader because it says interring words and its a scary atmosphere so it attracts the reader.]]> 2016-10-18 10:00:26 UTC https://padlet.com/mmoore_127/questionthree/wish/131403560