Topic Sentence Collaboration by Cody Swoboda https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh Share essay topics and collaborate on thesis statements and hooks en-us 2025-10-15 20:37:55 UTC 2025-10-17 13:41:09 UTC hello@padlet.com cswoboda6 https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3634435913 How to Participate

  1. Post your essay topic - Vultures or Feral Swine

  2. Help your classmates - Read other students’ topics and suggest thesis statements or hooks in the comments

  3. Build together - Use the collaborative feedback to develop strong essay foundations

Remember: A good thesis statement makes a clear argument, and a strong hook grabs the reader’s attention!

]]> 2025-10-15 20:38:04 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3634435913 Thesis and Hook Examples cswoboda6 https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635740374 Reminder: A thesis statement should clearly present your main argument or point of view on a topic. A hook sentence should grab the reader's attention.

Example Thesis: "Although vultures are often seen as pests, they play a crucial role in maintaining ecosystem balance by disposing of carcasses, thereby preventing the spread of disease."

Example Hook: "In a world without nature’s clean-up crew, the balance and health of our ecosystems would face dire consequences."]]> 2025-10-16 12:06:26 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635740374 Vultures https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635886893 2025-10-16 13:36:16 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635886893 My essay is about vultures and how they are harmful to agirculture https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635887587 2025-10-16 13:36:38 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635887587 feral swine https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635887953 2025-10-16 13:36:51 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635887953 Vultures slkaye01 https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635888324 2025-10-16 13:37:05 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635888324 vultures https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635888883 2025-10-16 13:37:21 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635888883 my essay is about Vultures https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635889352 2025-10-16 13:37:35 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635889352 Vultures raraulerson01 https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635890469 Sounds like the most fun option.

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]]> 2025-10-16 13:39:23 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635892624 vultures https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635892696 2025-10-16 13:39:26 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635892696 feral swine https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635893331 2025-10-16 13:39:45 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635893331 vultures https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635894129 2025-10-16 13:40:15 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635894129 vultures https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635894795 2025-10-16 13:40:33 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635894795 homework need to be reduce https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635895081 becuase it is causing stress to people trying to do it.

]]> 2025-10-16 13:40:43 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635895081 Vultures https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635895140 2025-10-16 13:40:45 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635895140 Vultures https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635896033 Vultures sounds interesting and could hook readers.

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]]> 2025-10-16 13:41:40 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635896814 Vultures jfmoran01 https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635897174 Because they can kill any prey they want.

]]> 2025-10-16 13:41:50 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635897174 vultures aohaddon01 https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635899031 2025-10-16 13:42:54 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635899031 the 2 week phase https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635899163 games we all know them and love them they are a key for joy or rage depending on how you play image this your mom got you a new game lets say minecraft and when you start you do everything build a massive base xp farms etc but after 2 weeks you feel empty and you stop playing due to the feeling of you did everything and thats the "2 week phase" everyone goes through this in some way even outside of games but it is mostly seen in games this 2wp (short for 2 week phase) is when you think you did everything there is to do in a game leaving much more to desired but the way to fix it take time don't rush to finish the game take time to enjoy it.

]]> 2025-10-16 13:42:57 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635899163 Feral swine mcollado02 https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635899311 2025-10-16 13:43:02 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635899311 feral swine ajdelgado01_1 https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635900098 2025-10-16 13:43:26 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635900098 Feral swine https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635901767 2025-10-16 13:44:20 UTC https://padlet.com/Mr_SClass/v4e9sfz5ou2lyjuh/wish/3635901767