Emma K. by Emma Kaufman https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC 2023-06-11 02:51:51 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png What are Human Rights? 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890178 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890178 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890179 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890179 30 Basic Human Rights 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890180 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890180 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890182 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890182 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890184 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890184 Rough Draft 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890186 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890186 Final Draft 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890187 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890187 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890190 My story will be in third person so the Narrator will be telling the story.]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890190 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890191 The setting will be like the divergent series.There are different sections for different type of people.So smart people can only talk to smart people.Athletes can only talk to Athletes.It is unjust because you could have family in another section but you can't speak to them because they aren't in the same section.]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890191 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890192 Main Character:Skylar Noor
  -loves adventures
  -sepperated from her family because she is different
  -the people who put the people into different sections take families away for DNA tests that will help families be seperated from their ow.So they put peoples DNA in other families so the children will be sepertated.

     Mason Alexander:

   -regular citezen
   -lives in the same section as Skylar
   -very very smart 
-lost his family]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890192 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890193 The world these people live in are unjust and cruel.They make separations of families because they are different.They want you to hangout with people who are just the same.But we always say opposites attract.]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890193 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890194 They face the conflict or solve it by telling the people the problem]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890194 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890195 The main character grows from at first letting things happen and not telling people what she has seen.Then as the story progresses she starts to speak up.Mason starts off with no friends at all.He is so lost in the world without his family.But he meets Skylar and they start connecting and become best friends.In the end he is no longer lost.]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890195 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890197 The most exciting moment will be when the two main charcters escape their divison/section and find their families.]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890197 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890198 I want my readers to know that you will have people tear you down but that can never stop you.Be the person you want to be and you don’t have to change because people want you to change]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890198 Due Dates 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890199 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15


]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890199 Prompt 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890200 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890200 Theo's Song 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890202 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890202 Rubric 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890203 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890203 Point of View 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890204 Theo song was in 3rd person point of view.]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890204 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890205 In theo's song their society is unjust because the government has to decide what peoples jobs are.And most of the time the jobs they get are not the ones they want.]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890205 Characters 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890206 Theo
Neema
Decider
Authorities]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890206 Conflict 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890207 The conflict is the government is assigning jobs to people they don't want. Theo is told to be a blacksmith instead of a musician.]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890207 Plot: Sequential 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890208 Event #: Theo was a new blacksmith.He was just put to that job a couple days ago.He was just taken out of the nursery pod and is now 13.
Event #:Authorities took Theo to the decider.She decided to put him as a blacksmith even though he wants to be a musician.
Event #:Theo met Neema who is also a blacksmith.They were talking about how she wanted to be a dancer and they put her in the blacksmith.
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Event #(Resolution): ]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890208 Theme 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890209 The theme in this story is to never let someone control you. That you can make your own desicions.]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890209 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890210 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. ]]> 2017-12-13 17:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/215890210 Due Dates 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/217023136 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15 (16 points)
-Plot Line (Drawn on Printer Paper): Tuesday, Dec 19 (20 points)
-Rough Draft: Friday, Dec 21 
(30 points)


]]> 2017-12-18 17:04:07 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/217023136 Plot Diagram Example 200900907 https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/217023427 Use my plot diagram as an example of what I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 17:04:56 UTC https://padlet.com/200900907/v3mrys6rfx2q/wish/217023427