https://padlet.com/lstone251/v2ylmaps607uninl en-us 2023-01-23 19:40:25 UTC 2023-01-30 04:36:32 UTC hello@padlet.com lstone251 https://padlet.com/lstone251/v2ylmaps607uninl/wish/2453819237 Welling and swelling, I bear in the tide
I am of old and young, of the foolish as much as the wise
Proud to be a hog butcher, tool maker, stacker of wheat
A man a woman and a blackbird are one
Of every hue and caste I am, of every rank and religion
Just like moons and like suns with the certainty of tides
A small part of the pantomime
A novice beginning yet experient of myriads of seasons
The blackbird whirled in the autumn winds
Cunning as a savage pitted against the wilderness
A learner with the simplest, a teacher of the thoughtfullest
Still I'll rise
Into the daybreak that's wondrously clear
I resist any thing better than my own diversity]]> 2023-01-23 19:51:29 UTC https://padlet.com/lstone251/v2ylmaps607uninl/wish/2453819237 whyrhetoric https://padlet.com/lstone251/v2ylmaps607uninl/wish/2456419764 What I like about this gathering of lines, Luci, is how you focused on all the "I" lines from the poems. Bringing them together starts to tell a really particular story about this person. I'm interested ... do you have a sense who the "I" in this poem might be?]]> 2023-01-25 16:28:12 UTC https://padlet.com/lstone251/v2ylmaps607uninl/wish/2456419764 MadisonHutter https://padlet.com/lstone251/v2ylmaps607uninl/wish/2456875677 I think you did a great job tying these 4 poems together into your own and I believe your title fits this very well. It makes it seem that the "I" in this poem could be taken as the reader themselves when they read this poem, or it could be you as the writer. ]]> 2023-01-25 22:46:46 UTC https://padlet.com/lstone251/v2ylmaps607uninl/wish/2456875677 jakebai1 https://padlet.com/lstone251/v2ylmaps607uninl/wish/2459626679 You did a fantastic job composing this splice, chose your lines really well. It reads like I am following an adventurer, and the journey is finding us instead of us finding it. We're all in on it together as we read. ]]> 2023-01-28 04:36:55 UTC https://padlet.com/lstone251/v2ylmaps607uninl/wish/2459626679 spencerhallead https://padlet.com/lstone251/v2ylmaps607uninl/wish/2460836046 As someone who literally went into the same route you did with the we are one message it is so cool too see different lines portray the same message. The novice line from section 16 was one I was going to use as well and did not. I completely missed the every caste and rank line and that ties into the message very well you did incredible. ]]> 2023-01-30 04:36:32 UTC https://padlet.com/lstone251/v2ylmaps607uninl/wish/2460836046