Glow and Grow by Lauren R Dao https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf Peer Evaluation en-us 2019-04-26 22:00:24 UTC 2019-05-05 23:10:28 UTC hello@padlet.com Lior lauren_dao https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355938929 Glow: I love how you compared your education here vs Israel. It is very insightful to see that other countries emphasize a majority of the same subjects that the US does, and then some!

Grow: Maybe just list how schools can implement innovative techniques in schools (end of presentation)

]]> 2019-05-01 18:49:36 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355938929 Keara lauren_dao https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355939260 Grow: The length of the video did go over the time limit a bit. Also, maybe add some videos or images in the presentation so that it's not just text!

Glow: Your voice tone and speed was very good! It was very clear to hear you and you used a lot of enthusiasm to keep it interesting, not boring!

]]> 2019-05-01 18:50:20 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355939260 Christopher DeSellems lauren_dao https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355939479 Grow: Does technology help people become creative in school or in their personal life? -Pertaining to your survey question- Maybe be more clear when asking the question on the survey so they know which environment you are referring to.

Glow: Your presentation was very visually appealing.  I agree that teaching has also changed due to technology. Ex) This class. We don't even have to meet, we can be taught via technology!

]]> 2019-05-01 18:50:42 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355939479 Myles Powell lauren_dao https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355939797 Glow: Maybe just reword how you said that social media is replacing the newspaper.
 This may be true for the people you interviewed, but there are still a lot of people who still read the paper daily, especially in the older generation! But I definitely can image people our age using social media more than reading the newspaper.
 Glow: I like how you used your data from your survey and I like how you tied basketball into the presentation since it is such an integral part of your life. I also like how your data included social media as one of the main technology tools, I completely agree! Thanks for sharing!

]]> 2019-05-01 18:51:19 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355939797 Nicole lauren_dao https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355939949 Grow:Elaborate more on how you used creativity to study.
 Glow: Your presentation theme was very appealing and very organized. I also like how you used graphs to show your data results instead of just telling us about them. It was nice to see a visual with it! Also, your voice tone and speed was very good. Not too fast, not too slow.
 Great presentation! ]]> 2019-05-01 18:51:38 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355939949 Joseph Papandrea lauren_dao https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355940202 Grow: Maybe talk about how creativity plays a role in your life more since that was a big part of the paper as well.  Great presentation!
Glow: I like that you take about social media in your post. It seems as though a lot of us have talked how much we use it so I like how honest you are about how much you do use it. I also like how you mentioned LinkedIn. Some people forget that LinkedIn is a social media site but I like how you brought out the positives of the site. Good points about
using technology for group work even when we cannot meet in person, I totally forgot about that and we do it all the time sometimes we take it for granted.

]]> 2019-05-01 18:52:13 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355940202 Matthew Smolen lauren_dao https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355940490 Grow: Maybe use more images in your video instead of just showing us the text of your paper in the video presentation. 
Glow: I love how you talked about social media in your post, as did I. I believe we spend too much time on it as well and I like how you said it was a negative as well. I agree that I spend too much time on it.

]]> 2019-05-01 18:52:54 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355940490 Christopher Barone lauren_dao https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355940715 Glow: I like how you used both school work examples and real world examples to show how you are creative/innovative. It was interesting to me that you were able to find out your own way to do something for accounting rather than using what your professor taught you. Very innovative!
 
Grow: I thought it was a great presentation, maybe just try to fluctuate your voice when speaking. Other than that, I don't have any critiques!

]]> 2019-05-01 18:53:19 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355940715 Patrick Cleaver lauren_dao https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355941541 Glow: I like how you included images relating to what you were talking about. It switched it up from just seeing text as a visual. It was helpful when you explained why you put the pictures in! I agree that I am not creative when it comes to my education, so that was a great point.  I love that you get to express yourself through Poetry now:)
Grow: Maybe just show some visuals from your survey instead of just telling us the data. Showing the data allows us to trust the data and allows us to compare it to other data.]]> 2019-05-01 18:55:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355941541 Edina Raisin lauren_dao https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355943551 Glow: Your voice was clear, you spoke enthusiastically and you talked at a great pace. Your presentation was very organized and flowed nicely. I like how you didn't just put the text and no pictures. Great pictures showing your screen and social media time. I wish I included that in mine.
Grow: Elaborate why you don't take risks, is it because of grading or because you don't feel comfortable doing it (etc.) It will just allow us to understand where you are coming from a little bit better.

]]> 2019-05-01 18:59:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/355943551 Xiaoxie Zheng xiaoxie_zheng https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/356881658 Glow: I love the presentation you did a comparison between the negative part and the positive part. 
Your presentation is very informative. Great Job!
Grow: I would recommend you to use more bullets to make your statement more clear. ]]> 2019-05-05 01:50:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lauren_dao/v2ojw44fj4rf/wish/356881658