https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense Look at your essays draft 2 and 3, and add your verbt tense mistakes to this padelt. Make sure to add the sentence before and the sentences that follows so we can understand what you were trying to say. Do not fix it today. We will work on these in class. Make sure to put your name (submitted by__________) at the bottom of your post. en-us 2017-10-17 18:42:38 UTC 2017-11-13 20:53:34 UTC hello@padlet.com caiyuyang1997 https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199363742 Second Draft
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Actually, I decided to be a photographer in the future.
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So I spent a lot of time to browse some great photos took by some famous photographers.
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I began to use a different view to observe some common events in our daily life, and use my imagination to create a unique photo.
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When i began to think more deeply, and when I find some new ways to solve a same thing, I realized I can create more.
Final Draft
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To be honest, creativity actually helped me to think more profoundly.

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1. I come up with that I brought sticky hooks form China.

2. Then I use my scissor to make 2 holes on the box, after that I 
measure the distance between.

3. I went to Meijer and buy a box with is comprise of iron sticks and strips.

4. However, I did a half page.

5. Because people want go somewhere which is very far.   ]]> 2017-10-22 18:29:23 UTC https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199379776 lzzzzz97 https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199403480 Second Draft
1.I just follow the coach guides.

2.Everbody do the same things.

3.I still try the different way to training myself.

4.He asks me how to do that.

5. And I teach he just like they teach their customers.

(submit by Lawrence)

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1. For example, the teacher who teach me in junior high school often asks us to write essays, but sometimes I have no idea about the topic of essay.

2.So, I began to think like writing lyrics, associate from one word to one thing, more and more deeply, until I get the outline of the article.

(submit by Emma)


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1.Everyone around me already thinks creativity is necessary part in our life.

2.We have all created and painted many of artistic work.

3. So I decided to found and bought some material to create similar petals by myself.
( submitted by Dolores)]]> 2017-10-22 23:58:47 UTC https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199410265 weitingy https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199422145 Second Draft
1. When I studied in fourth grade as a primary student , I participate in an important competition.
2. The government and some of the companies find out the solution through innovation.

(submitted by Kristen)]]> 2017-10-23 01:39:14 UTC https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199422145 https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199424498 final draft 
1. But I have experienced a lot of things in my life that will be useful for my life from now on.

2. If I can't play sports, we wouldn't be friends, and there wouldn't be any relationships.

3. We should do out put to someone, and want some reaction to it, and revise our idea.

(submitted by Koji)]]> 2017-10-23 01:58:02 UTC https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199424498 https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199427525 Final draft
1.I prepare all the things and start.

2.If it is too sweet, I would add some sour.

3.This make me think I have creativity in cooking.

(submitted by Jenny)]]> 2017-10-23 02:20:16 UTC https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199427525 Frankzhao https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199431954 2017-10-23 02:57:59 UTC https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199431954 743340058 https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199432187 Second Draft
1.I like to making stories and share them to my parents and friends.
2. At that time, everyone who heard my stories all think that I was a funny people.
(submit by Edith)

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1.An clear example is that I used to thought I am not a creative person because since I was a young boy I never invent or create some item.
2.In the pass the creativity bring me a lot of benefits.
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1.I have listened a lot of hiphop music.

2.The lyrics can teach us some useful experience of living life.

(submitted by Neil)]]> 2017-10-23 03:45:00 UTC https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199436845 Frankzhao https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199437066 SECOND AND THIRD DRAFT
1. If I try I have fifty percent chance to lost, if I do not try have one hundred percent will lost.
2. The new idea need created by a person ; it will be much harder than logical.
3. the innovations need to based on the logical thinking, if not it will be called a daydream.
4.No one can succeed by just think and image. 
5. I will make some lures and baits by myself.
(submitted by Frank)]]> 2017-10-23 03:47:37 UTC https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199437066 charleswang516 https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199450043 Second Draft
1. For instance, I joined a choir when I was in high school and I was one of the leaders of it.
2. People often forgot their own voice part, in the beginning, we did a lot of practice, but they were still easily influenced by other voice parts. 
3. Therefore, I suggested that the students in the higher voice part keep their voices down when we were practice. It was really useful and I solved this problem. 
4. I felt very satisfied because I’m really interested in singing and I enjoyed helping others to solve the situation. 
(submitted by Siqi)]]> 2017-10-23 05:56:12 UTC https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199450043 https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199480527 second draft
1. "Logic will get you from A to B. Imagination will take you everywhere". Famous physicist A E defined creativty with simply words.
2. Although I have not been to Paris or Tokyo, I have been there in my painting.
3. I always went to shoot arrows that made me focus on the target.
4. I can put all of my attention on that kind of thing when I am thinking or inventing.
(submitted by Max)

]]> 2017-10-23 08:39:19 UTC https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/199480527 https://padlet.com/carolwilsonduffy/verbtense/wish/200637540 1. I indicated that maybe during the process our creativity will get improvement.
2.I remember on that day I have plenty of ideas about clothing patterns and pictures through my brain.
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