Song of the Builders Q 3 by Susan Campbell https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua What is the effect of the descriptive details Murton uses to describe the "strong men" in the poem? en-us 2021-05-07 11:38:43 UTC 2021-05-07 13:24:20 UTC hello@padlet.com Jonathan jn louis: https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1501982440
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 The effect of the descriptive details Murton uses to describe the "strong men" in the poem is that the reader gets the impression that these men are very determined to get the buildings built  no matter what even if  the work is really hard and dangerous. For example the text states that '' So riveters ring, and hot bolts fly, and strong men toil,and sweat ... and die...'' This shows that the job is very dangerous but the strong men work hard and do it patiently.  Also in the text it states "But men are many and men are bold and what is risk when the stake is gold.” This shows that when the strong men risked their life, they still get what they earning's . This is the effect of descriptive details.



]]> 2021-05-07 12:35:05 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1501982440 brandonr838 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1501989130 The effect of the descriptive details Murton uses to describe the "strong men" in the poem is that the reader gets the impression that these men are very determined to get the buildings built  no matter what even if  the work is really hard. For example the text it states  " So riveters  ring, And hot bolts fly, And strong men toil, And sweat ... and die ..." This shows that the work is hard but still the man work hard and fast. Also in the text it states "But men are many and men are bold and what is risk when the stake is gold.” This shows that the work is dangerous but the men still work hard to finish the buildings. This is the effect of the descriptive details. ]]> 2021-05-07 12:36:48 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1501989130 leahf91 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502018259 The effect of the descriptive detail Murton uses is that the workers will get it built no matter what. For example the text states,” But men are many and men are bold and what is risk when the stake is gold.” This shows that the men work until the building is finished. Another example is that the text states,” Men toil, and sweat and die but the city’s towers grow straight and high.” This shows that the men will get the buildings done even if they die doing it. This is the effect of descriptive detail.]]> 2021-05-07 12:44:57 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502018259 MODEL RESPONSE: SENTENCE STARTER campbell_ela381 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502019360 The effect of the descriptive details Murton uses to describe the "strong men" in the poem let the reader know how .......]]> 2021-05-07 12:45:15 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502019360 josephn202 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502019464 The effect of the descriptive details Murton use "strong men" in the poem.The text states," T"But men are many and men are bold and what is risk when the stake is gold." This evidence shows that even though they might fall they will still get it built for the money. The text also states," And Strong men toil and sweat and die but the city's towers grow straight and high! This evidence also shows that when workers build the building and die it doesn't matter because other people want to get it built.]]> 2021-05-07 12:45:17 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502019464 sasham72 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502024138 The effect of the descriptive details Murton uses to describe the “strong men” in the poem is to make the reader understand that their work is very dangerous. In the poem it states, “And hot bolts fly, and strong men toil.” This evidence shows that their work is risky.. In the poem it also states, “And sweat...and die…” This evidence also shows that their work is very dangerous because if someone is sweating while they are working you can infer that their job is hard. This is the effect of the descriptive details Murton uses to describe the “strong men” in the poem.]]> 2021-05-07 12:46:37 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502024138 The effect of the descriptive details Murton uses to describe the “strong men” in the poem is to make the reader understand that their work is extremely dangerous and hard .The poem states that "And hot bolts fly,and strong men toil." This evidence shows that those man were all brave to go work there.This also shows that the people are risking there lives to work djoudlyg https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502027943 2021-05-07 12:47:38 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502027943 athaliahs2 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502037475 The effect of the descriptive details Murton uses to describe the "strong men" in the poem is to make the reader understand . In the poem it states that, “Strong men toil.” This evidence shows that the men are good for the job, because toil means hard working and working for a long time. Also in the text it states that, “And sweat...and die..But the city’s towers grow straight and high.” This evidence shows that even though the builders might sweat so much during the construction they will still continue to build on, this shows another sign that they are determined and well built for the job. This is the effect of the descriptive details.]]> 2021-05-07 12:50:22 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502037475 chickenlegsmani123 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502046676 The effect of the descriptive details Murton uses to describe the “strong men” in the poem let’s the reader know how hard the work is and how dangerous.for example in the poem it states that “ And hot bolts fly]]> 2021-05-07 12:52:55 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502046676 ryanc401 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502061454 The effect of the descriptive details Murton uses to describe the "strong men" in the poem are "bold," and "strong." The poet describes what they do at work as "toil," "sweat," and "die." If the men "toil, / And sweat" and even lose their lives, This evidence shows that the men are good for the job, because toil means hard working and working for a long time. ]]> 2021-05-07 12:56:47 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502061454 zerisxoxo https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502081266 The effect of the descriptive details Murton uses to describe the "strong men" in the poem let the reader know how their job is extremely dangerous and scary. One piece of evidence to support my claim is "And strong men toil, And sweat .... And die, But the city's tower grow straight and high!" This evidence shows that even tho they won't be able to see the success they're happy that they keep trying. Another piece of evidence is "]]> 2021-05-07 13:01:57 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502081266 TreyshaunFernandez https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502124163 The descriptive details murton uses to describe the “strong men” in the poem is they aren’t scared to drop. The men wasn’t scared to fall. The poem states, that “And risk when the stake is gold.” The guys up there liked to play around up there. The details is to describe how strong they are.]]> 2021-05-07 13:12:17 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502124163 ryanc401 https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502130623 This evidence shows that even though the builders might sweat so much during the construction they will still continue to build on, this shows another sign that they are determined and well built for the job. This evidence shows that even though the builders might sweat so much during the construction they will still continue to build on, this shows another sign that they are determined and well built for the job. This is the effect of the descriptive details.]]> 2021-05-07 13:13:48 UTC https://padlet.com/campbell_ela381/uxwg7s0w65vc1tua/wish/1502130623