https://padlet.com/27miannotta/ux15icwth0p0gh0i Leave me some feedback on my writing pieces! en-us 2022-01-31 16:58:33 UTC 2022-04-11 16:59:14 UTC hello@padlet.com tignatowicz https://padlet.com/27miannotta/ux15icwth0p0gh0i/wish/2023339111 Hi from period 1! ]]> 2022-02-01 13:49:08 UTC https://padlet.com/27miannotta/ux15icwth0p0gh0i/wish/2023339111 27koloko https://padlet.com/27miannotta/ux15icwth0p0gh0i/wish/2024333254 I love your title]]> 2022-02-01 21:48:06 UTC https://padlet.com/27miannotta/ux15icwth0p0gh0i/wish/2024333254 27jhutchinson1 https://padlet.com/27miannotta/ux15icwth0p0gh0i/wish/2088352181 I like your idea for the Buy My Product project. One thing I liked was how detailed your presentation was. You really gave me an insight on what your product was. You also had really good word choice. The piece was really easy to read and that is good. Another thing that I liked was all of the visuals you put in your piece. There were a bunch of dogs and it really fit the theme. My one wish, is that your group gave a bit more insight on the sickness that 1 in 3 dogs have and more about how they get it. Other than that, great piece!]]> 2022-03-10 13:47:36 UTC https://padlet.com/27miannotta/ux15icwth0p0gh0i/wish/2088352181 27liannotta https://padlet.com/27miannotta/ux15icwth0p0gh0i/wish/2088425433 The thing that I noticed first was that your entire presentation was eye catching. It was very well thought out and everything was super easy to understand. Also, this product idea is very useful for many and you provides a logical reason why people should buy your product and that your product is better than your competitors. One thing I wish you could have done is to create an additional slide that is your call to action. Basically just tell your audience to buy your product.]]> 2022-03-10 14:21:07 UTC https://padlet.com/27miannotta/ux15icwth0p0gh0i/wish/2088425433 27aliguori https://padlet.com/27miannotta/ux15icwth0p0gh0i/wish/2088889725           I really liked how your product had such a large target audience of dog owner’s I know that even in the small towns of Scotch Plains and Fanwood there are thousands of dog owners. I could really see this product going somewhere for that reason.
          I also thought that the amount of eye catching pictures and colors were nice. They were attracting and really pulled all my attention towards the slideshow.
          The one wish that I had for you is less of a with but a comment. When I think about dog bowls I know just how many there are and that dog bowls that purify the water is still a thing in maybe some brands that are less known but still definitely existing.  
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Star : Your information is really helpful for people reading the article.


Wish : I wish you defined metabolism in your glossary because some people may not understand what that is.]]> 2022-04-11 16:59:14 UTC https://padlet.com/27miannotta/ux15icwth0p0gh0i/wish/2139506803