To what extent do you agree or disagree?

BODY 1: REASON FOR DISAGREEMENT /

• DRAWBACK OF increasing the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. -> NOT OPTIMAL SOLUTION

• delivery costs also increase -> the price of other goods increaseS -> ............... (UPGRADE = 2LIGHT)

BODY 2: REASON FOR AGREEMENT/

• Benefit of increasing the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles.

GREEN TRANSPORTATION ->THE AMOUNT OF GASS EMISSION REDUCE -> elevate air quality

TRIỂN KHAI MỖI BODY 1 MẠCH IDEA

BODY 1: DRAWBACK OF......

.......->.......-> .....

BODY 1: BENEFIT OF......

.......->.......-> .....

Essay 01: One of the best ways to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. 

To what extent do you agree or disagree? 

 I disagree with this statement

Tôi không đồng ý với quan điểm này

• This policy will harm the economy in many ways

• Taxes from fossil fuel production CONTRIBUTE A LOT TO THE ECONOMY (E29)

-> Fewer people using fuel for private transport means less oil or coal production and government revenue

• This policy can also raise the costs for other vehicles used to transport goods like trucks, vans, etc

-> This can increase transportation and delivery costs, and raise the prices of commodities

Chính sách này sẽ làm hại nền kinh tế theo nhiều cách

• Thuế từ nhiên liệu hóa thạch đóng góp nhiều tới nền kinh tế

-> Nếu nhu cầu sử dụng giảm -> Giảm việc sản xuất than hoặc dầu -> Giảm nguồn thu của chính phủ

• Chính sách này cũng có thể gia tăng chi phí của các phương tiện vận tải hàng hoá như xe tải, bán tải, v.v

-> Gia tăng chi phí vận chuyển và giao hàng -> làm tăng giá của nhu yếu phẩm

• There are more effective methods

• Encouraging consumers to reduce, reuse, recycle can make more impacts

-> Humanity is generating EVER GREATER QUANTITIES OF WASTE (E11), which not only POLLUTE OCEANS AND RIVERS (E11), but also emit an astronomical amount of greenhouse gas

-> Incentivizing people to use and throw away less trash can save the environment and lessen the greenhouse effect

• Governments can make more investments in sustainable economic practices

-> They can increase spending to improve the public TRANSPORT NETWORK (E09) or provide financial aids to help companies transition to RENEWABLE ENERGY FROM SOLAR, WIND OR WATER POWER (E11)

-> This can reduce emissions from private vehicles and factories and develop the economy at the same time

Có nhiều cách khác hiệu quả hơn

Khuyến khích người tiêu dùng hạn chế, tái chế, tái sử dụng có thể đem lại nhiều tác động hơn

-> Loài người ngày càng thải ra nhiều rác -> ô nhiễm sông và biển, thải ra rất nhiều khí nhà kính

-> Khuyến khích con người sử dụng ít và thải ra ít rác hơn -> cứu lấy môi trường, giảm thiểu hiệu ứng nhà kính

Chính phủ có thể đầu tư nhiều hơn vào các hoạt động kinh tế bền vững

-> Gia tăng chi tiêu chính phủ để cải thiện hệ thống giao thông công cộng, hỗ trợ tài chính để các công ty chuyển sang năng lượng tái tạo

-> Việc này vừa có thể giảm khí thải, vừa phát triển kinh tế

Increased expenditures on fuel for automobiles and other vehicles cloud result in higher prices for products and services BECAUSE .......(DELIVERY COSTS)....... -> discourage in demand for consumption and lead to a sluggish growth in nations' economies.

UPGRADE

UPGRADE

Body 2:benefit: .

....... -> using public transport services HELP

avoid traffic jam and pollutions reductions. for example, train and coach services would be attractive and affordable alternatives

• increasing the cost of fuel =>More and more individuals may be discouraged from driving their own vehicles and instead choose for public transportation. => the emission of harmful exhaust from personal vehicles can be drastically decreased => creating a greener and fresher environment.

AN INCREASING NUMBER OF ............

Body 2:

• Means of transportation play an important role => transportation => other prices will increase => causing economic pressure.

• petrol is also intended for other applications in manufacturing industries and agricultural purposes => the price of fuel increases as a result the economy could suffer many unfavorable consequences.

The escalating price of fuel can discourage people from driving their personal vehicles and instead use public transportation.

Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?

BODY 1: BENEFIT

• JOB OPPORTUNITIES -> RAISE INCOME -> LIVING STANDARD

• SHOPPING AND DELIVERY DEMAND INCREASE -> DEVELOPMENT OF LOGISTIC -> JOB AND ECONOMY

  
  

• SVO -> SVO -> SVO

BODY 2: DRAWBACK

ESSAY 02:  In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages? (11/11/2021 - paper - IDP)

 I believe that this trend has more drawbacks than benefits.

Tôi tin rằng xu hướng này sẽ có nhiều tác hại hơn lợi ích

1. On the one hand, the concentration of stores in the suburbs may provide certain benefits.

Việc tập trung các cửa hàng ở khu vực ngoại thành có thể đem lại một số lợi ích

• Stores outside the cities can CHARGE LOWER PRICES (E29), and offer A WIDER RANGE OF GOODS AND SERVICES (E29) due to lower PROPERTY PRICES AND RENTS (E29)

-> Less operational costs -> Customers can buy more for less dollars

Các cửa hàng có thể bán hàng giá rẻ và có nhiều mặt hàng hơn do chi phí mặt bằng thấp

-> Ít chi phí hoạt động -> Tiết kiệm cho khách hàng

• This trend can encourage the development of PUBLIC SERVICES (E08) in such places.

-> Large shopping malls TEND TO ATTRACT MORE (E06) people to the area, which can stimulate the local economy. 

-> People without cars will be ENCOURAGED TO USE MORE PUBLIC TRANSPORT (E11) to get there

-> These factors can attract more government and private sector investments in these areas

Có thể khuyến khích đầu tư vào các dịch vụ công cộng cho nơi đó

-> Thu hút nhiều khách tới thăm, phát triển kinh tế khu vực

-> Những người không đi xe sẽ sử dụng nhiều phương tiện công cộng để tới đó

-> Thu hút nhiều đầu tư tư nhân và chính phủ vào khu vực này

2. However, there are various disadvantages that this trend will inevitably generate

Tuy nhiên, vẫn có rất nhiều tác hại mà xu hướng này chắc chắn sẽ gây ra.

• It will destroy the local environment

-> Longer travel distances -> more EXHAUST FUMES FROM VEHICLES (E11)

-> The NATURAL HABITAT (E25) of animals outside the cities will be destroyed to make way for large complexes

-> Less developed suburban areas also lack the facilities to DISPOSE OF THEIR WASTE (E51) properly

Điều này sẽ phá huỷ môi trường địa phương

-> Đi lại xa hơn -> nhiều khí thải xe cộ hơn

-> Môi trường sống của động vật bị phá huỷ để lấy chỗ xây dựng

-> Các khu vực kém phát triển không có đủ khả năng xử lý chất thải

• Elderly people and those with disabilities will be more negatively affected

-> They are unable to travel long distances, and have to depend on local shops for their necessities

-> The disappearance of these stores will make their lives much harder

Người già và người khuyết tật sẽ bị ảnh hưởng nặng hơn

-> Họ không thể đi xa, phải mua đồ thiết yếu tại cửa hàng ở gần

-> Đời sống của họ sẽ khó khăn hơn

Moving supermarkets from urban areas to hometowns would result in rising traffic exhaust in hometown's concentration due to a more frequent automobiles. Furthermore, this put citizens who are off-center SUFFER FROM degraded air quality and cause respiratory diseases like lung cancers.

lƯU LƯỢNG XE TĂNG -> NHIỀU KHÍ THẢI DẪN ĐẾN CHẤT LƯỢNG KHÔNG KHÍ ĐI XUỐNG -> RESPIRATORY DISEASES

• Moving department stores to the suburbs CAN MAKE IT Challenging for families TO DRIVE BECAUSE .........Long distances only for shopping => traveling costs and time will increase => People will feel tired and have no motivation to go long distances => LESS TIME FOR ........ -> ,.....

RELIEVE JOB COMPETITION

UPGRADE VOCAB

1. What kind of people would like to go to a café?

   Uyên:

   adult

   in addition ---> on top of that

I guess it would depend on ....... . When it comes X, ....... But in terms of Y, ......

1. Why do young people like studying in a café instead of at home?

   This can be attributable to a host of reasons. For one,........For another, ........

   
   

   widen social circles

   
   

   TÚ ANH:

   ơ ơ

   in seperate .....

1. Do old people like to drink coffee?

2. Do Vietnamese people like to drink coffee?

   HA: .

   are really into

   provides

   enjoy clearly thinking -> think more clearly . maintain concentration -> ....

   coffee are globalLY FAMOUS . -> traditional trait -> enhance the image by coffee

1. 1.     What kind of people would like to go to a café?

   2.     Why do young people like studying in a café instead of at home?

   I guess that it would depend oN age groups. When it comes to youngsters now, they prefer going to coffee shops to have drink coffee because these places are where they can have some chit-chat with their friends or meet a host of like-minded people and have the same taste of coffee, which can help them widen their social circles. Apart from that, coffee shops, to me, are ideal places to work because you can easily see a lot of people working attentively there in a tranquil atmosphere (Home: a couch potato + digital distractions -> disrupt concentration-> PREFER COFFEE SHOPS ) , which can motivate you a lot and also increase your concentration as well as your productivity.

   But in terms of the old, I guess they tend to prioritize having a cup of coffee at home and brew it on their own because, you know, their coffee taste is so strict that’s why it’s really hard for modern coffee shops to meet their  high demand.

   
   

   3.     Do old people like to drink coffee?

   4.     Do Vietnamese people like to drink coffee?

   Yes absolutely, coffee dates back to decades ago in Vietnam, so it is associated with many Vnese generations and, I have to say that there is not a link between age and coffee .  Whenever you stroll around any streets in Hanoi, you can easily see a bunch of coffee street vendors, this is really a cultural trait here. What’s more, recent years have witnessed a rocketing number of coffee start-ups from many youngsters, although many of them failed but this really a strong testament to great love of Vnese people for this drink.

   
   

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4. A TESTAMENT TO STH: MINH CHỨNG CHO CGI ĐẤY