Narrative Goals and Techniques by Frank Wright https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp Warm Up en-us 2020-11-21 09:29:43 UTC 2023-05-08 15:10:09 UTC hello@padlet.com Building Suspense https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955670435 Suspense builds when Dante walks up and asks the main character why he's still coming to the court and challenges him, this is suspenseful because we aren't sure who's gonna win.]]> 2020-11-24 10:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955670435 bulding suspense https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955671966 is when Dante walks an he asks them somthing]]> 2020-11-24 10:42:19 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955671966 building suspense 26lalabdulla2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955672069 when the author describe the heighth and how old they are. and when he was playing at the gym and the boys said he cant play. ]]> 2020-11-24 10:42:22 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955672069 when they're at the court and the main character is challenged by Dante. Pg- 16 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955672492 2020-11-24 10:42:32 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955672492 Were Dante says you can't play and you yell at him saying that your really good. https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955672498 2020-11-24 10:42:33 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955672498 Aya Maria https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955672767 Page 14 when it says "He'll turn to you suddenly and bark" or when it says "Dante strides over and points a finger in your face. ]]> 2020-11-24 10:42:39 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955672767 Building Suspense 26taali2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955673251 In this story, a place where there was building suspense is in page 14. When you look over Page#14, you can see when Dante starts to talk to the main character and how the author describes the height and how scary Dante is, when they started to talk the suspense started to build up.]]> 2020-11-24 10:42:48 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955673251 Build Suspense https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955673367 "The whole gym is silent aside from your heart beat. Your short nervous breath meassure the time."]]> 2020-11-24 10:42:52 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955673367 Building Suspense https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955673369 When the people at the gym didn't let him play it built suspense as to what would happen next.

]]> 2020-11-24 10:42:52 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955673369 when he goes back to the court https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955673563 when he comes back after being rejected i did know if he was supposed was a suspense part]]> 2020-11-24 10:42:57 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955673563 Provide Context and Background Information https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955673818 When he tells his dad that he's not gonna play because the others won't let him, that leaves the reader confused, but later on we find out why the others won't let him play which gives us more context and background info]]> 2020-11-24 10:43:03 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955673818 When dantay was not accepted to play basketball he was brave about it youngnatasha749 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955673880 2020-11-24 10:43:05 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955673880 Building Suspense https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955674447 "Hes 6 4 and thin. In his early thirties maybe. Hes the only guy in the gym who's never said a word to you. He walks right past you like you don't exist." page 14. This builds suspense because it describes Dante as unfriendly mysterious guy. ]]> 2020-11-24 10:43:20 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955674447 Build Suspense 26akhodr2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955674506 Suspense is built on page 15 when we see the boy standing up for himself and talking to Dante, responding that he wants to play]]> 2020-11-24 10:43:22 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955674506 building suspense 26eristow2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955674692 There was some suspense when Dante walks up to The main character and starts to ask why he is still coming to the basketball court and then he challenges him.]]> 2020-11-24 10:43:26 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955674692 Introduce the Characters -Page 14 26malsubaie2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955674784 Dante. He's six four and thin. In his early thirties maybe. He's the only guy in the gym who's never said a word to you. ]]> 2020-11-24 10:43:29 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955674784 pg13 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955675612 secretly hoping for some fatherly advice but you wont get any]]> 2020-11-24 10:43:53 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955675612 Build suspence https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955676773 when Dante is not accepted into the basketball team but tried his hardest and managed to keep his head up. ]]> 2020-11-24 10:44:21 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955676773 the main character loves basketball, but doesn't get a lot of support by his dad, nor anyone else, making him think he isn't good enough. https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955677310 2020-11-24 10:44:37 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955677310 When he tells his dad he is not going but he ends up going anyway. https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955677466 2020-11-24 10:44:41 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955677466 Introduce the Characters 26nalabdulla1_1 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955677938 when they introduce Dante on PG.14 they say "he is six four and thin, he's the only guy in gym who's never said a word to you. He walks by like you don't even exist."

]]> 2020-11-24 10:44:54 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955677938 Background information https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955678182 He provides background information about his skills and his love for the sport.

]]> 2020-11-24 10:45:00 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955678182 page 12 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955678685 "you'll keep quiet on the drive home, then retreat to an overturned bucket in the alley behing your building."]]> 2020-11-24 10:45:14 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955678685 When the boys said " You cant play" youngnatasha749 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955679455 2020-11-24 10:45:35 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955679455 He is six four and this. In his early thirties maybe. https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955679498 2020-11-24 10:45:36 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955679498 Characters https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955679760 He in introduces Dante with his height, his age, and gives some thought to what the character is thinking about Dante

]]> 2020-11-24 10:45:42 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955679760 Introduce the Characters https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955680335 We get introduced to Dante and his character when Dante challenges the main character. ]]> 2020-11-24 10:45:57 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955680335 26lalabdulla2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955680339 when he explaines to his dad what happened on that day and that hell not go but he went after all. ]]> 2020-11-24 10:45:57 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955680339 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955680351 Dante is 6 foot 4, he's thin, maybe around his 30's. he's also the only one who hasn't talked to you.]]> 2020-11-24 10:45:58 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955680351 Build Suspence - 17 26malsubaie2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955680877 When he walks up and challenges him to a game.]]> 2020-11-24 10:46:10 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955680877 Background information https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955681189 "It won't be until week four you finally get into a meaningful game." This is background information because it tells us the boy isn't welcomed in the gym. ]]> 2020-11-24 10:46:18 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955681189 Provide Context and Background Information 26tolabinjo2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955681193 d]]> 2020-11-24 10:46:19 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955681193 dante page 14 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955681339 he is tall, thin and he is 6 4 he is the only guy who's never said a word to you]]> 2020-11-24 10:46:21 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955681339 26eristow2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955681381 When he starts to tell this dad that he doesn't want to play anymore, later they explain why he doesn't want to play anymore.]]> 2020-11-24 10:46:22 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955681381 Stir Empathy https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955681998 When his dad says nothing as a response to the main character not playing anymore, it makes us feel empathetic and sorry for the kid. ]]> 2020-11-24 10:46:39 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955681998 Aya Maria https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955682205 "You'll be hoping for a little ]]> 2020-11-24 10:46:43 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955682205 pg14 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955682405 2020-11-24 10:46:49 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955682405 26lalabdulla2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955682505 Dante is thin and 6 4 and he's thirteen he doesn't say anything when he's i the gym.]]> 2020-11-24 10:46:52 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955682505 eshayyyy https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955682662 when the dads son tells him that he is not going up but he stills goes up anyway.]]> 2020-11-24 10:46:56 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955682662 youngnatasha749 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955683117 When dantay says he doesn't want to play anymore his dad asks him why ]]> 2020-11-24 10:47:02 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955683117 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955683301 you're a pretty tough kid. Nothing much gets to you. You were secretly hoping you would get some piece of fatherly advice here. PG- 15]]> 2020-11-24 10:47:06 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955683301 Stir empathy https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955683525 When he is talking about how basketball is his only way out it makes you feel grateful and you feel empathy for him.]]> 2020-11-24 10:47:13 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955683525 Introduce the Characters 26akhodr2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955683754 On page 14 we get introduced to the character Dante and start learning more about him, ( Height, age,looks etc.) ]]> 2020-11-24 10:47:19 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955683754 Introduce The Characters 26taali2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955684195 On page 14, we can see the description of Dante and we can conclude that Dante is possibly in his thirties, and he is also 6'4. This is an introduction on Dante.]]> 2020-11-24 10:47:31 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955684195 Create the Setting https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955684231 It describes the court as a warm and welcoming place

]]> 2020-11-24 10:47:32 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955684231 When he gets yelled at by Dante we feel empathy for him. https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955684257 2020-11-24 10:47:33 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955684257 Create setting https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955685299 He describes the car he has to stay in and also the look of the gym.]]> 2020-11-24 10:48:00 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955685299 Stir Empathy 26tolabinjo2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955685410 The author uses thought tracking When the narrator starts to feel doubt like when he thought "Maybe you are a srub"]]> 2020-11-24 10:48:03 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955685410 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955685580 On page 14, we can see that Dante was introduced to us and we learnt stuff about him. ]]> 2020-11-24 10:48:09 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955685580 Stir Empathy https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955686232 "Secretly you'll be hoping for a little bit of fatherly advice here, but you won't get it." This stirs empathy, because it makes us feel bad for the boy not having a great relationship with his father.]]> 2020-11-24 10:48:26 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955686232 26lalabdulla2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955686406 when he gets kind of bullied like when they say he does'nt know how to play you feel empathy for him]]> 2020-11-24 10:48:31 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955686406 Build suspence https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955686893 when he challenges people to a game which can drag in the audience

]]> 2020-11-24 10:48:44 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955686893 Stir Empathy 26akhodr2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955687108 There are many parts in the story that make us feel empathy for the characters. For example on page 14 when Dante tells the kid that nobody thinks that he's good enough to play with the rest. ]]> 2020-11-24 10:48:51 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955687108 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955687370 2020-11-24 10:48:57 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955687370 Create setting 26malsubaie2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955687390 The car when he came back from the court.]]> 2020-11-24 10:48:57 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955687390 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955687649 he basically discribes his home as nothing more as a place to sleep, but the court is his home internally.]]> 2020-11-24 10:49:04 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955687649 Aya Maria https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955688436 2020-11-24 10:49:25 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955688436 26lalabdulla2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955688577 it describes the court i think and say's as welcoming.]]> 2020-11-24 10:49:29 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955688577 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955688825 2020-11-24 10:49:34 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955688825 26eristow2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955689289 2020-11-24 10:49:45 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955689289 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955689631  ]]> 2020-11-24 10:49:55 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955689631 Create the Setting 26akhodr2 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955694636 2020-11-24 10:52:06 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955694636 https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955697105 On pg 13 it says "secretly you'll be hoping for a little piece of fatherly advice here, but you won't get any" I think in this sentence it makes us fill empathy for the boy because he doesn't feel like his father cares.]]> 2020-11-24 10:53:03 UTC https://padlet.com/frankwright1/uvzi4ptywzixdtvp/wish/955697105