https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls Made with a little mischief en-us 2020-11-20 09:55:06 UTC 2020-11-20 11:00:35 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944746969 delicate arms dangled in front, each thigh was a ton of meat, its tallied feet clawing damp earth, pelvic bones crushing aside trees and bushes, 

4/4 Well done. DL]]> 2020-11-20 10:03:42 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944746969 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944747339 Glem of peppled skin like a mail of a terrible warrior
Delicate watchmaker's claws
Exposing a fence of teeth like daggers his teeth are sharp and pointy 
The word delicate suggest that he is fragile and 

Q1 4/4 Well done Emily. DL

]]> 2020-11-20 10:03:55 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944747339 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944748113 Gleam of pebbled skin
Towered thirty feet above half of the trees 
Great oiled resilient striding legs
Ran with a gliding ballet step
A fence of teeth like daggers

Q1 4/4 Well done Jasmin. DL]]> 2020-11-20 10:04:24 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944748113 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944748200 Resilient striding legs
Towered thirty feet above the trees
Delicate watchmakers claws
Oily reptilian chest
A fence of teeth like daggers

Q1 4/4 Well done Jordan. DL]]> 2020-11-20 10:04:28 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944748200 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944749220 Towered thirty feet above half of the trees

 exposing a fence of teeth like daggers.

Q1 2/4 - Just need to make sure in the exam that you add 4 things. DL]]> 2020-11-20 10:05:04 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944749220 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944749413 oiled, resilient, striding legs
thousand pounds of white bone
Each lower leg was a piston
Each thigh was a ton of meat

Q1 4/4 Well done Leona. DL]]> 2020-11-20 10:05:11 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944749413 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944750234 2020-11-20 10:05:45 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944750234 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944753174 Great evil god implies that its gigantic and hideous 
The term evil suggests that its mighty and powerful

Is this Q2? DL]]> 2020-11-20 10:07:44 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944753174 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944759642 1. It towered thirty feet above Half of the tree 
2. It came on great oiled resilient striding legs. 
3. The dinosaur is a great evil god. 
4. It’s delicate watchmaker’s claws close to its oily reptilian chest. 
5. Each lower leg was a piston. 
6. A thousand pounds of white bones sunk in the thick ropes. 
7. Pebble skin like the Mail of a terrible warrior 
8. Each ton of meat ivory and steel mesh. 
9. His arms are delicate 


]]> 2020-11-20 10:11:43 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944759642 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944761313 The writer uses descriptive language such as “oiled, resilient, striding legs” to describe what the trexs legs are like, the verb “striding” suggests that the trexs legs were wide and long for him to be able to take long strides for walking and stomping around. This also implies the pace of the trex by showing how far he can stretch his legs ]]> 2020-11-20 10:12:45 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944761313 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944761783 The writer uses different language techniques to describe the Tyrannosaurus rex. For example the first language technique that the writer uses is a metaphor at the beginning of the story or extract, the writer uses the metaphor in the quote” it came on great oiled, resilient striding legs. 
The writer again uses a second language technique when describing the dinosaurs skin: the writer uses the technique of a simile and this is in the quote” gleam of pebbled skin, like the mail of a terrible warrior. 

The writer also uses a simile again when describing the dinosaur’s teeth, this is supported in the quote” exposing a fence of teeth like daggers.]]> 2020-11-20 10:13:03 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944761783 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944765555 great evil god tells us that people look up to him because hes big and powerful 

Q1 2/4 John is there anything else that you can add about the T-rex? DL]]> 2020-11-20 10:14:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944765555 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944765940 Oiled, resilient, striding legs 

Q1 1/4 Any thing else that you can add?]]> 2020-11-20 10:15:00 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944765940 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944767501 his arm is delicate, 

Q1 1/4 Any thing else that you can add about the T-Rex?]]> 2020-11-20 10:15:47 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944767501 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944767687 The writer uses similes to describe the creature. ‘A fence of teeth like daggers’ the similie shows how sharp and large the creature teeth are it almost sounds unrealistic. It also shows how large the creature is and how scary it would be seeing the creature, This creates a terrifying atmosphere.
The writer uses adjectives to describe the creature. ‘Resilient, striding’ legs. This shows how unstoppable the creature is and nothing will stop it. It also shows how the creature is taking long unstoppable steps. This would create a tense and scared atmosphere.]]> 2020-11-20 10:15:54 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944767687 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944776461 The writer uses descriptive language to describe the creature, they do this by explaining that the charter is enormous. The quote that shows this is ‘towered thirty feet above half of the trees ‘ this would immediately make the reader picture how tall the T rex is and how frightening it is. The adjective ‘towered’ implies that it really is gigantic, this would also make the reader feel nervous for the other characters in the extract.

]]> 2020-11-20 10:21:11 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944776461 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944779064 The writer highlights that the arms of the Trex are out in front of him, by using adjectives. The quotation shows "Two delicate arms dangled out in front" The quotation highlights that his arms are out in front and not at the side. The word delicate is an adjective and means he is fragile and can be easily damaged. This makes the reader feel like his are hugemous.]]> 2020-11-20 10:22:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944779064 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944785820 The writer uses language to describe the creature and using descriptive language he does this by using the phrase, ”It came on great oiled, resilient, striding legs.” This is creating imagery for the reader to imagine what the creature actually looks like in relation to how powerful the te-rex is. By the writer using the adjective ‘striding’ is creating a sense of empathy for the other characters in the story this is due to the word striding indicating the creature is a chilling character and is humongous.]]> 2020-11-20 10:27:08 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944785820 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944786518 the writer implies that the t rex is big scary and evil this shows people are terrified of the beast ]]> 2020-11-20 10:27:36 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944786518 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944789064 The writer highlights that the creature towered thirty feet above half a tree this means that the creature is horrifying and scary. This is shown in the quote “it towered thirty feet above half of the tree”. This quote shows that the creature is very and horrific. This is
creating imagery to tell the writer how tall and scary it is this could also mean that the creature is making everyone in the story scared and frightened. 

The writer highlights that the T-Rex has great oiled resilient striding legs this could suggest that the creature has big striding legs that make it look huge and scary it also makes it look horrific this is shown in the quote “it came on great oiled striding legs. This quote highlights that the creature is hungry and wants food. ]]> 2020-11-20 10:29:20 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944789064 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944789122 1. It towered thirty feet above Half of the tree 
2. It came on great oiled resilient striding legs. 
3. The dinosaur is a great evil god. 
4. It’s delicate watchmaker’s claws close to its oily reptilian chest. 
5. Each lower leg was a piston. 
6. A thousand pounds of white bones sunk in the thick ropes. 
7. Pebble skin like the Mail of a terrible warrior 




]]> 2020-11-20 10:29:22 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944789122 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944792516 the writer implies that the t rex is big scary and evil this shows people are terrified of the beast 

]]> 2020-11-20 10:31:34 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944792516 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944801845 The writer uses language to describe the creature in the quote "evil god" this suggests that the T-rex has dominance and strength. The noun "God" emphasizes that the creature is all mighty and powerful. The reader would feel intimidated because of how immense the T-rex is.]]> 2020-11-20 10:37:19 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944801845 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944802135 Setting-jungle 
Time- past
Opening-The jungle was wide and full of twitterings, rustlings, murmurs, and sighs
Atomosphere- end of the extract the atomosphere shows that it is a terrifying place  
Shift- it goes silent then all of a sudden there is a sound of thunder that came out of nowhere 
Event/ending- jungle/ending- it is horrifying 
Character-T-REX]]> 2020-11-20 10:37:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944802135 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944802633 STOPASEC
Setting
Time
Opening
Perspective
Atmosphere
Shift
Events /Ending
Character ]]> 2020-11-20 10:37:50 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944802633 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944806831 setting 
Time 
Opening 
Perspective 
Atmosphere 
Shift
Event/ ending 
Character

At the beginning of the story the writer focus’s on the Misty atmosphere and then the appearance of the Tyrannosaurus rex. The focus is mainly on the dinosaur throughout  the whole extract or story, and the story seems to be told by only person. The ending of the story is ominous and ends with a cliffhanger. 



]]> 2020-11-20 10:40:31 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944806831 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944808655 STOP - A - SEC
SETTING
TIME
OPENING
PERSPECTIVE
ATMOSPHERE
SHIFT
EVENTS/ENDING
CHARACTER]]> 2020-11-20 10:41:43 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944808655 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944811018 Setting 
Time 
Opening 
Atomosphere
Shift
Event/ending 
Character ]]> 2020-11-20 10:43:15 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944811018 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944820657 The has used to structure as the writer started with Tavis and Eckels .Then the writer focuses on the Trex and by using the adjectives. In this extract they use short sentences to make me as a reader interest and want to read more.]]> 2020-11-20 10:49:25 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944820657 sirsadminteam https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944825666 2020-11-20 10:52:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944825666 https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944828636 STOP A SEC 
Setting- it is set in a jungle with a dinosaur abs there is a volcano 
Time- the time looks like it is set in the dinosaur times past.  
Opening- the opening starts with quotes 
Perspective- 
Atomsphere- the atomsphere is light and colours that are used are light and dark colours
Shift- the shift in focus is that all of a sudden it went quite then there was a sound of thunder then a TRex appeared.
Ending/events- the extract finished with the monster lunging forward with a terrible scream. 
Character- the characters are running away from the monster ]]> 2020-11-20 10:54:26 UTC https://padlet.com/sirsadminteam/uvlyk17079igf3ls/wish/944828636