https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy Made with charisma en-us 2017-03-27 14:31:53 UTC 2026-02-12 06:52:01 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Lovecoffee.png https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162845058 A mental abnormality has the ability to control every aspect of life, yet so exclusive that perfected beauty disguises it seamlessly with straight white teeth and dazzling blue eyes. Patrick Bateman lives this life of the handsomely deranged in American Psycho by Bret Easton Ellis, delving into the world that excuses the elites of sporadic and murderous activities while seething emotions control actions, acerbic language haunts the killer, and the dazed and confused era impact the figures around the murderer to create a sickly twisted meaning of obsession. ]]> 2017-03-27 15:02:40 UTC https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162845058 https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162845759 In "Great Expectation" by Charles Dickenson Pip, the main protagonist, is torn between staying with his sweet brother-in-law the village blacksmith and going to London to become a gentlemen and reconnect with his infatuation with Estella. Estella, who was raised to break men's hearts by Miss Havisham a bitter woman who was left at the alter by her fiancée, cannot be bothered with Pip and breaks his heart on multiple occasions. Throughout the novel Pip tries to obstruct his cultural identity by distancing himself from his poor family and becoming a gentlemen. 

Omit quotes from novel titles]]> 2017-03-27 15:04:16 UTC https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162845759 https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162846191 In American Pyscho by Bret Easton Ellis, Patrick Bateman is an economically successful man living in the city of New York, embodied by a dark personality which culminates in the torturing of animals and numerous murders. Ellis continously features vulger language to present the reality of a cruel and unforgiving society, intense emotions further the complexity of Bateman's character, and misunderstood situations between Bateman and his peers to describe the uncertainty and spontaneity in the modern era of human life, culminating to express a raw view of society, one which molds and effects each individual differently.]]> 2017-03-27 15:05:24 UTC https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162846191 https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162847000 Throughout Bret Easton Ellis's novel, American Psycho, the main character, Patrick Bateman, is characterized as a handsome, rich, psychotic murderer living in New York City. Ellis's novel captures a view of "seething emotions", "acerbic" language, and a sometimes "dazed and confused" era of human life during the late 1980s through Bateman's deranged beliefs and murderous actions committed in the novel, ultimately revealing that it is the norm for one to have unacceptable thoughts and urges but without acting upon them as a social norm, unlike Bateman who acts on his uncontrollable urges, including murder and drugs.

You can begin a new sentence after "committed in the novel"...]]> 2017-03-27 15:07:28 UTC https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162847000 https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162847468 2017-03-27 15:08:42 UTC https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162847468 https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162847518 Yann Martel's infamous "Life of Pi", senselessly illustrates real, raw human strength by commentating on how human tragedy yields a higher willpower and a deeper sense of strength, just as Pi documents his change of perspective and understanding of the behavior of humanity as a whole. Through purely watching and analyzing animal behavior throughout his life surrounded by , Pi quickly realizes that he must do the unexpected to survive, from facing a fearless bengal tiger on his  

]]> 2017-03-27 15:08:51 UTC https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162847518 https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162847985 In "American Psycho" by Brett Easton Ellis, the wealthy characters, mainly Patrick Bateman portrays the startling affects of a stratified social system. The setting of modern New York City is faced with societal issues because of the stark contrast in the materialistic upper class and helpless poor. The egocentric attitude Patrick Bateman and his friends share lead them to mock the dispise the poor while even retaining individualist views in the presence of peers. Brett Easton Ellis reveals the affects of a selfish individualist society as compromiseing to the functionality of both the individuals themselves and, the society they are apart of through unexplainable aggression, realistic and vulgure language and states of psychotic extremes, completely compromise the functionality of both the individuals themselves and the society they are apart of. 

Omit quotes from title. Underline novel titles when you write. Your last clause beginning with "completely compromise" is unparallel with the previous part of the sentence. You have a couple of extra words not needed.]]> 2017-03-27 15:09:53 UTC https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162847985 https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162852110 Lost time creates regret, which breeds discord, heavily integrated in Emily Bronke's "Wuthering Heights." The novel features the telling of Earnshaw family's life, focusing on Catherine, Heathcliff, and their legacy. The relationship of the adopted brother and sister was turbulent and detrimental to both sides, causing physical, spiritual, and emotional deaths. Bronke manipulates time throughout the novel to elevate the emotions of regret and disdain, revealing the corrosive effect of wrong decisions over time in the lives of all people.

Eliminates quotes from title, but when you write be sure to underline novel titles. What do you mean by "both sides?" check spelling, eliminate definite articles such as "the". Whose emotions and disdain? Good establishment of purpose. ]]> 2017-03-27 15:20:03 UTC https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162852110 https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162861161 Pi's strict father strived to educate the naive boy right from wrong in order to develop the young man's moral understanding, as did his understanding supportive mother. Author Yann Martel effectively conveys the necessity of Pi's moral development in the "Life of Pi" through displaying the ferocity of a bengal tiger on an unexpecting helpless goat presented by the Indian boy's father in order to shape Pi's societal views and overall understanding of the world - the affect parental lessons have on a child's life. 

Thesis is wordy; Titles are underlined, but on here you can't but delete the quotation marks. You could strengthen opening context, addressing Pi's father's worries. What is "right [from] wrong?"]]> 2017-03-27 15:43:24 UTC https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162861161 https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162993380 In Bret Easton Ellis' "American Psycho," Patrick Bateman, a wealthy, handsome man living in the late 1980's New York City, is actually a mass murderer who struggles to oppress his sporadic, dark thoughts. Ellis demonstrates a human's "seething emotions" and "acerbic" language through the murderous, cynical thinking and sardonic comments of Bateman who unlike the majority of people bounded by their morals, turns his dangerous emotions and thoughts into violent actions; although normal people occasionally suffer from negative and selfish thoughts similar to Bateman's, it is essential to not let such harmful thinking dictate one's own actions or person which Bateman failed to do for himself.

New sentence after "actions" beginning with although--semicolon makes it too bulky]]> 2017-03-28 02:04:22 UTC https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/162993380 https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/163138954 Chinua Achebe illustrates the various affects change has on people in a community through his novel " Things Fall Apart". Okonkwo one of the clans head kingsman dwells on the clans definition of masculinity, in terms of strength and social hierarchy , which stems from the dependency on the varying gods. When his reality is tested from the prosepect if change brought from the Christian missionaries , Okonkwo is caught between resisting and accepting the fast approaching change . Achebe uses Okonkwos interactions between the clan , the missionaries , and his own family to illustrate the continuous struggle between change and tradition]]> 2017-03-28 14:18:09 UTC https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/163138954 https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/163165263 Bret Easton Ellis novel ' American Psycho ' main character Patrick Bateman displays horrid gruesome acts upon innocent people for his own selfish pleasure. Patrick enacting these horrid acts for his own selfish pleasure displays his lack of humanity and consciousness. Easton Ellis weaves the novel with the impactful theme to be aware of whom one trusts . The theme of trust was strongly displayed by the victims whom put there trust in Bateman and ended up being brutally killed , breaking any form of trust they had in Bateman.]]> 2017-03-28 15:24:55 UTC https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/163165263 autumnw819 https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/163281771 Yann Martel's Life of Pi chronicles the courageous story of an Indian boy stranded on a lifeboat with a Bengal tiger for over 200 days. During his time on the boat, young Pi Patel observes a hyena wait several days to eat a zebra and cannot comprehend why the defined predator would wait so long to feast on its prey. Eventually Pi realizes that the hyena acted out of respect for the lion. Inspired by the actions of the hyena, Pi concludes that truly respecting ones superiors is the most sure way to live a long and prosperous life.]]> 2017-03-28 23:20:15 UTC https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/163281771 https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/163287031
Coming to a new world can be freighting at the thought of it, especially when life takes an unexpected toll for the worst; which is what happened to a boy named Pi in the novel The Life of Pi written by Yann Martel. The lost of your family, disconnection of a hometown, and nearly dying at sea was not part of Pi's life he wanted to encounter at such a young age, it may even seem as if life was swept from up under his feet and leaved him at unstable condition.   ]]> 2017-03-29 00:22:06 UTC https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/163287031 https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/163420796 In Things Fall Apart by Chinua Achebe, the author writes on a local leader and his tribe as they go through many troubling conflicts. Onkonkwo, the Ibo tribe's leader battles with staying true to his culture and statins strong for his tribe. In the novel, Onkonkwo responds to a cultural collision by making decisions that can effect him and his tribe and elucidate Onkonkwo's human resilience ]]> 2017-03-29 13:47:14 UTC https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/163420796 https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/165687050 The Cellar a work of literature authored by Natasha Preston, entailed the murder and inner struggle with demons. The main character which plays a role of being an antagonist and protagonist, Collin, portrays a man lost in the world hes living in. The too soon exposure of a adulterous relationship of his father and a prostitute, later effectedCollin , and his actions. Later in Life evolving him into a murderer seeking to create and preserve the pureness of women. Natasha ambarks readers on a journey of tears,anger,and fear unraveling the dark secret that love kills.]]> 2017-04-10 14:40:06 UTC https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/165687050 https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/165687986 2017-04-10 14:43:28 UTC https://padlet.com/meshaun_vaughn/uvayrz4dwbqy/wish/165687986