https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul Made with love en-us 2020-03-17 13:15:17 UTC 2020-03-17 17:45:41 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463209783 used very often, e. g. in "[…] distressing issues that we are facing collectively".]]> 2020-03-17 14:14:16 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463209783 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463217855 Everyone in the auditorium, people working "behind the scenes" (camera, organisation, security,...)]]> 2020-03-17 14:21:08 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463217855 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463221518 bring about change, make people think about the consumption of animal products, create sense of community

]]> 2020-03-17 14:24:15 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463221518 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463221981 (monological) Speech]]> 2020-03-17 14:24:42 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463221981 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463222396 He starts with stating facts about himself ("I", "Myself",...)
Next he includes the audience ("we") and states that they have much more in common than they think ("I see commonality")
Next he gives examples for these common things ("we steal her baby")
Next he puts the focus back on himself ("I am", "I have been"..)
He ends with stating a personal fact again ("my brother")]]> 2020-03-17 14:25:03 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463222396 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463223208 2020-03-17 14:25:40 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463223208 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463225026 he appeals to the audience that we, while working together, can do something good, make a positive change happen and most importantly help each other, because everyone deserves a second chance]]> 2020-03-17 14:27:10 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463225026 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463227209 Everyone being there, but also the people watching it at home, in front of their TVs. Thus he has a huge range of influence. ]]> 2020-03-17 14:29:03 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463227209 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463229086 present perfect used to emphasize his past attitudes (negative), simultaneously highlighting the possibility of change

]]> 2020-03-17 14:30:35 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463229086 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463229131 present perfect used to emphasize his past attitudes (negative), simultaneously highlighting the possibility of change

]]> 2020-03-17 14:30:37 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463229131 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463229816 present perfect used to emphasize his past attitudes (negative), simultaneously highlighting the possibility of change

]]> 2020-03-17 14:31:12 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463229816 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463229853 present perfect used to emphasize his past attitudes (negative), simultaneously highlighting the possibility of change

]]> 2020-03-17 14:31:14 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463229853 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463229992 present perfect used to emphasize his past attitudes (negative), simultaneously highlighting the possibility of change

]]> 2020-03-17 14:31:21 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463229992 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463231027 2020-03-17 14:32:05 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463231027 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463231847 Many Latin-based words ("artificially inseminate")]]> 2020-03-17 14:32:44 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463231847 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463232560  Emotive langauge | Cries in anguish, plunder | Make people feel bad – get them to think, change]]> 2020-03-17 14:33:22 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463232560 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463233112 2020-03-17 14:33:49 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463233112 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463234262 emphasizing similarities between seemingly different issues and also making the issues he stated more understandable for his audience. With this he also unites people fighting for different causes, because all issues are rooted in the same problem. ]]> 2020-03-17 14:34:39 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463234262 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463235744 2020-03-17 14:35:51 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463235744 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463239906 2020-03-17 14:38:57 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463239906 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463239964 2020-03-17 14:38:59 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463239964 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463241346 The audience as well as everyone else.

[…] we have to sacrifice something, to give something up, but human beings, at our best [...]]]> 2020-03-17 14:40:01 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463241346 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463241459 The audience as well as everyone else.

[…] we have to sacrifice something, to give something up, but human beings, at our best [...]]]> 2020-03-17 14:40:06 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463241459 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463241649 The audience as well as everyone else.

[…] we have to sacrifice something, to give something up, but human beings, at our best [...]]]> 2020-03-17 14:40:14 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463241649 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463241787 The audience as well as everyone else.

[…] we have to sacrifice something, to give something up, but human beings, at our best [...]]]> 2020-03-17 14:40:21 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463241787 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463241822 The audience as well as everyone else.

[…] we have to sacrifice something, to give something up, but human beings, at our best [...]]]> 2020-03-17 14:40:22 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463241822 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463242092 The audience as well as everyone else.

[…] we have to sacrifice something, to give something up, but human beings, at our best [...]]]> 2020-03-17 14:40:33 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463242092 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463242362 acceptance speech ]]> 2020-03-17 14:40:45 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463242362 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463243911 2020-03-17 14:41:40 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463243911 hlbertaip https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463257133 I have been a scoundrel in my life. I've been selfish, I've been cruel at times, hard to work with, and I'm grateful [...]]]> 2020-03-17 14:50:04 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463257133 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463260337 racism, queer rights, inequality

]]> 2020-03-17 14:52:08 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463260337 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463263678 to show gratitude and persuade the audience to make a positive change in their lives]]> 2020-03-17 14:54:32 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463263678 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463263729 use of many latinate almost „high brow“  words/language - f.e. impunity, artificially inseminate, commonality 

use of inclusive ‚we�‘ to evoke sense of unity and collectiveness f.e. We share the same love, we are facing collectively (double emphasis on we as a unit) 

personification f.e. her [the cow] cries of anguish are unmistakable

Loaded vocabulary f.e. anguish, the fight against injustice, guilty, distressing
  ]]> 2020-03-17 14:54:34 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463263729 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463268508 in order to emphasize the suffering the cow endures due to our actions specifically ]]> 2020-03-17 14:57:28 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463268508 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463269846 To draw attention to important topics]]> 2020-03-17 14:58:21 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463269846 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463271131 2020-03-17 14:59:16 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463271131 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463271205 … we steal her baby, even though her cries of anguish are unmistakable ……and we plunder it for its resources.…because we think that we have to sacrifice something,…
-> to get his message across and make people feel guiltyTo make people think about the issue he’s talking about and change something in their lives]]> 2020-03-17 14:59:20 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463271205 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463273680 "We go into the world [...] we plunder [...] we feel entitled [...] we steal [...] we take [...] we put [...] we fear [...] we think [...] we are."]]> 2020-03-17 15:01:02 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463273680 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463274102 To talk about things which are general/universal -> e.g. the bel one species has the right ]]> 2020-03-17 15:01:17 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463274102 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463278650 Expressing gratitude, general introduction into topic
 
Establishing commonality

Emotional climax: exemplification & persuasion

Personal redemption, expressing gratitude, conclusion
Quote]]> 2020-03-17 15:04:31 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463278650 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463279409 At first the main audience are the other actors, film makers as well as the film enthusiasts in the room

during the speech the audience shifts to humanity as a whole ]]> 2020-03-17 15:05:03 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463279409 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463284831 the purpose shifts from an ordinary acceptance speech towards a speech that should provoke and shed light on pressing issues, he expresses concerns and appeals for change, and expresses that „we“ all share the same goal ]]> 2020-03-17 15:08:49 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463284831 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463291690 1) primarily: people at Oscars: fellow actors, regisseurs, etc.
2) people watching Oscars in front of TV
3) people watching just this speech
--> could be everyone with different backgrounds]]> 2020-03-17 15:13:21 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463291690 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463293970 2020-03-17 15:14:45 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463293970 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463295196 2020-03-17 15:15:32 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463295196 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463297484 "cries of anguish" (cow)
"Run to rescue with love, and peace will follow"
--> arousal of strong emotions; get intention of audience --> theatre/film and thereby figurative and metaphorical per se

2) inclusive "we" vs. "her" (cow)
"The belief that we're the centre of the universe"
"we steal her baby"
--> makes injustice even worse and exclusion of everything from humanity; condemnation of actions by humanity for no reason

3) emotive lexis; vogue/'buzz' words
"love and compassion"
"inequality", "rights", "injustice", "humanity", etc.
--> arouses emotions in audience, makes audience feel with the told injustices

4) rhetorical devices
anaphora
"one nation, one people, one race, one gender or one species"
--> more emotional, gives structure, climactic: more dramatic
Tricolon
"create, develop and implement systems of change"
--> climactic: more dramatic; easy to keep in mind

]]> 2020-03-17 15:17:02 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463297484 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463306891 for now: use of present simple
for development: present perfect
--> strengthens the difference: selfish, cruel man vs. selfless, supportive and loving man now
--> appeal to strive for same development]]> 2020-03-17 15:23:55 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463306891 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463311799
clear paragraphs; new ideas introduced and linked (linking words) --> cohesive text --> lexical chains, linking words, pronouns, parallelism, repetition (see lexis), etc.

coherent text: makes sense, new ideas clearly introduced, developed and linked

textual development: chronological (now, his thoughts, ideas developed from thoughts, personal development as example, appeal to all, end]]> 2020-03-17 15:27:38 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463311799 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463358570 First of all, the other nominees, actors, people working in the entertainment industry.
Second all the people watching the speech online or on TV,
Third, all human kind
-> "And i think that´s when we are at our best" "That is the best of humanity"]]> 2020-03-17 16:00:59 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463358570 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463373101 Monologue]]> 2020-03-17 16:10:40 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463373101 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463381470 To encourage people to change their view and behaviour  towards the world, to demonstrate that when we support each other and look out for each other we can change the world and make it a better place

]]> 2020-03-17 16:16:51 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463381470 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463387622 1) Personification: refers to the cow as she and Attributes her with the human Emotion sadness "her cries of anguish are unmistakeable".
2) Parallelism: "I have been a scoundrel in my life. I have been selfish, I have been cruel.."
3) direct pronuoun we and us "But i think the greatest gift that is given me, and many of us in this room"

]]> 2020-03-17 16:21:03 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463387622 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463395123 2020-03-17 16:26:06 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463395123 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463397497 h]]> 2020-03-17 16:27:42 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463397497 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463399032 - gratitude ( I'm full of gratitude) 
- saving face (I do not feel elevated above any of my fellow nominees) 
- encouragement/advice (when we use love and compassion as our guiding principles [...]) 
- motivation ([...] when we guide each other, that is the best of humanity.)]]> 2020-03-17 16:28:46 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463399032 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463400405 Introduces the topic by saying how thankful he is for being able to use his voice for the voiceless, he starts the first paragraph by saying he sees commonality BUT and then he introduces his main topic we have become disconnected from the nature, we exploit the nature and are egocentric. in the secondhalf of the speech he demonstates what he wants humans to change and finish the speech with a Quote taken from a song from his brother

]]> 2020-03-17 16:29:40 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463400405 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463489750 including plea/appeal]]> 2020-03-17 17:28:45 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463489750 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463490143 guests of the Oscar event primarily, however, also people watching at home or via social media

]]> 2020-03-17 17:29:01 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463490143 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463492054 to raise awareness towards the responsibility every single one of us has towards each other, a responsibility of treating each other and our environment better]]> 2020-03-17 17:30:15 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463492054 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463501827 emotive language: fight, injustice, anguish,...
inclusive "we": "We've become very disconnected", "many of us"
informational text -> high lexical density? gender inequality, racism, queer rights,... fight, injustice, gender species,...

]]> 2020-03-17 17:37:51 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463501827 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463504931 informational text due to present simple -> I think, we're guilty, we go,...

]]> 2020-03-17 17:40:18 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463504931 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463505593 informational text due to present simple -> I think, we're guilty, we go,...
parallelism: I have been]]> 2020-03-17 17:40:52 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463505593 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463505670 informational text due to present simple -> I think, we're guilty, we go,...
parallelism: I have been]]> 2020-03-17 17:40:55 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463505670 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463506440 informational text due to present simple -> I think, we're guilty, we go,...
parallelism: I have been]]> 2020-03-17 17:41:28 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463506440 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463506950 informational text due to present simple -> I think, we're guilty, we go,...
parallelism: I have been]]> 2020-03-17 17:41:51 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463506950 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507029 informational text due to present simple -> I think, we're guilty, we go,...
parallelism: I have been]]> 2020-03-17 17:41:55 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507029 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507077 informational text due to present simple -> I think, we're guilty, we go,...
parallelism: I have been]]> 2020-03-17 17:41:57 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507077 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507084 informational text due to present simple -> I think, we're guilty, we go,...
parallelism: I have been]]> 2020-03-17 17:41:58 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507084 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507207 informational text due to present simple -> I think, we're guilty, we go,...
parallelism: I have been]]> 2020-03-17 17:42:03 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507207 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507278 informational text due to present simple -> I think, we're guilty, we go,...
parallelism: I have been]]> 2020-03-17 17:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507278 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507330 informational text due to present simple -> I think, we're guilty, we go,...
parallelism: I have been]]> 2020-03-17 17:42:09 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507330 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507523 informational text due to present simple -> I think, we're guilty, we go,...
parallelism: I have been]]> 2020-03-17 17:42:18 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507523 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507592 informational text due to present simple -> I think, we're guilty, we go,...
parallelism: I have been]]> 2020-03-17 17:42:21 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507592 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507719 informational text due to present simple -> I think, we're guilty, we go,...
parallelism: I have been]]> 2020-03-17 17:42:27 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463507719 https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463509594 begins on very personal note (his feeling right now), ends on even more personal note (dead brother's lyrics)]]> 2020-03-17 17:43:53 UTC https://padlet.com/gabrielle_smith4/utxtf0otfoul/wish/463509594