Structural tecniques in Stone Cold by Mr Maxwell https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm Made with collaboration en-us 2016-12-09 10:07:15 UTC 2016-12-10 09:29:58 UTC hello@padlet.com Sequencing amaxwell10 https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142753058 The extract starts with Shelter telling us he's been "out tonight". This creates suspense as we then want to find out exactly what he's been up to.]]> 2016-12-09 10:09:59 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142753058 https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142761866 2016-12-09 11:17:50 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142761866 Harlz https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142761936 The writer is creating suspense. He is explaining how hard his army life was when he puts 'Have you got any change?he says. I looked him up and down and i said Change?? I'd change you my lad, if I had you in Khaki for six weeks. It didn't  go in though. He just smiled and said have a nice night. Cracker up his arse, thats what he wants. That would wake him up.  That or 6 weeks at Strensall. National service. Shelter is feeling sorry for himself.]]> 2016-12-09 11:18:30 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142761936 1st person https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142761990 JORDAN MUKISA ]]> 2016-12-09 11:18:58 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142761990 first person https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762141 they write in first person point of view]]> 2016-12-09 11:20:19 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762141 "yes,and what thanks do i get?" is a rhetorical question. https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762145 Faduma]]> 2016-12-09 11:20:20 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762145 aliyya khan https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762192 at the end of the extract swindells make Suspense by saying, "they cant stop me doing that,and i will."when he says they cant stop that ,the reader would be thinking ,stop what! ]]> 2016-12-09 11:20:55 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762192 ife https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762260 the author creates suspense by adding first person to make something feel suspicious]]> 2016-12-09 11:21:31 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762260 Short sentences https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762303 "Tha'd wake him up"
Creates suspense makes you read on.
Klaudia]]> 2016-12-09 11:22:00 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762303 Josephine https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762331 The writer uses short sentences to make the scene seem short ,snappy and simple.

The writer uses 1st person to show Shelter's perspective about the homeless.]]> 2016-12-09 11:22:16 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762331 Senam https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762346 Swindells creates suspense in this extract when it says "One cheeky little bugger" This creates suspense because it will make the reader think who is the person.]]> 2016-12-09 11:22:24 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762346 re ;) https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762379 he creates a mysterious atmosphere. The writer gives hints to what the character is about to do.]]> 2016-12-09 11:22:35 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762379 set the united kingdom https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762385 JORDAN MUKISA]]> 2016-12-09 11:22:39 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762385 fatemeh https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762426 short sentences]]> 2016-12-09 11:23:05 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762426 the author creates suspence in his writing https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762477 sahar]]> 2016-12-09 11:23:34 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762477 ellis https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762479 he uses short sentences 'year after year']]> 2016-12-09 11:23:35 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762479 Jade https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762483 ''And I found them.'' This creates suspense as the reader thinks ''Found who?'' and it makes the reader eager to find out who '' them '' really is.]]> 2016-12-09 11:23:36 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762483 jack and blake https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762555 "yes, and what thanks do i get? this is a rhetorical question.]]> 2016-12-09 11:23:52 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762555 strange atmosphere https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762565 JORDAN MUKISA]]> 2016-12-09 11:23:56 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762565 mohammad https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762616 "yes and what thanks do i get" is a rhetorical question  because there is no answer to it.]]> 2016-12-09 11:24:12 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762616 JORDAN MUKISA https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762620 suspense]]> 2016-12-09 11:24:16 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762620 Ammar https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762773 Swindells doesn't properly say why he was removed out of the army and he just says medical grounds and there is a simile as fit as a butcher's dog.]]> 2016-12-09 11:25:11 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142762773 Isa Robinson https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142763025 first person]]> 2016-12-09 11:26:49 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142763025 "by golly" is repetition https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142763058 nafisa

]]> 2016-12-09 11:27:05 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142763058 At he end of the extract, the writer leaves the reader with a cliff hanger. https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142763098 Faduma]]> 2016-12-09 11:27:25 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142763098 kelise https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142763229 "but i can clean up the garbage cant i?" the writer uses a rhetorical question.]]> 2016-12-09 11:28:22 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142763229 aly https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142763231 The writer uses  first person to make it sound more authentic]]> 2016-12-09 11:28:23 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142763231 ellis https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142763299 he says 'i found them' this creates suspense because it wants to make us read on to see who he found .]]> 2016-12-09 11:28:50 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142763299 https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142763363 short sentences "into men. and i did it,too. year after year."]]> 2016-12-09 11:29:16 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142763363 aliyya khan https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765000 "im forty seven and im as fit as a butchers dog." this is a similie. this tells us that shelter had been training alot in the past and he still does.]]> 2016-12-09 11:41:37 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765000 mohammed I https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765443 fit as a butchers dog]]> 2016-12-09 11:45:07 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765443 Ammar https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765455 Shelter feels really angry about the homeless people covering the streets and says that he will  clean up the garbage himself , what garbage? maybe the homeless people? or who.]]> 2016-12-09 11:45:12 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765455 Harlz_78 https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765459 In this extract it is all about shelter and basically he is explaining how much Shelter hates homeless people and how he hates how they beg and ask for change and that if they had a taste of army life it would be totally hard for them and that they are all puffs and they think they have a hard life on the streets. Shelter is also thinking he has had the hardest life in the world and that no one else has had a harder life than him. Proof that Shelter hates homeless people is that the phrase says. 'Hundreds of the scruffy blighters, lying around making the place look manky'. Another piece of evidence is when Shelter says 'Soldiers,that's what it made of them'. Because Shelter was in the army he thinks he is the strongest man in the world when he puts  'I'm 47 and i'm as fit as a butchers dog'. So Swindells has used certain phrases which makes the reader think that Shelter thinks the world of himself. Harley.]]> 2016-12-09 11:45:13 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765459 Klaudia https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765462 "I can't turn the garbage into men anymore, but I can clean up the garbage, can't I?" He keeps repeating the word garbage. When he says garbage he means homeless people.]]> 2016-12-09 11:45:15 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765462 The dominant voice is shelter. The reader can see what shelter thinks and what he does. this is obsession towards "cleaning up the garbage". https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765465 Faduma]]> 2016-12-09 11:45:16 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765465 Jade https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765486 ''I'm fit as a butcher's dog. '' Is a metaphor, as Shelter does not allow the fact he has mental health problems.]]> 2016-12-09 11:45:25 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765486 the writer uses repation and a cliff hanger to end the extract in suspence https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765488 Ife]]> 2016-12-09 11:45:26 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765488 re https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765490 good adverbs

]]> 2016-12-09 11:45:26 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765490 aliyya khan https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765508 swindells explains shelters past by using a range of different sentences to make it sound interesting .an example of this is when he says"they buck me out,29 years' service and they turn around and chuck me out.medical grounds,it says on my chit"
this tells us that shelter was chucked out of the army after 29 years, with medical issues. this also creates suspence because shelter doesnt tell us what medical issue he has.we can infer that shelter has had a knock on the head]]> 2016-12-09 11:45:36 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765508 jack https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765543 first person]]> 2016-12-09 11:45:45 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765543 Senam V2 https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765571 In this extract the writer gives a impression of Shelter. The impression that reader gets on Shelter is that he hates homeless people. When it says "Hundreds of the scruffy blighters , lying around making the place look manky" This shows that shelter does not like the homeless because ]]> 2016-12-09 11:46:01 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765571 Sasha https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765618 "I can't turn garbage into men anymore, but i can clean up the garbage, can't I?" and  "By golly I will."
This shows us that Shelter is obsessed with harming the homeless and he uses repetition, suspense and obsession to show that. It also shows us that Shelter also has a lot of paranoia. ]]> 2016-12-09 11:46:22 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765618 Isa Robinson https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765619 there not going to stop me]]> 2016-12-09 11:46:22 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765619 " want to flood the country with winos and crims" this is exaggeration and a metaphor. https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765652 nafisa]]> 2016-12-09 11:46:37 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765652 mohammed i https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765695 civil servants and social workers]]> 2016-12-09 11:46:57 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765695 ellis https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765715 i cant turn garbage into men anymore but i can clean the garbage cant ? ' this is a rhetorical question.]]> 2016-12-09 11:47:08 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765715 VERBS https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765809

]]> 2016-12-09 11:47:55 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765809 kelise https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765827 "to turn dirty,scruffy,pimply, youths into Soldiers" this makes you want to read on but, what does he mean bye Soldiers by Soldiers because he isn't in the army no more.]]> 2016-12-09 11:48:00 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765827 mohammad https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765874 "theyre all part of the plant now" is suspense because you dont know what the plan is ]]> 2016-12-09 11:48:24 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765874 https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765879 the writer uses repetition "By golly i did it" and "By golly i will" ]]> 2016-12-09 11:48:26 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765879 extract https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765990 shelter really hates homeless people]]> 2016-12-09 11:49:27 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142765990 jack https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766000 first person sounds authentic]]> 2016-12-09 11:49:31 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766000 LINKS PAST VIEWS TO HELP STORY https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766078 JORDAN MUKISA]]> 2016-12-09 11:50:11 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766078 Blake https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766136 the writer uses a simile when it says "i'm forty-seven and as fit as a butcher's dog" this shows that shelter thinks the army chucked him out for medical grounds as an excuse. ]]> 2016-12-09 11:50:42 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766136 "twenty nine years of service" shelter is the dominant voice https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766212 nafisa]]> 2016-12-09 11:51:30 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766212 kelise https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766484 "hundreds of scruffy blinders"]]> 2016-12-09 11:54:05 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766484 sentences https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766501 2016-12-09 11:54:19 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766501 sahar https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766543 swindells is a good author

]]> 2016-12-09 11:54:49 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766543 JORDAN MUKISA https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766586 THE AUTHOR CREATES SUPSENCE BY MYSTERIOUS THAT MAKE THE READER ASK QUESTIONES TO THEMSELF]]> 2016-12-09 11:55:18 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766586 I am 47 and i'm as fit as a butcher's dog. this is a metaphor https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766704 2016-12-09 11:56:42 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766704 extract https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766729 Shelter has a problem he is mentally sick]]> 2016-12-09 11:56:56 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766729 . https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766803 2016-12-09 11:57:39 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766803 short snappy https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766812 senteces]]> 2016-12-09 11:57:44 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766812 . https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766828 2016-12-09 11:57:55 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766828 " i can clean up the the garbage , can't i? one of the techinque here is a rhetorical question https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766866 aly]]> 2016-12-09 11:58:19 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766866 sahar https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766960 shelter is mentally ill!]]> 2016-12-09 11:59:10 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142766960 jack W https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142767009 Shelter hates homless people.We know this because he says " I can clean out the garbage cant I? they cant stop me from doing that, and i will, by golly I will." This show he wants to kill all the homless people in the streets because they make the streets look messy.]]> 2016-12-09 11:59:39 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142767009 kelise https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142767071 "hundreds of the scruffy blighters" this shows that shelter HATES homeless and he thinks that they are everywhere making the streets scruffy]]> 2016-12-09 12:00:17 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142767071 This is about Shelter https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142767141 Having said that Shelter is mentally ill part of the crime he's done isn't his fault because of it, but some people might say that he should be able to manage and control it.]]> 2016-12-09 12:01:03 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142767141 kelise https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142767264 "they're all part of the plot see?" the author uses a rhetorical question.]]> 2016-12-09 12:02:25 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142767264 kelise https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142767514 once shelter has is going to do something nobody can stop him we know this when he says "they're not going to stop me."]]> 2016-12-09 12:05:04 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142767514 https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142767527 cool bro]]> 2016-12-09 12:05:12 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142767527 ellis https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142937058 he uses language in this extract to create suspense]]> 2016-12-10 09:22:22 UTC https://padlet.com/amaxwell10/ushihxe05zwm/wish/142937058