https://padlet.com/23kchiang/urgkmumeqt79 Hey, welcome to my padlet! Thanks for reading my pieces, I'd love any feedback you'd like to give me, but please, keep it to constructive criticism:) en-us 2018-02-01 13:36:42 UTC 2018-03-02 17:49:43 UTC hello@padlet.com 23nsaeheng https://padlet.com/23kchiang/urgkmumeqt79/wish/237373962 I love the details that you put into your writing. I can tell that you didn't rush through your writing, just to get it over with. ]]> 2018-03-02 13:19:57 UTC https://padlet.com/23kchiang/urgkmumeqt79/wish/237373962 23nsaeheng https://padlet.com/23kchiang/urgkmumeqt79/wish/237375133 I liked the way you explained everything, little by little.  I also liked your hook. It made me want to read more. ]]> 2018-03-02 13:23:39 UTC https://padlet.com/23kchiang/urgkmumeqt79/wish/237375133 23nsaeheng https://padlet.com/23kchiang/urgkmumeqt79/wish/237375696 One thing that I did notice was, you forgot your title. ]]> 2018-03-02 13:25:12 UTC https://padlet.com/23kchiang/urgkmumeqt79/wish/237375696 23lsimeon https://padlet.com/23kchiang/urgkmumeqt79/wish/237381403 In the future, I suggest using a ]]> 2018-03-02 13:40:36 UTC https://padlet.com/23kchiang/urgkmumeqt79/wish/237381403 23abalagot https://padlet.com/23kchiang/urgkmumeqt79/wish/237521299 Dear Kendall, I think your vignette is amazing. Firstly, I love the description and you described everything at a slow pace which let me get a picture of it in my head. Secondly, your ending was an excellent way of ending your story. It really made me felt like you loved that moment, and had a fun time with your family. Lastly, I think you should work on word choice in the future. Overall, your story was extravagant. 
-Abbey B]]> 2018-03-02 17:47:01 UTC https://padlet.com/23kchiang/urgkmumeqt79/wish/237521299