https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f 사랑을 담아 만듦 en-us 2021-06-07 10:41:10 UTC 2025-11-13 04:32:12 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f970.png positivejhpark https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1589597414 소싸움을 바라보며 다른 사람들처럼 즐기지 않고 소의 입장을 생각한 시인의 마음씨가 돋보였다.]]> 2021-06-07 10:42:35 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1589597414 positivejhpark https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1589597628 마지막 연..
수고했다
그리고
미안하다.

지치면 그만해도 돼!
힘들면 쉬어도 돼!


]]> 2021-06-07 10:42:47 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1589597628 positivejhpark https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1589597990 두 마리의 큰 황소가 뿔을 받으며 싸우는 장면, 그 모습을 바라보는 구경꾼들, 구경꾼들 사이에서 슬픈 눈으로 소들을 바라보는 시인]]> 2021-06-07 10:43:04 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1589597990 positivejhpark https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1589598110 까랑박 선생님의 시 낭송]]> 2021-06-07 10:43:11 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1589598110 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1594930252 돌멩이가 많은 거친 땅에서 힘들게 
꽃을 피운 민들레를 걱정하는 
마음을 표현했다.]]> 2021-06-09 05:29:28 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1594930252 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1594935251 별들이 많고 반짝리는 것 같다]]> 2021-06-09 05:32:31 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1594935251 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1594952298 마음이 녹아 든다
별들도 세상을 사랑함이겠지]]> 2021-06-09 05:42:12 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1594952298 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1594959347 그래도 걱정하지 마
그리고 슬퍼하지도 마]]> 2021-06-09 05:45:59 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1594959347 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1594961101 밤에 별이 많을 것 같다]]> 2021-06-09 05:46:58 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1594961101 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1594963175 돌멩이가 많은 거친 땅에서 힘들게 꽃을 피운 민들레, 돌을 모른 척하고 
지나가는 햇살과 바람]]> 2021-06-09 05:48:02 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1594963175 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1594975772 2021-06-09 05:55:17 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1594975772 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595045567 수술하러가는날
엄마가 수술이잘됬나궁굼햐서]]> 2021-06-09 06:34:59 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595045567 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595052917 엄마는 다시 돌아올거니까 ]]> 2021-06-09 06:39:25 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595052917 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595057587 2021-06-09 06:42:04 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595057587 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595066205 2021-06-09 06:47:03 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595066205 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595084162 산골의 봄
산골에서 지내는 봄이 궁글 해서]]> 2021-06-09 06:57:57 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595084162 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595097082 '엄마가 아파서 기침하는 소리가
듣기 슬퍼'라는 말을 시로 잘 나타냈다.]]> 2021-06-09 07:06:02 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595097082 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595113930 내 귀에 들리는 것이 아픔이 아니기를,내마음을 허공에 띄웠다,그날 새벽은 무서움 이었다]]> 2021-06-09 07:15:53 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595113930 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595125495 엄마가 아플까봐 두려운 마음 


]]> 2021-06-09 07:22:32 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595125495 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595182807 수술을 잘했나 걱정되서]]> 2021-06-09 07:57:08 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595182807 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595184936 그러나 마음속에서 내 손을 잡고 있는 것은 나도 아닌 엄마 였다]]> 2021-06-09 07:58:20 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595184936 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595198756 2021-06-09 08:07:28 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595198756 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595245610 여름의 밤은 어떻게 생겼는지 궁금해서]]> 2021-06-09 08:39:30 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595245610 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595247661 2.재미나 감동을 느낀 부분.
반딧불이 가는길 달빛도 쉬는 여름밤 가는 길이다]]> 2021-06-09 08:40:50 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595247661 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595250251 여름의 밤이다]]> 2021-06-09 08:42:33 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595250251 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595371957 반딧불이의 날갯짓으로여름을 쓸어 내리자는 표현이 재미있어서

]]> 2021-06-09 10:08:13 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595371957 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595375101 빛이 이끄는대로 따라갔을때,
여름에서 튀어나온 반딧불이가,
또다른 세상의 아름다움을  
선물해 주었다]]> 2021-06-09 10:11:00 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595375101 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595382027 이 시는 '산'이라는 제목을 가진 시이다.]]> 2021-06-09 10:17:01 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595382027 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595383014 2021-06-09 10:17:56 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595383014 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595386785 가파른 산과 조그만 사람의 그림이 나를 사로잡았다. 그림으로 봐서 어떤 한 사람이 가파른 산을 올라가려고 무지 애쓰는 내용의 시로 추측된다. 반면, 그 사람은 산의 올라가서 엄청난 보람을 느낄 것 같다. ]]> 2021-06-09 10:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595386785 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595390259 과연 사람은 산 오르기에 성공할까? 설마 떨어져 죽는 건 아니겠지? ㅠㅠ]]> 2021-06-09 10:24:21 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595390259 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595395047 그림자의 형태와 행동을 
잘 표현해서,생각과 느낌을 잘 
써서]]> 2021-06-09 10:28:03 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595395047 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595407667 2021-06-09 10:39:29 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595407667 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595409312 브금 추가했더니 하울링 장난아님]]> 2021-06-09 10:41:02 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595409312 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595410751 마지막연:그림자는 오랫동안
내 옆에서 나를 지키는 전봇대가
되었다.]]> 2021-06-09 10:42:20 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595410751 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595415987 2021-06-09 10:47:07 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595415987 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595420352 2021-06-09 10:51:01 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595420352 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595438382 2021-06-09 11:06:26 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595438382 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595439161 시인의 마음이잘 드러나서]]> 2021-06-09 11:07:06 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595439161 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595440356 가슴을 두드리는 엄마의 깊은 기침 소리에]]> 2021-06-09 11:08:12 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595440356 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595440830 2021-06-09 11:08:36 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595440830 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595443648 신발 꽃]]> 2021-06-09 11:11:02 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595443648 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595444912 2021-06-09 11:12:04 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595444912 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595445140 신발에 담긴 가족의 이야기가  
책을 덮어도 머릿속에서 
오래 기역에 남아서]]> 2021-06-09 11:12:17 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595445140 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595449191 하루를 마친 가족들이 모여 앉아 
도란도란 각자의 일과를 이야기하는 장면]]> 2021-06-09 11:15:31 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595449191 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595449852 2021-06-09 11:16:01 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595449852 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595456113 2021-06-09 11:20:52 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595456113 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595494470 2021-06-09 11:48:48 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595494470 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595502628 우리가족
엄마가 아파도 가족과 지내는지 궁금 해서]]> 2021-06-09 11:54:23 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595502628 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595531362 엄마가 수술하러 가서 걱정 되는 마음, 미안한 마음, 슬픈 마음 등 여러 슬픈 감정들이 어울려 잘 나타냈다고 생각 하여 이 시를 선택 했다.]]> 2021-06-09 12:11:45 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595531362 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595533116 내 눈에 눈물이 고이고 있었지만 지금은 참아야 한다고 생각했다. 
엄마를 보내야 하니까
( 2연 )

그러나 마음속에서 내손을 잡고 있는것은 나도 아닌 엄마였다.
( 4연 )]]> 2021-06-09 12:12:49 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595533116 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595536693 내 앞에서 엄마가 멀어지려 할 때 내 눈이 흐릿해서 안보이는 거라 생각했다. 그래도 엄마는 다시 돌아온다고 생각하고 기다렸다.]]> 2021-06-09 12:14:42 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595536693 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595558956 이 시 완전 감동...... ㅜㅜ]]> 2021-06-09 12:25:57 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595558956 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595791248 2021-06-09 13:49:35 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595791248 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595800184 2021-06-09 13:52:11 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1595800184 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1603313370 학교를 왜 못가는지 궁금해서]]> 2021-06-13 12:06:30 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1603313370 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1603315322 '네가 가,네가 가'하고 돌멩이를 던졌다.]]> 2021-06-13 12:09:46 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1603315322 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1603317899 비가 와서 학교에 못가는 장면]]> 2021-06-13 12:14:09 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1603317899 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1603323594 2021-06-13 12:24:13 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1603323594 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1637300513 고슴도치야 고슴도치야]]> 2021-07-05 13:02:28 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1637300513 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1637301612 재미있어서]]> 2021-07-05 13:03:25 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1637301612 https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1637307544 2021-07-05 13:08:39 UTC https://padlet.com/positivejhpark/ur45wcr1zno7gc0f/wish/1637307544