We realised that our script was very plain and needed a better structure. This led us to dig deeper into the focal points of our inspiration and ablating us to have a caring understanding of the story we wish to tell. 

With Natasha’s feedback the conclusions we come to, we managed to alter our initial script. We incorporated our own writing to connect the scenes and characters in a more relevant way than from the start. Moreover, we gave the characters an intro, so the audience could have a clearer understanding of what’s happening from a beginning.

-focus on arm and hand movement (we used gloves)

-it was hard to move legs (sit with crossed legs) 

-exaggerating every movement, putting more effort and purpose into it

-exploring different cat like movements such as licking paws or arching back and stretching

 

Moreover, we were also inspired by Bretch’s method of exposing the actions and transitions to the audience. The only action we don’t show is Thor´s breakdown in the suites which we chose to incorporate through voice over due to wanting to experiment with other media technologies.