1. 종이로 나눠 준 위 체크리스트에 항목별로 수정 검토하면서 영어 에세이 왼성하기

2. 그리고 헤당 번호 탭에 학번 이름 쓰고 타이핑한 영어 에세이로 업로드하기

3. 체크 리스트는 자신이 작성하여 선생님께 제출하기

prompt:

Hi, Nice to meet you. I am writing an English essay about the environment. If there are any grammar mistakes in my sentences, please correct them and explain why.

A family is eatting ramen. They are useing disposable items. People poured ramen soup into the toilet. Why did people pour ramen soup into the toilet? We should recycling waste proper. There is many food waste.

1. 에세이의 구조화: 3가지 구조로 작성하되, intro에는 환경에 해를 끼치는 상황 설명을 쓰고, body에는 앞 상황에 대한 problem을 분명히 드러내고 그 이유와 원인 분석을 제시할 것, 그리고 conclusion에는 앞에서 제시한 problem에 대한 실천적 행동을 제안하기

2. 형식: 총 10개 이내의 문장으로 정리하고, 중1 학생들이 이해하기 쉬운 영어 표현과 간결한 문장으로 정리할 것

3. 3. 문법: I think~ 구문과 I /We should~구문을 반드시 1개씩 포함할 것

I think plastic is used too much and not much of it gets recycled. A lot of the plastic waste comes from food packaging, like wrappers and containers. This is a big problem because plastic can harm the environment.

Body:

We seem to use plastic in our daily lives a lot, like plastic bags, bottles, and straws. These items are often used once and then thrown away. Since plastic doesn't get recycled well, it ends up in landfills or the ocean, hurting animals and plants.

Conclusion:

To help solve this problem, I am trying to use less plastic. We should bring our own reusable bags when we go shopping and use reusable water bottles. By making small changes like these, we can reduce the amount of plastic waste we create and protect our planet.

introduction:The restaurant uses eco-friendly containers instead of plastic containers, which seems to aim at reducing the use of plastic.

Body:If we don't recycle plastic and use it excessively, it can end up in the ocean, breaking down into microplastics that can enter our bodies.

Conclusion:Let's reduce the use of plastic and use containers made from corn starch, and make sure to recycle properly.

Introduction : i want to talk about food waste . Food waste is incresing, and the process of dispoosing of it is causing pollution to the earth.

Body A : Food waste discared by people amount to one-third of the total food supply. Because people are wasting food.

Conclusion : Implement a good system for people who generate less food waste.

Introduction

There is too much waste from plastic containers every time I order delivery food.

Body:

I think it's plastic because it's the most convenient and commonly used in deliveries.

Conclusion:

Use small containers or tumblers instead of plastic, or reduce delivery orders. Also, recycle properly.

Introduction

When plastic is thrown into the ocean, it breaks down into tiny pieces called microplastics. These cause many problems for the sea and our lives. I think we should use less plastic packaging.

Even though people try to recycle plastic, it often can't be recycled because different types of plastic are mixed together. So, many plastic trashes are not separated.

I think that people should recycle more and more.

And companies have to reduce many types of plastics.

Body : We have been throwing away food waste with the other trash. We didn't know this was making methane gas, which is very bad for the Earth.

Conclusion : We should have special bins for food waste so it can be thrown away separately from other trash.

Introduction:

1. I cannot stand seeing plastic waste piling up.

2. I think plastic is a big problem for the Earth.

Body:

3. This is because it harms the environment and is difficult to recycle.

4. Plastic takes a very long time to decompose.

5. It is also dangerous for sea animals.

6. To solve this problem, we should use materials like straw and paper tape.

7. This way, we can harm the environment less.

8. It is also important to use reusable items.

Conclusion:

9. We should reduce the use of single-use plastics.

10. By doing this, we can make the Earth cleaner

Introduction:

I cannot stand seeing plastic waste piling up.

I think plastic is a big problem for the Earth.

Body:

This is because it harms the environment and is difficult to recycle.

Plastic takes a very long time to decompose.

It is also dangerous for sea animals.

To solve this problem, we should use materials like straw and paper tape.

This way, we can harm the environment less.

It is also important to use reusable items.

Conclusion:

We should reduce the use of single-use plastics.

By doing this, we can make the Earth cleaner

And I'm asking if you're sick

1. introduction Disposable waste has increased so much that it is now difficult to find land to bury it.

2.Body

I think is A lot of disposable waste comes from food delivery, and it is not being properly managed.

3.Conclusion

We should not throw trash into the sewer or on the ground. Instead, we should sort it and put it in the right trash cans.

I think food waste has a big impact on global warming. Food waste makes methane gas, which is 21 times stronger than carbon dioxide. So, throwing away food makes the Earth warmer.

Body:

Every year, a lot of food is wasted. This is one-third of all the food in the world. Food waste is a problem because it makes methane gas and warms the Earth.

Conclusion:

We should throw away food waste properly and cook only what we can eat.

INTRO

I think the large amount of waste is a significant problem, and fitting a year's worth into a single jar seems impossible to me. I learned about zero waste through this video. Practicing zero waste benefits both the environment and myself, and we should start as soon as possible.

BODY

As mentioned earlier, the large amount of waste is also a significant problem. A large of waste not only creates garbage island in the ocean. But also produces unpleasant odors. We must address zero waste quickly.

CONCLUTION

The first solution is for as many people as possible to practice zero waste. the scond solution is for people to pay more attention to recycling and reduce the amount of disposable waste they produce. Since both issues can be somewhat resolve through zero waste, so we should implement it as soon as possible

The US made a lot of trash, but they did not recycle it. This caused problems for the environment.

Body (4 sentences)

The whole country did not have recycling rules. Only some states had recycling rules. Many people did not know much about recycling.

I think the government did not try hard enough, and people were not educated enough. This caused the problem.

Conclusion (4 sentences)

We need to make rules for recycling at the country and state levels. We should teach people how to recycle and why it is important.

I believe these things can make more recycling happen. This will reduce pollution and gas that is bad for the environment. We all need to work to protect the earth.

Introduction

The United States produces a lot of garbage. Some of it can be recycled, but people often throw dirty or food waste into recycling bins, it making recycling harder.

Body

As a result, a lot of garbage is buried (50%) or burned about (11%). Buried garbage produces methane gas, which is 20 times stronger than carbon dioxide at causing global warming.

Conclusion

To solve this problem, we need to recycle better. We need to rinse recyclables before tossing them.

Introduction:

Global warming is getting worse.

This is because we are emitting a lot of greenhouse gases.

Body:

We use a lot of plastics.

When we burn plastics, they release a lot of greenhouse gases.

These gases make global warming worse.

So, we need to use less plastic.

Conclusion:

Instead, we can use plastics made from straw or corn starch.

These eco-friendly plastics emit fewer greenhouse gases.

We should use more of these eco-friendly plastics.

Everyone needs to help fight global warming.

I think food waste is a big problem.

Body

A large amount of food waste creates a lot of methane gas, causing serious environmental pollution.

I think people are not separating food waste properly, and this is causing serious environmental problems.

A large amount of methane gas from food waste is threatening the Earth.

We should create a place to dispose of only food waste.

I think this will help reduce the methane gas produced from food waste.

We should also charge a fee based on the weight of food waste thrown away.

I think this will encourage people to separate their food waste more carefully.

We should educate people about the importance of separating food waste.

Conclusion

I think these actions will help protect our environment and reduce pollution

intro

The USA is making more trash than other developed countries.

And that trash is going landfills.

body

Trash in landfills, thay make ozone.

Ozone is accelerate global warming.

intro

I think we shoud recycling and up-cycling together.

Recycling is important way to reduce trash going to landfills.

Also properly sorting recyclables is important.

Up-cycling is abandoned trash changing a new goods.

Recycling and up-cycling is trash isn't going to go to landfills.

Doesn't go to the landfills is slow down global warmming.

Introduction:

In the United States, most people do not know how to properly dispose of their waste, so they bury it in the ground. Therefore, the methane gas problem is severe in the United States.

Body:

I think the major problem is the lack of information and resources. Additionally, the U.S. faces serious issues with landfill waste. Most of the trash is buried in landfills. This practice leads to significant methane gas emissions. Methane is a potent greenhouse gas and it contributes to climate change.

Conclusion:

We should improve recycling education and infrastructure. Reducing landfill waste can help lower methane emissions. Everyone needs to work together to solve these environmental problems.

Introduction

I think the U.S. does not recycle well.

Because of this, trash is buried, which makes methane gas.

Body

One reason is that recycling is hard for many people.

Another reason is that many people do not know how to recycle.

Conclusion

This leads to more buried trash.

To fix this, the government should make the same recycling rules everywhere.

Same rules would make it easier for everyone to recycle.

People should also try hard to recycle more.

By doing this, we can reduce plastic waste and help the environment.

Global Warming is mainly caused by different types of waste.Various other waste like electronics, clothing, and disposable items all have a big impact on the environment. These days, the waste is not properly managed and recycled and it leads to the serious environmental problems.

BODY

The biggest environmental problem today is the large amount of waste and the fact that much of it is not properly recycled but instead is buried in the land.In landfills, waste also produces greenhouse gases. Landfill can also make harmful substances to human body.

CONCLUSION

The best way to solve this problem is to reduce the amount of waste from the beginning. However, drastically reducing waste in a short time is almost impossible. Therefore, it is important to gradually reduce the production of goods. Global Warming is getting worse, so we should try everything we can do for environment.

I think food waste is a big problem.

Body

A large amount of food waste creates a lot of methane gas, causing serious environmental pollution.

I think people are not separating food waste properly, and this is causing serious environmental problems.

A large amount of methane gas from food waste is threatening the Earth.

We should create a place to dispose of only food waste.

I think this will help reduce the methane gas produced from food waste.

We should also charge a fee based on the weight of food waste thrown away.

I think this will encourage people to separate their food waste more carefully.

We should educate people about the importance of separating food waste.

Conclusion

I think these actions will help protect our environment and reduce pollution

The global issue of waste management is being addressed through zero waste practices, where individuals reduce and collect their waste. The most serious problems are waste management and global warming, with waste accumulating in the oceans due to improper disposal and recycling.

body

Waste management issues lead to marine pollution and contribute to global warming. Littering and improper recycling harm marine ecosystems, while emissions from burning waste, factories, and cars exacerbate global warming, threatening all life on Earth.

conclusion

Do not litter and recycle properly. Use public transportation to reduce emissions. Reduce plastic use, adopt eco-friendly products, and practice zero waste. Small actions can lead to significant changes.

In New York, food waste in landfills produces methane gas, which is 21 times more powerful than carbon dioxide in causing global warming. This is a big threat to our planet.

Body

Problem: Methane gas makes global warming worse.

A lot of methane gas is released when treating food waste.

Conclusion

By doing these easy steps, we can reduce methane gas emissions and slow down global warming. It's important for everyone to help protect our planet.

The increasing amount of microplastics is becoming a problem. I think we should start reducing our use of plastics from now on.

Body:We use plastic in our daily lives without much thought. This plastic flows into the ocean and breaks down into microplastics. The reason for the increase in microplastics is that we have used too much of it because it is easy and simple to produce.

Conclusion:

I think we should use tumblers.

And we should reduce the use of disposable products

Incinerating and landfilling this waste further harms the environment.

If all restaurants used biodegradable bags and hay-based containers, pollution could be reduced and excess hay could be utilized.

근데 이거 어케찾음?

I think our actions to save the Earth should include recycling well.

If we don't recycle properly, it leads to environmental pollution.

We should also reduce the use of disposable products.

Using too many disposables makes environmental pollution problems more serious.

So, I think we should recycle well.

We should reduce the use of disposable products.

We should use reusable products more often.

The words related to the D video I watched are climate crisis, global warming, environmental pollution, and plastic pollution.

I think these actions can help us fight these problems.

The US used to send its trash to China, but when China stopped taking it, the US had to put more than half of its trash in landfills, causing big problems.

Body:

The main issues are recycling waste and reducing greenhouse gas emissions, which are caused by harmful substances and methane gas from landfills, as well as emissions from factories, power plants, and vehicles.

Conclusion:

To create a more sustainable future, we need to reduce non-recyclable products, properly sort and collect recyclable waste, and switch to electric vehicles, which are important steps to address these environmental problems before it's too late.

body:It seems that plastic is the problem among the continuously generated waste. As a result of experiments conducted at home, plastic was found to be the most prevalent, with food packaging accounting for 75% of it.

conclution:We need to reduce the amount of plastic and other waste.