What were the most common mistakes? by Angela Ramos

Corrections

aramos5 — 2017-12-06 16:32:23 UTC

Dear Sebastian:

You should pay attention to SPELLING like in "criature" you were supposed to write: creature. Also it's important to check SUBJECT VERB AGREEMENT you wrote "need" and it was: needs.

At the beginning of each paragraph you should use CAPITALIZATION and also after a period.

Check the use of Relative Pronoun "which" you were supposed to use: that.

Sorry peoplee

aramos5 — 2017-12-07 02:06:52 UTC

I think I fix the problem. Please add your individual post.

Thank you!

Kevin Mendoza's mistakes 1. Some words are not well writed for example: - Learnd - learn - Overcomer - overcome - Principaly - principally - Childrens - Children - Enviroment - environment - Acodrding - according - Batterfly - Butterfly 2. There is a ' missing- Cant - Can't 3. A possesive pronoun isn't right "A child that have more free time..." "A child that has more free time..."

Behemot — 2017-12-07 02:07:03 UTC

Corrections

stefania_preciado — 2017-12-07 02:08:26 UTC

DEAR EMANUEL:

I think that you should better explain us the subject that you will discuss in the first paragraph, because in some parts the idea is not clear or is not written correctly. For example, first you could explain us what it is to "learn" for you and go clarifying what is the best way to realize good learning.
Also, you have to pay more attention with the words because in some case, you remove some letters or you put them incorrectly. For example:
You wrote: Problematica, tha, wolud, adaption, firt and plane.
The correct way is: Problematic, that, would, adaptation, first and plan.
On the other hand, I recommend that you observe the structure of the text and complete the body of the paragraph, where you explain and give an example of what you have said throughout the text.
Finally, you should use the capitalizacion at the beginning of each paragraph and where necessary.

Corrections

elsalopera05 — 2017-12-07 13:59:34 UTC

Dear Tatiana

You should remember that when use pronoun is importat to use the capital letter.
For example when you write, I like vejetables is necesary to use it

CORRECTIONS

tatiana94 — 2017-12-07 22:26:00 UTC

Dear Carolina:
You should organize the first paragraph because the idea is not clear for example you can write " I think the main factor of learning is be open to ....".

In the second paragraph you should pay attention with the plural and singular because you are writing your idea in plural "the solution problems of life" and after you are writing about the same topic but in singular "is only experience" so in this case you can change "is" for "are only experience".

In the third paragraph you can add a linking word to conected the experience idea with the things we can do with it, and in the last paragraph you have to pay attention to spelling like in "te" you were supposed to write: the. Also, you can change in the last sentence "to" for "through" because you are talking about the experience so I think is the correct form to talk about it.

Finally, you should use capitalization at the beginning of each paragraph.
By Tatiana.

Dear Stefanía

millansalcedocarlosfernando — 2017-12-07 22:45:08 UTC

You should write Learning instead of Learn as first word.
In the second paragraph you made a mistake with the word different, because you wrote diferent, and with the word which because you wrote wich instead of which; the mistakes you made are just wrongly written words, because the redaction is good, and the ideas and its arguments are clear and organized.