https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx PRAISE and POLISH en-us 2018-02-09 15:22:29 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:39 UTC hello@padlet.com nguyezoe000 https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230065973 Praise: I liked how you used your boyfriend as an example since you basically know this dude
Polish: girl you gotta get your mans in place jkjk but I think the presentation is good, but it does need more colors in it if possible!,]]> 2018-02-09 15:40:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230065973 https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066082 Praise: I appreciate her explaining each picture thouroughly and telling us her opinion on her boyfriends mannerisms.

Polish: She kind of gets embarrassed or shy at times, she needs to show more confidence in her work and stop doubting herself considering she did such an amazing project. ]]> 2018-02-09 15:40:16 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066082 https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066117 I like the format of your presentation. It’s all in order and it makes sense. When you present just make sure you are speaking professionally. 

]]> 2018-02-09 15:40:21 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066117 https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066250 Praise: I like the details of his day even though he didn't do much haha!
Polish: On the picture of his carrying the laundry, maybe edit the picture to make it brighter!]]> 2018-02-09 15:40:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066250 https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066303 Praise:all of the pictures are really well shot
Polish you could work on not saying and then too much ]]> 2018-02-09 15:40:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066303 https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066326 Praise: speaks comfortably
Polish: maybe speaks too comfortably should try to be a little bit more formal]]> 2018-02-09 15:40:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066326 https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066354 I really like  the way you formatted your project


]]> 2018-02-09 15:40:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066354 https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066382 Praise:  explain each photo clearly 

Polish:  put in more color ]]> 2018-02-09 15:40:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066382 https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066383 Praise

Polish]]> 2018-02-09 15:40:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066383 https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066473 Praise: she did well to explain every photo 

Polish: I would say that she Make it more colorful ]]> 2018-02-09 15:41:01 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066473 https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066502 Praise: very well organized
Polish: could have been a little more detail ]]> 2018-02-09 15:41:05 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066502 https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066529 Praise: The times are detailed, so is the overall project
Polish: Only thing I can think of is to use "like" less]]> 2018-02-09 15:41:08 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066529 https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066590 Praise- good explanation of your images

Polish- maybe put your work on a google slides and add a background ]]> 2018-02-09 15:41:15 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066590 smithsky002 https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066623 Praise// The whole presentation is organized and neat. It’s easy to tell what’s going on and what your boyfriend was doing throughout the day.
Polish// Maybe space the pictures our more? Or bold certain words to specify and make it even easier to see what he was doing.]]> 2018-02-09 15:41:19 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066623 https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066749 -I really enjoyed how now you are cautious of the lives of others
-this was cute
-I think this creative project could use different colors and designs to make it colorful:)]]> 2018-02-09 15:41:33 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230066749 https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230067368 Praise- very thoughtful
Polish- great presentation]]> 2018-02-09 15:42:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230067368 RoshinSam https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230068358 Praise: I love how detailed you did this project and you characterized him well.
Polish: Can’t think of anything ]]> 2018-02-09 15:44:13 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/unngmtwgpzrx/wish/230068358