https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4 Describe what is wrong with Sample 1 and Sample 2. Tell what is great about Sample 3. en-us 2016-08-28 13:41:15 UTC 2025-10-09 10:55:30 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Rocket.png https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556075 2016-08-30 13:53:53 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556075 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556335 mI'mColton ...It gushint explain the main point ]]> 2016-08-30 13:54:17 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556335 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556496 1 .he talked about the president and Harry Potter and Michael Jordan and that school is great ]]> 2016-08-30 13:54:34 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556496 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556655 2016-08-30 13:54:53 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556655 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556680 1.The speech was about the president and he was talking to kids they 
talked about Herry potter and Michel Jordan the president said school 
is great.🇺🇸]]> 2016-08-30 13:54:56 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556680 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556781 I think 3was great because it said NEVER GIVE UP.]]> 2016-08-30 13:55:07 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556781 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556791 I think that 2 was good because it said about never give up.]]> 2016-08-30 13:55:08 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556791 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556818 2016-08-30 13:55:11 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556818 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556821 l think that 1 was bad because it was not about j.k railing and Michael Jordan having fun😏




]]> 2016-08-30 13:55:11 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120556821 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120557061 He said hard work but that doesn't really mean never give up.]]> 2016-08-30 13:55:40 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120557061 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120557100 It was perfect it said everything it said persevere and never give up.]]> 2016-08-30 13:55:44 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120557100 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120557262 Sample1 told about some things he said but  didn't say the  main word .]]> 2016-08-30 13:56:04 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120557262 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120557266 B]]> 2016-08-30 13:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120557266 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120557642  The beginning in sample 1 was ok but  near the end started to get bad the speech was not about school being grate.              

]]> 2016-08-30 13:56:50 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120557642 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120557725 On sample 1 the president Michael Jordan didn't say alte about school because the president said that school is great .]]> 2016-08-30 13:57:02 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120557725 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120558290 1. In sample 1 they did not explain to never give up and perserevere and try again.]]> 2016-08-30 13:58:13 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120558290 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120560565 2016-08-30 14:03:30 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120560565 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120560612 2016-08-30 14:03:36 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120560612 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120560806 Sample1 Never give up.


]]> 2016-08-30 14:04:01 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120560806 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120560898 2016-08-30 14:04:13 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120560898 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120561165 2016-08-30 14:04:45 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120561165 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120561167 TJk  was taall]]> 2016-08-30 14:04:46 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120561167 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120562349 In sample one  it said little pieces of  the speach.

]]> 2016-08-30 14:07:10 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120562349 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120562852 2. They did a good job but they need some key details and they need to add more sentences to. But they don't really need more sentences but they really need key details. If they did that they would deserve to get a 3.😏😏😏]]> 2016-08-30 14:08:22 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120562852 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120562996 2016-08-30 14:08:46 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120562996 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120563061 1hetalkabal]]> 2016-08-30 14:08:56 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120563061 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120563396 He gave up and persevered  and tryd his best.

]]> 2016-08-30 14:09:45 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120563396 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120563404 We get in high school never give up.

]]> 2016-08-30 14:09:46 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120563404 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120563696 2. The president said that school is important and to try 
harder and never give up

]]> 2016-08-30 14:10:26 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120563696 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120563777 Never give up ]]> 2016-08-30 14:10:35 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120563777 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120564227 2016-08-30 14:11:43 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120564227 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120564236 The president said that 

]]> 2016-08-30 14:11:45 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120564236 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120565437 The president explain more about school but he still hasn't explain the
mane point ]]> 2016-08-30 14:14:51 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120565437 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120565480 2. They did okay but they did not show a good example. They said they tried to perserevere and do there best they try to never give up.]]> 2016-08-30 14:14:57 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120565480 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120803863  In sample 1 they did not persevere are and they just talked about Harry Potter and stuff.]]> 2016-08-31 13:00:46 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120803863 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120804030 In sample two it didn't say the  holl idea.]]> 2016-08-31 13:01:22 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120804030 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120804105 Sample2 is  work your best.]]> 2016-08-31 13:01:39 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120804105 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120804631 1 He did not talt abalt the story or speach.]]> 2016-08-31 13:03:27 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120804631 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120804660 Sample 1. He did not tell about hard work.]]> 2016-08-31 13:03:36 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120804660 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120805131 1. They put down tiny details and when they wrote it it wasn't how the author wrote it. Also it was supposed to be the main idea not tiny details.🤕🤕🤕]]> 2016-08-31 13:05:18 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120805131 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120805959 Sample 2 didn't talk about never giving up on your favorite things.]]> 2016-08-31 13:08:13 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120805959 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120805964 Sample three was perfect it said what the speech said😇]]> 2016-08-31 13:08:13 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120805964 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120806767 Sample 2. He talked about hard work, never giving up, and do your best.]]> 2016-08-31 13:10:19 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120806767 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120807115 2 He did not talk abalt pars or vear.]]> 2016-08-31 13:11:31 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120807115 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120807423 Sample3 is right  because  you. Fail intill  you succeed.]]> 2016-08-31 13:12:39 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120807423 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120808255 3. he talked abalt the holl story and the speach]]> 2016-08-31 13:15:16 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120808255 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120808393 3. They did a really good job because they made a paragraph and they added enough sentences. But the best part was they added key details and described it more than they had to. They also wrote some of tiny details. There was nothing wrong with it and they did deserve a 3 and they got one.😉😉😉]]> 2016-08-31 13:15:41 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120808393 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120808763 Sample 3 was good because they never giving up on who you want to be.]]> 2016-08-31 13:16:55 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120808763 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120808930 The president finally told the mane point because it was a good sentence and a solid explanation ]]> 2016-08-31 13:17:31 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120808930 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120809033 In paragraph 1 it does not explain about how you learn.]]> 2016-08-31 13:17:50 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120809033 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120809891 2. The president said school was important. Sometimes it might get hard. Try to never give up and do your best.🇺🇸]]> 2016-08-31 13:20:44 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120809891 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120810739 Sample 3. He told the kids to persevere, never give up, you need to do math problems every day, read, and writing.]]> 2016-08-31 13:23:32 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120810739 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120810780 On sample 2 the president said school was important. Sometimes it might get hard. Try to never give up and do your best . The president never gave up.]]> 2016-08-31 13:23:39 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120810780 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120811507 In paragraph 2 it needs more words and to tell more about it.]]> 2016-08-31 13:26:12 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120811507 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120813691 In paragraph 3 it explains more and more words and perseverance it is good ]]> 2016-08-31 13:32:50 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120813691 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120815807 3. He said to never give up and always persevere. He said you might have to do math problems reading writing papers more that once 🇱🇺🇸]]> 2016-08-31 13:39:03 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120815807 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120819750 The president is not rong and so never give up.And yes I know school can be hard at one point in time but school is very important to us.]]> 2016-08-31 13:48:13 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120819750 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120820088 You will  never be a star and preserver and try your best and never give up.🤔😃🇺🇸]]> 2016-08-31 13:49:15 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120820088 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120820239 On sample 3 the president said that you never give up and not to do homework once the president said to do homework three times.

]]> 2016-08-31 13:49:46 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120820239 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120822420 Never give up ]]> 2016-08-31 13:55:47 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120822420 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120822468 Sample 1 The speech was about the president and Michael Jordan the  said school is great

]]> 2016-08-31 13:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120822468 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120822931 Never give up try your best ]]> 2016-08-31 13:57:00 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120822931 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120823548  The president was talk about school 

]]> 2016-08-31 13:58:31 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120823548 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120824279 Sample2.he said never give up perseverance and work hard and learn try to never give up on your work try your best 


]]> 2016-08-31 14:00:10 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/120824279 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/121061993 3.The president talked about how kids should persevere and never give up.He also said how famous people failed but kept on trying until they got it right .]]> 2016-09-01 12:49:22 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/121061993 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/121064180  In paragraph 2 the beginning was bad because  school was important but it isn't to uss but it is important to him at the end he was talking about perseverance.

]]> 2016-09-01 12:56:34 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/121064180 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/121064481 3. He said you might have to do math problems reading and writing papers more than onese]]> 2016-09-01 12:57:41 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/121064481 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/121065226 3.They perserevere never gave up they explained about J.k. Rowling     And
Michael Jordan  about how they never gave up and how they failed at once but tried  again and again and succeeded. They said you need to never give up and try try again. They explained to do things more than once if you don't get it the first time.]]> 2016-09-01 13:00:17 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/121065226 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/121066786 In paragraph 3 the end and the beginning was good because it talked about j.k.rowling and Michael Jordan never givingup



]]> 2016-09-01 13:05:31 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/121066786 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/121069380 Remember to never give up ok always work hard.
You can do anything that you set your mind to.You will answer every test that your teacher pots on your desk.It doesn't, mater what other kids think it just maters what you think.]]> 2016-09-01 13:13:33 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/121069380 https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/121069411 I know you might not be able to do alot  of things but deep down you can do alot  of things you thought you culdent do but you really can.]]> 2016-09-01 13:13:38 UTC https://padlet.com/armelric2/umwk7clts6q4/wish/121069411