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Great! You may type into a new google doc titled The Life and Times of Bering. ]]> 2017-01-30 19:09:13 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150354906 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150355346 Great! You may type into a new google doc titled The Life and Times of Portola. ]]> 2017-01-30 19:10:14 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150355346 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150355449 I don't see any background information. Your focus statement doesn't make sense. Please revise.]]> 2017-01-30 19:10:30 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150355449 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150355483 Great! You may type into a new google doc titled The Life and Times of Drake. ]]> 2017-01-30 19:10:34 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150355483 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150355504 Great! You may type into a new google doc titled The Life and Times of Bering. ]]> 2017-01-30 19:10:37 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150355504 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150355635 Revise this sentence:
Do you know who is the only English explorer to sail three voyages and serve in the Royal Navy? That would be Captain James Cook.

Thank you for editing.
You may type into a new google doc titled The Life and Times of Cook.

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REVISE: Did you know that Juan Bautista de Anza was the best Indian fighter during his time? He also explored the first overland route from Mexico to San Francisco.
Your'e missing your FOCUS STATEMENT (blue)]]> 2017-01-30 19:11:14 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150355757 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150356025 Great! You may type into a new google doc titled The Life and Times of Cermeño. ]]> 2017-01-30 19:11:49 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150356025 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150356151 Indent! 
Please CAPITALIZE the names of people. ]]> 2017-01-30 19:12:08 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150356151 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150356775 Great! You may type into a new google doc titled The Life and Times of Cabrillo. ]]> 2017-01-30 19:13:34 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150356775 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150356856 You need to use CAPITAL letters at the beginning of sentences and for names. 
REVISE: Have you ever wondered who founded San Diego and Monterey Bay? Caspar de Portola is you man! ]]> 2017-01-30 19:13:46 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150356856 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150357623 Revise LEAD: Do you know which explorer defeated the Dutch for the King and Queen of Spain and later became the the mayor of Mexico? Sebastian Vizcaino is the man responsible. ]]> 2017-01-30 19:15:50 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150357623 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150359572 Revise FOCUS STATEMENT (blue): Cermeño's early life, expeditions, and accomplishments have helped develop California into what it is today. ]]> 2017-01-30 19:20:34 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150359572 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150359775 Edit LEAD: Have you ever wondered who set sail for his third voyage from Plymouth England and was a member of the Royal Navy? James Cook is that explorer!
Edit FOCUS STATEMENT: ...accomplishments have helped...]]> 2017-01-30 19:21:03 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150359775 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150359852 Edit BACKGROUND: During the late 1400s through the 1600s explorers began exploring in hope of finding unknown land and new territories.

Edit LEAD: One notable explorer was Cermeño, who made the most accurate map of __________, but was considered a failure. Why?

Beautiful focus statement!!!!! ]]> 2017-01-30 19:21:15 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150359852 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150579658 Revise BACKGROUND: Anza didn't explore during the Age of Exploration from the late 1400s to the 1600s, but does that make him only less of an explorer?

Revise FOCUS STATEMENT: Anza led an interesting early life, went on exciting expeditions, and had several achievements, which helped develop California into what it is today. ]]> 2017-01-31 16:14:01 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150579658 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150586556 Edit LEAD: Did you know Sir Francis Drake was the first captain to sail around the world?

You are ready to type in a new google doc title "The Life and Times of Drake"]]> 2017-01-31 16:28:29 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150586556 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150587002 Capitalize... Age of Exploration

Edit LEAD: Have you ever wondered who discovered Alaska? Vitus Bering is the man responsible. H

Eliminate: Well you're about to learn...

Edit FOCUS STATEMENT: Bering's early life, .....]]> 2017-01-31 16:29:25 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150587002 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150611734 You wrote information for the first body paragraph, not our introduction paragraph. Please rewrite using the following guidelines.
Background: The Age of Exploration was a time when Europeans explored the world. From the late 1400s to 1600s, explorers discovered many places that they had never known existed.
Lead: Have you ever wondered who named San Diego? It was a man named Sebastian Vizcaino.
Focus Statement: Vizcaino's early life, expeditions, and accomplishments helped develop California into what it is today.]]> 2017-01-31 17:26:05 UTC https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150611734 https://padlet.com/cweighall/ulpra9rac8w9/wish/150615018 Capitalize... Age of Exploration

Edit LEAD: Cermeno made the most accurate map of his time, but was still considered a failure. Why?

After you make your edits you are ready to type in a new google doc title "The Life and Times of Cermeno"

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