Opinion: uniform = benefits. 

Argument: explain opinion 

Explanation: explain argument

Evidence : facts to illustrate / prove argument / explanation. 

 

Argument: wearing uniform create an environment of equality in schools.

Explain argument: This is because when everyone wears the same clothing, the rich and poor students will not have a lot of differences in term of what they wear every day, therefore creating a surrounding where wealth discrimination is less of a factor.

Connecting argument to opinion: The point I want to emphasize is that, with students less differentiated by wealth or status, the school will become a welcoming place where everyone can feel at ease studying, thus giving members a positive environment to develop themselves. 

We need to admit that the uniform promotes an environment of equality in schools. This is because when everyone wears the same clothing, the rich and poor students will not have a lot of differences in term of what they wear every day, therefore creating a surrounding where wealth discrimination is less of a factor. As a matter of fact, some of the oldest schools in England like Eton admit students from all backgrounds, from those of the wealthiest families to ones from commoner parents studying on scholarship, but when they wear the Eton uniform, they all treat each other like brothers. The point I want to emphasize is that, with students less differentiated by wealth or status, the school will become a welcoming place where everyone can feel at ease studying, thus giving members a positive environment to develop themselves.

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I definitely want to advocate an opinion that abroad news will actively increase the quality of the common public. The basis of this could be the fact that if people can approach the international tendency of occupation, they will know what they should do in the future to make their career easier. In the digital era, technological development means that IT is more popular and indispensable, thus there are an tremendous number of successful people in that field such as Jack Ma, Mark Zukenberg,... because they know what is the trend in their start-up time. The point I want to emphasize is that when people have an accuracy job choice, they can decrease the potential risks and easily succeed. 

  

We need to admit that it's easier to get a stable job for students in the future if they study a wide range of subjects. The reason for this is the fact that, when the headhunter wants to recruit, they always pick a person who has tremendous knowledge in each field because customers are often attracted to people who have the ability to speak, something knowledgeable people always have. For instance, when you have a meeting meal with your customer, you should not only talk about the job but also have to talk about the surrounding topics to convince the customer that your company is capable of handling the job if a problem arises. The point I want to emphasize is that if you can convince the customer, there is no boss wants to fire you, even give you a raise of salary

Admittedly, concentrating in limited subjects for students under 15 years old will decrease the pressure of study. The explanation for this could be the fact that students in that age need time to develop skills, especially soft skills for the future life, thus requiring students to study a tremendous number of subjects is an anti educational way and it will reduce the quality of knowledge that students receive. For instance, in vietnam there are more than 100 suicide students because of the study pressure. the point I want to illustrate is that student actually feels hopeless because they can not satisfy their parents expectation, therefore there are some potential risks occurs such as sucide or stopping study

We need to admit that nowadays the corona virus are being more and more terrible so in many countries , the citizens need to stay at home and by reading news they will know what’s happening when they at home . The point i want to emphasize is by reading news that up-to-the-minute we can know how many people have been vaccinated or how many people have died because of corona virus and then they will be more careful and stay at home as much as they can . For example , in Vietnam the government and the ministry of public health are always up-to-the-minute about where some people have been infected with covid-19 and some notices to remind the citizens to stay at home . So what we have to realize is reading news helps us to know what’s happening outside when we stay at home and know how to take care of ourselves to not be infected with covid-19 .

On the one hand , we need to admit that students who study a few subjects will have a tremendous amount of time than those who study a lot of subjects . The explanation for this could be the fact that when they have fewer subjects to learn , they will have extra time either for stress relievers or joining some clubs , projects to have more practical experiences . As a matter of fact , many students at the age of 15 start applying to some clubs , projects during summer to make more friends and learn how to ask for donations . On the contrary , most of clubs and projects will active through school-year so many students although they study a few subjects , they still be wasting too much time for their clubs , projects and start not focus too much on their chosen subjects . 

On the other hand , it is worth mentioning that studying many subjects allows students to access a wide range of knowledge that they might need in their later life . The point i want to emphasize is the fact that at 15 , students are not old enough to know what they really need in a certain career, so having a wide range of knowledge and skill can help them prepare to take advantage of any opportunity that might arise . For example , in Vietnam there are many students who aim for medical courses in university and just need to have good marks in maths and chemistry or have aptitude for chemistry subjects , but if they are good at some language like english , they will have more chances to research and find how to solve some fatal diseases with many other worldwide professional researchers and these will bring tremendous benefit for our country . 

In conclusion , though studying a few subjects will give us more time to relax and do some extracurricular activities, if you waste too much time for clubs,projects and not focus on studying , it will be easy to counteract . So i believe that studying a wide range of subjects will bring us much knowledge and benefits for our country .

 

First, of all, it is worth considering reducing the number of subjects is safeguarding a child’s future. This is because a focused curriculum helps students to utilize their strengths, motivate themselves, and stay focused on the end objective. This contributes to a more accurate forecast for the future. For example, Justin Bieber began his music career at the age of 15, and he now has massive records and fans. This means that limiting the subjects to a small number will benefit students with lower-than-average IQs by reducing their anxiety.

 

In addiction, we need to admit that studying a narrow number of courses provides a wonderfully promising possibility to obtain a steady and high-paying career. In reality, if a person just needs to focus on one subject, they will be more productive since it limits their exposure to distraction. For example, if you study three subjects in six hours, each subject must be divided into two hours; but, if you study one subject in six hours, the effect is maximized since you are not distracted by any knowledge. The potential success is that you will be certain to absorb all of the information of that topic in order to work in the finest method possible.

 

In conclusion, studying a narrow of subjects after the age of 15 leads to better results in general. As a result, I feel that student subject limitation might save students a lot of time.

 

 

On the one hand, I was convinced that overseas news will allow people to connect with the world. This is because of the fact that when people read international news, they will know about a tremendous amount of knowledge in the world, and thus they can discuss with foreign friends about a lot of opinions without lack of knowledge. In contemporary life, covid-19 vaccine technology is a popular news that every citizen needs to focus on because it directly affects their lives. That's why scientists in the world have to read the news and connect to other scientists to find the problem in each type of vaccine and invent the best vaccine to defeat the pandemic. To clarify, if scientists do not read global information, epidemic will perhaps last for a long time in some country, or even it is impossible to produce a vaccine because of the lack of a method. 

 

On the other hand, there is no denying that domestic news directly affects the quality of human life. The reason for me to advocate that opinion is that when a political activity happens, specifically a presidential election occurs, the common public needs to know about all candidates to have an overview of each person to have an accurate vote because the policy of running a country is different for each person . As a matter of fact, Roosevelt, a previous president in the US, made an unbelievable growth of economy after economic risk from 1929 to 1933. The point I want to emphasize is that if Americans do not read their country’ news, they can’t comprehend Roosevelt's policy and maybe America can not escape from being economically disadvantaged. 

 

In conclusion, I personally think that each news has its own advantages. Domestic news will make sure that people will have their best life, but international news will be a function for people to learn new knowledges. 

 

 

 

We need to admit that it is absolutely vital for the citizens of a country to have a comprehensive view about what is happening inside the border. For instance, because of the sensitive nature of politics, it is undoubtedly crucial for the population of a nation to be informed by unbiased, up-to-the-minute news. To illustrate, life changing events such as presidential elections required voters to have adequate, trust-worthy sources of information in order to select who to support. The point I want to emphasize is that when people have sufficient information about presidential candidates in the upcoming election, they would know who they should cast their vote for, which is an important decision as the future of their country depends on it.

Moreover, being aware of local news is important to our livelihood as it helps us to be on the front foot in life. Because of the fact that domestic news directly affect the well being of the vast majority of the demographic, knowing these information can help them to adjust their plan in advance according to the news. News about business regulations for entrepreneurs is a prime example, since it is usually in their best interests to operate within the law. In contrast, as consequences of failure to obtaining up-to-date knowledge about the latest laws on content filter, Twitter was facing legal problems and was banned in India in 2020.

In conclusion, I truly believe that we should focus more on news in our country than international media. This is because not only keeping up with national journalism helps us understand our country's situation better but also acquire more information to make better decisions.

We need to admit that learning a range of subject helps students to learn more new knowledge. It helps them to have more new opportunities in the future because they have wide knowledge in many aspects. For example, in the same position in the company, one person knows English, the other does not. The English speakers will be paid more. 

However, there still have many students who just want to focus on a small subjects they like. We should admit that focusing on certain subjects will reduce us a tremendous amount of time compared to those who study all subjects. Requiring students to study only certain subjects gives students more time for other activities. For example the student who only need to study the subject they are interested in without worrying about grades for the rest of the subjects. As such,they are more interested in learning not to lose sight of the goal and this will positively affect the score and theycan use that time to participate in leisure activities to return to study more effectively, avoiding stress.

In conclusion although learning a range of subjects can help students absorb new knowledge. But it will not suitable for the students who want to spend time for deeper study