https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw Write down your name and your improved sentence below. en-us 2017-11-13 09:49:29 UTC 2017-11-13 10:33:08 UTC hello@padlet.com rbaalham https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206148780 The school was big.]]> 2017-11-13 09:53:21 UTC https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206148780 https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206157533 The school was incredibly large.]]> 2017-11-13 10:25:04 UTC https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206157533 17obianr https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206157626 Hi]]> 2017-11-13 10:25:25 UTC https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206157626 https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206157707 The colossal school was huge.

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]]> 2017-11-13 10:26:12 UTC https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206157842 https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206157871 The English College is very big. ]]> 2017-11-13 10:26:17 UTC https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206157871 https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206157890 Jason]]> 2017-11-13 10:26:22 UTC https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206157890 https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206157986 The school was larger than you could imagine, bursting from the ground.]]> 2017-11-13 10:26:46 UTC https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206157986 https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206158011 The snow covered the town like a bedsheet]]> 2017-11-13 10:26:51 UTC https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206158011 https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206158056 The school was enormous]]> 2017-11-13 10:27:03 UTC https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206158056 17obianr https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206158070 The school was enormous. ]]> 2017-11-13 10:27:07 UTC https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206158070 https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206158074 The humongous school was as big as a blue whale and a battle ship combined!! ]]> 2017-11-13 10:27:08 UTC https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206158074 https://padlet.com/rbaalham/ul0a0xj5cfqw/wish/206158178 The school was as large as a rocket ship

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