RA Introduction & Conclusion Paragraph by hanyu jia https://padlet.com/hanyujia0411/ukrtucuzspgb en-us 2017-11-06 19:45:28 UTC 2017-11-06 22:33:04 UTC hello@padlet.com Yifan Ding, Noame Qin https://padlet.com/hanyujia0411/ukrtucuzspgb/wish/204146197  
-          Intro PART 1:
Background information about the issue(Establish the importance of writing about this particular text, or the topic of the text)

-          Intro PART 2:
How Naisbitt's great opposed standing to the violent video game convince audience.

 
-          Intro PART 3:
“many strong quotes and examples”, “many weak elements”.


-          Conclusion PART 1:
 Naisbitt’s main argument that video games are responsible for “childhood and teenage violence”. 

 
-          Conclusion PART 2: 
 Naisbitt’s effectiveness to argue this issue. For example, he uses “relevant evidence and finds credible quotes” and “irrelevant points and quotes”.

-          Conclusion PART 3: 
The conclusion that Naisbitt’s essay is “ interesting read” but not “entirely convincing”. 
]]> 2017-11-06 22:12:10 UTC https://padlet.com/hanyujia0411/ukrtucuzspgb/wish/204146197 Reverse Outline: Vincent, Jaeman, Jieun https://padlet.com/hanyujia0411/ukrtucuzspgb/wish/204146242 Introduction:
Part 1: Background information about the issue (establish the importance of writing about this particular text, or the text)
Part 2: Information about the author's book and author's arguments on subject.
Part 3: Thesis statement of rhetorical analysis article.

Conclusion: 
Part 1:  Restatement of author's stance on subject along with its consequences
Part 2: Techniques the author utilize to deliver his arguments.
Part 3: Restatement of thesis statement on the final result of the article. 

]]> 2017-11-06 22:12:22 UTC https://padlet.com/hanyujia0411/ukrtucuzspgb/wish/204146242 Boyuan Xie, Siyi Chen; https://padlet.com/hanyujia0411/ukrtucuzspgb/wish/204146491 Introduction:
Part1: background info about the issue
Part2: Intro of the article's author and the author's stance on the topic
Part3: The thesis statement 

Conclusion:
Part1: Restatement of the article's author's stance.
Part2: Specific techniques that the author used, including strong and fallacy
Part3: Essay's author's conclusion(thesis) on whether the article is persuasive or not.

]]> 2017-11-06 22:13:10 UTC https://padlet.com/hanyujia0411/ukrtucuzspgb/wish/204146491 Yutong, Tianyi https://padlet.com/hanyujia0411/ukrtucuzspgb/wish/204146588 Introduction:
1.  general thoughts toward video games. 
2.  The author’s opinion and strategies the author uses in the body paragraphs to persuade his audience. 
3.  describe the weaknesses of the passage in detail.

Conclusion:
1.  Restate the author’s opinion on video games and what specifically he tries to persuade his audience.
Summary of the article.
2.  Restate how the author persuades his audience by using relevant evidence and credible quotes efficiently or inefficiently. 
3.  Whether the article is convincing or not based on what strategies he uses throughout the entire article. Final judgement of the article.]]> 2017-11-06 22:13:35 UTC https://padlet.com/hanyujia0411/ukrtucuzspgb/wish/204146588 Outline: Tian Sun, Zhou https://padlet.com/hanyujia0411/ukrtucuzspgb/wish/204146710 -          Intro PART 1: Background information about the issue(Establish the importance of writing about this particular text, or the topic of the text)
-          Intro PART 2: The articles and author he wants to analyze—The Military-Nintendo  Complex
-          Intro PART 3: States his personal opinion to the article he wants to analyze.
 
-          Body Paragraph PART 1: topic sentence about how the author grab the emotional of different readers. 
-          Body Paragraph PART 2: specific quotation or sentence of the original essay to explain how the author utilize to make his essay persuasive. 
-          Body Paragraph PART 3: analyze the reason why the author write these sentences and explain how his strategies are essentially significant. 
 
-          Conclusion PART 1: Drawing a conclusion that video game is bad for teenagers.
-          Conclusion PART 2: Judging the strength and the weakness of the article.
-          Conclusion PART 3: Final conclusion of the effectiveness of the article. 
]]> 2017-11-06 22:14:04 UTC https://padlet.com/hanyujia0411/ukrtucuzspgb/wish/204146710 Wenya, Xiangyi https://padlet.com/hanyujia0411/ukrtucuzspgb/wish/204148140 Introduction:
1) Background information about the issue(Establish the importance of writing about this particular text, or the topic of the text).
2)Original article’s author’s opinion about the issue(takes a strong stand against the violent video games).
3)This passage’s writer’s opinion towards the author of the article(Some strong evidence, some weak evidence).

Conclusion:
1) Restate the original article’s author’s opinion (attempt to convince his audience the violent video games have a huge impact on teenagers).
2) State some strategies the author use(effective and ineffective strategies).
3)Make an conclusion on the strategies the author use. (not quite an entirely convincing argumentative essay). 




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