Story race by MrsWilliams

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2026-05-14 08:39:40 UTC

Alfie looked out he was afraid of the cable car swaying side to side.

2

2026-05-14 08:40:08 UTC

" Why are you so afraid " Ivy laughed.

3

2026-05-14 08:41:23 UTC

"Because you are swaying the cart by jumping up and down" said Alfie.

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2026-05-14 08:43:12 UTC

The cart creaked Alfie stopped in fear.

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2026-05-14 08:45:20 UTC

Ivy's face turned white.

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2026-05-14 08:47:55 UTC

"Who's scared now!" said Alfie with a smirk on his face.

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2026-05-14 08:49:03 UTC

"You are to" said Ivy.

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2026-05-14 08:50:38 UTC

The cable car came to a sudden stop.

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2026-05-14 08:51:52 UTC

*snap* the cable car started to lean on its side.

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2026-05-14 08:52:30 UTC

"oh no" said Ivy.

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2026-05-14 08:54:04 UTC

Ivy was scared.

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2026-05-14 08:55:04 UTC

A gust of wind slammed the door open Ivy slipped and was holding on for dear life.

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2026-05-14 08:55:33 UTC

"IVY!" said Alfie not knowing what to do.

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2026-05-14 08:56:41 UTC

Ivy was slipping.

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2026-05-14 08:59:05 UTC

In the distance she could see silver cars falling from the sky the rope was snapping.

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2026-05-14 09:06:03 UTC

Other people started to notice.

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2026-05-14 09:06:58 UTC

The cable car worker started to call the fire department.

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2026-05-14 09:07:30 UTC

But it was too late.

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2026-05-14 09:09:04 UTC

The world was spinning around her.

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2026-05-14 09:09:51 UTC

But she stopped, why wasn't she falling?

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2026-05-14 09:13:13 UTC

She opened her eyes and realised Alfie was holding onto her.

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2026-05-14 09:15:25 UTC

"Alfie" she said in surprise.

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2026-05-14 09:19:54 UTC

Alfie tried to pull Ivy back on the cable cart.

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2026-05-14 09:21:46 UTC

It started to rain. it formed ice ivy's hands were getting too cold to hold on.

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2026-05-14 09:22:49 UTC

But Alfie would not let go.

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2026-05-14 09:24:43 UTC

She couldn't hold on anymore.

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2026-05-14 09:30:09 UTC

she was falling her life was flashing before her eyes and she landed on something fluffy.

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2026-05-14 09:30:10 UTC

She landed on her back she couldn't move anything.

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2026-05-14 09:53:49 UTC

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2026-05-14 09:59:50 UTC

She was breatrhing but she could not do anything.

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2026-05-14 10:04:04 UTC

wen Alfie got down he called the ambulance.

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2026-05-14 10:07:41 UTC

All Ivy could hear was sirens.

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2026-05-14 10:14:30 UTC

Alfie sits beside her feeling her cold lifeless body.

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2026-05-14 10:14:45 UTC

Alfie cries, terrified ''help'' he screamed.

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2026-05-14 10:16:30 UTC

he just stared at her.

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2026-05-14 10:21:11 UTC

''Help her please!'' Alfie tried to hold back his tears.

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2026-05-14 10:23:33 UTC

''Will she be okay? Can you help her please!'' Alfie couldn't hold back tears.

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2026-05-14 10:26:35 UTC

The paramedics took her away into the ambulance.

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2026-05-14 10:28:00 UTC

" Time of death 15:27 " said the paramedics.

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2026-05-14 10:28:10 UTC

They drove away.

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2026-05-14 10:29:01 UTC

Alfie fell to the floor in tears.

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2026-05-14 10:33:45 UTC

his mum & dad arrived "she's dead" said Alfie.

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2026-05-14 10:37:07 UTC

" Not again " his mum whispered.

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2026-05-14 10:37:38 UTC

"again?'' Alfie said confused.

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2026-05-14 10:38:40 UTC

"You had a sister her name was Mia.

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2026-05-14 10:39:29 UTC

" And you never told me " Alfie started to fill with rage.

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2026-05-14 10:41:10 UTC

"We did not want to break your heart" said his mum

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2026-05-14 12:35:15 UTC

Ok said dad